Thread 96920549

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First person to post a Danmachi build gets to experience love at first sight

>>96920569
That doesn’t assure mutual compatibility tho does it?

>>96920569
I choose Caster

First person to kill danmarat gets to molest Rudeus.

>>96920589
I'm not smart enough to understand how to calculate Psionics, Delta and Magnitudes.

>>96920612
1) Sounds gay.
2) I don't care about Rudeus.
3) I don't care about MT.
Make a better deal.

>>96920617
i've been making builds for this lately and with the help of the author notes have decided that the strongest power sources are prismatic corruption and unbeing, but you don't need all perks for either of them so you also have room to squeeze about two other ones in

>>96920622
I'm smart enough to not bother.

>>96920549 (OP)
I stared at this image for a bit, in confusion, and wondered: WHERE ARE THE IMAGES?
And then I understood: that's it, Savestate-dono wants me to fill the image with starving girls from the boorus. I will do just that.
And no, I did not read the cyoa. At my level, where you understand the author's intention deeply enough, you don't need to.

>>96920617
>Focus
Comfort (Upgrade)
>Landing's Power
Divine Transcendence (Upgrade)
>Power Source
False Wizardry & Divine Transcendence : All
Prismatic Corruption : Gemergence, Every Limb in Motion
Unbeing : Nothing Immovable, Eternal Grasp
The World : Peace Offering
>Special
Unraveled Mind, Infinite Sun
>Manifestation Points : 100%
Lust, Victory, Monsters, Infection, Antagonist
>Mechanical Purpose
Home Free, Networking & Wanderlust or Beyond Limits

>>96920586
Caster Cu? Based choice.

is there anything new or are we still in a drought

>>96920687
He should probably add a table or something explaining which point type is which, just to prevent confusion

>>96920682 (me)
Fuck I just looked up Pikachu's sex from google and Pikachu is not a girl? I always thought Pikachu was a girl. But I will pretend it's pikachu from a mirror universe where Pikachu looks exactly the same except she's a girl.

>>96920682
>t. ok

>>96920671
But you played Entropist thoughbeit?

Rolled 75, 79, 47 = 201 (3d100)

>>96920687
I'll roll for you

>>96920719
Pottery.

>>96920711
They made it real easy to tell, female Pikachu has a heart shaped tail. Ash's Pikachu is a guy, the one in that picture doesn't have the tail tip in view so we don't know, unless it's taken directly from the anime but it seems the wrong style. By the way, the special Pikachu with a luchador outfit is a girl, and has several other forms, with a special tail.

>>96920612
*pants and coughs as he stumbles through the doorway*
*smears blood on the wall*
It turns out the Danmarat is actually an enormously obese demon that cannot be harmed by any mortal weaponry

I just had a revelation.....
in cyoas where you don't roll, the authors have rolled for you, implicitly - it's the authors rolling for you in their minds. the rolling already happened, in the authors mind, without your input.

>>96920693
personally i find false wizardry the worse one, it may be the easiest to understand but it scales the worst, it's the only one with an innate maximum cap, and it combines the worst with the other sources, so while i used to have it in my older builds, these days i just take metamanipulation for that godline metamanipulation + unfold combo, and leave the other points for worldblood or something

a few hours ago i just made a build where i realized that flow like sand combined with the unfold and metamanip combo lets you remake your mutations and faith structures too, pretty cool

>>96920731
Next step is "you had an infinite numbers of choices but the authors have chosen for you, implicitely".

>>96920731
Um no. They aren't rolling. They're choosing. Well, maybe some of them are rolling some stuff, but not for the most part.

>>96920731
>He just now reached meta- enlightenment.
Welcome neophyte to the Temple of Sartre.

>>96920726
Bullshit. Get a nuke. Fission isn’t mortal.

>>96920775
>metafagging
No.

>>96920812
>the slave leashes himself and gets angry when told he can choose to be free

>>96920735
Idk about that. False Wizardry lets you brute force synergies with other powers so as a foundation I think it's pretty important. The endgame is comboing powers and False Wizardry is the best at it (even better than Transcendence). If you had fewer points though I'd agree.

>>96920735
False Wizardry is easily the most powerful actually.

>>96920884
Why even use cyoas if you're going to be dishonest about it?

>>96920907
>"dishonest"
>slave mentality goes brrr

>>96920892
only metamanipulation is important for synergies, you don't get anything in particular from it other than that, and metamanipulation is in no way tied to false wizardry

false wizardry can produce energy steadily and for free every day, but you can easily do the same shit with worldblood, stellar pacts, and prismatic creation, and also any of the other ones too with a bit more perk involvement which you inevitably have to at least some extent

false wizardry has deep magic to help you create lesser combos but who cares about those when you can just mutation, unbeing, faith, starlight, etc. those into existence too

prismatic corruption alone lets you make arbitrary powers for yourself, including ones that make you the equivalent of a rank 1000 worldlbood user that could punch a million kryptonians into paste with a single move, the best part is that if you go gemergence + metamanipulation you get to decide how each mutation works yourself, and if you add unfold on top it even becomes reasonably doable in energy and strain terms

meanwhile unbeing doesn't even need any prep, you just wave your hand and win against anything if you know what you're doing or at least have eternal grasp to make it safe for yourself

>>96920892
>>96920896
That’s because it’s a nod to ‘True Wizardry’ (science basically) that makes use of all the other powers. Worldliness.

