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Anonymous No.58148625 >>58152834
Fanfic/Fan Work Thread
A thread for the creation and discussion of fan fiction and other fanworks - anything that involves a story and/or reading. What've you been reading? What've you been writing? What would you like to see more of?

>Thread question:
If there was a list of unusual deaths in Pokemon, what would be listed in it?

>Previous thread:
>>58126686
Anonymous No.58148668 >>58148676 >>58148680 >>58149102 >>58153094 >>58164061
Surely they'll give Diantha some actual characterization and backstory in AZ Legends, right?
Anonymous No.58148676 >>58148680
>>58148668
Finally, someone in this general actually posted fanfiction.
Anonymous No.58148680 >>58149818
>>58148668
She would be what, almost 40 if it takes from 5 to 10 years after XY?

>>58148676
That's just cruel.

Fuck Paldea btw, weakest region ever
Anonymous No.58148742 >>58148766 >>58148913
Nemona scales to Red btw.
Anonymous No.58148766 >>58149491
>>58148742
Wot? She trashed in the gacha, she scales to Silver if we take Geeta's word at face value and Silver is a canon shitter
Anonymous No.58148913 >>58148959 >>58149491
>>58148742
What? Red trashed her in the gacha and if we take Geeta's words at face value she's equal to a young Silver who is a canon weakling
Anonymous No.58148920
Schizogiblefag here, I am finally done with this chapter.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63874153/chapters/180572121
Picrel btw.
Anonymous No.58148959
>>58148913
They also deemed Gold's win non-canon because god forbid the first protagonist isn't the most special mary sue out there
Anonymous No.58149049
>gachashit for coomers
>canon
KEKAROO
Anonymous No.58149102 >>58149130 >>58149348
>>58148668
She was a child actress, you'd be hard pressed to make something interesting out of that
Anonymous No.58149130 >>58149164
>>58149102
>She was a child actress, you'd be hard
Anonymous No.58149164 >>58149278 >>58149312 >>58166487
>>58149130
This post makes me wonder how many politician and CEO fics there are. There's New Normal, and I guess maybe Hard Enough counts, but what else?
Anonymous No.58149190
Dumb question, would AZ be the type of person to call a young person a “lad” or “lass”? I’m trying to write an interaction with him and an oc and it occurred to me
Anonymous No.58149278
>>58149164
I had an idea for a cyberpunk alternate universe setting where all the regions were part of one giant mega city, and each of the gyms was instead pretty legalized gangs that had 'company rights'. So each gang was legally a corporation in the eyes of the law and was allowed to allocate the resources within their territory (AKA, the people) how they saw fit. Story would start by following a bunch of kids from Pallet Street as they start their own gang to keep their neighborhood safe before escalating.

But I've already got other fics going and if I start another one I will officially be that author who starts shit an never finishes it.
Anonymous No.58149312
>>58149164
I had an idea for a shadow gym circuit where illegal moves/sex are allowed, one of the leaders was a mayor
Anonymous No.58149348 >>58149401 >>58164166
>>58149102
Fuck you. In spite of being raised in the world of a child actress and of nobility, and continung to become her region's most popular actress, model and strongest trainer (current Grand Ducchess too btw), she remains kind, and fair, and genuine. A lesser person might have become corrupted by such an elite upbringing and lifestyle, she could have turned into a monster like Lysandre did, but she did not. She remained grounded, and humble, and earned every right to be where she stands. I want to see what drives her, what keeps her humble, how she handles the pressure of having so many responsabilities, etc. There is so much they can do with this character because they haven't done anything with her yet.
Anonymous No.58149401 >>58149520 >>58164166
>>58149348
tru
honestly she couldve been popular as cynthia if she had like 5 more sentences of dialogue and pixel art as opposed to 3D
Anonymous No.58149491 >>58149535 >>58152038
>>58148766
>>58148913
>a-actually, she scales to silver
>oh cool, so Silver scales to Gold who beat Red, so Nemona canonically scales to Red—
>a-ackshually Gold never beat Red because this is an alternate universe but also its canon to the rest of the franchise because gamefreak wrote the one true canon of the series into a phone app for porn addicts
Gachashit isn't canon
Anonymous No.58149520 >>58149821
>>58149401
ugly hairstyle dashed any hopes of that
Anonymous No.58149535
>>58149491
Silver doesn't scale to Gold at all tho, unless you wanna use PokéSpe
Anonymous No.58149818
>>58148680
My penis isn't ready for mature milf Diantha
Anonymous No.58149821
>>58149520
This, her hairstyle is terrible.
