Thread 96217201

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The Ultimate Question?
https://rentry.org/UltimateQuestionmcyoag

Tierlist
https://tiermaker.com/create/the-ultimate-question-545778

>John "Anon" Po
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96127600

>Subject "Kero-Chan" 212
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96129195

>Nikolaus "The Baller" Wilhelm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96129367

>Lucky "Man Sucker" Riley
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96133188

>Stocky "Gorilla Guerilla" Guerilla Gorilla Gorilla
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96140678

>Itto "Fourth Time's the Charm" Ikky
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96151761

>Asuri "Itwo"
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96151760

>Zeke "Juggler Supreme" Danger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96135369

>Sir "TFD" Raynald
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96096666/#96135818

>Maki "Normalcel" Ranma
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96151799

>Jian "HP Immigrant" Swordington
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96143400

>Artfags
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96136571/#96150515

>Relationship Chart
https://rentry.org/bkwn75xu

Rolled 1 (1d3)

1) post mha
2) Im not even in mha why would I post it
3) anon decides

I brought this on myself

>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>New Artfag
https://i.4cdn.org/tg/1749712096028481.png

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077

>>96217307
even the DICE are faggots damn

>>96217322
>SHIKETSU STUDENTS
>Hero Course
>1-D
>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Reset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Trouble
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpaw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Callous
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetrap
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protector
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scour
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miracle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyr
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-ka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwa
https://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshire
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooter
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnelli
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089

>1-E
>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729

>>96217330
>2-D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)
https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394

>>96217326
Not the guy posting MHA, but it makes sense since we need at least 2 image cyoas to cycle through since we can't reuse the current image op as the next op.

>>96217339
I have made a severe lapse in judgment

>2-E
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCs
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E

>3-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Cricket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcana
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdown
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knut
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659

>General Course
>2-A
>Satoru Tani
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217

>Support Course
>3-B
>Aura Curie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609

>>96217345
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck

>SHIKETSU STAFF
>Pro Hero teachers
>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485

>Support Staff
>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431

>>96217353
who the hell are all these people

>PRO HEROES
>TOP #1
Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4
Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkoro
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9
Rosethorn
>TOP #10
Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honoken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skyward
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835

>SUPPORTERS
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clear
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686

>>96217359
>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS
>Horrific 5
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191

>Night Parade
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348

>VIGILANTES
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Sasha Azanami
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivore
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndrome
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356

>>96217365
that last page is exactly 2000 characters, impressive squeezing

>CULTISTS
>The Red Finger
>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion
https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573

>REVOLUTIONARIES
>Legion
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954

>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blank
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogar
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodoku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless God
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapist
https://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Ray
https://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Dagger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintobor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicant
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061

>>96217370
nobody will see this
I secretly have an adult woman fetish

>WRITEFAGS
>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)
https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)
https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique):
https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):
https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).
https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)
https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)
https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)
https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiry
https://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)
https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)
https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)
https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb

>>96217342
if anything it would be better to post City over the thing as dead as HP

>>96217375
>WRITEFAGS (Final)
>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):
https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)
https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry

>>96217379
worst dice roll of my life

>>96217376
That would be my preference as well but here we are.
>>96217375
>adult woman fetish
As opposed to non-adult women???

Rolled 34 (1d34)

>>96217387
time to DOUBLE THE FUCK DOWN actually
rolling on the threadslave dead MP list, what am I posting next????

>Urbanslop
>Urbanslop
>Urbanslop
LET ME OUT OF THE CITIES
FREE ME OF THE CORPORATIONS
I JUST WANT FANTASYKINOOOOOOOOOO

>>96217396
>one post, just a link to a rentry
what's the point even

>>96217398
Something about effortfag or something.

>>96217398
alright but it'll be Naruto

>>96217459
>Naruto.
>large hidden villages
>hidden cities, even
URBANSLOPPERS WIN AGAIN

>>96217468
Wrong. Chakra Beast Naruto run. We live in the wild and kill the urbanfags.

>>96217478
>kill the urbanfags
>urbanfags live in cities
>killing them means going into cities
URBANSLOPPERS CANNOT BE STOPPED

>>96217529
>not just nuking them off the map with a tailed beast ball
shiggy diggy

>>96217201 (OP)
Hey anons, is the military a mystic/religious tradition? I kinda feel like it is.

>>96217540
Only some militaries.

Anons will hate me but i find my idea funny. Yes i am doing physicality, celerity, and time.

>>96217201 (OP)
>>96217635
Ur 2 slo
Name: Brianne Lane
Alias: Sword of Justice
Gender: Female
Outfit: Majestic, Cute
Implement: Blade
Specialties: Physicality, Celerity
Aptitudes: Time Master, Space Adept
Quirks: Complex Outfit, Talented, Expanded Reserves
Ultimate Art: One Strike a Million Times
A combination of all four of their aptitudes to strike a target in a single instance an unknown number of times. Requires her to sheath their blades and stand still in preparation of going through their training motions so many times in an instant. Easily evaded in theory if you never close distance with them from the front while they are prepared to use it until they run out of focus.
Patrons: Gaia, Remial, Ste've
Job: Enforcement
Faction: Old Guard/Independent

Brianne is the poster child for the Old Guard, a long time fighter of the Dark and the Corporations who has battled alongside countless teams and trained numerous young heroes to be. She holds onto hope that things can truly change like she holds onto her blade.

Around the younger types she tries to maintain a upbeat and happy persona but her long term battles with the justice system trying to score even slight wins has left her quite jaded under that facade, taking a contract that isn't quite as clean as her previous ones. Ste've has turned her much more militant in her approaches and anyone who seeks to directly battle the corporations can count on her to come along for the ride.

Her reserves of magic seem absurd and her skill with the blade is no less impressive, her spells typically take the form of strikes of the blade rather than direct magic, creating a minefield of slashes suspended in time waiting for an unfortunate enemy to stumble into them.

>>96217639
>>96217635
Just kidding, do what you want. We can be old guards together or something.

>>96217201 (OP)
>"magical girl kino"
>look inside
>city

>>96217639
Im not surprised at all there is already a similar build to what im making. Oh well! Im not changing my shit now, just working out more fluff first.

>>96217722
Not him but I want the similar builds to be either friends or rivals. Similarities are a good jumping off point for interactions.

>>96217322
The new stuff should say that the bloated corpse exploded because of gas build up in the coffin like that one fat English king with all the wives.

>>96217722
Mine is also a similar build, mostly because you get way too many points

>>96217201 (OP)
I wish physicality didn't exist. Too much of a gimme.

>>96217816
tru, especially since half of the Implements are things that immensely benefit from greater physical attributes.

>>96217816
>>96217826
Flying brick haterbro's HIVEMIND grows. The archetype of brick characters will be gone by 2030 at this rate.

>>96217816
It is pretty crazy, especially considering that magical girls grow in almost every aspect except in strength so there's a huge gap between those who have it versus those who don't.

>>96217201 (OP)
>Name Boomo
>sex
male
>Outfit
"Cute" aka handsome
>Implement
Gauntlets
>Specialties
Physicality
Celerity
>Ap
Time -2
Flame -3
>Quirks
Magical bloodhound
Large reserves
Danger sense
>Ultimate Art
Second form
>Patron
Gaia
>Occupation
Media
>Faction
The circle


“Whoa mama! A whole city full of magical ladies in short skirts? Somebody pinch me, ‘cause the Boomo express just pulled into paradise, yeah baby!”

Narcissistic, hubristic, tempestuous. These are all words Boomo cannot spell, yet he lives them every day. He has been around the block for a while, fought the corpos, punched out some dark spirits, hit on every magical girl he met (and one he thought was a girl). The never ending battle against the darkness of the city got to him like it has with so many others. Semi retirement is what Boomo calls it but most would call it starting a podcast to talk about the state of the city. Although it often leads to him talking about some girls ass or him shilling his merchandise. He will cover whatever recent conspiracy he has stumbled on, but many just think he is a buff wack job who sometimes sells water filtration devices.

All things considered Boomo is a pretty happy person, he makes enough money to party all the time and he only really fights when he needs to. He might have mommy issues and constantly seeks the attention of women, magical ones more so. It's not that he is a bad person, he is just full of himself. The old lady will get helped across the street, she might just have to watch Boomo flex first (and after).

While somewhat rusty with his fighting his physique has not dimished. Prefering to launch himself fist first into any fight, he will fall back onto his fire magic should might not be enough. His control over time magic has greatly dimished without practice and he hardly uses it, but in his heyday he recalls using it a lot to look womens skirts. Mostly he is just wasted potential but he certainly doesn't see it that way.

>>96217201 (OP)
>Name
Terri

>Alias
Macavity

>Gender
Female

>Regalia
Witch-Like

>Implement:
Gauntlet/Greaves

>Schools Of Magic
Lightning Specialty
Illusion Specialty
Celerity Master
Bio-Shifting Adept

>Quirks
Shrouded Magic
Danger Sense
Quickened Spells

>Ultimate Magic
"The Ultimate Theft" - Second Form
It's not enough to take from others. Macavity needs to take everything, even them as well. This art allows her to transform not into a greater form of herself-- but into someone else. Sure, she can do that normally pretend to do so with Illusions. But this is something else-- The greatest fake. Your voice, your passion, your heart. Macavity will almost lose herself in the tempestuous storm of another persons soul as your greatest opponent is none other than you.

>Patron
Urist

>Day Job
Student

>Faction
Marie
Myrmidions
Luminous Knights

Terri is a simple highschooler with no real sense of emotion in her being. She finds the world doldrum, boring, and tedious. Preferring to sleep her day away while others conflict she is however drawn toward one thing; The excitement of deception and theft. She finds investment in tricking her foes and watching them stumble as she performs heist after heist against the corporations in the pursuit of light. Perhaps not exactly shining herself, she has a noble enough cause... yeah?

>>96217639
"Mama warned me about women like you, I was hopping she was right"
>>96217948
"Hey kid, can you heist that womans phone number, yeah the one in red, Boomo is feeling magical "

>>96217837
I think Rake said Implements basically give you all the oomph you need, and you already have other magics for offence/defense.

>>96217966
She stares at the guy for a long time, pecking away at her phone.

"You look 40."

>>96218010
“Listen up, kid! There are smokin’ hot mamas out there just beggin’ for a hero, and guess what? The name’s Boomo, and I’m on duty! Yeah, baby! Now… the one in red? Or maybe that sweet little number in green—uh, scratch that, she already knows Boomo. And, uh… yeah, she ain’t a fan.”

>>96217201 (OP)
(with img this time because im rtard)

>Name
Gerard Gunman
>Sex
Male
>Outfit
Powered
>Implement
Greaves
>Schools of Magic
Light Specialization: Tech (Mech)
Master: Physicality
“Dark” Specialization: Celerity
Adept: Aero
>Quirks
Danger Sense
Large Reserves
Gifted
>Ultimate Art
Continuous Ultimate Art: Mecha-Volution
>Day Job
Corporate (IT)
>Pacts
Urist
>Faction
The Old Guard

Gerard Gunman has long since been fighting The Dark from the inside, gaining enough trust to analyze and modify the digital infrastructure as an Information Technology specialist. Though this hasn’t been without its costs, as the upper echelons within the City indulge in some of the most vile things man can think of, let alone what inklings of supernatural torment they bring unto the populace that he has to bear witness too without losing his cool or perhaps even his sanity.

Thus, when Gerard dons his Regalia and is on duty as a Luminary he….behaves a fair bit more like his hot-headed contemporaries within the Luminous Knights than a typical member of the Old Guard. This most commonly displayed by his Spell usage, as he could very well use his Ultimate Art and his prodigious Technomancy to continuously modify himself into nigh-invulnerability like a certain Divine General in another reality, he instead primarily uses his Magic to push his Mecha-Regalia to yet further heights of speed and power to personally turn the enemies of The Light into mulch with his bare(?) hands.

>>96217201 (OP)
>Name:
Penelope Angel
>Alias:
Argus Panoptes
>Outfit:
Lightweight, Ribboned
>Implement:
Charms

>Schools of Magic:
Binding (Specialty)
Curses (Specialty)
Force (Master)
Celerity (Adept)
>Quirks:
Complex Outfit
Nocturnal
Quickened Spells
>Ultimate Arts: Continuous "Resonant Present"
>"What are ribbons for? A gift, of course! Where's the gift? You silly, this ribbon is the gift. Every thread has been laid in place with you in mind. It may not look like much, but the depths of my feelings within cannot be measured by those eyes. So go on, take it!"
On contact with a ribbon, she can cast her other spells to channel them into it. Cursing the ribbon allows it to inflict disaster on anyone it touches, a blessing of Celerity gives it even greater speed and precision, and Force increases its power to pierce and slice through materials, while the mana flowing through helps better resists other magic that impact the bindings. As long as physical contact is maintained and mana is supplied, the effect will remain.