>>96920936
>Worldliness.
World wizardry.

>>96920936
The biggest trap in the cyoa is not picking the Half Mad 4pt option. It completely locks you out of an entire power system otherwise and it's very uncommon to see it picked in builds. True Wizardry is what every build should be building towards, it's clear that's the only way to truly break the limits of the world.

>>96920952
i don't find halfmad mechanisms useful at all when hard science is free and you can use a mutation or something to turn your hard science toaster into a hyperdrive

>>96920549 (OP)
Yandere update. I finished writing traits. Need ideas for relevant skills for the yandere you are building. Also, some ideas for perks and flaws.

As a side note, I'm still not sure about balance of trait points. As it stands, it basically ensures the "high risk, high quality" idea, with lowest danger level also translating to the yandere being a plain girlfailure.

Link:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yVtHEY2Jg4jvu1NaiX0tgMYG2B_geANNEmR0wFVVJb8/edit?usp=sharing

>>96920955
>when hard science is free and you can use a mutation or something to turn your hard science toaster into a hyperdrive
didnt read the cyoa, what do you mean by this

>>96920735
>it's the only one with an innate maximum cap
But its perks remove that, every powers sources (iirc I haven't reread) don't have a cap if you take its perks. So take all the perks of one or two powers sources you like and supplement it with perks from the rest.

>>96920982
you get hard science as an eighth power source in the home free option on page 6, the one that lets you make a portal back to earth, all of the power sources offer artifice options and combine with each other including hard science from earth, which means that you have countless ways to make sci-fi technology regardless of what perks you have

hard science + worldblood = hypermaterial and hyperskill tech to create your warp drive
hard science + stellar pacts = stellartech that calls on the afterlife of travel and sightseeing to make a warp drive
hard science + false wizardry = why do you even need the warp drive, you have infinite range teleportation as one of the starting spells lmao
hard science + divine transcendence = you're basically putting charms from exalted into magic wands, except you get to make the charms in the first place, so just make a demon that moves fast and put that into your toaster to make a warp drive or something
hard science + prismatic corruption = prismatic tech where mutations can do practically anything but most explicitly ignore preexisting rules like the speed of light or energy requirements for acceleration, making your warp drive not only a reality but you don't even need fuel
hard science + unbeing = you sacrifice something valuable and you can get literally arbitrary empowerments for the beneficiary, which can be your toaster that you want to go fast

>>96921015
it's a poor method of working around the cap because even if you do metamanipulate the archive splinter into making new spells for you it's still much slower, still leaving you with a soft cap that other power sources don't have

like, worldblood is getting harder and harder, prismatic corruption is getting less and less likely, but false wizardry was also already getting harder and harder, and once you get to seven million it suddenly hits a wall that makes it many times worse

>>96920970
Can't wait to give her 7 intellect and 7 charm so we'll die to the calamities

>>96920970
Can't forget the scary yandere skills. Knives, torture, stealth, etc.

Everything is/has science and only reddit hating dorks dislike this fact since they all associate the word with liberalism/leftism.

Wait. So false wizards call their scientists true wizards? What the hell.

>>96921265
You can do/push the most with scientific principles.

Reeee hard logic reeeeee

>>96921257
>>96921265
>>96921275
in chain of isekai, hard science refers to constistently reproducible science and technology as seen on earth, and that doesn't exist in its world by default, but it does have a bunch of alternate rules that are consistent instead, though those aren't called hard science, they correspond to the power sources and the way the artificial world was set up in the beginning

it's just words

Hard Science > all

>>96921291
Literally everything is science retard
If it works, it’s science
If it happens, it’s science
If it exists, it’s science

>>96921305
it's pretty weak on its own, maybe if you homebrew perks for hard science it can keep up with the power sources, which the author approves of

>>96921312
that's not the cyoa's terminology, sorry lil bro

Shut up bitch

>>96921318
You don’t know what science is, sorry lil bro

>>96921318
Science is science. Lowest lows and highest highs. Science that incorporates the sciences of the various power sources will reign supreme.

Science at its lowest = a fucking stick

Science at its highest = creating entire existences/experiences

>>96921366
that's not the cyoa's terminology, sorry buddy

>>96921381
You don’t know what science is, sorry lil bro

>>96921379
>Science at its highest = creating entire existences/experiences
Making shit up isn't science. In fact, they call that pseudoscience.

>>96921318
>homebrew perks

Pdfs may be unpostable now, but there is no need for that.

>>96921411
>Questionable Quautisting

>>96921411
just link the pdf, you don't need to do this lol

>>96921411
>>96921421
>>96921431
Wasn't this made by someone else? Also nice consecutive tens.

>>96921435
This is a woman opinion. But a woman didn't climb Mt. Everest even when being told it was too hard. No, perseverance and posting 100 pages of Anime High School - this is the mark of true character, the steel that the great men in history were made of.

>>96920970
High risk probably shouldn't translate into actual harm to the player, but rather every other woman around them.

>>96921701
>>96921458
Basedanon....

>>96921394
Wrong saar.

>>96921733
I like how he didn't even rephrase the post to make it less obvious.