Anonymous No.58150426 >>58150639
Do you think there's a Mr Skin-type website in the Pokemon world that archives female gym leader photos with revealing clothing and voyeur shots?
Anonymous No.58150639
>>58150426
Since streaming is a thing in the Pokémon world now I don't see why not, chances are that Leon has one in Galar already
Anonymous No.58151055 >>58151259 >>58151432 >>58151467 >>58151720 >>58151912 >>58151933 >>58153102 >>58164509
>want to include certain pokemon in my MC's team because they're thematically fitting for them and the story
>but a few of those pokemon are overly popular in fics so if I use them I'll feel dirty and unoriginal
Fuck every basic bitch out there who shoehorned a gyarados into their MC's team. Yes I am bashing 50% of Kanto fics right now.
Anonymous No.58151259
>>58151055
>give my characters thematically appropriate mons
>the main characters end up with the Blastoise, Charizard, Venusaur, Pikachu, and Meowth among their teams
>feel unbothered because I focus on what improves the narrative over arbitrary standards of uniqueness
Feels good man. Walk your path and be ignore the fallen who could not walk it as well as you.
Anonymous No.58151432
>>58151055
Two of my MCs already have KANTOOOOOO starters and a third's getting the last one later. I think the most important thing is you make them interesting to read, and not just be novel with nothing else to it
Anonymous No.58151467
>>58151055
I just go with my favorites which makes me happy and motivated to write about them. You are in a mental prison of your own making. We are the same.
Anonymous No.58151720
>>58151055
Just do it bettter than the basic bitches. Yes that does include finishing.
Anonymous No.58151912
>>58151055
>because they're thematically fitting for them and the story
>Gyarados
So what, is it a representation of their growth from a weakling to a menace? I'm sure you can do this symbolism with other Pokemon.
Anonymous No.58151933
>>58151055
>>but a few of those pokemon are overly popular in fics so if I use them I'll feel dirty and unoriginal
Just use them you faggot, swords are the most common weapon in fiction so does that mean you can't use them? No, sometimes being original isn't about using something nobody else uses but how you use the thing everybody else does.
Anonymous No.58152038
>>58149491
>oh cool, so Silver scales to Gold
SHITver doesn't even scale to Lance, he's barely even Clair tier KEK
Anonymous No.58152075 >>58152213 >>58152266
Imagine if Pokemon existed and looked like giant plastic figures instead of realistic animals
Anonymous No.58152213
>>58152075
>don't realize anything is wrong because I too look like a giant plastic figure, as all humans I've ever seen do

Stop bitching about shallow shit.
Anonymous No.58152266 >>58152276
>>58152075
>instead of realistic animals
Fuck off, must we bring Invincible Pidgey again?
Anonymous No.58152276 >>58152283 >>58152300 >>58152335
>>58152266
I was referring to the ugly pokemon from the Detective Pikachu movie
Anonymous No.58152283 >>58152324
>>58152276
I liked the ugly pokemon. I think the series has room for different interpretations.
Anonymous No.58152300
>>58152276
They look like stuffed animals, no wonder it jobbed to Sonic and was killed for Legendary's Monsterverse
Anonymous No.58152324 >>58152355 >>58152789
>>58152283
I refuse to live in a world where this exists
Anonymous No.58152335
>>58152276
It's the fucking eyes. They're too big.
Anonymous No.58152355
>>58152324
What were they thinking? Though has any live action movie done cute monsters like Pokémon right?
Anonymous No.58152553 >>58152784 >>58153070
>Emma is now in the anime
Kalosanon, will that affect you?
