>>718189052
Top feels more visceral, like two people that are actually shouting at each other. Bottom is dreadfully wordy and doesn't have even close to the same impact and rage.

The ideal would be a fixed version of the original translation that fixes the typos and errors and removes a lot of the jank (Ch.3 epilogue, St. Konoe Knights, Hokuten/Nanten, etc.) but keeps most of the rest intact. And also doesn't fuck with the names much. A small handful like Goffard and Ludwig are fine but most (Argath, Tietra, etc.) are super unnecessary