>>96921045
Honestly, I'm thinking of gating the levels past 5 behind perks and supernatural abilities. It would still let people do what you are talking about, but it would make it a bit harder.
>>96921213
Good point. Two fundamental sides of a yandere are domestic skills and deadly skills. Marital and martial.
>>96921516
That's part of the idea honestly. But also the fact that stronger yandere is more likely to dominate your life.

>>96921394
Uh, no. Video games are a precursor to simulation theory. The holy grail of science is making your own science.

>>96921872
>*create your own science
ftfy

>>96921872
That's the holy grail of marketing and investor scams.

>>96920741
A good CYOA should be guiding you to a new set of choices that you would never have conceived of on your own.

>>96921879
No, it's choose your own science.

>>96921893
this sounds like grooming

>>96921904
We're all consenting adults here.

>>96921911
gil is an eternal child

>>96921911
are you sure about that

>>96921701
>Method
Clan
>Power Source
Qi
>Element
Martial
>Sub-paths
Physique, Steel, Antimagic, Order, Chaos
>Special
Simple, Ascendant
>Abilities
Tier 1 : Affinity, Exercise
Tier 2 : Channel, Golden Core
Tier 3 : Mastery, Perception

>Institution Locale
Jungle
>Organization
Independent, Academia, Pride, Loyalty, Secrecy
>Facilities
Geomancy, Library, Hotsprings

Those at the final Tier can make new abilities, so the goal is to get as many of them as possible as fast as possible. I think that the children of someone affect by Ascendant are more compatible with/learn faster the class that affects the parent.

>>96921904
Not grooming, sculpting. The best authors give readers the tools to carve out their own adventures.

>>96921911
We both know that's not true

>>96922009
Don't you know? Any sharing of new ideas and adventures that aren't identical to those already present in your mind is grooming.

Post vtm kino

>>96921913
He cute

https://imgchest.com/p/6eyra829g4p

Mage https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96831220/#96832994
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96722349/#96730791
Assamite Assassin https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96912698/#96915379
Thomas Whitmore https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96903669/#96904345
Ventrue Hotelier https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96749429/#96749587
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96749429/#96749832
The Cheery Librarian https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96758090/#96758879
Vampire Hunter https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96758090/#96762118
Florian Hawthorne https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96823661/#96827195
Usual Tremere https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96831220/#96832001
False Ghoul https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96841979/#96843182
The Day Fixer https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96903669/#96910096
The Unfortunate Kindred https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96847860/#96849707
Contradictory Cutiepie Outsider Methuselah Sil: the Retardation https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96882393/#96882463
Kato Giuliano https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96882393/#96887424
Baali Koldun https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/96903669/#96910440

Post danmachi kino

now post the tok build

>>96921881
They're the same thing to scamjeets. Existence according to Hinduism is a big fucking lie and therefore science is the domain of lying.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maya_(religion)
Holy shit, this page explains 100% of matterjeet's worldview.

Tok would make a very believable god in Danmachi desu

I wish italics were a god in danmachi
We could read and cuddle and skip stones by the hillside and he wouldn't be black because all gods are white

Gil familia

>>96922092
He’d be another Apollo but way worse

>>96922020
I disagree

>>96921389
Why have we been cursed with its presence?

>>96922113
>all gods are white
Ganesha is literally a Poojeet

>>96922071
>>96916300
>>96917413
>>96917020
>Assamite Assassin
Thank you for the help, I had fun with this, should be done now.

/cyoag/ is pure brainrot at this point

>>96922143
Because you continue to make it angry by being stupid. Stop being stupid and maybe it will finally go away for good.

>>96922092
The God of Envy

>>96922149
>>96922149

>>96922144
>Canon
I don't care
Sartre told me they were all white, without fail

He's probably just wearing blackface

>>96922150
This is midly entertaining to watch on the side while I play CYOAs.

anyone else noticed indians are talked about here a lot more often recently? what changed? it was not like this even a couple months ago

>>96922149
>should be done now

>>96922168
Hate for indians surged in chud circles over the past few months

>>96922171
Billions must update

>>96922151
Matterjeeta...

>>96922168
Influx of /v/irgins here. Ignore and post cyoas.

>>96922183
Obsessed.

>>96922168
New hate of the month. We'll circle around to the Irish next cycle.

>>96922168
We have a few canuck newfags

>>96922168
Indians ruined the internet and you ask why internet veterans hate them? It’s to the point now where you can’t even trust the average internet goer to be white. It’s foolish.

Not even half of India has access to the internet. It’s only going to get a lot worse.

>>96922184
>>96912433
Did something happen at /v/?

>>96922201
>interne veterans
Where?

>>96922187
Just stop posting

The most deranged shit you see in YouTube comment sections are usually from mentally unwell Indians.

>>96922168
Entropist had the right idea about poos.

>>96922208
He's retarded, ignore it

>>96922208
By veteran he means people who were around to experience the golden age of YouTube and whatnot. Before India got access to everything.

>>96922211
Mentally unwell people? Ugh. I'd never post on a website populated by such. I stick to communities of established mental stability.

>>96922222
holy fucking wasted

You’re just making the matterkike go full racist again

>>96922234
Good. Now he can bump my thread while I'm taking a break.

>>96922225
By mentally unwell I mean “ISAAC NEWTON WAS INDIAN HE WAS SHIPPED OVER FROM INDIA— ALSO PYTHAGORAS STOLE HIS THEOREM FROM THE BRAHMIN— THE BRAHMIN INVENTED EVERYTHING”.

