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petrol No.712529330 [Report] >>712529645 >>712529902 >>712529961 >>712530917 >>712530996 >>712531909 >>712535996 >>712536151 >>712536979 >>712538005 >>712539835 >>712541686 >>712542465 >>712542635
Game release Concrete Veil
Hi, I recently released a demo of my new game Concrete Veil on Itch.io

Trailer: https://youtu.be/TM0GRcJpdFY
Game page: https://p3trol.itch.io/concrete-veil

It is a first-person shooter that combines Quake's pacing in gunfights and Half-Life's thoughtful atmosphere in the environments.

Set in a dystopian city, where towering concrete wall separate the city from the unknown. The world is now controlled by the Private Military Company, that was meant to protect humanity. But now that maintaining this goal no longer makes sense, they are forced to wander the world for eternity.

Game Features:
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Satisfying Gunplay
2 weapon types + melee attack. All polished to perfection. Later there will be more weapon types. Physical prop interaction deepen gunfights even more (knock out enemies by throwing crates or bottles in them or just punch them with your leg ;). Get cover from bullets by picking up metal sheets or other scrap) Every enemy has weak points that are not protected with armor plates. You should find and use them to be more efficient. Full scheme is represented here:
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Highly detailed levels and environments (Not just an arcade-style square box with one repeated texture): Main inspiration for me was Half-Life 2's thoughtful level design and atmospheric environmental art.
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Procedural Physical interaction with enemies and environment:
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Trailer: https://youtu.be/TM0GRcJpdFY
Game page: https://p3trol.itch.io/concrete-veil

Check it out! It's free ;)
Anonymous No.712529645 [Report] >>712538393
>>712529330 (OP)
This looks real good! Thanks for sharing, OP!
Anonymous No.712529714 [Report] >>712538005
>combines none of the fun parts into a shit game
why dont you, and I do mean this, buy an ad for somewhere else
Anonymous No.712529757 [Report] >>712538005
>blatant selfbump from 2nd device
Buy a banner ad.
https://www.4chan.org/advertise
Anonymous No.712529827 [Report]
Art style isn’t unique enough and the animations seems rough, the gun model is a bit pitiful
Anonymous No.712529902 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
What the fuck is this engine? Xash3D or one of the Quake 1/2 engine forks using Source engine assets?
Anonymous No.712529957 [Report]
looks laggy
Anonymous No.712529961 [Report] >>712538393
>>712529330 (OP)
Damn this looks great! How long did it take you to make this? Downloading now!
petrol No.712530813 [Report]
game was made by me alone. I just want some feedback

the trailer is a little laggy because i have a potato pc and cannot record gameplay at good res.
Anonymous No.712530917 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
BUY AN AD FAG
bump
Anonymous No.712530996 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
>That blatant stolen HL2 wall texture
Kill yourself you unoriginal asset-stealing indieshit
Anonymous No.712531909 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
Bro those are 100% stolen source textures.
Good on you for making a game - looks rough shit desu but you'll get better and next time don't blatantly steal art assets
petrol No.712534634 [Report] >>712534824 >>712538393
Yes the textures are from source. If i had to make them myself it would take an eternity.
btw a lot of indie games are using sounds/textures from hl2. For example Voices of the void - there are just a little downscaled/pixelated.

Also as you can see the game is completely free and there is no commercial use of assets. All models, animations, code was done by myself. To use music I have permission from artist.

Anyway thanks for the feedback.


Thanks 712529645 and 712529961 I hope you enjoyed the game!
Anonymous No.712534824 [Report] >>712536745
>>712534634
i hope someone lights you on fire
Anonymous No.712535343 [Report] >>712536246
Just watched the trailer. I guess I'll check it out. looks interesting enough, definitely a vibe I'm interested in.

That said, those boss battles looked pretty rough. Reminded me of fighting a Borderlands boss while underleveled
Anonymous No.712535683 [Report]
>don't steal those pixels from the multi billion dollar corporation
fuck off
Anonymous No.712535996 [Report] >>712536051
>>712529330 (OP)
OP is cooking. I hope your game is successful and I'm sending you my energy.
petrol No.712536051 [Report]
>>712535996
thanks!
Anonymous No.712536151 [Report] >>712536327
>>712529330 (OP)
JFC, why is it so laggy?
petrol No.712536246 [Report]
>>712535343
yeah. maybe i should add phases for the boss or make additional mechanics like movement with dashes, double jumps or something like that.
petrol No.712536327 [Report] >>712538126
>>712536151
the trailer is a little laggy because i have a potato pc and cannot record gameplay at good res and fps. the game itself has good performance
Anonymous No.712536403 [Report] >>712536479
Yeah fuck it this is pretty much my kind of game. I hope you make a billion dollars.
petrol No.712536479 [Report]
>>712536403
thanks!
Anonymous No.712536745 [Report]
>>712534824
you dropped this
Anonymous No.712536797 [Report] >>712538564
I think you're a gay fucking nigger and your game sucks
Seriously, this shit looks like some sort of cheap boomer shooter mod
Anonymous No.712536979 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
Competent but generic. I’m not an FPS guy though.
Anonymous No.712537275 [Report] >>712537501
Trying to change the resolution doesn't work
It fucked over my 1080p monitor
Reloading after death made my cursor stay on screen
Movement is slow(maybe because i can't bunnnyhop), enemies are too tanky and too accurate at long ranges
The screen effects upon being hit are annoying
Cool game just fix the bugs
Anonymous No.712537334 [Report] >>712537703
>press f to punch
>he kicks
petrol No.712537501 [Report]
>>712537275
definitely will release bugfix soon. Thanks for detailed feedback.
Anonymous No.712537514 [Report]
The samefagging compliments to yourself are so obvious, OP, you are an absolute fucking amateur at this.
Your game is shit, and (You) are shit in the rough shape of a human being. Please fuck off and DO NOT come back.
petrol No.712537703 [Report]
>>712537334
Im not a native speaker. so yeah...
Anonymous No.712538005 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
Combat doesn't look engaging, the problem lies more with the enemy design than your mechanics right now

