>>717727063
Go through games you have played and pay attention to the quality of life of the ui experience. How many button presses does it take to cancel a menu or revert settings or apply settings? How intuitive are controls when moving between menu items? Do you have to select an option to change the settings or do you have to go through another menu to get there?
>>717727206
The tone is good, but if you want to vary your pitch check out different pentatonic scales in different keys. I couldn't tell by ear if that is what you did but check C major pentatonic is sounds very similar.