Anonymous No.58152784 >>58153070 >>58153802
>>58152553
Hardly at all. I already know exactly what I want Emma's arc to be, and I already have her team and suit upgrades outlined. At most I might give her a Pokemon from the anime or Z-A as a nod.
Anonymous No.58152789
>>58152324
Then perish.
Anonymous No.58152834 >>58152850
>>58148625 (OP)
Is being eaten and digested alive a usual death in pokemon?
Anonymous No.58152850 >>58164061
>>58152834
Yes, Cynthis has eaten many trainers.
Anonymous No.58153070 >>58153507
>>58152553
>>58152784
iirc, leaks say she gets a mega Malamar?
presumably it was Xerosic's
Anonymous No.58153077 >>58153110
*Insert Generic Villain Leader Name Here* has gained control of *something* and the entire Pokémon world is in jeopardy. What trainers answer the call to help save the world?

Obviously going by canon, damn near none do, but let’s say characters have the ability to help and might want to
Anonymous No.58153094 >>58153118 >>58153824 >>58153881
>>58148668
According to the leakers, there's almost no returning characters.
Even Clemont is absent, despite him being the one who made Lumiose Tower. And the Tower is one of the central plot-points of the story.
Genuinely deranged behavior from GF in all honestly. They should very well know that XY characters are among the most underdeveloped in the franchise, and instead of bringing some of them back, having them appear in side-quests, have them have main story relevance, etc... they just decide to create a shitton of literally whos and brand new characters instead.
Worst part is that they went and did it with Emma, and we're seeing live how Emma went from absolutely literally who people didn't even know she existed, to character people are now eating up.
I'll say it again: Utterly deranged behavior. Just contrarianism for the sake of it.
Anonymous No.58153102
>>58151055
Reminder that for every retard who cries MUH OVERUSED POKEMON WHY AREN'T YOU USING LITERALLY WHO SHITMONS there's 10 people who eat it up.
Popular things are popular for a reason. Stop listening to hipsters or pretending their opinions matter.
Anonymous No.58153110
>>58153077
You mean MCs/PCs aside? I don't know, maybe Lance and Cynthia?
Anonymous No.58153118
>>58153094
Remember how Wally looks the same as his kid self even though ORAS happened at the same time as FRLG?
Anonymous No.58153507
>>58153070
Might give her that, didn't know Mega Malamar was a thing. I gave her all of her old team from Xerosic so that'll work well. She already used Malamar to great effect against Chien-Pao
Anonymous No.58153802 >>58153859
>>58152784
>upgrades
Will you make her stronger than fighting experts like Korrina, Bea, Bruno, Chuck and so on?
Anonymous No.58153824
>>58153094
All your favorite characters plus abilities will be returning in the DLC Expansion, only 39.99 plus tax (two separate ones, the first one is shit but you need it to buy the second one btw)
Anonymous No.58153859 >>58153900 >>58153991
>>58153802
In my setting she's a tad rusty from lack of serious threats to fight but nonetheless spent 8+ years as effectively the local Kamen Rider. She's definitely a capable fighter even without her Pokemon, and at least on paper can briefly reach higher peaks than any but the highest tier martial artists, though her suit has a limited battery capacity for high-stress operation. And strong-enough Pokemon are capable of damaging the suit with moves that will limit its effectiveness; she was still susceptible to being immobilized by Chien-Pao's Blizzard.

Give her a modernized suit that stacks 8 years of the Pokemon World's technological acceleration onto its existing abilities, and she'd probably be pretty incredible. One might even call it Excellence.
Anonymous No.58153881 >>58154062
>>58153094
>They should very well know that XY characters are among the most underdeveloped in the franchise
While you're right if the timeskip is really more than just a couple of years I get their decision, it's way too risky to age familiar characters that much
>But Red and Green
The exception not the rule, just look at all the other characters in SM/USUM and Anabel was a literal who in terms of relevance and she got thrown aside in USUM
Anonymous No.58153900 >>58154043
>>58153859
Would she lose to any aurafag psychic with precognition, barriers and whatever other bullshit they can do?