>Patrons:
Urist
Old Bone-Mother
>Occupation:
Student

Cheerful, a bit ditzy, but always open to introducing herself to someone new and turning that connection into friendship, Penelope is one of the many hopes for the new generation of Luminaries. If you get a present from her, you should thank her with a smile! You wouldn't want her hard work to go to waste, would you? Always retires early for the night, stating she wants to greet the day with a well rested smile.

There's no rest for the wicked.
Her Eyes are always open.
Urist seeks truth, and the Bone-Mother seeks blood.

Her casting has little peers to compare to, as the speed and ability to reconfigure spells on the fly leave little room for mistakes against her, each and every ribbon scrawled with Urist's sigil to grant sight and control beyond human limits. Efficiently and effectively exterminating any dangers in the dark is her duty.. and where else is she going to get more presents for her friends?

>>96217639
More Old Guard, nice. I need to head to work and it's going to be a busy day but I'll finish Corporate Hackerwoman tonight. Though with >>96218242 already taking that I'm considering Corporate Manager or Scientist type, will figure out later.

>>96217201 (OP) (OP)
>Reason for choices/extra lore.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96187933#96194664

>Tinker

>Male

>Witch-Like + Powered

>Gadget

>Tech-[Specialty]
>Curses-[Specialty]
>Binding-[3]
>Bio-Shifting-[3]

>Complex Outfit
>Gifted
>Subsidized

>Continuous [Personal Probability Manipulation/Supernatural Luck]

>Gaia
>Remial

>Student

>Old Guard
>The Circle
>Independent

>Product Recall
>Abyss Spawn
>Memetic Agent
>Maddened Sister
>Leyline Sabotage
>Corrupted Sill
>Quantum God

Hey friends, don't let my appearance give you the wrong idea. I'm just here to learn, and help save people from all the various bio-mechanical supernatural horrors running about while also making my own! Anyone wanna help me take down the Quantum God?

>>96217639
This all seems incredibly powerful, although it also makes you sound like a generic anime character. Regardless, I'd definitely love to help you with some weapons and & equipment if you're interested.

>>96217941
Definitely an odd one, but may be useful.

>>96217948
An infiltration specialist, perfect. Not enough people realize we can't always punch our enemies into submission. Sometimes we need a subtle approach.

>>96218242
Neat another tech specialist. I'm not as "punchy" as you are but I'm still open to working together.

>>96218258
This one seems like it's heavily dependent on allies, unless I'm misunderstanding your strategy?

Bros what the fuck is going on. Stop fucking up your builds

>>96218693
What have they done wrong?

>>96217201 (OP)
https://rentry.org/u3uxssum
Finally finished. Need to redo formatting and try to figure out how to make the images not look like shit, but I want to get it out before I go to sleep.

I'll wait for a few more builds to drop before I try thinking up some writefag ideas.

>>96218935
>try to figure out how to make the images not look like shit
First of all, don't reshape their proportions. Your image is in 738x1024 and you forced rentry to display it as {750px:1000px}.

>>96218935
> it wouldn't suprise me if she might not see her actions as "evil" or "monstrous" at all. To her, growing a flesh-behemoth might be as natural as planting a flower
She's right tho

>>96217201 (OP)
>>96217639

>>96219253
Old Guard in a nutshell*

>>96217201 (OP)
Name: Lotte Wagenknecht
Alias: Blitz Cannon
Sex: Female

>Regalia
Majestic
Gauntlets

>Schools of Order
Lightning Speciality
Force Master
Spirit Novice
Physicality Novice

>Schools of Chaos
Psychic Speciality

>Benefits
Large Reserves
Talented
Quickened Spells

>Ultimate Art
Second Form

>Patrons
Gaia
She Who Dreams In Shadows

>Day Job
Enforcement

>Current Missions
Product Recall
Abyss Spawn
Death-Squad Cleanup
Dark Cult

The newest member of The City's police department, she joins as a junior detective, having graduated at the top of her class at the academy. From the outset, she can be rather strict and by the book when following the rules and protocols, but oftentimes her friendly and altruistic nature can shine through as she helps citizens throughout the day. What can be seen as the ideal face of law enforcement quickly crumbles once most people realize she's the biggest dork when not dealing with responsibilities. A purveyor of plenty of niche interests, the biggest of which is her love of kung fu and old spaghetti westerns. Depictions of clear black and white moralities have led her to have a more naive outlook on the war of light and dark. Sure, she knows that corporations are evil, but she still believes in the good found in everyone and that justice will always prevail in the end. Something she might need to properly learn from her senior luminaries.

>>96219689
That's not the only influence old movies have on her. Her use of magic is heavily inspired by martial arts, specifically a form of imperial karate focused more on strikes rather than throws, charging her moves into an Electric God Fist, or using telekinesis to dash through the air and into her opponent. Similar to her personality, she tends to be a very direct and honest combatant, usually avoiding subterfuge unless it's the last resort. In an actual scenario, she'll focus on protecting bystanders from harm, using a combination of force and spirit to block incoming physical and magical attacks.

Her regalia is similarly influenced by her personality, donning a ceremonial military uniform as her outfit and the accompanying formal gloves as her implement; her appearance is representative of her pure white belief and dedication to others. To her, a true leader is one that serves the people and not the other way around. There is a slight quirk where, due to her spirit guide being a rabbit, her outfit comes with a set of rabbit ears and a tail, ones that she usually suppresses with cosmetic magic unless she needs to go all out or is surprised.

Just like other luminaries, her limitations on dark magic are still intact or only slightly leaking. Her Psychic specialization is a corruption of her authority and desire for control, one that has piqued the interest of one who lives in nightmares. After all, who better to enforce fear than the enforcers themselves, especially if things go off record. Other than that, her ultimate move called Electronic Decelerator, is a form so charged with energy that lightning crackles as she speaks. A form that once corrupted by chaos turns her pristine uniform into a sterile lab coat and her electric attacks into means of conditioning her opponents with the right amount of shock therapy. "Why waste that intelligence on a lifetime of service?"

>>96217639
I hope you don't mind being her mentor.

>>96219710
Exactly what I was expecting to do pretty much.
Providing a mentor to the new generations.

You probably in particular look up to her thanks to her skill with a blade making her look like a badass samurai or something to Lotte

>>96218759
There were like 8 deleted posts you missed probably. The end results look fine.

>>96215312
>>96214952
Hey anon, looking at the builds again, a lot of people have seem to go in the corruption/blackpilled direction and we already have a Hacker for the Forces of Good. I'd still like to keep up the conjoined backstory of Depressed Old Guard Squad but we could probably use more overtly hype/Light builds.

I was considering dropping Hackerwoman and replacing her with Punk Rock Anarchist Old Guard who makes massive problems for everyone - but particularly the Corporations - and acts as a sort of icon and banner for Luminaries, but is plagued by the usual artist fears and doubts magnified by the Dark/Illusion part of her nature. Does this ruin anything on your end? They could still absolutely have been a part of the same Squad and have the same vibes of burning themselves out to uplift the next generation, they just went in different directions.

>>96220167
>Does this ruin anything on your end?
Nope, feel free to change it up. If anything I feel like them working on opposite fronts as icon of anarchy and super spy could highlight their teamwork more.

I'm also about to drop my build and it has a small snippet on the incident that broke their squad, I didn't want to go into much detail in case you had some specific scenes in mind, and we can also hash out something else when both builds are there.

>>96217201 (OP)
Name: Jane
Alias: ???
Outfit: Suit
Implement: Blade, Shield

>Magic
Specialised: Pact
Specialised: Physicality
Master: Radiant
Adept: Curses

>Quirks
Twin Implements
Talented
Shrouded Magic

>Ultimate Art: Demon Time (Second Form)
A burst of power born from a pact with herself, reinforced by her outfit.

She can only call upon it when it is a work day, but she is not "on the clock". In this overtime state, a radiance she lost years ago shines through, reinforcing her Physicality aura and burning away her bindings, allowing her to call upon any of her Pact effects without paying their price.

>Patrons
Remial
Ste've
Gaia

Occupation: Corporate
Contacts: IDK
Missions: whatever we feel like doing in the MP

A Luminary that could be mistaken for a regular office lady, if not for the horns atop her head and the tail flicking behind her back, marks of her pact with a Dark Spirit known as The Abbot Of The Temple Of Man.

Aloof and weary-eyed, she treats her duties with professional detachment and a fixed schedule. There's her usual 9 to 5, in which she infiltrates the belly of the beast to uncover their Dark plots, climbing the corporate ladder while performing sabotage with Cursed Arts. Of course, she always takes some unpaid overtime and extra projects to accelerate her promotions and the downfall of her employers. Beyond that, she has weekly night shifts, when she goes out to fulfill one Pact or another, crushing the more brainless threats and horrors roaming the City with the overwhelming power of a Physicality and Pact Specialist.

Jane has no hobbies, no life prospects, and her friends can be counted in one hand. Day by day, night by night, she spends what are supposed to be her golden years as a tool of her patrons, writing checks for Dark spirits that must be cashed with her mind, body, and soul. Seeing her outside her Regalia would be a once in a lifetime event.

>>96220317
But it was not always like this. Once upon a time, Jane had eight hours of sleep every night, and a squad walking side by side with her. She would charge into battle with a smile, spouting the cheesiest of catch-phrases before unleashing her super moves, striking poses as her enemies fell alongside the rubble.

Then, they bit something too big for them to chew. An operation involving all-out-war between the Triumverate. One of their Soul Gems shattered forever, ending the battle in her dying throes, but leaving the remaining two in despair. Jane's despair turned into bitter rage and a desire for revenge. She could not uproot the corporations through brute strength, so she would rot them from within.

Nowadays, that rage has withered into a cold, pale flame. Between all the schedules, meetings, and contracts, after all the death and sacrifice she has witnessed, all the corpses she has walked over to not blow her cover, she struggles to remember why she began following the Light, and her methods are becoming indistinguishable from her enemy's. She can't see an end to her work, but must keep going, or else everything up to this point was for nothing.

As a Contact, she's a member of the Old Guard, an informant on the moves and plans of most big corporations, who tries to sprinkle some personal advice to younger Luminaries so they don't repeat her mistakes.

Her pact with The Abbot grants her a conceptual cloak, the demon wearing the coat of the righteous. She can mentally create multiple identities for herself, emitting an aura of Delirium that works even on magic targets. To one corporation, she could be known as Jane Doe, the new girl who joined days ago, and to another, Mary Jane, a manager who pops up once in a week for a meeting. Her enemies can't glimpse at her true nature as a Luminary even if she uses her magic, perceiving her as a Dark ritualist.

People unaware of the supernatural can't see the markings at all, and tend to avoid her subconsciously.

Having more than one patron is kinda lame to me

>>96217201 (OP)
I was just gonna make a token evil build but were actually immune to corruption technically.

Name: Akira Hiro
Alias: Black Hare
Gender: Female
Outfit: Lightweight
Implement: Staff
Magic: Spirit Specialist, Illusion Specialist, Celerity Master, Curse Master, Space Novice
Quirks: Overcharged, Quickened Spells, Danger Sense
Ultimate Art: (Utility) True Illusion - Embeds an illusion so deeply into the victims soul that it becomes reality for them. Requires physical contact with the target and acts as a curse in all other ways. The illusion is only percieved by the victim and it can cause real harm or block movement or whatever it would do normally in real life. Can be turned on the caster to create some surprising effects.
Patrons: She who Dreams, Yharum, Bone Mother
Day Job: Media (Reporter)
Contacts: Luminous Knights, Independent

Luminaries are immune to the depravation of the Dark. This is a fact that they all accept as truth - Except sometimes a soul blackens itself without outside influence. Cue the Black Hare, a eccentric practitioner of all sorts of dark arts best left untouched. She seems to enjoy messing with people more than anything, and while sometimes helpful she's always unpredictable.

She publishes a newspaper by and for Luminarys called 'Wonderland' that uncannily reports on all sorts of things that should really be secret. Causing problems for both corporations and fellow luminarys alike when a issue falls into the wrong hands. She has made numerous crazy escapes - at times seeming to walk on air itself as if it were a solid object or cut through bindings with a nonexistant blade.

Wonderlands tagline is "Were all a little mad here" and it tends to add a bleak spin to things.

>>96220317
>>96220356
>>96220482

Toxic Drinking Buddies?

