https://vocaroo.com/12bDqvnrQW9l

I feel like it's missing something. Also, are any of the elements too harsh for the rest of the song?

Here's another version I tried:

https://vocaroo.com/16BSKU6Tx0S7

I personally like 2 better, but I also have shit opinions, as evidenced by my thought that sampling is fun as fuck.