Anonymous No.58153991 >>58154043 >>58156421
>>58153859
Just give her an omniring and she instantly scales to Champion level bro
Anonymous No.58154043 >>58154179
>>58153900
I don't really read aura/cultivation type fics so I don't know what they're capable of on the average. If I were to use capeshit as a universal benchmark, on a really good day she could probably take on the Sinister Six. But she's also a trainer first and a fighter second, she's only really going to throw hands if you're someone she finds reprehensible enough to want to hurt you more than beat you in a Pokemon battle. Her biggest weakness would probably be intangible forces she couldn't avoid or overpower, like TK or something, but she'd probably have her Pokemon help her overcome things like that. Perhaps the ideal upgrade might be something that allows her to share her Pokemon's abilities.

>>58153991
Never ever.
Anonymous No.58154062 >>58154192
>>58153881
It's XY characters though. Literally no fucking one gives a shit about XY character.
And look at Emma. If there was a set of characters where this wouldn't be an issue at all whatsoever then this was the time.
They have all to gain and nothing to lose by revitalizing the XY characters.
And it's not like they're all that risk-adverse considering how they went and ruined Ingo and Emmet lives.

>just look at all the other characters in SM/USUM
They brought back Grimsley and made him look like someone who became a hobo from losing all of his riches because he became a gambling addict.
I'm 50/50 of the Battle Tree guest characters.They're clearly just meant to be cameos without much importance, but not giving them new designs was indeed lazy as hell.

I certainly do see your point, at how it is a "risk", but if they're gonna keep making sequels like this, if the timeline is gonna keep moving, it's a problem they will not be able to avoid forever. For example, if whenever we get Legends Alola, and it's sequel, are we seriously not gonna see Lillie come back from Kanto? How about Legends Unova and Emmet doesn't even appear or gets brought-up even once? That'd be utterly inane and you know it.
Not bringing back old characters is a definitive miss decision on GF's part. It was already bad enough that the cameos stopped happening on the normal games, now they're not even gonna happen on proper sequels? Just silly.
Anonymous No.58154179 >>58154191
>>58154043
>Sinister Six
Can't those faggots beat the Avengers in a good day?
Anonymous No.58154191 >>58154604
>>58154179
Depends on the Avengers and depends on the day. Like, I'm picturing Shocker, Electro, Doc Ock, Rhino, Vulture, and maybe Scorpion in here. Most of em are really dangerous, but cap out at chucking cars around and aren't exceedingly speedy - and the ones more powerful than that are kind of dipshits. Somebody agile and with enough wits to stay out of reach and punch to do some damage can wear them down.
Anonymous No.58154192
>>58154062
>are we seriously not gonna see Lillie come back from Kanto?
Retconned in USUM because people literally cried about that, weird ass choice but it happened since she went to Kanto to find a cure for Lusamine
Anonymous No.58154409 >>58154415 >>58154523 >>58156141
What will their dialogue be when they meet the player at the end of the game?
Anonymous No.58154415
>>58154409
Such delicious thighs...
Anonymous No.58154523
>>58154409
>Is this the new kid you wanted us to meet, old man? The one that saved the region while we were away?
>Heh, I guess you could say all four of us are Pokemon Legends, AZ.
Anonymous No.58154604 >>58154644
>>58154191
Comic book canon is all over the place but isn't the Rhino an ultra sandbagger? Can't he go toe to toe with the Hulk.
Anonymous No.58154644
>>58154604
In some cases yes, but like I said he'd dumb muscle for the most part, and even though he's very tough he's not invulnerable. Spider-Man isn't going balls-to-the-wall breaking his own fists just to knock Aleksei out. I think someone with enhanced strength on the level of tossing cars around what it takes to put him down, the tricky part is not getting nabbed and squished in the meantime.
Anonymous No.58155006 >>58155148 >>58156091 >>58156697
How do the pokemon courts handle mind control? How harsh of a sentence is it to use your Pokemon to knowingly mind control/possess another human, even if it's to do something very minor or as a prank? Is someone under hypnosis absolved of any crime they do?
