i think i'm done with tweaking this for now, the more i tweak the more it messes with something else so i don't think i'm gonna get it much better unless i redraw the whole thing, so i'll keep it here and say im happy with it. the shoes still aren't great and in the wrong perspective but it's the best i've got :( big thanks to the redlining anon for the tips though, hope i fixed the issues he raised.