>>96220553
Sure
they get wasted whenever Jane has a gap in her schedule for happy hour and swap the hottest gossip (corporate secrets)

>>96220482
>>96220317
>>96219689
>>96218258
"Hello sweet mommas, can I interest you in some of Boomos vitamin water? Radiation free unlike that corpo water. Only 9.95 and 5 dollars off if you give your number"

The general really had a lot of people leave in the past year didn't it

>>96220866
>*sip*
>"... I don't feel any healthier. At least the slop pouring from those office coffeemakers comes free."
>"... my number?
>*sigh*
>"Here's a business card. Don't call unless it's important."

>>96220866
>>96220482
Here, go play with a tulpa and leave me alone.

>>96221172
>Boomer found dead in his apartment from dehydration, medics baffled

>>96221096
Four hours later

>>96221197
If Boomo is found dead it is because dies fighting billion corpos at once......or he tried having sex with one of his fire minion spawns again

Boomo in his magical girl outfit

>>96221384
>blocked after a single call
sad but expected

>>96217201 (OP)

>Name:
The Painter

>Sex:
Male

>Otufit:
Majestic

>Implement:
Charms

>Magic:
Sacrifice (Specialised)
Tech (Master)
Aero (Specialised)
Flame (Adept)

>Quirks:
Large reserves
Talented
Danger sense

>Ultimate art:
Bltizkrieg (attack)

>Patrons:
Hashmillim
Ste've
Bone-mother

>Day job:
Official

>Faction:
Myrmidions

>>96221605
>>96221611
cyoag bros have mercy on us

>>96221605
Kill yourself Tok

>>96221605
I'm staying away from this one

>>96221611
Does he also get a magical girl skirt?

>>96217941
I love faceclaims because I think about them as 'legally distinct' versions of the referenced character with deviations. Something you'd get away with in an anime and not get in trouble for.

As to say, this is what Boomo looks like in my head

>>96221813
it deleted my IMAGE

>>96221813
>>96221818
I like that one and would have used something more specific like that but i wanted to have a large amount of pictures to work from without editing them. But yeah looking like a 30 year old boomer trying to be elvis seems about right

>>96220317
Very nice anon, I can work with this. I'll be posting Punklady soon and we can see where they match up that we might want to explore.

>>96221874
On that note it's surprisingly difficult to find art of some kind of punk rocker or metal woman in an anime style that actually commits to the bit instead of being generic cute anime girl in KISS makeup, but I guess it's kind of a niche ask.

>>96221911
ganbatte anon
I don't know much about punk aesthetics so sadly I don't think I can help

>>96221970
I can honestly pivot from the punk part specifically. The only vibes I need to hit are rebellious, dead inside, more mature than teenager and some kind of standout fashion culture - so goth, punk and glam all work too.

I did find this, which pretty much nailed the vibes but very quickly realized it was slop. You'd think it'd be easy to follow that into just goth anime girls but basically none of them have the sort of aggressive energy I'm going for either.

>>96222042
something like this? honestly yeah the maturity is the hardest part, you can find something with a similar vibe by just searching the same accessories in your pic, but the facial profile won't be the same

>>96222201
That's another good choice but lacks the outward confidence (however shaky) I'm looking for, maybe I'm just trying too hard to find something perfect.

>>96222247
I know the feeling
the one I posted is zoya from path to nowhere, you can likely find a pic where she looks more confident instead of tired

>>96222247
Can you post a non-anime pic of what you're looking for for reference?

>>96217201 (OP)
Name: Catherine Ohara
Alias: Paladin

Outfit: Armored & Colorful
Implements: Blade & Shield

>Schools of Magic:
Radiant (Specialized)
Spirit (Master)
Physicality (Adept)
Space (Specialized)

>Quirks:
Twin Implements
Complex Outfit
Talented

>Ultimate Art: Everlasting Paradise (Domain)
Her ideals given fleeting, tangible form through the power of magic. The domain appears as the town square in the center of a massive, idyllic city. It separates space into distinct layers, making all forms of interference between layers impossible, save for other high level forms of spatial magic. This prevents any attack from striking herself and her allies, as they aren't physically present to be attacked. Of course, the reverse is true as well, as it would shield even her enemies from harm at her allies' hands. Different layers of the domain have different skies overhead, with the layer she herself is in always having a blazingly bright sun without a cloud in sight.

Of course, in practice his idealistic power can be used rather unfairly in team battles, letting her divide and conquer enemy forces by trapping just some of them on the same layer as herself and her allies. It's otherwise useful for defending against enemy ultimates in a pinch, but that tends to burn more energy than it's worth.

>Patrons:
Gaia
>Contacts:
Other builds?
>Missions:
/mcyoag/

>>96222338
>Occupation:
Official

One of the more public members of the old guard, she's grown from nameless desk jobs up to a respectable mid-ranking position. Naturally it's not without risk. She's butted heads against the corpos too many times and always took too hard of a stance. At some point they didn't care if she was a luminary with too much confidence or just a hard-headed fool, and so they sent a hitman. She lived to tell the tale without the use of her luminary powers. After all, she couldn't turn it into good press otherwise! "Even with my life on the line, I won't give a single inch when it comes to protecting this city!" she'd exclaim. She's become somewhat of a minor celebrity as a result, with some whispers even saying she should try her hand at an elected office before long.

In public, as both an official and a magical girl she's stern, serious, and experienced; Always striving to strike at the heart of matters rather than waste precious time. In private she shows quite a different face, often making (rather bad) jokes with a wide and cheery grin. However her public face changes, deep inside she's the same magical girl she's always been, a big damn hero who won't leave anyone behind. All that's changed is the arena she's fighting in and the methods she needed to fight with.

>>96222319
Unfortunately there's nothing specific and I'm purely going off vibes, which is probably what's making it so difficult as those are harder to satisfy, pic related for some generalist ideas. If it helps she's meant to be the rebellious, outwardly confident black sheep of the Old Guard who gets off on being trouble, but isn't a gremlin so much as just a bitch. Though this conversation has solidified the idea in her being very 'punk goth' - all mascara and black leather like you'd find at a death metal concert. >>96222201 and >>96222303 are very close but they're less 'taunting bitch,' than the slop I found. I don't know why I'm being so picky about this though.

Showing off a little is also on the table/encouraged as it fits her personality but definitely not full coomerbait either, as a lot of the art I'm finding tends to be.

>>96218632
I don't really consider her to be reliant on others much. She might be a team player during the day but she acts as a vigilante of sorts in the night. Her Bindings are her main weapon, which she can use for movement, defense, attacking, or all three if she pleases. She's also got Force for more oomph if she needs it, and Curse to pile on vulnerabilities and generally aide her combat.

>>96217201 (OP)
Luminary comes to /mcyoag/? Sure, I'll join in.

>>96222790
kino drawing anon!

on a serious note, Jane would accept Penelope's gifts pretty readily, she's used to carrying odd trinkets from and to contracted spirits

CYOAGfags need to be hanged, drawn and quartered

>>96222964
Best I can do is nickeled.

>>96222964
Okay but you have to point them out first

>96223013
I'm not given them (You)s

>>96222896
"Hey baby, names Boomo. I give monsters the boom and sweet mamas the O'"

>>96218632
Im not sure if Boomo would be too stupid to tell if he was a guy and hit on him or if he would try to convince him to take BoomoPills™ to bulk up.

Seizures are fun. Should still be able to finish my edgelord build tonight though
>>96217941
Cool build. I was planning to make my dude a student for extra angst, so I'm just not too sure why he'd be working with Boomo. Maybe if they were instead part of one of the more serious groups so he could bemoan being forced to have Boomo as a mentor. IDK

>>96223098
job maybe? Could work on Boomos podcast as an intern or something. If he is scrawny looking he will be forced to eat Boomoflakes™.

>>96223098
They go to the same karate class

behold, the best use of BIOSHIFTING on the market.

Cat Form + Shrouded Magic + Illusions = Stealth Queen

>>96223411
cute

>>96220058
>You probably in particular look up to her thanks to her skill with a blade making her look like a badass samurai or something to Lotte
Definitely. Lotte admires Brianne's strength and efficient means of being able to cut down her foes and not break a sweat while doing so. She might get compared to protagonists in Kurosawa films a lot for her use of iaido techniques, so bear with her for a while.
On a side note, the original build had twin implements with a saber she'd only wield while using dark arts, but I couldn't really make sense of how Psychic would be incorporated with quick slashes. In another world, she could've taken more from her senior in terms of fighting style.
>>96220866
>"Sir, we've received reports of a man harassing passerbys on the street. If you don't mind, please ref- Huh? Radiation free water? How does that work exactly? Can you tell me more?"
>>96222790
Nice art. I hope that isn't a dead rat wrapped under those ribbons.
>>96223411
Good work to you, too. It's pretty cute for a literal cat burglar. Does she really have cat ears even out of her outfit?

>>96217201 (OP)
Sorry for the slop art, will look for or even commission something ASAP, but wanted to get the build out before I went to bed, consider this the open beta version of the character;

>Name
Deborah

>Gender
Female

>Alias
Virtuoso

>Outfit
'Colourful'

>Implement
Greater Instrument (Instrument + Instrument)

>Magic Specialties
Shadow
Sonic

>Magic Arts
Master Curses
Adept Celerity
Adept Physicality

>Quirks
Overcharged
Talented
Twin Implements

>Ultimate Art: Reverb & Riot (Passive)
Emotion is a catalyst for magic, enough of it can turn a ripple into a wave, and Virtuoso learned long ago that the crowd is just as important to the performance as the players. The more attention and emotion is invested by others into her music - whether fellow players or an audience - the stronger and more chaotic it becomes.

One or two people has virtually no effect, ten or more begins to manifest as a certain state of flow as her magic manifests more freely. At its peak, her magic becomes riotous and out-of-control to the clamour of thousands of fans - though it reaches an absurd level of raw power, the best she can do is vaguely anchor and guide its direction.

>Pacts
None

>Occupation
Media (Underground Rockstar)

>Backstory
Few artists within The City are truly free in their expressions - the corporations censor troublesome thoughts, demonize problematic narratives and pilfer and package any hint of marketable entertainment to be sold in a sanitized subscription. In an environment where independent work is punished with destitution and rebellion is treated with a legal sledgehammer, it is no surprise that the underground art scene is a dangerous and often fruitless path. Every year a hundred artists, musicians and entertainers are cast into the prisons and gutters while one lucky soul is elevated to the comforts of a corporate-sponsored gilded cage - nearly every group has folded to the pressure one way or another, save for Calamity.

Cont.

>>96223496
A banner for counter-culture, youthful rebellion and rage against the system, Calamity is a loosely organized band of musicians renowned for their surprise concerts and die-hard refusal to back down in the face of governmental or corporate bullying. Wherever they appear, protests and riots are quick to follow - with the media not entirely inaccurately decrying them as 'musical terrorists.' Where the corporate news-reels bend the truth is in their portrayal of Calamity's agenda, citing their acts of chaos as wanton destruction rather than carefully targeted, violent activism.

Deborah, while not the founder of the group, has become synonymous with the name due to being the only member of the band who has remained for long. Far from an arrogant solo act, she uses her position as improvised lead to kickstart the careers of her usually anonymous band-mates, who most often move onto safer work in underground circles after a show or two.

Known to few, Deborah's impossible skill with instruments stems from her nature as a Luminary of some veterancy. Once, she was a brilliant, shining star of light and good nature - now her songs and magic have turned black and rebellious, signifying an unspoken loss she holds dearly. The music Calamity plays changes genre often, but is iconic for her dark undertones and exploration of themes deemed taboo by polite society - far from doom and gloom, her message is one of resilience in the face of these very real issues - 'laugh, cry, love and hate, but never be afraid of the dark and never let anyone take away who you are.'

She has also become somewhat of an icon for new Luminaries, who she acts with a certain aggressive fondness towards, doing everything she can to keep them safe, even if this usually means acting as a magnet for the aggression of corporations and cults. While most of her Luminary kin live in the shadows to protect themselves, Deborah is the loud, powerful distraction keeping them from being uncovered.

>>96223496
>Sorry for the slop art,
I like it

>>96223533
The vibes were pretty much perfect but I'm not really a fan of slop on principle and it annoys me, so I'll be looking for something more legitimate. In terms of expressing her personality though it was the best start I could find.

>>96223485
"Well sweet treat, corpos dont want you to about the radiation they put in the water. That is why Boomo has made his patented line of the cleanest water in the city. Boomo can tell you much more over dinner...or on the Boomo podcast"

>>96223496
I was considering trading Shadow and Curse to make her more of a chaotic force of nature, the idea being her Curses are less targeted malice and more just anarchy, making her songs literally cursed also sounded cool. Unsure.