I don’t mean “haha lolis and boobs xd”

>>96922234
Being a race realist isn’t being a racist. It is low iq to assume we’re all the same, or that we’re all equally capable.

>>96922250
that's what all outspoken nationalists sound to foreigners

>>96922260
it is technically being a racist because you're discriminating based on race

what you're trying to argue is that sometimes discriminating based on race makes sense

>>96922250
That’s the result of the lowest of the low castes coping by pretending reality isn’t what it is. You’ll notice that Indians are either disturbingly unintelligent, or they’re surprisingly intelligent. They’re a caste fractured people. Their genetics are all sorts of fucked. The intelligent Indians are terrified of breeding with their lessers and for good reason. The dung shovelers were the lowest filth while the priests and scholars and kings (scholars and priests were actually higher than kings outside of rule in practice) were the top.

>>96922215
I wonder if we're going to see any indian stuff in Exalted Conquest. Maybe the Ruined Lands are worse than we think. Six-limbed wizard-fiends leading a caste hierarchy of malformed abominations.

>>96922275
man you retards sure have it good with your slave caste that you can pretend is the reason for all your self-inflicted problems

>>96922269
Discrimination is another way of saying pattern recognition. Is math racist? Does it discriminate? Yes, but it’s not racist. It’s just math.

You are low iq sorry. Being a “racist” is a form of survival. White people actually have poor identification skills (they only use one side of their brains for this while non whites use both sides) and this is why they are allowing non whites into their lands. They are committing suicide.

>>96922292
This is just their history, anon. They had isolated all their retard genetics to poop scoopers.

>>96922275
>Saar the caste system is very important saar.
Cope shit eater.

>>96922215
Yet there was only one True Son based enough to kill jeets. You're all living in his shadow.

>>96922292
>>96922306
1. I am not Indian I am white.
2. Eugenics is very real.

>>96922296
no, racism is defined as discriminating based on race, you can't cope your way out of this one by saying sometimes discrimination is good because racism isn't defined by being bad, it's the same shit as the lefties were trying to do by spewing out mental gymnastics like how only whites can be racist

>>96922319
Sorry nope. You can discriminate and not hate. If you can’t do this nuance you’re a low iq person sorry. Don’t respond back to me. Thanks.

>>96922325
doesn't matter if you hate or not, non-hateful racism is still racism

>>96922315
Yes, you sure are bona fide one hundred percent (inbred) Brahmin.

>>96922319
Discrimination isn’t a negative word. That you think it’s a negative word is proof you are a libtard or something. Discrimination is just dissecting and assessing. Can you not weigh the situation? Spot the trends?

>>96922335
i don't think it's a negative word at all anon

>>96922329
Oh, you want to use that sort of logic eh? Okay. Racism is a natural course of life. To pretend it’s a negative is to ignore the reality of life. Everyone is racist to some extent. Exoticism is a form of racism.

>>96922333
Retarded trailer trash hicks will make retarded trailer trash babies deal with it

Race is a social construct :^)

>>96922361
Dalit bhenchod cope, lmao.

>>96920970
add yangires

>>96922379
worse, it's an american social construct

Cyoas with waifus that will actually just kill me?

The future is shit. I mean that literally.

>>96922418
OR

>>96922275
>either disturbingly unintelligent, or they’re surprisingly intelligent
I can apply that to everywhere, up and including this thread.

>>96922418
Any CYOA if you behave like a piece of shit.

>>96922428
With Indians it’s a completely different beast.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7OfV16_xngQ&pp=ygUkSG93IHRoZSBjYXN0ZSBheWF0ZW0gY2hhbmdlZCBpbmRpYW5z

Who's the retard that decided giving jeets nuked was a good idea again? I know for a fact those poolits didn't make them themselves.

Could you at least post cyoas during your off-topic meltdown?

Made some alternate powers for Power Creator Xenon's Type Green that fit more of a magic theme rather than Green's original focus of portals and timeline manipulation.

I know that editing other people's CYOAs is considered a faux pas but since Power Creator has such a big focus on creating powers I think it fits within the spirit of the CYOA to share some powers that I made up.

>>96922168
pretty sure 1 specific guy is obsessed with them, that's it, kinda weird
>>96922452
here

>>96922478
>Trying to build a shit fortress is strictly forbidden
Aaaand just like that I’m not picking C

>>96922488
>pretty sure 1 specific guy is obsessed with them, that's it, kinda weird
Yes. It’s the same guy obsessed with the physics shitposter.

>>96922478
A, omnipotence

>>96922478
A
To be twice as omnipotent as this anon >>96922532

>>96922518
>he just gives in instead of following his dreams

>>96922529
He’s also convinced it’s a woman. A stinky Indian woman.

>>96922275
Anon the reason indians only cite the verbal iq of brahmins is that they are competing in hindi
The only way they could pass 100 iq is to have only indian opponents

This is the general we deserve

>>96922585
Contessa is the best, no?

>>96922478
B.
I don't see the point in choosing A, as it will get immediately replaced by another thing I want.

>>96922613
i like daria

Wait. There are Indians in Danmachi? FUUUUCK no. I’m out.

>>96922646
Yep lol the elephant man is the jeet god

>>96922646
Rats love India

>>96922478
A, what I want is to prevent all other Anon's from getting what they want.

