Finished the first chapter of my comic "Wealth for Toil"

https://imgur.com/a/wealth-toil-work-progress-first-chapter-9ucpQ1J

Tell me what you think, and any critiques at all, cause its still a work in progress, and Im gonna go back to fix up some pages, and other issues, once I've finished the first arc, which will probably be another 60ish pages.

Currently taking a break to do some study to improve my art, and work on a short story which I'll probably post here too.

Hows my first chapter read?

https://imgur.com/a/wealth-toil-work-progress-first-chapter-9ucpQ1J#

Love any critiques and thoughts on it. I'm gonna go back over and redo some of the art (especially some of the stuff in the middle), but thats once Ive finished this arc

I started doing alot more practise and study towards the last 15 pages as I didnt like how my art was going, and I think theres improvement in the last bit of pages, so I'm probably just gonna practise for a few weeks, and do some short stories, to try and improve my art before doing the second chapter, and try to mix in more studies cause I was getting a page done a day towards the middle (I work fulltime too), but I think the art doesnt look the best there