>>96223485
She always has the ears in every form but her ultimate, though in her school girl outfit it gets played off as a headband

>>96223560
"I, uh, well... I'm still on the job, so dinner will have to wait. Wait a minute, professionals aren't supposed to mix work with personal matters!"
"I can at least listen to the podcast while in the office, if that's fine with you."
It's not an outright rejection, but at least he'll have one more viewer on his podcast. That's like, double the amount he previously had.
>>96223689
Are they her actual ears, or does she have 4D audio from having a human set and a cat set?
Another thing I wanted to ask was how she incorporates her lightning speciality into her gauntlets? It turns out she might have a lot of similarities with a certain bunny-eared policewoman despite being total opposites in outlook and approuach.

>>96221695
That's more Goering's line of thing.

>>96223798
Actual ears, s'why her hair's always covering where her real set would go. She finds it hard to shift normal ears on.

>Aspects and Implement
Lots of claw swipes, alongside the agility to match it. Though she's Lightning, I like to frame her magic more as the storm/rain itself at least in theming to backup the Illusions in element. Rain illusions.
When it comes to her combat, other than trickery, she goes for an assassin-type approach. Like how thunder and lightning hides in the clouds during a storm. She uses the lightning for movement more than she would charged attacks like a certain bunny.

If you considered Lotte's method as Kung Fu and Charges, Terri is Dancing and Critical Strikes

This isn't a /cyoag/ shitpost btw, this build is genuine. I just couldn't find a better picture.
>>96217201 (OP)
>Name
Louis Finnegan
>Gender
Male
>Regalia
Suit
>Implement
Gadget (Flip Phone)
>Schools
Sonic Specialization
Force Adept
Earthen Master
Illusion Specialization
>Quirks
Talented
Nocturnal
Gifted
>Ultimate
Barrier
>Day Job
Corporate
>Factions
None (Formerly Old Guard)

"This shit doesn't matter. The Dark is impossible to beat. We won't do it. Nothing ever happens."

Louis had hope once. Once. Older than average for a magical teen, well in his adult years, he decided that victory was impossible. Years of corporate atrocities and losing teammates haunt him. He sees every magical girl and boy younger than him as just more fodder that will inevitably die within the next 5 years unless they're lucky, and he hates it. Former Old Guard and lone survivor of his closest friends after they were wiped out in a fight, he basically cut himself off from the rest of the veterans and engrossed himself in comparatively small-time work. Mostly focuses on his high-ranking corporate position and tries to help with what the younger or generally weaker magical fighters have trouble with, if he can. Acts as a support-type backliner who tries to look after everyone and gives intel and buffs.
Carries a lot of resentment towards the strongest of his kind like the Myrmidons and the Goddesses, thinks the former aren't doing enough to prevent the younger members from dying and thinks the latter are to blame for setting them up for this garbage in the first place. Ultimately believes that the Dark can at most be slowed, and has essentially already won. They're just going through the motions.
Pic rel: on the left is Louis, the right is his friend Jamal (bioshifter) who died a couple years ago. It was a happier time. He looks sadder now.

>>96223936
this is a new low even for you, googledocsanon...

>>96223950
Can't an anon post a tragic build who's dubiously homosexual in peace without being accused of being Googledocs anon?

>>96223973
Not after the Link incident, or that starwars run.

>>96223981
Fair. If it helps he wasn't planned to be gay. Jamal didn't exist either until I found that image.

>>96217201 (OP)
>Name
Kuro Kageyama
>Sex
Male
>Outfit
Dark
>Implement
Blade
>Schools of Magic
Physicality (Specialized)
Shadow (Specialized)
Celerity (Master)
Space (Novice)
Curses (Novice)
>Quirks
Talented
Nocturnal
Shrouded Magic
>Ultimate Art
Second Form: Black Knight
>Patrons and Boons
Ste've The Everburning
>Day Job
Student

"This city is a festering wound, a blight whose citizens drown under the greed of its tyrants. The so-called heroes who’ve tried to save it? Pathetic. They possess neither the nerve nor the aptitude to change anything. The elite rule through evil forces and demonic pacts, their thrones forged by the suffering of the weak. And as those plucky magical girls fail again and again, the hold these villains have over the city only tightens. They believe the night belongs to them. They’re wrong. The shadows answer to me, and when the sun falls over the horizon, the predators of this city become my prey. I am the darkness they should fear, a shadow blacker than any power they could channel.

Unfortunately, I've developed a new thorn in my side: some pompadoured has-been who's recently strutted out of retirement and now fancies himself my mentor. I've yet to figure out how he manages to track me down each night, but apparently I remind this washed-up skirt chaser of himself. What an insult. I'll admit, he's not entirely useless when he isn't spouting cheesy wisdom; however, the sooner I shake him off, the sooner I can get back to truly cleaning up this city."

>>96224005
Might write up something longer later when I'm feeling better. Just wanted to get the meat and potatoes of the build out at least. Hope everyone's having fun so far.

>>96223991
You could've cropped it out, but at least the faceclaim inspired something about the build.

>>96224005
lil nigga thinks he's pic related

shit cyoa for shit shitters

>>96224192
yes
but we can still have fun

>>96224205
>biting that level of bait
come on anon, you can do better than that

>>96224220
yes
but I can still have fun
(I haven't had breakfast this morning)

>>96224205
>>96224220
THIS THIS THIS.
We shall have an mp and will have fun. There's interaction! People are drawing. I believe, anons. I believe in magical girls.

no fun alllowed.

we have a potential mp and there they are. Trying to bait it all away.

Prompt instead >>96217201 (OP)

Sure, Girls/Guys, we all have our ultimate technique. But what are some of your other moves? Do they have names? What kind of theme does your character take on for their moves? Raw elemental extensions of their affinities or something more refined? Surely saying your move names allowed makes them stronger.

>>96224299
Louis is a phonechad so I'm gonna make up a rentry with his spells, brb.

>>96223936
"How can you be so down with all these smokin mamas? An army of hot babes roam the streets and it our sacred duty to smooch em"
>>96224005
"Lets roll Kuro, Boomo needs to find himself a new babe. If you help me land a hottie I'll show you my ultimate move. Guaranteed to best any enemy in 1 2 3 4 seconds"

>>96224299
there is no bait. only truth.

I'm coping and moping about how kino my old plotlines would have been if the MP continued again... I wonder if anyone would notice if I reposted the character(s) with slightly different personalities and tried again for a new MP. I'd have to wait for a good setting dough.

>>96225120
What character and plotlines?
I don't actually care, I just feel like you want to talk about it.

>>96225120
Unless they were very unique and a pillar of the mp they're almost always forgotten about but you already knew that and are just baiting a response.

>>96225120
If you don't post what it was now you are a faggot

>>96225148
>>96225154
>>96225162
I don't want to say actually. I just wanted to scream in the void. Sorry for wasting your time and being a fagoli.

>>96225171
I'm very disappointed in you.

>>96225171
It wasnt shonenslop was it?

>>96224299
Limiting the mobility of the enemy with an endless torrent of fire followed by several hundred punches. Its not a very complex move but neither is he.

>>96225182
It will always be shounenslop.

>>96225227
King of the hill mp when

>>96225120
Can't tell you the amount of times Ive felt the same. I've had an idea for a character in my head from a CYOA that I've never been able use cause there won't ever be a run for it again, and while using it in a different setting is possible it just wouldn't feel right. For some other characters though unless someone else begins a trend of bringing characters back I'll keep them clean and safe in the premium top shelf of my mind.

>>96224299
Kore/Viscera is mostly focused on making minions with Bio-Shifting and Flora, and is a relatively new Luminary. As a result she's got fewer 'proper' spells than most and is just instinctively using the schools she has talent in. I'll make a proper rentry of some of her monsters after a few writefags, but some of her more notable spells include:

Ping: A passive Sonic spell, acting as a form of echolocation. If something is making noise she can sense its rough spatial position within several hundred feet. Great for detecting living things since they make so many noises (footsteps, breathing, heartbeats, etc). Costs so little its basically free, but she can dump in mana to boost the range or release a soundwave that bounces off of the surroundings and gives her a more detailed map.

Brambles: High-level Flora spell that covers a massive area in thick brambles and thorny roots. She can choose to make these toxic or not, and it basically forces the fight into the air - or at the very least makes the opponent devote resources to clearing an area for themselves. Thankfully they die and begin to rot after a few hours, otherwise they'd be a huge nuisance.

Spore Pustules: Closer to an item than a spell. She can grow small pods that function like gas grenades, releasing a cloud of spores when striking a surface hard enough. These spores can have a wide number of effects, from just concealing an area, to an irritant or even knocking enemies unconscious. She makes some minions who grow these pods on their hide/chitin, acting as a form of reactive armor that bursts when struck.

In combat she mostly relies on her minions, using Flora for AoE and battlefield control and Spirit for support. In bigger battles, she'll just burrow inside a kaiju like a meat-mecha, using them as a mobile bunker to cast spells out of and support her army, and bio-shifting them mid fight. Fighting solo is kind of a last resort, only done when trying to escape or caught by surprise.

>>96221605
Huh. I thought this would be deleted cause of the blatant groping, bandaid level nudity and one pixel off ofr flashing nipple towel and assorted lewd poses.

Guess all thats fine. Good to know.

>>96223090
'Eh looks feminine enough' is the superior and johnny bravo canon opinion

>>96223485
Ironically, my other image idea ... Also had two blades. I just couldn't fit dual implement into my build in a satisfying way.

>>96224299
>But what are some of your other moves? Do they have names? What kind of theme does your character take on for their moves? Raw elemental extensions of their affinities or something more refined? Surely saying your move names allowed makes them stronger.

>>96217639
She probably cribs Saitamas style by just calling them stuff like Consecutive Slashes, Brutal Series Slash, Agile Series Evasion, Her ultimate is basically just Omnidirectional Brutal Slashes
I don't think she would say names anymore unless she was trying to explain something to a rookie or pushed to frenzy mode.

She's meant to be very simple on her magical use so her aspected moves are things like Hidden Slash (Time freezing an attack until an opponent steps into it) Iaijutsu (where she just draws her blade instantly to attack using time/space) and stuff like that.

>>96217201 (OP)
May as well repost my build from /cyoag/. I don't really know how this works, so apologies in advance.
>Name and Alias: Kyrie Eleison.
>Sex: Male
>Regalia: Subtle, Gauntlets/Greaves
>Schools: Physicality & Celerity Specialist, Curse Master, Time Adept
Quirks: Magic Bloodhound, Shrouded Magic, Gifted
>Ultimate Art: Continuous(Celerity) - Vision of Heaven extends Celerity's effects to my magical perception, massively improving it. (continued in image)
>Day Job: Corporate

"To whom it may concern,
I look forward to working with you, for the betterment of mankind.
Sincerely,
Kyrie Eleison"

>>96222896
Nice build.

>>96225840
Main thing buildwise to note is we do not use companions. Other than that you can answer prompts, interact with other builds like boomer is doing, and ultimately writefag something like an encounter with another build or a battle between your build and an enemy or a teamup against a evil or something.

Nice to have some fresh blood hope you enjoy it and stick around.

>>96222790
Thanks for the clarification, and that does make more sense now that you explain it. Using Binding as your main form of attack wasn't something I thought of.

>>96223090
Eh, could probably go either way but it'd be funny regardless.

>>96219710
So we have a kind hearted idealist white rabbit. I really like your outfit pic, and your outlook seems like it could definitely lead to some interesting situations.

>>96220482
And a mischievous secret stealing black rabbit. Any chance you'd be interested in some tech support for your newspaper?

>>96222896
While I absolutely love everything I'm seeing here. I feel like I must at least make the offer to upgrade your firearm into something a bit more modern, like a railgun. Or maybe a plasma cannon?

>>96224005
If you're actually trying to mimic batman. I can make gadgets for a small fee.

>>96223936
"I actually somewhat concur with >>96224662. Not the smooching part, but the fact that there's still an army of Luminaries here to oppose the dark and seemingly more are joining us everyday. Plenty of reason to still have hope."

>>96224299
More-or-less just a 40k tech priest. I try to stay at range and blast foes with sci-fi energy weapons while using bio-mechanical minions and cybernetic tentacles to keep away or hold down threats. Curses are basically machine spirits I know there's a Summoning power, but Curses seemed more useful and I use them to buff the functionality of my inventions. Plus I can provide equipment, logistical, and tactical support to m allies whenever I'm not directly in a fight.

Rolled 2 (1d2)

1: Continue with concept.
> 2: Your request for maternity leave has been denied.

>>96226306
>>96220482
I'm more in the habit of selling than buying, but if you obtain some juicy information we can always make a trade. I have unique powers that can be quite useful when combined with your own skillset. Afterall there's nothing easier to hide than something that doesn't exist outside your soul.

https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zj53odyj

I wonder if we could use this to make a monster jobber

>>96226454
probably but we could also just make them up

>>96226454
>>96217201 (OP)
Monster of the Week provided.