>>96922715
All hail the crab king

>>96922478
A. i veto this anon wish >>96922715 and hope one of the 2 guys with omnipotence can give me planeswalking and cool powers

>>96922727
Crabs hold each other down to keep fish from snatching them off the sea floor. In a sense, by keeping us from escaping this reality into the void of reason beyond, anon has our best intentions at heart.

>>96922479
Cool. Good work, anon.

>>96922479
Ought to post the cyoa.

https://imgchest.com/p/5xy2pz6j7ld
https://rentry.co/h5gd6trq

>>96922780
What was the importance of xenon in it? Was xenon even mentioned in the cyoa besides the title?

>>96922479
this is fine anon, i could make two entire new types from my builds if i bothered

>>96922792
noble power bloodlines are named after noble gasses in the setting, it's floating around somewhere on the bloodline page or maybe page 1

we need new authors, that way we can enjoy oc more often

>>96922837
Where do new authors come from

>>96922792
correction, it's paragraph 2 on the custom power page

>>96922840
once tok gathers enough hate from the thread he buds asexually

>>96922646
I really don’t think the Japanese know what an Indian person is.

>>96922837
You tards don't deserve OC. Every time there's OC you either ignore it or sperg out because of some irrelevant detail.

>>96922880
that only happens with bad oc

>>96922892
It happens with every OC

>>96922899
yes, and?

Surinical, if you’re here, I gotta say some of the writing in The Great Stage is really, really good. I don’t know how much of the writing is AI, but if you’re the one writing things like the dwarf AI lore or or Visera’s quest, you are actually very talented and doing yourself a disservice by leaning on shortcuts to produce content more quickly. If it is, in fact, AI producing those sections I’m going to suggest we kill Tok and replace him with AI. It will improve the air around here and result in better content. Two birds with one stone.

>>96922924
Why even use AI in the first place? Writing is half the fun.

>>96922958
He said he used it for the mechanics and something else because he didn't want to do it; everything else was written by him.

>>96922958
If I had to guess, AI might provide someone the structure to iterate on. For example, if the AI shat out some writing about an elf that loves to create natural architecture then Surinical could use that foundation to build a story around it. It’s not unlike what we, as players, use a cyoa for. I only bring it up because I am being positive and assuming the best parts of Sur’s works are their own, the worst are the AI.

>dude aliens
Nah it sucks

>>96922924
Thanks, I used AI and edited it. Took me a while but paying for grok really helped.

Just tell AI to write something for you and then edit out the parts you don’t like. Or change it around. It’s really not that hard…

>>96922924
>The good:
Classes, powers (mostly), factions, companions
>The bad
The premise (fake fantasy world controlled by technology), the entire quest section, the gay unicorn seething at the audience (us)

>>96922988
This. AI is the perfect brainstormer. I hate writing shit out first and foremost. I want ideas thrown my way.

>>96922992
>fake fantasy world controlled by technology
This isn’t a bad thing. In fact it’s even unavoidable (…one you realize fantasy is as artificial as science-fiction) to some degree. It’s just the superficial aesthetics don’t match up, and guns and swords definitely don’t match. But, who cares this is tee gee and weebs are retarded.

>>96922988
>>96923004
you will end up with suricalslop that way, i don't hate AI but its not at the level where it can make a cyoas that have a soul.
once i tried to ask AI for a list of cool evil power it could give me and kept going in a loop repeating the same powers
at the least it can create pretty great images depending on the model used

Just think, in the future AI will be able to make interactive cyoa, then make cyoa into a game, and then make it into VR, and then make it into a neuralink compatible login. I for one embrace my sloppa overlords.

>>96922907
Whinefags truly are a menace

>>96922992
>Classes, powers (mostly)
AI
>factions, companions
Surinical
>The premise (fake fantasy world controlled by technology)
Not sure
>the entire quest section
Surinical
>the gay unicorn seething at the audience (us)
No idea

>>96923080
>interactive
FUCK YOU go back

Surinical when will you go back to making more niche and kino and occult single page cyoas like the wasp nest in the attic (this one could also be expanded on - even though I don’t have an attic)

>>96922924
I like the classes and powers too, but I will say that in many instances the mechanics of the powers and abilities don't quite make sense in what they strictly say you can do vs. what is heavily implied they can do. An example is Aberant Blade doesn't actually let you shape shift your limbs into weapons (you have to be a Curators tear to do that).

>>96923101
>the gay unicorn seething at the audience (us)
>No idea
Nta, someone asked for french unicorns while Surinical was asking for ideas. That is probably the result. A lot of things in the cyoa are the result of random shitpost suggestions too.

>>96923125
I'm pretty sure the special perk and weapon enchant are not the only thing the classes give you. You also get the things they describe you can do.

>>96923080
AI is Inevitable

>>96922880
proof or gtfo

reminder that interactive cyoas are not real cyoas

>>96923125
>An example is Aberant Blade doesn't actually let you shape shift your limbs into weapons (you have to be a Curators tear to do that).
That was something that really stood out out to me too.

>>96922986
What are your most used AIs for writing purposes? Since GPT-4 got downgraded to oblivion I'm searching something else.

