>>127548895
>https://voca.ro/1dDC7cxo5Tlw
Sounds good. I wasn't a big fan of the intro, something about the layered ring sounds at the start sounds off there. Other than that, I felt like there was a clear space at the end to come back around with an alternate version of the section that plays around 40 sec mark, instead of trailing off suddenly. Maybe some kind of solo even with that chorusy bit as the backing. Damn, I can hear it in my mind and it would sound nice. Good job anyway, sounds like a keeper to me.