Name: Reptilian Overlord
False Identity: David Lindwyrm
Extremely High Strength
High Defense
Very High Speed
Abilities: Speed, Defense, Elastic Body, Natural Weapon (Claws)
Drawbacks: Magical Girls (Duh), Infiltration, Great Devourer
Perks: Band of Mooks (Lizardmen), Enhanced Speed, Enhanced Strength, Enhanced Regeneration, Shadow Step

A monster born of an ancient conspiracy theory that lizardmen secretly rule the world in the guise of politicians. One 'David Lindwyrm' is a prominent figure in city politics. Selling out the drinking water to corporations, zoning houses for demolition for parking lots, and generally being an all around evil douchebag. Secretly he's actually the REPTILLIAN OVERLORD. Bringing about ruin to those pitiful humans and supporting the Darks motives.

His combat style is deceptively fastpaced compared to other reptillian type monsters that have been encountered as he tears into his opponents with claws, fangs and weirdly deadly tail and seems capable of some Space aspected magic to teleport around, and Biokinesis to stretch his body around attacks.

Like many monsters that reach this level of threat he has followers - Lesser Lizardmen who take the form of 'Bodyguards' with the expected arsenal of weaponry and slightly more dangerous physicality.

Luminaries are cautioned against engaging alone as he is very manipulative and dangerous in and out of combat.

>>96226517
>>Luminaries are cautioned against engaging alone as he is very manipulative and dangerous in and out of combat.
My unposted Luminary soloes

>>96226731
Step into my den says the snake to the mouse.

I found three images of this, must be someones OC

>>96226763
You know now that I look at that image in particular its probably AI? His leg turns into a tail, as does his coat. Lame.

Still works for a generic villian to beat up.

>>96225600
t. overly prude

>can't modify your implement besides slight modifications like have your sword from rapier to a katana
How the fuck am I suppose to make a punch wizard if I need gay gauntlets/greaves that ruin the aesthetic?

>>96226952
Just make them metaphorical or something

>>96226952
Why can't you?

>>96225605
Im not making bravo. Im just using him as inspiration and has a face claim. Now start bulking boy

>>96226952
Fingerless gloves as gauntlets
Or just take a staff, super enhance yourself with physicality and celerity like everyone else and then fistfight people with those buffs up

>>96225600
So long as it's not showing nipples, vagene or a penus it's not nsfw

>>96226952
What this guy said >>96227033 just make sure it's either something you were on your hands or near them

>robot hands
>fist wraps
>protein powder (tool)
>vibrator (wand) up ass
there's so many ways to do this build baka

>>96227393

I guess its way more lax now than it used to be or something. Just the first image would get it rekt in the past.

>>96223927
>Though she's Lightning, I like to frame her magic more as the storm/rain itself at least in theming to backup the Illusions in element
Makes sense. So a bit more different than I expected, with probably a bigger focus of metalkinesis than the loud electric attacks. An embodiment rather than wielding it traditionally.
>>96224299
>But what are some of your other moves? Do they have names?
Lotte's prepared spell list is rather small with straight forward utility, most of them named after some sort of reference. The problem is that I can't really think of some right now, but I'd like to do a spell list like the others eventually. A lot of her moves happen to be lightning enhanced attacks, like the aforementioned Electric God Fist being a combination of magical electricity and physical force to do some sort of hybrid damage. There is a pretty dumb idea of a special move only accessible in her second form called Suicide Word where she does a LTG and tells her opponents to kill themselves with thunder ringing in the background.
I'm actually more interested in how she'd fare against some of the moves answered here since she'd likely be the type to spar even if she loses as a form of learning experience, and she's going to lose a lot given that she's missing her other speciality school compared to the other cast. For example, >>96225197 Boomo's is also straightforward yet lacks the flexibility in strategy, especially in scenarios where you don't want to burn down a whole city block. Kore on the other hand >>96225367 is going to be a challenge just based on her fighting style alone. While Lotte has multiple means of flight, being able to cut off one of her means to approach puts Kore in an advantage, especially when combined with her minions and Ping. This also brings up how much synergy each move has with other people, but that's something for another time.

>>96226306
Im going to avoid having him hit on students for now so it will probably be the latter. I suppose it would also depend on how they looked at the time. I am finding a skit of Boomo running into him over and over and getting tricked by a different trap likeness each time.

>>96227723
Boomo is an absolute Jobber right now past his prime. If this continues for a while I do have some plans for character development. As of now he would lose against most experienced fighters in long fights.

>>96224299
Deborah is basically the epitome of zero finesse or subtlelty, all power. She primarily hyperfocuses on a combination of Sound and Curse to either buff up her own side, cripple the other, or a little bit of both. You can usually tell what she's trying to do as her magic is directly died to the pitch, tone and feel of what she's playing - more literally with her Sound as she switches between fast-paced, low-power notes or slow, brutal riffs, her song basically betrays exactly what her magic is going to do. After looking back on it I'll probably end up swapping her perks to Quick, Overcharge and Reserves to represent a sort of raw power style that, while very impressive, isn't very adaptable or precise and has plenty of weaknesses.

On that topic, she doesn't really have any mystical components to her spells like hand-signs or words, but at the same time is always using her instruments to fill in for that. The exception is in her Celerity and Physicality, where she's just faster, stronger and tougher than most Luminaries but there's little complexity to it (no 'forms,' or 'tiers,' or martial arts techniques, just trying harder).

>>96217201 (OP)
Female

Witch-like

Grimoir+charm
>Gives a lot of utility in the power of spells depending on how much of the grimoir is used for each; one page, three...
Specialized binding+curse
Mastery pact+psychic
Novice celerity
>Bound curses amplify the designation and power of curses by placing grimoir pages on people or objects. The nature of these curses can range widely, as physical manifestation via pact or psychic damage. Celerity for applying these charms
Twin implements, overcharged, quickened spells
>I'd imagine crafting a grimoir is time consuming, quickened spell to be a bit more efficient about it
Attack
>With the vague nature and highly customizable build, attack seemed like the most straightforward way to implement this ultimate <BUCK-BREAKER> a curse that utilizes the entire power of the grimoir in a singular attack
Patron hashmillim
>pacts with light spirits
Day job
> newage spirituality personality

When /cyoag/ sends its anons, they’re not sending their best. They’re not sending kino. They’re not sending based. They’re sending anons that have lots of problems, and they’re bringing those problems with us. They’re bringing AI sloppers. They’re bringing self-inserts. They’re rapists. And some, I assume, are good anons.

>>96228285

The idea of this build is utilizing the ambiguity of curses and amplifying its power, while also being highly specialized by crafting a grimoir for specific scenarios. With twin implements I can vary the power and number of spells written in the grimoir and amplified by charm, which is bound to the target. Psychic and pact mastery are the vectors for damage. Pact with light spirits let me squeeze by using a lot of dark spells.

>>96228306
Kek but also point to them

17 builds, not bad.

>>96228447
Tok and Hitler don't count bro

>>96228391
Every single self-insert build

>>96228391

See
>>96228285
>>96225840
>>96222896
>>96221611
>>96221605
>>96218632
The high effort ones aren't that bad, I don't hate the priests or the soldier girl.

>>96228535
>Wasnt pointed to
That means im kino right?

>>96228510
Hey mcyoag has those anyways

>>96228686
They're cringe too

>>96228680
nope

>>96228705
Wrong all of my builds are kino. I am what they call kinodefiner. I define kino

>flight got delayed 70 minutes
I got time to build.

>>96228816
Make an anime girl with really fat tits

>>96223031
Oh... Hello.
>>96224299
I bet you can guess my move themes. One of my favorites is [Impact], a shot that creates a contained zone of sonic energy. Within a limited area around the center of impact, is a shockwave strong enough to liquefy steel. Outside of that small radius, you hear nothing more than a very loud "pop".
>>96225840
Likewise, yours is pretty great.
>>96226306
>offer to upgrade your firearm
Well it's a magic gun, so I'm skeptical. How are the acoustics of a plasma cannon? How sturdy is a railgun? Do either of them fit a bayonet? It's a downgrade if I'm going to smack someone around with the weight of a gun that's made with plastic and electronics. Hard to beat rugged simplicity.
>>96228306
It's a dark place over there. I'd be here more if that wasn't putting the cart before the horse.

>>96228816
Make an anime "girl" with no tits

>>96229220
>>96228887
Flesh build it is.

>>96228816
Make an anime "boy" with tits

>>96228816
"Make" an "anime" "girl" "with" a "big" "rack".

>>96226952
Armband? Necklace? Glasses? Monocle? Earring? Cock ring? Scarf?

>>96230064
So steal a 3DPD femboy with small balloons attached to his chest, but upon further inspection it's an illusion?

>>96230327
"yes"

hunter x hunter mp when

no one tell him...

>>96231328
We had it

Anon told him. We suffered the curse.

Soulmates...

NTRing anon with his soulmate option...

>>96221695
i am sure he would get a bunny ears coif

>>96217201 (OP)
I've only got 5 seconds to speak!
Everyone who has a build is doomed by that furry little creature that is with Sera! MARK MY WORDS MINNASAN! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

TURN BACK BEFORE ITS TOO-NOOO!
*My memory gets erased as I am forced to dance against my will while nya ichi san nya arigato plays in the background*

>>96233063
I'm pretty sure that most builds ignored having an animal companion mascot so it doesn't really affect them.

>>96233063
What if his name was Freakbey and he wanted Magical Girls for their Magic Feet Pics?

>>96233160
Oh... he just like me...

Name: Meliara
Sex: Female
Outfit: Lightweight
Implement: Staff

>Schools of Magic
Flora Specialised
Celerity Specialised
Physicality Master
Spirit Novice
Illusion Novice

>Quirks
Large Reserves, Utility Spells, Danger Sense
Utility spells is important for I need them to keep my beauty even while in combat. Gaze upon my beauty! Danger sense is important so that I could protect my friends and myself.

>Ultimate Art
Second form
She becomes nature incarnate herself. With the ability to spawn entire jungles within seconds or spawn huge vines that entangle an enemy in an instant. Her toxins and pheromones are way stronger, affecting even powerful monsters.

>Patrons
Hashmilim, Gaia
>Day Job
Student
>Faction
Old Guard, The Circle
>Missions
MCYOAG

Meliara is the self proclaimed protector of mother nature. She is a really good botanist. She has superb control over the forces of nature and summoning huge trees to clobber her opponents. She can also use nature’s toxins and poison which can debilitate even the strongest foes. She can use pheromones to entrance her victims, make them fall in love with her and make them do anything she wishes, or she can paralyze her victims. She can breathe in carbon dioxide and can undergo photosynthesis in place of food.

Personality wise, she is kind of aloof, misanthropic, and reserved, preferring the company of plants in place of human contact. She is kind of crazy and is probably bipolar. She is still as capable of love and friendship in her own twisted ways.

“I am the herald of mother nature, and she tells me that it is your end!”

>>96217941
Please help me in spreading the word about taking care of mother nature as she blesses us with her bounties.

>>96218632
The industrial revolution and its consequences have been a disaster for the human race. Return to mother nature.

>>96222896
Soldiers should be the role model in taking care of mother nature. Come, let us spread the good word.

>>96223411
kawaii

>>96217201 (OP)
Name: Meliara
Sex: Female
Outfit: Lightweight
Implement: Staff

>Schools of Magic
Flora Specialised
Celerity Specialised
Physicality Master
Spirit Novice
Illusion Novice

>Quirks
Large Reserves, Utility Spells, Danger Sense
Utility spells is important for I need them to keep my beauty even while in combat. Gaze upon my beauty! Danger sense is important so that I could protect my friends and myself.

>Ultimate Art
Second form
She becomes nature incarnate herself. With the ability to spawn entire jungles within seconds or spawn huge vines that entangle an enemy in an instant. Her toxins and pheromones are way stronger, affecting even powerful monsters.

>Patrons
Hashmilim, Gaia
>Day Job
Student
>Faction
Old Guard, The Circle
>Missions
MCYOAG

Meliara is the self proclaimed protector of mother nature. She is a really good botanist. She has superb control over the forces of nature and summoning huge trees to clobber her opponents. She can also use nature’s toxins and poison which can debilitate even the strongest foes. She can use pheromones to entrance her victims, make them fall in love with her and make them do anything she wishes, or she can paralyze her victims. She can breathe in carbon dioxide and can undergo photosynthesis in place of food.

Personality wise, she is kind of aloof, misanthropic, and reserved, preferring the company of plants in place of human contact. She is kind of crazy and is probably bipolar. She is still as capable of love and friendship in her own twisted ways.

“I am the herald of mother nature, and she tells me that it is your end!”