>AI talk
The list of animals in >>96862792 was written by an AI. 10s of effort, for such a minimalistic task that it wouldn't matter who wrote it.
And even if you normally hate AI images, you've got to admit it's wonderful for scaling images bigger.
Give AI humble enough tasks and it's fine and useful.

>>96923147
If you read the example encounters for all the classes you will notice that strictly speaking they only use the class bonus and enchantment.

>>96923133
Most of the 'shitposts' are funny though.

>>96923125
The companions break a lot of the rules for their own races and classes too.

>>96923220
It's a tool and can be used for good or bad.

I'm making research for my writing.
For a character to be a waifu where is the limit for her?

>>96922052
>Borina: The Grounded Childhood Friend
CF betray

>>96923221
No they don't, the aberrant blade you complained about is does exactly what you said they can't do in the example fight.

>>96923220
AI is really good for scaling and editing images, I'll give it that. I suppose the biggest distinction is in whether AI is used to supplement the creative process or to replace it.

>>96920687
Death's past is the best, followed by Magician and Hanged Man's.

>>96923254
>Not revealing being transgender until after sex
Who wrote this? That's orders of magnitude lower than 23.

>>96923192
Isekai Dark Overlord, Outer Reincarnation, Trashsword Compact, Devil Down the Line, Creature of the Night, and the Great Stage have all had near-immediate whining on release. Whinefags are a minority, but they really cannot shut the fuck up.

>>96923254
>inb4 used goods
...Huh. I don't know.
I'd say penetrative action is point of no return in most cases, but some people would be against all kinds of sexual action beforehand.

>>96923101
So you are saying the good parts are AI and the bad parts are surincal?

Fuck ISHY! Its nothing personal but railroading the "Real" MC into my adventure is annoying as shit.

>>96923292
The upper left literally says they asked twitter, reddit, and fetlife, aka giant retards.

>>96923308
Yeah why do I have to suck up to that loser

>>96923254
wtf is this spectrum? its all over the place and a lot of the options are not even rape

>>96923263
Yea look at the other classes for what I am saying, it's inconsistent . I might add that in the example fight the Aberant Blade chooses his weapons which is a direct contradiction to the actual enchantment. It's a result of AI and not proofreading.

>>96923254
Being a virgin. It's easy.

>>96923293
>Trashsword Compact
>Devil Down the Line
Was there any whinefagging with these? I remember most anons were just happy the pact was fulfilled.

>>96923313
Oh yeah, that would explain it. Mentally ill people have wildly dissonant morals to most of the rest of us.

>>96923254
WTF?!? Okay, the west really has fallen.

>>96923293
Stop spouting lies you-
>"FIX THE UPDATE YOU HACK"
>"METASLOP + MAKE YOUR OWN THREAD + OVERDESIGNED"
>"I WANT TO BE A MAGE"
>"SLOPINICAL DID IT AGAIN"
>"FAILED NOVELIST!" "Nobody said anything about-"

>>96923221
I actually think that makes the sample encounters so pointless. You are given two very specific powers and then you read a paragraph of someone….just using them? You just told me what they can do, why bother? It’s like the sample quests for the factions being exactly the same as the what to expect section. To s of duplicative shit

>>96923335
The aberrant blade doesn't use the enchantment, it uses the class ability to change limbs, which is separate, and can be chosen apparently. The Enchantment is only for weapons, and you can't enchant your limbs unless you are a dream monk or a magma giant, ler me remind you that most if not all other players have only one class, so limb swpping is clearly a different ability of the class. If classes were just a bunch of points and a couple skills they would be useless, they clearly give you other things too.

>>96923328
I think green is supposed to be slightly sketchy(reddit doesn't like it) but obviously not rape
Yellow is sketchy/assholish but still not rape
Red is rape

>>96923364
To show them in action, I think.

>>96923254
What kind of friend does this

>>96923365
The enchantment is useless then, there is literally no reason to use it compared to the implied power.

>>96923346
>Was there any whinefagging with these?
Nta, people hated them because they were both grimderp. In both cases the best move is not to play.

>>96923380
The mentally ill?
They are reddit users, please understand. They are incapable of making moral judgements without an external authority

>>96923380
The kind of friend to break into your house to check on you after you joke about buying rope to tie a noose.

>>96923288
Other than Door and White Tower, are there any pathways that have a super powerful s6?

>>96923369
>this makes people explode
>you dodge the big guy in the armor then make him explode!
Why did we need two whole paragraphs

>>96923362
Nobody acts like that.

>>96923383
I assume the class skill depends on your knowledge, you need to "Cite" a concept, and that concept needs to exist somewhere in the code. The weapon enchant is a gatcha, you don't know what you will get but you don't need to have knowledge of it to get a legendary weapon, and your class skill will guarantee you can use whatever you get. The class skill is clearly better, but the weapon enchant has some niche uses, and the best race for this class is the curator tear, because they can have as many limbs as they want.

>>96923380
Me.

>>96923380
i think that spot looked empty so the one creating the list needed to come up with something to fill the space

>>96923380
I try to picture the turboautist who does this "trying to be helpful :D" and I can't stop laughing. I picture him as Forrest Gump.

>>96923414
Liar.

>>96923422
>The class skill is clearly better, but the weapon enchant has some niche uses, and the best race for this class is the curator tear, because they can have as many limbs as they want.
Are we close to solving the cyoa?

>>96923380
The better question is, who in their right mind kidnaps and rapes somebody because some retard paid him to?