Anonymous No.58155148
>>58155006
They mind control you and the psychic to figure out the severity and motivation of what you did to decide the punishment. Then the court psychic is mind controlled so we many punish them mind controlling you. Then we mind control the psychic auditor.
Anonymous No.58155696 >>58155719
I have this idea with the omni-ring where it malfunctions and starts megaevolving and dynamaxing Pokemon without control
Anonymous No.58155719
>>58155696
Is that really a bad thing tho? Sounds like a good cheat unless it has some side-effect where the Pokémon go crazy or it drains your life force/aura
Anonymous No.58155725
Why don't people simply use the omni-ring to primal or even origin form their pokemon? It's such a no-brainer to do that instead of poopa evolve or poopamax.
Anonymous No.58156091 >>58160858
>>58155006
Are you immune to hypnosis?
Anonymous No.58156141 >>58156688
>>58154409
>…
>…
>…?
Haha, get it? It’s like Red.
Anonymous No.58156421
>>58153991
you MUST buy the omniring, multiple even
Anonymous No.58156688
>>58156141
This won't happen because it's impossible for a fr*nch person to be silent
Anonymous No.58156697 >>58156722
>>58155006
How would mind control and possession be charged in our world? Kidnapping? Assault?
Anonymous No.58156722
>>58156697
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hypnosis#Crime
Anonymous No.58157259 >>58157277 >>58158067
Can you terastelize your Aura?
Anonymous No.58157277
>>58157259
You mean to create a crystal armor? Don't you need that stupid turtle?
Anonymous No.58157345 >>58157512
Anonymous No.58157512 >>58157882 >>58158597
>>58157345
Oh boy I get to post this again.
Anonymous No.58157882
>>58157512
>Post-apocalyptic pokeworld that got nuked to oblivion but Dittos try to roleplay as nature, other pokemon and humans, some even forget that they were Dittos to begin with.
Anonymous No.58158063
What regions would illegalize Pokemon draw porn? I think Galar and Kalos would
Anonymous No.58158067 >>58158194 >>58158418
>>58157259
Aura has no established rules or mechanisms beyond using it can kill you so you can do whatever.
Anonymous No.58158194 >>58158439
>>58158067
>beyond using it can kill you
Most power systems kill you when you overextend yourself
Anonymous No.58158418 >>58158439 >>58158472
>>58158067
anime aura is just ki from Dragon Ball. It lets you fly, attack, read minds, etc.
Anonymous No.58158439 >>58158472
>>58158194
Yeah but only aura kills you when you use it to grow a tree.
>>58158418
If that's how you want it to work, then that's how it works.
Anonymous No.58158472
>>58158439
>aura kills you when you use it to grow a tree.
It was a giant crystal three that was basically its own region inside with all kinds of ecosystems connected to Mew's life force and everything around it to be fair.

But yeah >>58158418
I think this is the easiest path
Anonymous No.58158597
>>58157512
Ditto is such a cute little fella I don't mind it taking over.
Anonymous No.58159121 >>58159146 >>58159170 >>58163086
So is Devon evil or what? They use infinity energy to as energy source which means he's killing a lot of Pokémon.
Anonymous No.58159146 >>58159167 >>58159227
>>58159121
It doesn't necessarily have to mean killing pokemon, it could be as "harmless" as something like drawing blood.
And aren't all modern pokeballs made with infinity energy? In that case all the other major manufacturers are in on it. Devon is just the first to discover how to translate infinity energy into a practical power source.
Anonymous No.58159167 >>58159172 >>58159177
>>58159146
Isn't Devon the that wiped all the Draconid people?
Anonymous No.58159170 >>58159193
>>58159121
Was infinity energy the same as Yveltal/Xerneas’ energy? Is natural energy the same as infinity energy?
Anonymous No.58159172
>>58159167
I think that was a manga thing.
But even if it wasn't, the Draconids deserve it.
Anonymous No.58159177
>>58159167
>*The one
I fucked up there
Anonymous No.58159193 >>58159203
>>58159170
Infinity Energy is Pokemon bioenergy.