>>96217941
Please help me in spreading the word about taking care of mother nature as she blesses us with her bounties.

>>96218632
The industrial revolution and its consequences have been a disaster for the human race. Return to mother nature.

>>96222896
Soldiers should be the role model in taking care of mother nature. Come, let us spread the good word.

>>96223411
kawaii

>>96217201 (OP)
A Newbie Luminary build since the high turnover rate is a fun idea.
Laurel Perkins
Alias: Twizzle

Outfit Cute
>Implement: Gauntlets/ Greaves
Schools of Magic: Frost Specialized, Aero Adept, Celerity Master
>Quirks: Utility Spells, Shrouded Magic, Quickened Spells

>Ultimate Art: Flash Freeze (Continuous)
An intricate dance which forms shards of ice out of thin air which can encase or cut foes. The sudden temperature drop is so severe it can shatter fully frozen objects like glass. It's more erratic if applied without care.

>Patron: Urist
Occupation: Student
>Faction: Luminous Knights
Missions: Corrupted Spill

Laurel Perkins is a novice who's only recently become a Luminary. She's keen about this new world she's been let into, and this excitement has easily bled into her newly minted public persona, making her more confident and outgoing - a complete 180 from her usual shy demeanor.

Raised by her grandfather for as long as she can remember, Laurel's spent her life around the docks helping where she could but never allowed onto any of the fishing vessels. Laurel blames the corporations for the backbreaking work the good people in her life have endured for little in return. Such that Luminous Knights rhetoric easily drew her in even if the harsh nature of the faction hasn't hit just yet.

One of Laurel's earliest memories was being taken to see figure skaters for her birthday, watching them glide across the ice felt like pure magic. A dream she unfortunately couldn't pursue given her circumstances. Which has clearly influenced her magic. She chose Urist as her patron because it made juggling her duties, studies, and helping Grandpa way easier. Right now, she's searching for someone experienced enough to show her the ropes.

the builds that killed the general...

>>96236283
It's because I'm not participating

>>96236283
It's because I'm participating

>>96236283
It's because MHA died

>>96236283
Saturday is busy for me, I'll be posting more tomorrow.

>>96236283
I can't make myself care about magical girls.
Well maybe I could, but not in this setting.

>>96234071
It's good to see another newbie build to put into the grinder. Since her outgoing persona comes from being a luminary, does that mean she goes back to being shy once she transforms back, or does that confidence bleed out to her regular life?

On a side note, gauntlets seem to be a popular implement, followed by blade or charms. Is it really that good compared to other implements, or is it due to physicality synergy?

>>96237400
Charms are objectively the best magical tool, Gauntlets/boots are objectively the best physicality tool, while blade is the classic dexfag build (Celerity/Physicality/Talented)


We do have two staffs, but zero wands. And charms are at three for obvious reasons.

>>96237535
I guess it makes sense. The other implements aren't necessarily bad, but niche. Like blunt is only really useful against barriers, but loses out of spell-infused attacks. Both charms and gauntlets' niches are pretty wide, or lean into their specific playstyle, while blade is a good generalist while slotting into a common weapon theme. Charms can be nerfed by their limited range, but no one really thinks about how far they can throw their implements when it comes to actual writing. I do like how some use implements based on thematic or aesthetic reasons, such as using gauntlets as a stand in for cat claws, or the two blade + shield combos.

>>96237692
I can't fault anons for focusing on mechanics but it's always cooler when builds take options for themes/aesthetics, yeah. That being said, I think pretty much all of the implements are really good if given a fair shot and could easily see them having strengths and weaknesses when writing.

>>96217201 (OP)
Had an epiphany; I was simply looking in the wrong area for Deborah's art when Brutal Legend already has exactly what I needed.

Have made some changes, will wait until next thread to post again to give me some time to tinker, but most of the info is in here;

https://rentry.org/LuminaryVirtuoso

Apologies for not being super interactive, haven't had a lot of free time today or yesterday. Will catch up, make a relationship chart and get some things going in the next few days, there's a lot of cool builds I'd like to interact with.

Janeanon, did you have any ideas of how they work together/have been pulled apart that you wanted me to put in here before I finalize next thread?

>>96237716
Another thing to note is that builds have to be independent for both in-universe and meta reasons. Grouping up isn't very encouraged due to losing out on XP, and we can't really be sure if someone will still be active after a while. This means that more supportive or vulnerable implements like instruments become less popular to use mechanically. I do somewhat regret going with gauntlets with mine because tools sound really fun to write for with the right school combo.
>>96237783
>Apologies for not being super interactive
It's fine. The weekend tends to be the slowest due to RL obligations, or using this free time to make effortfags. What have you got in mind other than the relationship chart?

>>96237839
>What have you got in mind other than the relationship chart?

At the moment I'm not particularly sure, but I would like to lay some groundwork on what Jane and Deborah do to help out the new Luminaries and what happened to them when they were fresh. I'd like to imagine her as one of the more powerful veterans but on her way downwards rather than upwards due to her issues as well - she was originally slated to be a bossfight for some of the younger Luminaries to slap sense into, and that might still happen, but there's more I can do with her now that I think about it.

>>96237873
>I would like to lay some groundwork on what Jane and Deborah do to help out the new Luminaries and what happened to them when they were fresh
Not Jane anon, but what did you have in mind for their relationship? Are they supposed to have a strained relationship in the present, when they used to be so close in the past?
>she was originally slated to be a bossfight for some of the younger Luminaries to slap sense into, and that might still happen, but there's more I can do with her now that I think about it.
I wonder what kind of set up you had in mind for this? I think most of our newbies are unlikely to start fighting veterans in an all-out battle at the moment, so what other kinds of interactions have you found now, not necessarily with the newbie luminaries?

>>96237783
>Janeanon, did you have any ideas of how they work together/have been pulled apart that you wanted me to put in here before I finalize next thread?
I can imagine 3 possibilities right now


1. Jane was originally part of Calamity but grew more and more disillusioned with their methods, thinking they were just perpetuating the same war between Light and Dark when what she truly wanted was to permanently destroy the evil that took their friend away. She left to the corporate machine, but still tries to keep contact with Deborah to warn her of any dangerous agents near her upcoming concerts
2. Jane works as Deborah's booking agent while juggling her dozen other jobs. The talent agency she works for today was her first target when she joined the corporate luminaries, so it's one of the few clean companies in the city
3. The same end result as 1 but there was no rockstar Jane period. They had their disagreements right after losing their squad mate, and broke off to deal with their grief in their own ways. Jane will still try to contact her in present day, but more awkwardly and professionally

>>96237945
>Are they supposed to have a strained relationship in the present, when they used to be so close in the past?

Very much this, yes, probably due to Deborah being fundamentally opposed to the kind of methods you'd need to infiltrate the corporations. I imagine they're still close enough to agree on and work together on many things but often argue.

>I wonder what kind of set up you had in mind for this?

Originally she was the secret Luminary behind a string of serial murders of corporates. This was when she was in a much different position narratively, but the idea that she's becoming problematic for the Luminaries has stayed.

>so what other kinds of interactions have you found now, not necessarily with the newbie luminaries?

While plot can arrive organically, there's a lot of conversations/debates to be had with other Old Guard, primarily her as an inciting, argumentative figure, and potentially some well-meaning but poorly executed mentorship with the new generation.

There's room for slice of life as well, if anyone decides to spend any time with what essentially amounts to a travelling rockstar and her ever-changing band, or any of the media builds interviewing her.

>>96237979
I can see any of these working, though No. 2 might be a little too close since it seems like them being pulled apart (except for when it counts, working together when things get serious and agreeing about uplifting and protecting the next generation) is winning out as the vibe.

That being said, I'll be heading to bed now. I'll be on tomorrow to discuss this more while I finish up the build proper.

>>96238014
Have a good night, anon

>>96237400
It's more interesting if she's only more confident as a Luminary. She's self-conscious at potentially being known as the weird fishmonger girl among her peers.

>>96239295
Yeah, I prefer her not having as much confidence outside of being a luminary as it sets up a clear character arc of her faking it until it becomes real.
I didn't realize she was a fishmonger from her backstory, but it becomes more obvious looking at the faceclaim. Seeing as she's a student, does that mean she only sells her grandpa's fish part time, or does she miss out on class a lot?

>>96239394
Her grandpa would want her to focus on studying for a better life. She'd be a part-timer but isn't above skipping if the seasons get particularly bad.

>>96239518
>She'd be a part-timer but isn't above skipping it the seasons get particularly bad.
Bad in the sense that they're not making much money, or bad in the sense that the weather itself is bad so might as well be productive?
You did add something in the build post regarding a mentor figure for her, did you have anyone in mind already?

>>96239566
Weather-wise, it's a slight headcanon, but I imagine that due to the dark magic in and surrounding the City, the coastline and ocean near it have become unaturally harsh, like the Alaskan Gulf. As for a mentor, the offer's open to any of the veteran luminaries.
>>96224299
Twizzle likes to make waves of frost using her hands and ice skates. And conjures her own ice tracks to race along.

I liked the Ultimate Question builds better.

>>96239654
>As for a mentor, the offer's open to any veteran luminaries
I'm sure most would be willing if you go and ask them, so it's down to what would work thematically.
The choices seem to be:
>Brianne
>Boomo
>Gerard
>Jane
>Akira
>Catherine
>Gloria
>Deborah
>Louis
>Kyrie
Probably also Lotte, but she's taking Brianne as a mentor and it would form a weird mentorship chain. I think Deborah would make sense as Laurel's mentor due to her belief in freedom and self expression that seems to be a part of Laurel's story. Plus, there's a big difference in how they utilize their magic, which could have her try to replicate Deborah early on, but grow into her elegant and skater-like style eventually as she becomes more independent. If we're going with having the same schools, Gerard has Aero, while just about everyone has some level of celerity.

>>96239805
Deborah would probably take a little bit of convincing to become someone's mentor, either by themselves or circumstances. She tries to be supportive to the new Luminaries but isn't so far gone that she doesn't realize she's probably one of the most dangerous people to hang around.

That being said, if circumstances had Laurel or someone else under her guidance, she'd try her best but be a very emotionally difficult mentor to stick with - she's far from the ideal teacher and extremely busy, so it'd be less a nurturing environment and more of a sink-or-swim ride on the highway to hell.

>>96239805
Might want to narrow it down to old guards or people who say they are mentors rather than just everyone

>>96240718
nah hitler would make a great mentor

>>96239805
Jane would be willing to mentor younger Luminaries but I'm not sure if Twizzle would want to work under her guidance considering her disgust of corporations
It all depends on her willingness to play the long con
>>96240668
Anon, have you given any more thought to the dynamic between our builds?

>>96217201 (OP)
>Name: Leonardo "Leo" Angelo
>Outfit: Suit
>Implement: Sword
>Specialty: Flame, Physicality
>Schools:
Binding Master
Aero Adept
>Quirks: Magial Bloodhound, Expanded Reserves, Quickened Spells
>Ultimate Art: Continuous
>Patron: Steve
>Dayjob: Student
>Contacts: Sylka, Klaus, Junko

Leo is just a student, trying to pass his finals and land a decent job, not a great one, just one that lets him avoid starving to death and pay his bills, and rent an apartment. He has no problems living with his parents, but he wants more space. He has since lost hope of landing a "good job", the requirements and networking necessary being outside of his reach, for now. He likes watching anime, but more because he likes to identify tropes, story beats, and catalogue in his own head the genres and tropes a certain anime and its characters have, although he is not willing to disclose how he classifies things, or what they are classified as.

He had no interest in magical stuff, thinking about those topics as hoaxes and scams to fool the same people who believed in horoscopes and stars. Well, he was wrong. Now he is knee-deep in magical shenanigans and fights.

Truth be told, Leo is a ball of seethe and omnidirectional rage. While he keeps a calm and meek persona, he is just one hair trigger away from exploding and devolving into violence, which he channels to his shenanigans as a magical girl ("Yes, magical girl. Magical boys ARE NOT an actual genre" - Leo). In a serious battle, he does not engage in dialogue or attempt to reason; instead, he resorts to violence against enemies and threats, seeking to end the conflict as soon as possible with the enemies' demise. There is no dialoguing with him, no diplomacy or reason. If you are trying to harm the innocent or just cause mayhem, you need to be put down.

His continuous arts make his flame magic nearly instantaneous, and lowers its cost to near 0, allowing him to use it at will with near to no fear of running out

>>96241975
>Anon, have you given any more thought to the dynamic between our builds?

Sure, looking at what we discussed previously, here's the take I can see. I think we can make the loss of their team-member the incident that's pulled them apart. Beforehand I'd presumed Deborah and Jane were much less doomer and much more bright, hopeful and generally Luminary-like. I imagine once they lost their third it broke them for a while and they'd begun to grow more distant - Jane began to infiltrate the corporations and Deborah slowly transformed Calamity into a more dangerous, violent movement.