>>96923407
Paragon

>>96923254
Prostitution is always beneath 50. Even if both consent, they are passively encouraging more people to be raped by their johns, and therefore guilty of rape. The prostitution industry is multiple times worse than normal promiscuity.

>>96923443
I can picture that kind of sychopathic lowlife more easily. But this friend guy is some kind of ridiculous existence.

>>96923443
You never did anything wrong for money?

>>96923422
Maybe anon, but I feel like this could be more clearly spelled out, same with many of the other implied powers in other classes (like permanent enhancements from flesh weaver).

>>96921701
>all offensive abilities are destruction-only, castrating anyone who doesn't pick explicitly-destructive elements
>all artifice abilities are creative-only, meaning no spatiotemporal, or some other wacky enchantment
What is this gay shit? Why bother with so many elements when you can't use most of them anyway?
Should I pick the fucking Channel as a catch-all just to be able to do ANYTHING with Spacetime as the element of choice?
>bro, just pick X
Right, I should just play the way it's gaylord author devised it, not look for interesting and unusual combinations.
Most of the abilities are tag-locked, even the ones that make zero sense, like runes, traps, artifact creation, or potions.

Then there's the fucking "Kill" ability, which is retarded all on it's own. Leave it to the player to come up with the "how".
Torn apart by expanding bubble of space? Death by melon-sized kidney stones? Rapid dehydration? Healing-induced rapid-onset cancer? Antimagic that motherfucker to the point his lifeforce evaporates?
You give the tools to work with and come up with our own applications, not the whole fucking "element-method-application-result" pipeline.

Nigger got too big a helping of the Order element and now gotta micromanage shit.

Surinical is a machine elf femboy and I appreciate that

>>96923453
...I just picture the Swede.
>>96923466
He's a featureless humanoid like the Echoes.

>>96923121
>wasp nest in the attic
I don’t like bugs

>>96923422
They all seem to have two limbs. The build i made without posting with was half jungle monkey so I could have the 4 arm bonus. Skirmisher+Fleshweaver+Abberant Blade

>>96923466
Yea despite my heavy criticism, the idea is really unique. You one anon suggested he might be an AGI and honestly I can totally see it.

>>96923470
>avenge micha
>it was the whiny discordsisters that drove him off
This did not age well

>>96923456
>raping a poor woman with the consent of some random sperg she barely knows
>wrong

>>96923422
>>96923477
Yea but the Tear companion has a special quest to become a living mass of blades. If you are also a Tear you could do it too (I recommend the item dupe power to get more of the rare ore).

>>96923504
Let's settle for 'morally dubious'.

>>96923506
That's another annoying thing. Some of the companions quests are just run of the mill companion favor quest and others result in MAJOR upgrades to their capabilities. Really messes with the balance.

>>96923477
The tears are implied to be amorphous, one turns into a giant shield in the summoner description and a non sentient one can be picked as a weapon, the only difference between that one and the rest is implied to be just that so the race can also shapeshift. Also the racial skill is called shapeless. Being a hybrid with a tear is a pretty good idea.

>>96922052
>fuck the Xylos are a disease, who the fuck thought this was a good idea
>look up the archive
>(You)
Today I've discovered a new level of self-sabotage.

>>96923465
Technically, any element can use any of the powers. A wrong element will just be shit at it compared to a right element.

>>96923463
I don't think it needs to be spelled out, a lot of stuff can be implied and when things are left vague it leaves more space for imagination. Not everything need to be structured.

>>96923549
I was sure they were just a reference to the wild in his space station post apocalypse cyoa.

>>96923549
don't kill your children

>>96923549
Only you can fix your mistake anon, pick up the flame staff, it's time to go gardening.

>>96923589
>>96923595
The duality of man.

Should anti-conceptive effects be default in CYOAs alongside immortallity?

>>96923622
Why would you ever want to avoid propagating your genes?

>>96923622
No, I don't want your condoms.

>>96923528
And yet the Tear companion is annoyed that she can only shift her limbs and hair into weapons.

>>96923559
Suit yourself anon, but this CYOA is flopping hard and I feel this is one of the reasons.

>>96923622
Yes. By default, the player doesn't deserve to breed. Cut off his willy.

>>96923632
The companions are clerly special in some way, she's probably defective. Or they do have that limit but like she can get over it so can you if you do the same things, or you can find other ways. Technically you can just be a fleshweaver, combined with a tear body that will definitely make stuff easier.

>>96923610
As all things should be.
>>96923549
You're likely to get brought back in any Xylos legacy. Lucky you!

>>96923622
Not really. Most people WANT to impregnate their waifus, or have ways to prevent said impregnation if needed. Having the narrator hand me condoms is anti-arousing.

>>96923626
I would hope you avoid spreading yours anon

>>96923649
Make immortality automatically apply it
The eternal don't need heirs

>>96923654
>>96923626
now kiss

>>96923549
I actually think they're pretty neat villains, a much more creative take on plantoids in comparison to the generic pacifist hippie bullshit.

>>96923645
I don't think it's a problem with the cyoa, it's a problem with a couple anons here that are obsessed with structure and unable to use creativity. The cyoa has a lot of reasons to flop, and lack of structure is not one of them, in fact it's one of it's good parts.

