Thread 58121899

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>>58121899 (OP)
both gen 9 uggos

i'm gonna be honest with you, this is probably the ugliest fan art i've seen posted here since 4chan went back online after the hack.

ESLs shouldn't write dialogue.

>>58122713
gottem UOL

>>58122093
it's literally impossible for frogtards to have an actually correct opinion

>>58122897
Carmine in-game is almost as much of a literal flat stick (thin male body) as Rika

>>58122908
>A child doesn't have a large ass and boobs
Who could have guessed

>>58122713
/thread

>>58121899 (OP)
>Claim to love him
>Too busy fighting over him to save him from drowning
Really says a lot about our society.

>>58121899 (OP)
These bitches can fight all they want, I'm fucking Arven anyway

>>58121899 (OP)
The art and concept are hot, but the way the dialogue is written completely ruins it for me.

>>58122713
Yes we should does

>>58122713
based

>>58122713
>>58123624
Aight lads I'm making an edit to fix this. Should I leave the censored words or make it uncensored?

>>58123792
Make it uncensored.

>>58122985
The funny thing is, that is exactly what would happen.

>>58123799
Aight.
Although I'm noticing now that "he let me play with my pussy" is a fucking retarded answer to "we had sex". Isn't that worse than having sex? Lol.

>>58123986
Depends on how you look at it.

Well I hope that's better at least.

>>58124069
KEK that's better than my edit

>>58124080
MUCH better. You're doing god's work.

>>58124080
I feel like “fuck me in the ass” is a proper escalation instead of “play with my pussy”

But thanks for the edit anon.

>>58124139
Good suggestion, that's kinda what I meant earlier yeah.
I can still change it lol, gimme a sec.

>>58124139
>I feel like “fuck me in the ass” is a proper escalation
Hard disagree. The context is teenagers fooling around, not hardcore porn actors filling out 60 minute quota.

>>58124139
Here we go.
>>58124177
I mean it's a retarded porn scenario anyway, neither of them would say any of this, especially not Nemona.

>>58124177
>A threesome is “just teenagers fooling around”
Anon pls

>>58124147
I have written too much pokegirl smut in my time.

>>58124189
Also I forgot to mention, the funniest part is I'm ESL myself, ETL strictly speaking even. That artist just gotta step it up.
>>58124202
You know what they say, practice makes perfect.

>>58124189
>>58124139
Hold on, I misunderstood what you meant. Pretty sure it's meant to be read left to right, so you got the escalation backwards.
>>58124202
>A threesome is “just teenagers fooling around”
as far as dream scenarios go, 2 girls are milder than sticking it in the shitpipe

>>58124216
No, Carmine speaks first, her speech bubble is higher up. It's correct this way.

>>58124189
>neither of them would say any of this, especially not Nemona.
Nemona would probably get really flustered and embarrassed if someone even suggested that the two of you have sex.

>>58124216
>two girls is milder
They’re not comparing who’s the bigger porn actress, they’re comparing who’s closer with the POV Guy. The funniest bit of the semantics we’re bitching over is the original writer is ESL. The original writer likely doesn’t understand all of the implications of the words they’ve used anyways, so debating over it is retarded.

Also obligatory >A threesome with a teacher isn”t “teenagers just fooling around”

>>58124257
Well in MY horny headcanon, Nemona is a nympho maniac because sex is just like a Pokémon battle. Two sides go back and forth with each other until a big climax!

>>58124274
>Well in MY horny headcanon, Nemona is a nympho maniac because sex is just like a Pokémon battle. Two sides go back and forth with each other until a big climax!
This is what porn artists actually believe.

In all seriousness, I like to think that she's rather innocent and pure when it comes to matters like this. She definitely strikes me as someone who would save herself for a special someone. Although I'm aware this kind of thing is all in good fun, so I don't take it too seriously.

You ALL sound like ESLs to me.

>>58124336
This.

Why is it so common to see latinas and asian girls fighting over white boys?

Ignore it.

>>58124227
By whole 5 pixels.
Here is the original https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/119759517
here is a preceding comic https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/119699207
picrel is the next comic after op
All are left to right.

>>58124274
>Also obligatory >A threesome with a teacher isn”t “teenagers just fooling around”
Nah, fuck you guys. You must have have grown up with unrestricted internet access, because anal is way more degenerate than a threesome as far as fantasies go. Of course there is a layer of elevated sleaze to the drawing, what I'm saying is, playing with each other's privates is a much more sensible step in the game of one-upmanship than going from pokemon trading to banging to fudge packing.

Carmine mogs Nemona here both in looks and in romance

>>58121899 (OP)
Bland self-insert characters with harems that fight over them is the most underage shit imaginable, come back when you're 18.

>>58124336
It's not funny when it's stupidly obvious what the censored word is. Plus, Carmine saying they had sex isn't even censored properly.

>>58124350
Happens to me all the time too

>>58125508
>It's not funny when it's stupidly obvious what the censored word is.
That is exactly what makes it funny.