I'm not sure if they talk to each other much or keep it strictly business outside of business, but I could see them trusting each other more than most when it counts, though this probably only further exaggerates the frustration at least Deborah has towards Jane.

Did they have anyone else amongst the cast, patrons or the like that they were also connected to? I imagine they weren't exactly unpopular in their prime given what we've discussed so far.

>>96242552
>I think we can make the loss of their team-member the incident that's pulled them apart.
Alright
>I'm not sure if they talk to each other much or keep it strictly business outside of business
During their first years apart Jane buried herself under work to distract herself and would only try to meet once a in a blue moon because she was sore over their disbandment
Nowadays she's more willing to reach out, but rarely has the opportunity because of the hellish schedule she gave herself
Like most of her emotions, much of her frustrations with Deborah died out over the years, and she can recognize what she does is important for morale. She just wishes her old partner could see it from her perspective too
>Did they have anyone else amongst the cast, patrons or the like that they were also connected to?
Probably the rest of the old guard (Brianne, Gerard, Catherine, etc)
I imagine Jane also has a tentative friendship with Akira but that would be more recent

>>96242779
Absolutely works for me. What do we think generally brings them together now and again? I presume pretty much any worst-case scenario and potentially some higher-end monsters, but do they at least check up on each other once in a while? Deborah probably doesn't like to admit it but she likely gets tense when she hasn't heard for months.

>anons getting into autistic side discussions about their builds
We're SO back

>>96242899
>What do we think generally brings them together now and again? I presume pretty much any worst-case scenario and potentially some higher-end monsters
High level threats, yes, and maybe a touch of luck, such as Jane coming across the tail-end of riot during her commute and sticking around until it ends so she can exchange a few words with the perpetrator. A rare occasion in which she cancels her plans instead of trying to barrel through and get to her shift anyway.
>but do they at least check up on each other once in a while?
Yes, after a particularly "noisy" concert Jane will call to make sure Deborah's still alive and kicking
>Deborah probably doesn't like to admit it but she likely gets tense when she hasn't heard for months.
Meanwhile Jane is tense almost all the time, since she's always hearing about what Deborah is up to, but the news are never soothing

>>96242919
I'm glad anons are having fun. Shame I don't like the builds.

>>96243712
What's your problem with them?
I'm not in this run either, but they seem fine to me.

>>96243855
I like 'em as young as possible in my magic girl mps

>>96243712
Seems fairly easy to pick the mp you do like and ask specific questions about a character and their story.

>>96243855
They're cringe and uninspiring. I don't feel any need to write with them.

>>96243876
Magical Fetus Mecha MP...

>>96217201 (OP)
Due to how central some chaos schools are to the move set of certain builds, are we still keeping the the taboo aspect of using these magics publicly/in front of other luminaries? I'm sure some of the old guard wouldn't mind if you used it front of them regardless.

>>96243982
Plus the idea that it's taboo falls apart when literally all of us have chaos magic. It's just normal at this point.

>>96243941
Man, you're in the wrong general. All builds are cringe by nature of them being OC donut steel.

>>96243982
The CYOA seems to be built for single-player and for the PC to have the super power of having access to Chaos magic. In our take on the setting, it seems like Chaos magic has seeped into the Luminaries as a whole. It's honestly something we can use for the narrative; the purity of old has been spoiled and now we're fighting with everything we can.

>>96243989
I guess the question now is how is it handled. Does chaos magic become a regular branch of normal magic, or are the current magical girls and boys having their limiters unlocked left and right.

>>96244023
Could have been that something fundamental has happened that's broken the limiters, but in turn opened up the Luminaries to darker forces. It wouldn't be entirely out there for someone, somewhere to have messed up magic on a grand scale, or some ancient thing waking up has been corrupting the system the Luminaries rely on just a little.

>>96243982
RAW there's no taboo, you can spam the chaos schools as much as you want since even the Pures can't tell their Dark. You're fucked if they somehow figure it out, but you probably aren't at that much risk if even they can't tell what's wrong.

>>96243997
But I like the builds for some other MPs. I just can't feel for any of these characters and have no ideas for their story arcs or how to use them in my own.

>>96243982
I don't think in-universe it's actually known that some magics are bad, although it does say something about how you SHOULDN'T use the magic too openly? It's confusing. Anyway, it's probably just bad worldbuilding and forced drama nothing we need to worry about. The only issue if if the Puresluts go scorched earth so we could have an arc about killing them or whatever.

>>96244108
Now we need a tier list so we know how many Puresluts each build could defile.

>>96244082
They can tell by the spell effects though, no? Just not that you have them by looking at you.

>>96244108
It's probably just so you can use them at all without getting spawn camped by the Pures.

>>96244108
Would it not have to be known? The difference between Light and Dark spirits is irreconcilable, and the corporations use Dark magic all of the time.

The real question is if the corpos, sorcerers and dark entities have figured out Order/Light Magic.

>>96244126
Magic as done by magical girls seems to differ a lot from magic as done by everyone else so any weirdness probably gets covered up by that. You're the first person ever to have those schools through the magical girl system so there's some weirdness but it doesn't automatically out you. The cyoa outright states that even the Myrmidions will just assume any dark magic you do is just weird instead of Dark.

>>96244157
The patrons can probably tell, but I guess they won't out you for whatever reason, probably this >>96244129

>>96244083
This always feels like an excuse whenever it's brought up. You can only guarantee builds that you like by playing solo since they'll always fit your taste. Even if this is the autism site, just some basic social skills is enough to engage with something you didn't like at the start. Of course you're free to not participate in this one and go with something you do genuinely care about, but waiting for things to change instead of doing something yourself is going to keep this place at the slow place no one wants.

>>96244126
They just assume it's some weird light magic apparently. Funnily enough it either implies either
>the Pure are so naive they don't know that the classified dark magics are dark because you're using it
or
>the classifications aren't actually known to anyone and are an unknown facet of reality

>>96244176
>You can only guarantee builds that you like by playing solo since they'll always fit your taste.
But I do get other MPs with characters I like.
>but waiting for things to change instead of doing something yourself
I'll just work on one of my other projects.

>>96244192
>>the classifications aren't actually known to anyone and are an unknown facet of reality
Maybe I'm dumb but it's hard to parse what's actually known information or the cyoa explaining things so you can play it and have a reference to what kind of powers others have.

>>96244176
your build is cheeks bro just accept it

>>96244236
Don't be so mean to Louis anon.

>>96244121
Isn't there only one build that doesn't actively use dark magic? Most treat it like it's nothing even if they're newbies.

>>96244192
This does assume that we use the cyoa literally, which was written with the explicit power fantasy of the PC being the most powerful Luminary ever by default due to using dark magic. More reasonably in MP we can just presume people know and Dark Magic is taboo amongst puritan circles and generally considered a little bit schizo.

>>96244278
Everyone has one chaos specialization at least I think.

>>96244286
>More reasonably in MP we can just presume people know and Dark Magic is taboo amongst puritan circles and generally considered a little bit schizo.
You'll have to nerf/erase the Myrmidions then, or except that every single build instantly got skullfucked by the GOAT Apollyon the moment they used their Dark magic

>>96244286
>More reasonably in MP we can just presume people know and Dark Magic is taboo amongst puritan circles and generally considered a little bit schizo.
I makes sense for veterans who want to squeeze as much power as they can, but imagine a newly joined luminary and being ostracized by some groups because your personality gave you a dark magic school by chance. It's a fun bit of angst if someone wants to pursue that.

>>96244313
It is free, so it's hard not to take it, but Twizzle doesn't have a dark special, and Lotte has psychic but it's dormant / locked.

>>96244332
>except
autocorrupt turned my accept into except

>>96244358
Twizzler is technically illegal. It doesn't say "you can select". It just says select.

>>96244278
We have someone who uses tons of Dark Magic and is crazy too, so it evens out

>>96244313
It is a bit sad that there's no way to make a pure order/chaos build. I expected in a magical girl CYOA that you can go full justice autist and not have to take dark powers.

>>96244422
Good point, who has the most Dark Magic? If we presume Specialties as 4 ranks, we could calculate who's the biggest schizo. On phone at the moment or If check myself. Maybe another +1/+2 per Pact with the Dark?

>>96244476
Luminary on slopwatch AGAIN!

>>96240668
It really does depend on Twizzle anon, but her being a reluctant mentor is also a way for Deborah to grow. She might not want to mentor Twizzle due to the risk of her getting killed like her old friend, but over time it could lead her to soften up and be more hopeful again.
>>96241975
I've been meaning to ask you what Jane thinks about Lotte. Since they have opposite personalities and Jane has nothing going for her outside of work and luminary, while Lotte has a ton of hobbies to share, would it be possible for them to hang out, maybe through Brianne? Lotte isn't exactly old guard, but she is older than the student luminaries.

>>96244476
>I expected in a magical girl CYOA that you can go full justice autist and not have to take dark powers.
Just become a Pure

>>96244476
You can bend the rules and not take the other speciality like >>96244358 said if you're okay with being a bit nerfed. Having luminaries that have conflicts with each other but not outright enemies is good.

Rolled 23, 88, 22, 84, 33, 27, 86, 91 = 454 (8d100)

>>96244488
>11: Akira, Deborah, Unnamed
>10: Techpriest
>9: Brianne, Boomo, Terri, Kuro, Kyrie, Laurel
>6: Gerard, Penelope, Jane, Hitler, Leonardo
>5: Meliara
>4: Lotte, Tok, Gloria, Louis

Clearly, this is not a good way to measure build sanity.

>>96244522
>I've been meaning to ask you what Jane thinks about Lotte
She appreciates Lotte and her optimism, or even for her optimism. Unlike Deborah, who has seen the same sights as her, Jane wouldn't expect a recent graduate to see things from her perspective just yet. Still, the best she can do is ready her for the inevitable while not spoiling her best years. If she comes off as a jaded old lady, so be it.
If she discovers Lotte's internal conflict, she would be disappointed, but not surprised. Probably try to strike a bargain with her patron to leave the girl alone.
>Since they have opposite personalities and Jane has nothing going for her outside of work and luminary, while Lotte has a ton of hobbies to share, would it be possible for them to hang out, maybe through Brianne?
It would. Jane has a self-imposed vow through her Outfit that she can't work during sundays, restricting her magic power for 1 day to increase it during the other 6. In that "rest day" she usually passes out and catches up on days of accumulated sleep, but sometimes she wakes up early from her nap and gets to socialize with her few acquaintances, usually Akira, or like you proposed, Brianne.

As for hobbies Jane might enjoy, probably something cheap and as distanced from her usual office apparel (no computers or paper or sitting in a chair hunched over on a desk) as possible. Yoga, hiking (are there even many spots in the city for that?), gardening, etc.

>>96244657
Maybe we're the insane ones.

>>96244562
I don't mind nerfing myself a bit. I'm already planning on doing that just not with magic though. I'm mostly complaining because I want to spec into two order magics, not because I actually want to make a justicefag.

>>96244657
Ignoring the shitpost and outliers so purposefully misinterpreting the data it does show a trend fo being more chaotic or nontraditional. Lotte and Gloria are goody two shoes while the rest become less and less heroic as the tiers go on.

>>96244710
Louis is technically very moral and not schizophrenic. He's just depressed.

>>96244688
>I'm mostly complaining because I want to spec into two order magics
Try to post it and see how the thread reacts. I don't think order or chaos are clear cut better than one another, maybe chaos has a slight edge, so it doesn't sound like a huge power difference and they cost the same anyway. I might've done the same if I hadn't already posted my build.

>>96244737
Sorry anon, magical girls aren't supposed to be depressed. He's going down the corruption route now.

>>96227723
This is INSANELY cute btw, work ate me up but I just wanna say I do think the rabbit cop and cat burglar should be squaring up against each other. I'm off for a bit so I intend to draw them since I think it fits well.

Terri's ultimate being a Copycat (heh) form, I think it'd be cute for her to steal Lotte's identity when she's doing genuinely altruistic stuff so nobody thinks Terri herself is being so caring. It makes sense the lightning bunny cop does the good thing and not the cat thief.

>>96244780
magical girls and corruption, name a more perfect duo

>>96244766
>I don't think order or chaos are clear cut better than one another
It's more having both that's the big thing but that'll probably get handwaved

>>96244883
Magical girls and super sentai for adorable couples.

>>96244883
magical girls and my cock

>>96244932
That's still corruption

>>96244941
Loving them, impregnating them, and caring for them is NOT corruption
I would be the greatest husband ever
I'd even make sure her animal companion wouldn't feel left out of the loving family I start (and getting plowed)

>>96244950
>snuck in zoophilia
Yep, definitely corruption, have fun making your MG wife fall to depravity

>>96244984
but is it that bad if they can consent and are of age?

