>>535519465
pretty nice for a doodle
someone called it good someone called it trash so here's my a bit more detailed take
>torso + legs
generally good
>arms
hidden in a way that creates an edge that melts with the line of the torso which obfuscates portrayal of intended shape and made it look like she has no has no hands at the first glance
>headgear
is okay
>face
I like the lineart of her eyes but the pupils are facing upwards and into cross-eye, besides that she has white sclera instead of black sclera which is off-model and makes the drawing appear more generic than it is
>hair
not sure if you wanted to give her very big volume of hair or you're just thinking in anime references which oftentimes have oversized forehead
>d1-d10 scale from vagina to uterus
I really like this artistic liberty you took here.
important note: do not be discouraged, you made a decent thing and there's plenty of room for improvements, nobody was born as good as leonardo da vinci in his prime
yes I did spend too much time at /ic/