>>96923663
But all this goes only for spread of genetic information. We need to stop the spread of memetic information. By default, the immortal player needs to be locked forever in a cell from which he can't communicate to the outside.

>>96923622
Make it anti-sex effects

>>96923622
Fertility control should be either free or very cheap in all cyoas. Unless it's a nsfw cyoa, but those are a whole different can of worms.

>>96923685
NEETcore...

>>96923549
Post the archive link, I think I was one of the contributors (I thought Surinical was joking) but I forgot which idea is mine.

I wonder if Tears count as "unarmed" for the purposes of the monk class?

>>96923676
>The cyoa has a lot of reasons to flop
Such as?

>>96923687
are you the same anon that posted the necromancer meme yesterday? post more

>>96923702
NTA. Looks like the weird unicorns came from there too.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/thread/96222810/#96230300

>>96923687
Cultivation CYOA where you gain power by not having sex.
You lose this power if you have sex but the girl that stole your virginity gets to keep not only your power but the same rate of gains without having to not have sex.

>>96923733
But then the girls would just chain men?

>>96923742
You get isekaied as the only unraped man and the only hope for male liberation.
kino...

>>96923733
I still remember Gathering Rage.

>>96923733
Virginity?

>>96923717
AI art, it's polarizing, you either hate it regrdless or you tolerate it.
The setting, "it's all a simulation" is not a good setting for an adventure, not as appealing as more common alternatives.
Walls of text with useless information, many descriptions are repetitive and pointless, I know what a sword is, and you already told me what the elves are like 3 times already.
The companions are not that appealing.
Forced narrative, it's my adventure, let me make my choices.
Forced ending choices, same as above.
And last but not least, shitposting. A lot of people didn't even read the cyoa and are saying it sucks.

>>96923756
As we discussed earlier Anons are love-starved and would quickly fall to those gain-oriented women.

Yes. Perhaps.

>>96923733
This is the shittiest idea in while.

>>96923733
>>96923756
Sounds like a porn game plot

>>96923790
KINO

cyoa for this feel?

>>96923766
i don't remember what the final verdict was, could he receive a foorjob or handjob?

>>96923772
>Forced narrative, it's my adventure, let me make my choices.
>Forced ending choices, same as above.
I can agree with many of the others points, but nothing force us to follow the unsanctioned quests and the endings, no?

>>96923770
yes if you already had sex you don't get power.

>>96923776
true the would be immediately gaslight, gatekeep and girlbossed.

>>96923799
https://imgchest.com/p/qe4gr2eboyj

>Page 2 Companion Skills
>Diella Greyguard: Sword Saint
Ferromancy, Leadership, Stance Fighting, Athleticism, Strategy, Aura
>Jeri Thomas: Pillar
Leadership, Grit, Aura, Athleticism, Tanking, Support Magic
>Chrysanthemum Smith: Forgemaster
Forging, Athleticism, Emotional Fighting, Grit, Ferromancy, Focus
>Jonessa Darc: Conqueror
Force Magic, Leadership, Strategy, Forging, Tanking, Support Magic
>Umeko: Steel Man
Athleticism, Stance Fighting, Tanking, Catalyst Casting, Grit, Force Magic
>Vera Crubban: Ravager
Athleticism, Aura, Emotional Fighting, Perception, Body Magic, Acrobatics
>Goblina Hickson: Thief
Quick Hands, Performance, Luck, Chromamancy, Perception, Shadow Magic
>Shino Bi: Shade
Acrobatics, Quick Casting, Stealth, Perception, Shadow Magic, Performance
>Aine Fannon: Naturalist
Survivalism, Aeromancy, Perception, Acrobatics, Natural Magic, Stealth
>Ibris Goldove: Illusionist
Performance, Acrobatics, Chromamancy, Quick Casting, Acoustic Magic, Focus
>Laureli Cyprus: Alchemist
Alchemy, Nature Magic, Survivalism, Golemancy, Luck, Strategy
>Elaine Oken: Sunderer
Quick Hands, Stance Fighting, Acrobatics, Luck, Perception, Stealth
>Lily Evenstar: Pact Mage
Golemancy, Support Magic, Catalyst Casting, Emotional Fighting, Focus, Quick Casting
>Victoria Punicea: Dark Magician
Body Magic, Ferromancy, Support Magic, Golemancy, Aeromancy, Emotional Fighting
>Remora: Soul Mage
Support Magic, Hydromancy, Enchantment, Gaiamancy, Arcane Magic, Golemancy
>Aranei Canum: Arcanist
Arcane Magic, Laylines, Enchantment, Shadow Magic, Focus, Chromamancy
>Nicole: Wild Mage
Catalyst Casting, Strategy, Quick Casting, Focus, Leylines, Perception
>Stella D'Artoire: Elementalist
Pyromancy, Aeromancy, Hydromancy, Enchantment, Gaiamancy, Athleticism

>>96923818
So an asexual male can't be beaten (unless he's raped) and an asexual female can't get stronger (unless she forces herself (which is rape according to reddit))?

>>96923805
If a woman is involved, it counts. Masturbation is kosher though.

>>96923819
i wanted to post this cyoa but forgot the name, btw who is Nicole supposed to be? is she one of the daughters of the goddess?

>>96923772
>The setting, "it's all a simulation" is not a good setting for an adventure, not as appealing as more common alternatives.
Why so?