CRAB 4 --- Round 2 ---- my votes (1/???)
The reasons for my votes are gonna differ from last round, cause man, a lot of time has passed, I feel more older than I really am
[EXCLUDING TEAM MEMBERS AND THEIR RIVALS]
[You done Good guys, I hope you get the votes you deserve]
Cuckoo Clock: Ash
Starting off with this, is really no contest, Caddi's entry really wasn't an entry, more just a collection of drawings that are well done, but when compared to Ash's entry, where there's a simple, yet clear and entertaining story, showing both rivals from the getgo, told it in a cohesive way and great art on top, it feels like Caddi the Homonculous just isn't trying, and just came here to BDSM anyone who looks hot… hmmmmmm… Not gonna lie though, the Cuckoo Rave idea is so Good, I wish it actually involved both parties to dance for victory .
Pretzel making: Fishimote
Lovell's entry is slightly better than Feddie's entry, in that it has a proper story and interesting ideas put to the table, but man does it show that it's a WIP, the rest of the pages feel like the printer ran out of ink so that story can't be understandable anymore, which is weird, because Fishimote's entry is also WIP, but it manages to tell it's story more clearly despite the limitations like it's an artistic choice, as some might say.
The Big Bad Wolf: Ana
I like both entries for what they are, Juggle's entry for being a simple and fun rendition from Juggle's perspective, and Ana's a more darker, more action-heavy story that tries to flesh out some ongoing subplots, also that scene with the german family is cute, tragic ending tho, for this round though, I think Ana's entry left a more lasting impact for me. Also seeing people being down bad for her wolf form is funny.