Hi, I recently released a demo of my new game Concrete Veil on Itch.io
Trailer: https://youtu.be/TM0GRcJpdFY
Game page: https://p3trol.itch.io/concrete-veil
It is a first-person shooter that combines Quake's pacing in gunfights and Half-Life's thoughtful atmosphere in the environments.
Set in a dystopian city, where towering concrete wall separate the city from the unknown. The world is now controlled by the Private Military Company, that was meant to protect humanity. But now that maintaining this goal no longer makes sense, they are forced to wander the world for eternity.
Game Features:
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Satisfying Gunplay
2 weapon types + melee attack. All polished to perfection. Later there will be more weapon types. Physical prop interaction deepen gunfights even more (knock out enemies by throwing crates or bottles in them or just punch them with your leg ;). Get cover from bullets by picking up metal sheets or other scrap) Every enemy has weak points that are not protected with armor plates. You should find and use them to be more efficient. Full scheme is represented here:
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Highly detailed levels and environments (Not just an arcade-style square box with one repeated texture): Main inspiration for me was Half-Life 2's thoughtful level design and atmospheric environmental art.
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Procedural Physical interaction with enemies and environment:
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Trailer: https://youtu.be/TM0GRcJpdFY
Game page: https://p3trol.itch.io/concrete-veil
Check it out! It's free ;)
>>712529330 (OP)This looks real good! Thanks for sharing, OP!
>combines none of the fun parts into a shit game
why dont you, and I do mean this, buy an ad for somewhere else
>blatant selfbump from 2nd device
Buy a banner ad.
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Art style isn’t unique enough and the animations seems rough, the gun model is a bit pitiful
>>712529330 (OP)What the fuck is this engine? Xash3D or one of the Quake 1/2 engine forks using Source engine assets?
>>712529330 (OP)Damn this looks great! How long did it take you to make this? Downloading now!
game was made by me alone. I just want some feedback
the trailer is a little laggy because i have a potato pc and cannot record gameplay at good res.
>>712529330 (OP)BUY AN AD FAG
bump
>>712529330 (OP)>That blatant stolen HL2 wall textureKill yourself you unoriginal asset-stealing indieshit
>>712529330 (OP)Bro those are 100% stolen source textures.
Good on you for making a game - looks rough shit desu but you'll get better and next time don't blatantly steal art assets
Yes the textures are from source. If i had to make them myself it would take an eternity.
btw a lot of indie games are using sounds/textures from hl2. For example Voices of the void - there are just a little downscaled/pixelated.
Also as you can see the game is completely free and there is no commercial use of assets. All models, animations, code was done by myself. To use music I have permission from artist.
Anyway thanks for the feedback.
Thanks 712529645 and 712529961 I hope you enjoyed the game!
>>712534634i hope someone lights you on fire
Just watched the trailer. I guess I'll check it out. looks interesting enough, definitely a vibe I'm interested in.
That said, those boss battles looked pretty rough. Reminded me of fighting a Borderlands boss while underleveled
>don't steal those pixels from the multi billion dollar corporation
fuck off
>>712529330 (OP)OP is cooking. I hope your game is successful and I'm sending you my energy.
>>712529330 (OP)JFC, why is it so laggy?
>>712535343yeah. maybe i should add phases for the boss or make additional mechanics like movement with dashes, double jumps or something like that.
>>712536151the trailer is a little laggy because i have a potato pc and cannot record gameplay at good res and fps. the game itself has good performance
Yeah fuck it this is pretty much my kind of game. I hope you make a billion dollars.
>>712534824you dropped this
I think you're a gay fucking nigger and your game sucks
Seriously, this shit looks like some sort of cheap boomer shooter mod
>>712529330 (OP)Competent but generic. I’m not an FPS guy though.
Trying to change the resolution doesn't work
It fucked over my 1080p monitor
Reloading after death made my cursor stay on screen
Movement is slow(maybe because i can't bunnnyhop), enemies are too tanky and too accurate at long ranges
The screen effects upon being hit are annoying
Cool game just fix the bugs
>press f to punch
>he kicks
>>712537275definitely will release bugfix soon. Thanks for detailed feedback.
The samefagging compliments to yourself are so obvious, OP, you are an absolute fucking amateur at this.
Your game is shit, and (You) are shit in the rough shape of a human being. Please fuck off and DO NOT come back.
>>712537334Im not a native speaker. so yeah...
>>712529330 (OP)Combat doesn't look engaging, the problem lies more with the enemy design than your mechanics right now
>>712529714>>712529757>internet ads in 2025Don't care if these are shitposts, that'd just be poor marketing
>>712536327Should have made a simple slideshow instead.
Lofi aesthetic is all the rage right now.
Captures HL2 aesthetic and feel quite well, I'm impressed, just one suggestion, lower the fov on your trailers, most people can't take it and it makes them dizzy so they could dismiss it without ever trying it.
>>712536797It's free, retard, go play overwatch or something
>>712538496thanks. this is good feedback
Beat the demo.
To be critical, jumping was inconsistent and sometimes just didn't happen. The boss was pretty neat but mostly a bit of a slugfest. It also needs a few basic options like aim sensitivity. Sometimes the enemies would just mad dash to random things. I think they were super-prioritizing taking cover even if it didn't make much sense.
A lot of moments made me wish I had a grenade. This game needs grenades like crazy. I really liked the look of the final area though and the enemy design is really cool. Basically if you gave me a shotgun and some grenades I would play through these nice environments for a while longer.
>>712538393Yep. Genuinely buy an ad, op. Or if you're an actual site regular go post your shit in agdq instead of making literal shillfarm tier posts on /v/.
>>712539423thanks for feedback. The shotgun is in plans for future updates. Grenades too, maybe ill replace the explosive barrels with grenades
>>712539526i dont have muney :(
>>712529330 (OP)looks cool, i like the world desing. work on the shooting and enemy designs
and try shilling it on r/asmongold
It won't take over my pc right?
>>712541246No. Virus total: https://www.virustotal.com/gui/file/b71d32fecdfcba4d74fc59d6b25389ecb13ed9fd1e08bc7695e2796963d06d84/detection
>>712538564A turd on the road is free too, doesn't mean I have to praise you for shitting it out
>>712529330 (OP)good concretecore op, i like it
>>712541601Do you stop to bitch and moan at road turds.
>>712541928This thread is akin you shitting on my porch, of course I will tell you that you're a fucking retard.
>>712542045>my porch/v/ is mine tho
>>712529330 (OP)bump for something that actually looks like it was made with passion, gl anon
>>712542090Fuck off m00t, you sold the site, remember?
>>712542496I mean spiritually~
>>712541601>A turd on the road is free too, doesn't mean I have to praise you for shitting it outI don't see that I asked for praise anywhere. I need objective feedback and some people here gave it.
It's not half bad honestly but there are a ton of bugs. My resolution keeps getting reset to 3k something even after I tell it to be 1920x1080.
The game set a checkpoint at the start of the game where I was getting shot with 20 hp, so I revive, get shot and die in less than 1 second, repeat. Can't even duck into cover
The bots just run straight past me until they finally decide to stop and shoot.
Overall not that bad
>>712542931ill fix this. thanks
>>712543149you can also shoot the pistol while it is reloading towards the end