>>712529714
>>712529757
>internet ads in 2025
Don't care if these are shitposts, that'd just be poor marketing
Anonymous No.712538126 [Report]
>>712536327
Should have made a simple slideshow instead.
Lofi aesthetic is all the rage right now.
Anonymous No.712538393 [Report] >>712539526
>>712529645
>>712529961
>>712534634
Blatant samefag
Anonymous No.712538496 [Report] >>712538580
Captures HL2 aesthetic and feel quite well, I'm impressed, just one suggestion, lower the fov on your trailers, most people can't take it and it makes them dizzy so they could dismiss it without ever trying it.
Anonymous No.712538564 [Report] >>712541601
>>712536797
It's free, retard, go play overwatch or something
petrol No.712538580 [Report]
>>712538496
thanks. this is good feedback
Anonymous No.712539423 [Report] >>712539731
Beat the demo.
To be critical, jumping was inconsistent and sometimes just didn't happen. The boss was pretty neat but mostly a bit of a slugfest. It also needs a few basic options like aim sensitivity. Sometimes the enemies would just mad dash to random things. I think they were super-prioritizing taking cover even if it didn't make much sense.

A lot of moments made me wish I had a grenade. This game needs grenades like crazy. I really liked the look of the final area though and the enemy design is really cool. Basically if you gave me a shotgun and some grenades I would play through these nice environments for a while longer.
Anonymous No.712539526 [Report] >>712539812
>>712538393
Yep. Genuinely buy an ad, op. Or if you're an actual site regular go post your shit in agdq instead of making literal shillfarm tier posts on /v/.
petrol No.712539731 [Report]
>>712539423
thanks for feedback. The shotgun is in plans for future updates. Grenades too, maybe ill replace the explosive barrels with grenades
petrol No.712539812 [Report]
>>712539526
i dont have muney :(
Anonymous No.712539835 [Report] >>712539975
>>712529330 (OP)
looks cool, i like the world desing. work on the shooting and enemy designs
and try shilling it on r/asmongold
petrol No.712539975 [Report]
>>712539835
ok, thanks
Anonymous No.712541246 [Report] >>712541563
It won't take over my pc right?
petrol No.712541563 [Report]
>>712541246
No. Virus total: https://www.virustotal.com/gui/file/b71d32fecdfcba4d74fc59d6b25389ecb13ed9fd1e08bc7695e2796963d06d84/detection
Anonymous No.712541601 [Report] >>712541928 >>712542750
>>712538564
A turd on the road is free too, doesn't mean I have to praise you for shitting it out
Anonymous No.712541686 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
good concretecore op, i like it
Anonymous No.712541928 [Report] >>712542045
>>712541601
Do you stop to bitch and moan at road turds.
Anonymous No.712542045 [Report] >>712542090
>>712541928
This thread is akin you shitting on my porch, of course I will tell you that you're a fucking retard.
Anonymous No.712542090 [Report] >>712542496
>>712542045
>my porch
/v/ is mine tho
Anonymous No.712542465 [Report] >>712543239
>>712529330 (OP)
bump for something that actually looks like it was made with passion, gl anon
Anonymous No.712542496 [Report] >>712542663
>>712542090
Fuck off m00t, you sold the site, remember?
Anonymous No.712542635 [Report]
>>712529330 (OP)
Looks fun
Anonymous No.712542663 [Report]
>>712542496
I mean spiritually~
petrol No.712542750 [Report]
>>712541601
>A turd on the road is free too, doesn't mean I have to praise you for shitting it out
I don't see that I asked for praise anywhere. I need objective feedback and some people here gave it.
Anonymous No.712542931 [Report] >>712543149
It's not half bad honestly but there are a ton of bugs. My resolution keeps getting reset to 3k something even after I tell it to be 1920x1080.
The game set a checkpoint at the start of the game where I was getting shot with 20 hp, so I revive, get shot and die in less than 1 second, repeat. Can't even duck into cover
The bots just run straight past me until they finally decide to stop and shoot.
Overall not that bad
petrol No.712543149 [Report] >>712543223
>>712542931
ill fix this. thanks
Anonymous No.712543223 [Report]
>>712543149
you can also shoot the pistol while it is reloading towards the end
petrol No.712543239 [Report]
>>712542465
thanks!