>]And what energy source could power such a dreadful weapon? Do you know? You see... It ran on the life energy of Pokémon. The energy that could be gained by the sacrifice of so many Pokémon..."
>"Devon Secret Investigation Report"
>"The development on new energy turned out to be true. The energy that uses Pokémon's bioenergy is called Infinity Energy."
Infinity is what powered the Ultimate Weapon, yeah. It's not literally that Yveltal and Xerneas energy is Infinity Energy as a whole. It's just their bioenergy that is Infinity Energy the same as that of any other Pokemon.
Natural Energy is, well, natural. It's what Groudon and Kyogre used to fight for and turns them into Primal. They're different.
Honestly, that they just drop us that Devon is successful because of Infinity Energy and leave it at that despite always being told how Infinity Energy is basically using Pokemon as batteries until they die is really fucked up. Horrible look on Steven.
Anonymous No.58159203 >>58159212
>>58159193
>basically using Pokemon as batteries until they die is really fucked up. Horrible look on Steven.
Dumb draconidder, shut the fuck up before Devon does another Meteor Impact on your asses. There's a huge difference between drawing infinity energy to power a supernuke and drawing infinity energy to power a lightbulb.
Anonymous No.58159212 >>58159215
>>58159203
They were using Infinity Energy to throw a Infinity Energy Rocket nuke at the meteor too...
Anonymous No.58159215
>>58159212
The captive draconidders finally had a use. Good! Good!
Anonymous No.58159225
People say
>Why do they need weapons when they have Pokémon?
But then why do they have vehicles when Pokémon exist?
Why do they eat meat when Pokémon exist and are intelligent?
Why do they have anything at all when there are Pokémon?
Why is technology advancing when there are Pokémon?
Anonymous No.58159227 >>58159229 >>58159234 >>58159520 >>58160670
>>58159146
>like drawing blood
Anonymous No.58159229 >>58159249 >>58159259 >>58159520
>>58159227
What the hell is this?
Anonymous No.58159234
>>58159227
How unfortunate that a sinkhole formed localized entirely around your house. Your death will be mourned, and the ranger who was in charge of monitoring the foundational stability of your area will be fired.
Anonymous No.58159249 >>58159406 >>58160670
>>58159229
They're a breed of horseshoe crabs that have blue blood which is useful in certain products, so naturally there's a business around capturing them en masse and harvesting their blood. Laws are in place to keep them from bleeding the horseshoe crabs dry, but in practice the laws are ineffective since they still bleed the crabs so much that they typically soon die after being released.
It's a joke of beurocratic incompetence and corporate short-sighted greed.
Anonymous No.58159259 >>58159406
>>58159229
Horseshoe crab blood farms.
Their blue copper based blood has unique antimicrobial properties and is used to test if lab or medical equipment are sterile.
Anonymous No.58159406
>>58159249
>>58159259
I will sound like a faggot but that's just cruel
Anonymous No.58159520
>>58159227
>>58159229
Rare candies aren't going to make themselves
Anonymous No.58159599 >>58159678
Use items.
Anonymous No.58159678 >>58159755
>>58159599
As a human or battles? I'm still thinking about the backpack, should I make it normal or use SCIENCE where it turns things into data so you can carry almost anything without weight problems like in the games, the running shoes should increase base speed to super human levels? There's the recoil factor where the body won't be able to withstand moving at high speeds too
Anonymous No.58159755 >>58159768
>>58159678
The recoil also gets turned into data bro
Anonymous No.58159768
>>58159755
Are humans even real?
Anonymous No.58159805 >>58159861
Anonymous No.58159835 >>58159844 >>58159859
>Kyogre and Groudon eat natural energy
If you dumped them into Naruto’s world, would they become sages?
Anonymous No.58159844
>>58159835
Anon, they are sages.
Anonymous No.58159859
>>58159835
Maybe?
Anonymous No.58159861
>>58159805
What a coincidence, Slenderman just showed up in my fic.
Anonymous No.58159906 >>58159924 >>58159949 >>58160061
>even reddit is tired of the memeta knowledge SI that knows more stuff than the natives themselves
I don't read SI stuff, is it really getting that bad for them of all people to complaint?
