This is TJ from the (cancelled) dating sim Sisters of Cheyenne High.

His game flopped harder then Lehman Brothers in the 00s , netted a total of 50(fifty) bucks and ends up being cancelled after the release of one(1) demo.

How would you fix his design so he would be more appealing to his target audience?

>>713307496 (OP)
Stop posting this dog shit, fgt

>>713307496 (OP)
Nobody cares about the appearance of VN protags, except you, homo.

>>713307651
>>713307657
Why so mad?

I wouldn't change anything. He's perfect for taking dicks.

This is fucking embarrassing dude, seek help.

>>713308515
Why are you so mad again, dude?

This just killed a kid Pauline thread

>>713308515
>actual mentally ill fuckers remaking the same thread over and over for years
>I sleep
>a thread being posted again because jannies accidently deleted it
>OMG UNACCEPTABLE
Why?

>>713307496 (OP)
Huh, so he self harms? Bold concept, but if it's a dating sim, I think the focus is on the girls.

>>713307496 (OP)
He looks fine the way he is, depending on the setting, and I doubt his design was the only factor in why your game didn't do well. What do the girls look like?

>>713307496 (OP)
Why the fuck am I seeing MC-kun in a dating sim in the first place?
Show me the girls front and center, make every scene and cg from a 1st person PoV

>>713307496 (OP)
was it a sissification simulator? why is he so cute
best dating sims mc are either completely offscreen or are masculine faceless dudes

>>713307496 (OP)
show the love interests
if you wanna talk about your twink bf so much just make an otome game with him as the sole heroine

>>713313419
What

Need ducks

Someone gen him sucking dicks

>>713307496 (OP)
If it's a dating sim we need to know what the characters who you'd be dating are, not the protag.

his design is probably not the issue and the real problem is more than likely whatever writing the game had, if its that terrible in the demo that makes people drop it before it even comes out

>>713316824
I'm guessing it was really fucking boring. If it were actively bad you'd see people make a fuss over it but things that just get glossed over are usually just boring.

>>713317184
Yeah it's boring

Someone draw this guy

>>713307496 (OP)
mc looks pretty interesting tho. gives you a desire to learn about his (sad) backstory, which also could be used ot hide a twist or something.

He seems in the shy side but without falling into the generic shy beta. If people didt like him, seems more like a problem with whatever premise or (lack of) hook the game had. Like, throw that character into a dead game setting and you have kino

>>713307496 (OP)
Why do autists pick the worst forgotten obscure dead shitty games to obsess over. Move the fuck on already.

>>713307496 (OP)
he's kinda cute. they should have made it a gay vn

>>713319057
>Nooooo! You must be one of the 4 million NPCs following the latest things!!!!! Stop! Obsessing! Over! Obscure! Things!

>>713319394
Your shit aint even niche it's just irrelevant forgotten dogshit that you only like because you have brain damage. Notice how you HAVE to make threads on /v/ that die after 50 posts because literally no one else is going to talk about it on the internet, anywhere, ever. What a sad existence. Even the dumbest gorilla nigger westernslop VN probably has a dedicated community somewhere.

>>713319914
>please DONT talk about obscure things!
Why.

>>713307496 (OP)
He's cute, what did the girls look like? I'd probably quit out of a dating sim if I wanted to fuck the MC more than the actual dateable characters.

>>713308515
sounds like OP is trying to force another Snoot Game

I thought he was one of the love interests

>>713307496 (OP)
>no tits
There's your problem

>>713320594
Why is that bad?

>>713322246
Idk

>>713321545
He is a boy???

>>713323661
Idk could've been a cuntboy

Better as a LI.

>>713307496 (OP)
No changes. He's sexy and I want to fuck him.

>6 hours later
>STILL hasn't posted any of the love interests

>>713325945
Google it nigga

>>713325978
Yeah

>>713325978
Anyways, one of the girls here

who cares?

>>713328665
>SCP
I need to know
Was this still a good idea when you came up with it?

>>713328765
I didn't make it

OP are you a girl? This post seems like an actual autistic girl made it

>>713329327
no? why do you think so?

>>713329523
Just seems like something an autistic girl would be really invested in. No judgment to you, the post just really seemed like something an autistic girl would talk about

>>713329606
how?vibe?

>>713330632
General vibe yea. The obsessive posting over this completely unknown vn gives off hyperfixation vibes that autistic girls I've talked to have had

>>713330632
Yeah, you're acting like a comlete and total fag so I just assumed. Glad you cleared it up for me.

>>713322246
The creator of Snoot game didn't ask other people to make it for him. He just started working on it and posted progress. And then people got interested and started also working on it.

>>713329606
not really

autistic

he needs to get better bitches

brow

H

Fag

Made for Malo

I just assume OP is the one who made this shit design because no one else create make this thread over and over again for some literal who game

>>713340113
Not really

>>713311364
The archive still works!? What's the domain now?

>>713328976
Bro you might not have made it but you're now spiritually tethered to it by posting about it at 7AM on a Sunday. Don't fight it, just embrace the cringe-core legacy.

>>713340536
Fine.

>>713340508
Arch.b4k.dev

>>713307496 (OP)
Turn him into the emo faggot route in a yaoi instead. Nice blatant question by the dev by the way, faggot. I'm gonna draw yaoi rape of him.

>>713341278
You wouldn't.

>>713343402
Oh yeah I would

>>713341278
You wouldn't you little pussy.

This design screams Tumblr

>>713307496 (OP)
If this was a dating sim vn, my guess is the problem isnt him nothing is overtly wrong with the design at least. Probably the marketting and or romantic interests were inadequate.

The girls suck

>>713307496 (OP)
If a dating sim fails it's usually due to the romance options. Anyway just give him a haircut I suppose and less bandages.

>>713347749
What haircut would you give him instead of the greasy Joaquin?

>>713347915
Just a normal medium cut like a typical anime MC.

>>713307496 (OP)
Make xer trans

>>713347991
That just makes him generic, no? I say amplify his wet dog loser vibes instead.

Just do whatever game company does, reuse the assets in a different game. Start over with a new idea, and save money by reusing old assets. Fromsoft does it all the time.

>>713343402
>>713345584
You're right, I realized he's some cringeworthy scp oc donut steel while googling for references and that turned me off massively on getting him raped.

>>713348393
Knew it.

>>713348393
>ohhh I can't do it because *excuses*!
Modern 4chan can't even draw a simple picture.sad!

>>713348436
It would've been another matter if it was just some retarded indie devs character but op is most likely the faggot that made this oc donut steel which instantly killed all interest to draw it.

>>713348650
Not really.
The guy that made that is a genuine pedophile. Like convicted and all. I doubt a prisoner could have the luxury to use the internet.

>>713348719
Maybe that's good advice for op then. Don't use characters made by convicted pedos as your main character. HAH

>>713307496 (OP)
That image isn't related to the VN though. Its artstyle was a lot more amateurish if I recall correctly.

>>713348940
Excuses excuses excuses

>>713307496 (OP)
Change it from sisters to brothers.
He was made for cock.

>>713349593
Wdym

>character redesign thread
>8 images, none of which being anything remotely close to an idea
Ladies and gentlemen, the modern 4chan.

>>713350202
NYPA

>>713350936
>no, I am not going to try anything because......NYPA
Why?

>he thought there's actual human beings on 4chan
The reason you don't really see anything creative here is because the only people left are either literal bots or third world children that simply doesn't have the resources to make shit.

>>713352317
Are you a bot?

Stop

>>713348157
no one wants to play as a loser

>>713355293
Something something self insert, right? I remember that tomoko chick being popular

gayyyy

Vay

Bruh