There were two moments in this patch where they used the wrong thou/thee/thy when trying to use faux Early Modern English.
In one instance they used "thou" when it was in object position and thus should've been "thee".
In the other instance, they said "thy own" when you're supposed to use "thine" if the next word starts with a vowel, so it should've been "thine own".
This sort of stuff bothers me because anyone with even a passing knowledge of this sort of thing would catch these mistakes immediately. But the fact that those were the only two errors means it's already leaps and bounds beyond other media that try and fail to use Early Modern English.

Thanks for reading