Anonymous No.58159924
>>58159906
I don't do a lot of looking but it doesn't seem that bad. They're probably falling into the Vicky/Jordinio/Borne/New Normal traps since they're some of the most popular fics and also the most egregious when it comes to the MC knowing more than anyone else. Because, surprise, people like power fantasy isekais.
There are plenty of SI that don't know a whole lot, they just gotta look past the top of the first page.
Anonymous No.58159949 >>58161290
>>58159906
There’s (finally) some pushback sentiment-wise on it I’m seeing. But view counts on Spacebattles for SI stories vs view counts on other sites skew heavily to SI Memeta knowledge protags still being overall far more popular. There’s also so many of those stories that no one needs help finding new material.
Anonymous No.58160061 >>58160066
>>58159906
>Taking reddit contrarianism seriously
lmao
r/pokemonfanfiction/ is pathetically small too, their voices are not worth hearing.
Isekai SI continues being strong as hell be it in Pokemon or in any other fandom.
Anonymous No.58160066 >>58160109 >>58160494
>>58160061
>in any other fandom.
I think only Fate lacks the same number of SI stuff, maybe? Won't really check because I really hate Fate
Anonymous No.58160109 >>58160120
>>58160066
I've read some attempts but they are vastly outnumbered by Shirou or Gudakowank, the former being horribly mischaracterized because few actually read Fate while the latter is literally already an SI.
Both are infinitely more tolerable than Worm fics. I've genuinely never seen a character more unbelievably wanked in fics ever. Taylor wouldn't even be the main character but the moment her character is even mentioned, the rest of the responses are just Muh Queen of Escalation ad nauseam.
Your SI will never ever match the might of Alt Trigger or Alt Power Taylor.
Anonymous No.58160120 >>58160220
>>58160109
>Muh Queen of Escalation
Heard of that, never understood it. What's the deal? I know her powers are bug control or something and that the villains are a godlike Superman that exists outside of time and space and a girl that can manipulate (?) luck or something
Anonymous No.58160220 >>58160345 >>58161101 >>58161563
>>58160120
Her powers are perfect control over all invertebrates within a few blocks and limitless multitasking. She regards this as a pretty weak ability so to compensate, she goes into most fights with extreme brutality.
This is where the escalation part goes into effect because she keeps going all out in every confrontation and has to keep one up-ing the previous fight because her enemies are also getting more and more ridiculous, the story starts with a chinese cartel boss whose power is to turn into a dragon and gets stronger and heals faster the longer he fights to apocalypse lizard-thing that sunk Japan by spamming infinite tsunamis, all within the first 8 arcs out of 30. And that's about how far most fics get.
Eventually, in the end of Worm her power is now absolute control over every human being, her range is now multiversal. And the way she defeated the big bad Superman was throwing waves and waves of superheroes and villains from all dimensions before realizing the best way to beat him is by giving him ultra depression via making copies of his dead wife for him to kill.
So now what fanfics do is that they give her a broken power and then write the plot in a way that lets her min max her power to an unfathomably competent degree so that every conflict is rendered moot. And when she doesn't have a different power and isn't the main character, have the actual main character talk about how cool or scary or how much potential Taylor is and has. And if it's an SI, talk about how she has live to kill Alien God Superman because no one else can.

The girl who can manipulate luck's actual power is to know precisely what actions to execute to accomplish any task and being able to follow them perfectly. Suitably named Path to Victory.
Anonymous No.58160345 >>58160359
>>58160220
I swear to god, if you’re the “ESCALATION!” fag I’m going to chimpout.
Anonymous No.58160359
>>58160345
Nah I'm not. Not like it's the same thing, worm escalation is just power creep with a fancier epithet. Completely different.
Anonymous No.58160494 >>58160897
>>58160066
Isn't fate already pretty much a SI by virtue of having a generic blank slate no-personality doormat pussyfooted average appearance virgin MC?
Anonymous No.58160670
>>58159227
>>58159249
I'm going to use my memeta knowledge to create Kabuto blood farms. Its going to be yuge.