>>96245005
No, but the fact you brought it up as an option still says a lot about you

>>96245061
Harems are sanctioned by Allah.

>>96245073
hogessad, destroy him

>>96244677
>Spoiler
I didn't take that into account. I guess eventually everyone will see her unsealed like the rest of the cast. Even the pure aren't immune to corruption, assuming we go with chaos magic being used but taboo according to certain groups as discussed above. it's good to see Jane being a bit receptive to help from her juniors, even if it happens once a week. She might pop up more often just to make sure she isn't 90% coffee by volume.
>hiking (are there even many spots in the city for that?)
I imagine that the city is so big, it's hard to find any piece of nature outside a designated park. And going so far into the outskirts would only leave a flat, barren lands for future city expansions.
>>96244876
>This is INSANELY cute btw
Thanks. I was worried about it not coming out so good because I wanted to output something quick and easy.
>I do think the rabbit cop and cat burglar should be squaring up against each other
It would make sense thematically, but being both a senior and a responsible cop might get in the way when Terri is still a student in the end. Maybe Lotte never really finds out about Terri's regular self so they can keep duking it out as luminaries.
>Spoiler
Makes sense. Maybe all that copying will rub some of that good on her in the end.
>I'm off for a bit so I intend to draw them since I think it fits well.
Good luck. I might try an intro first before drawing something new.

>>96244657
We have 2 other people besides Akira that took overcharged and only cursed stuff?

>>96245272
Deborah has physicality so she can't be full evil

>>96245286
>>96244657
Shoulda pinged you woops.

Iunno which one unnamed is
Deborah is 1/1 Specialtys, Master Evil, Adept Evil, and Adept Good

Akira is 1/1 Specialtys, Master Evil, Master Evil, Novice Evil

>>96228285
This one maybe is the unnamed CYOAG build, Who obviously probably shouldtn be counted but is also 1/1 Master Master Novice

These are our grand wizards (Overcharged builds)

>>96245315
>>96245286
>Dark is Evil
>Light is Good
Reminder that the Light wanted to wipe out all life on earth and only refrained because it would wake up their prisoners

>>96217201 (OP)
Small change to max the dark magic.
4 Good (Mandatory)
12 Evil
>>96245346
Correct. Read my manifesto for more.

Name: Akira Hiro
Alias: Black Hare
Gender: Female
Outfit: Witchlike
Implement: Staff
Magic: Spirit Specialist, Illusion Specialist, Celerity Master, Curse Master, Space Adept
Quirks: Overcharged, Quickened Spells, Danger Sense
Ultimate Art: (Utility) True Illusion - Embeds an illusion so deeply into the victims soul that it becomes reality for them. Requires physical contact with the target and acts as a curse in all other ways. The illusion is only percieved by the victim and it can cause real harm or block movement or whatever it would do normally in real life. Can be turned on the caster to create some surprising effects.
Patrons: She who Dreams, Yharum, Bone Mother
Day Job: Media (Reporter)
Contacts: Luminous Knights, Independent

Luminaries are immune to the depravation of the Dark. This is a fact that they all accept as truth - Except sometimes a soul blackens itself without outside influence. Cue the Black Hare, a eccentric practitioner of all sorts of dark arts best left untouched. She seems to enjoy messing with people more than anything, and while sometimes helpful she's always unpredictable.

She publishes a newspaper by and for Luminarys called 'Wonderland' that uncannily reports on all sorts of things that should really be secret. Causing problems for both corporations and fellow luminarys alike when a issue falls into the wrong hands. She has made numerous crazy escapes - at times seeming to walk on air itself as if it were a solid object or cut through bindings with a nonexistant blade.

Wonderlands tagline is "Were all a little mad here" and it tends to add a bleak spin to things.

>>96245362
Someone is aiming to take double order specialization so it might be possible to take only chaos spells.

>>96245418
Not allowed RAW, but if they change I might do that yes.

Sorry ive been out. Ill try posting more after monday. I guess since this is still going ill actually writefag for it

>>96245513
I don't know who you are and there's nothing to forgive.

Do i need to rebalance for this whole dark magic thing?

>>96245579
What do you mean by
>rebalance for thus whole dark magic thing?

>>96245579
No.

>>96245590
>>96245599
Thanks in feeling kinda retarded rn

>>96245579
We are literally immune to falling to the Dark so no it doesn't matter, even Akira is technically her own brand of sane.

>>96245603
What happens if my write my build commiting atrocities?

>>96245606
Your build was possesed by an evil force of darkness that has all of their memories and personality and can use their powers as it sees fit but it's really an evil force of darkness that just thinks it's an edgy or evil magical girl.

>>96245606
Then you'll commit those atrocities of your own free will like Akira

>>96245606
It didn't happen and if it did they deserved it.

>tfw no evil groomer discord of darkness arc
The world isn't ready for my genius.

>>96218632

>>96243982
>>96243982
>>96244313
>>96244562
>>96244657
>>96244710
>>96245362
>>96245346
...Scale of 1 - 10, how bad of an idea of an idea would it be to try to make my own "humanist"/Gaia faction that tries to keep the war between the light & dark going indefinitely in order to ensure humanity can keep exploiting both groups of spirits for power?

Because I'm looking at some of the options again and I think it might be possible to switch my tinker into being able to play with both sides.

>>96245650
Make a magical girl/boy and then Writefag her being skinned and having her powers stolen by your awesome NPC who leads that faction
Modern problems require modern solutions

>anons talking about magical girl suffering
My favorite magical girl subgenre! I LOVE EDGEKINO!

>>96245650
>how bad of an idea of an idea
It's a decent enough idea for a villain group, although joining it is most certainly going to earn you a "kill on sight" as prize, being unable to keep Light patrons is a given, and it's a matter of time until the Pure death squads get sent to your location kek.

>>96245692
Not to mention that while we don't know how organized the forces of the dark are, I don't think they'll take kindly to it either lmao

>>96224299
>Meliara
Meliara's moveset are based on mother nature. In combat she relies on her speed to outmanuever foes and uses her control over nature to attack, control, paralyze, or intoxicate her victims.
Nature's grip: she can sprout toxins that paralyzes her foes.
Succubus' kiss: she can use her pheromones to make her victim fall in love with her and do whatever she wants. Strong willed enemies can resist it.
Gaia's grasp: she sprouts thorny vines from the ground to whip her enemies or entangle them.

>>96245746
Yo bro I was gonna post about how much I want to fuck her but I notice that I do that for too many of your builds so I won't, just to not make it weird

>>96245790
NTA but uhh thanks for showing some restraint
I guess

>>96245650
More replies to previous posts. Also I know character in the image is a girl, but it has exactly the kind of energy I was looking for.

>>96226377
Sounds like plan. Having an ally with your skills and personality sounds invaluable.

>>96227846
Right now I'm thinking of changing the build from Student, so things might be a bit different if this continues next thread.

>>96228893
>How are the acoustics of a plasma cannon? How sturdy is a railgun? Do either of them fit a bayonet?
I'm sure we could figure something out with enough tinkering, but if you insist on staying with a simple firearm, what about some biomechanical ammunition instead?
https://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Borer_Beetle

>>96233460
>The industrial revolution and its consequences have been a disaster for the human race. Return to mother nature.
My friend, It is not industry or technology itself that has led humanity to disaster, but instead it is the ones who use those gifts to ruin the earth and exploit their fellow man. Why don't we work together to stop them, then use our innovations to help heal the world?

>>96245660
Why would anyone need to be skinned? I was mainly thinking of just use the Pact magic to find some wildcard Spirits, or convince/manipulate existing Light/Dark ones into joining me. Seems like it should be able to work since Gaia was able to develop empathy for humanity, and Ste've's description says she only cares about perpetuating conflict regardless of which side you're on.

Then once that's done my new Spirt allies and I could tech other Luminaries how to harness both Light & Dark magic like our characters do, then we just direct our efforts into ensuring the conflict goes on either perpetually or until humanity is powerful to dominate both the Light & Dark.

>>96245692
Stupid as it is, I think I may have talked myself into trying it. Anyone wanna join the "Twilight" faction?

>>96245807
>Why would anyone need to be skinned?
Because it's cringe and a magical girl will be evil doing that
>But it's grey-
No it ain't

>>96245650
We already got atleast one villian build, they used a different cyoa to make it though.
Probably the way to go.

>>96245872
This one?

>>96226517
>https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zj53odyj

>>96245957
Yeah.
Its about the same scale really, where strength and speed correlate to physicality and speed

You could find any other cyoa to use though if you wanted something less classical.

>>96244358
>>96244421
You're right I thought I could just spend the AP to keep the character low power. Would it be okay to leave it as is? I'll change it as soon as possible otherwise.
>>96244522
I think the pairing works and the contrast is there. If writing it isn't fun there's already a in universe to why it didn't pan out. Just started working on a relationship chart.

>>96245790
Have you heard of the saying
"Go forth and seek, further up, thy you will find glory"
Victory belongs to the bold anon.

Thank you for appreciating my waifus, anon.

>>96245974
No one really complains about missing out on a choice to make a character weaker if that was the intent. The same thing has happened before and the thread was cool with it as long as the character was cool. You could do what Lotteanon did and pick one but claim it's locked, or it could be a school she'll get in the future and has no access to it right now.

>>96217201 (OP)
This was just the first interesting interaction that came to mind, so I made a writefag about it.

If I got Louis OOC, or anyone has any criticisms in general, please let me know.

A Fundamental Difference
(Gerard Gunman, Louis Finnegan)

>>96246111
I forgot the rentry woops

https://rentry.org/q3hazex8

>>96246111
anon…

>>96246111
The rentry link goes in the square hole

Been very busy and haven't been able to check on the thread much, but glad to see the MP has so many builds. I won't have much freetime till next week, but I'll try to get a writefag out and remove my fraud status asap.

>>96233460
>>96245746
Would you be cool with Meliara being a mentor to Kore? Of the Old Guard builds she's got the most overlap in terms of schools, and I can see some fun interactions (Kore being openly friendly with the enemies until Meliara starts shit talking them so Kore throws some kindergarden-level insults at them, accidentally infesting her forest with monsters, visiting her during her lectures/classes and getting mistaken as her little sister, etc).

If she's not the type to have a mentee it's all good though - just wanted to test the waters and look for some interactions.

>>96246111
Nice piece Gerard-anon. I like how, despite both characters being superficially similar (in appearance and 'vibes'), their personal beliefs on Luminaries and Light/Dark as a whole are oppositional and clearly defined. Gives a good contrast, and the insight into Gerard's drive/motivation is useful, considering he's one of the oldest builds in a setting with such high turnover.

There's some odd grammar here and there, but nothing egregious that takes away from the flow of the writing. Nice work!

>>96246548
Meliara here
But of course, i am fine with being Kore's mentor and their dynamics sound fun and engaging. I will try my best to not be declared a fraud too.
"Who set all these humanoid err monkeys? Monkey humanoid thingies in my forest and destroyed my rose garden?"
(Kore hides in a tree with her head held down in shame)
The trees tell me that you are hiding there, Kore. I can see you. I am not mad, so come out now.

>>96245807
How dull and simple minded of me. Forgive me sister for... i mean brother. I Meliara have been enlightened for my aggressions. I see we have a common goal. We must team up together to defeat the evil corporations that are destroying our beloved mother nature. We the heralds of mother nature shall see to that mother nature be saved.

Captcha: kRJJK
even the captcha wants a true jjk cyoa

>>96246684
Oops i made a typo, i meant
>I Meliara am sorry for my transgressions and you have enlightened me.

>>96245807
Ill probably wait until next thread to start writing anyways. Wont have time until at least Wednesday

Page 10, any threadslaves awake?

>>96252086
I can post, but somehow the captcha isn't working when I try to start the thread. The threadslave notes are already updated with luminary. If we really need it, I'll try to phonepost it in 30 mins or so.

>>96252314
The thing I tried also went into a captcha loop. If someone can start the thread, I think I can finish it up.

>>96252314
>>96252496
i have posted the 1st page of mha, you guys do the rest

(Gloria)
>>96233460
There's not a lot of nature left in this city, but I wouldn't mind knocking down a corporate office somewhere for a new park or something.
>>96244657
>>96244710
I use my free specialization, but otherwise I'm distrustful of dark magic, and anyone using too much of it.
>>96245650
I like it a lot, but we're going to be mortal enemies.
>>96245807
>biomechanical ammunition
I don't think that would work, but I'll try it... once.
Also, if it bites me, I'm done.

>>96252589
>>96252589
>>96252589
Hogs and pogs, roll out.