>>718461829 (OP)
In these posts, im gonna rewrite some of FFVII remake, keeping most of it but changing some intents in some scenes and general presentation. Im doing this as an excercise on my own writing and for autistic purposes since i always wanted to be a game dev/producer or some shit but im stuck as an engineer earning 6 figures doing excel sheets.
>Chapter 1
Overall the same, except rewrite the scene of the bombing. In the remake, the bomb doesnt do shit and Shinra willingly destroys its own reactor. In my version of that scene, Avalanche successfully manages to disable the reactor, but it doesnt trigger a big explosion. We see a scene of president shinra and heidegger discussing this event. Shinra asks what about the coutnermeasure against bombs, heidegger says it didnt work and the president is pissed. then instructs Heidegger to destroy the reactor completely then, implying two things: Its a pain in the ass to fix the reactor and the president doesnt want avalanche to win without any casualities, so they willingly escalate things so the public reception of avalanche. Just a fix in presentation.
>Chapter 2:
Overrall the same, but change two things: the first sephiroth appearance. In my version of the cutscene, the time Cloud takes to walk to sephiroth is reduced, and we no longer hear them talking. Instead, Sephiroth just walks and walks away, and we get one scene of Sephiroth looking back at Cloud, with a serious/expressionless look (basically pic related). Scene ends, sephiroth banishes and Cloud is like "wtf was that". All of this, triggered by the fire memories from nibelheim that we see when the cutscene starts.
Second, i would remove Sephiroth appearance when you meet Aerith, completely.
Im not quite sure what to do with the whispers, specially since i dont know whats part 3 gonna do, but i dont think they are bad here.
>Chapter 3
Change Sephiroth clone attack on Cloud from happy to serious. Remove the sidequest of cat finding. Just that one.
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