Anonymous No.58160858
>>58156091
Aura power is directly related to brain damage
Anonymous No.58160897
>>58160494
If you mean the original VN, no, Shirou is a very defined character, and picking typical SI choices often leads to bad ends.
Anonymous No.58161101
>>58160220
>Muh WEAKEST but ACTUALLY STRONGEST powers
Huh, I suppose I get why you say spacebattles is obssessed with this , they love this kind of slop.

But so does /a/ and /co/ and I've can count the times I find posts talking about the series.
Anonymous No.58161290 >>58161357 >>58161474
>>58159949
I only read Borne of Caution in spacebattles but the format of the fic being posted in the same forum format as comments really gives power to them, people will keep poking at "plotholes" (aka the MC not doing the perfect action in XYZ moment) trying to subtly or not so-subtly pressure the creator to make it "smarter", the obvious conclusion is a power fantasy, but instead of a straightforward powerfantasy it's smarter this time because the creator adressed the little details that tickled their autism.
I don't think this type of narrative is bad per se, this is still Pokemon after all, but my impression is that ithe format closes other venues of storytelling.
Anonymous No.58161357 >>58161394 >>58161499
>>58161290
>spacebattles
They believe themselves as the best fanfiction writers in the world but their stuff is weird, there's the grooming faggot of course but there are also hundreds of stories using Hachiman as the MC and making him a genius that can read through any situation because he is/was a loner kid in a completely normal world, they try to be like some moral police where muh underaged characters are kids and as adults they would never reciprocate their feelings but still do nothing to stop them from falling in love with them and sometimes even go out of the way to make them.
Anonymous No.58161394
>>58161357
>oh yeah bro falling in love with the underagerinnos is kinda gross
>btw I'm in this super niche site reading super niche fanfiction of this fringe anime series with tons of fanservice with underage characters
>please don't look my browser history
Anonymous No.58161474 >>58161479 >>58162015 >>58162319 >>58162797
>>58161290
I’m only on QQ right now and while I’ve only gotten a couple “use meta-knowledge more! Use nutrition to gain an edge! Have your MC redefine XYZ” comments, I just had to stop replying to it. I can only assume when I eventually launch on SB it’s going to be 10 times more insufferable.
Anonymous No.58161479 >>58161502
>>58161474
There's a checklist bro, but yes.
Anonymous No.58161499 >>58161507
>>58161357
SB is usually so heavy handed if they spot even a whiff of underage romance. A few months ago, they banned a popular author because he made a "correction" joke in one story.
But then again they did let Hard Enough's implied grooming slide so it all depends on whoever is modding the board at times and if they even read your story.
Anonymous No.58161502
>>58161479
Oh I’ve followed the checklist. I might’ve been the one that solicited the thoughts that made the checklist. This story was the one Isekai/SI story I could stomach to think of writing (I’m actually enjoying it more than I thought desu
Anonymous No.58161507 >>58161548
>>58161499
>author because he made a "correction" joke in one story.
Blue Archive story?
Anonymous No.58161548 >>58161947
>>58161507
https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/the-undying-marine-cod-blackopsverse-pvtmiller-si.1175982/page-8#post-108500630
The situation explained.
Anonymous No.58161563
>>58160220
Taylor would be THE STRONGEST bug type trainer.
Anonymous No.58161947 >>58161967 >>58162017 >>58162056 >>58162198 >>58162348
>>58161548
Man what a shitshow, I'm sure that looking hard enough will get me stories with underaged characters falling in love with the super awesome adult MC using the same shitty memes that killed this guy but I'm also sure it would be done by an oldfag there so it wouldn't be a problem beyond muh silly meme.
Anonymous No.58161967
>>58161947
The fuck?
Anonymous No.58162015 >>58162085
>>58161474
>Use nutrition to gain an edge!
Do people actually say this? I thought nutrition was just a meme we used here, for the obvious reason that it's a dumb superpower in a modern-ish world.
Anonymous No.58162017
>>58161947
Nnghh...bratty website needs correction...!!!
Anonymous No.58162056
>>58161947
>if children ever expressed non-romantic interest in me for being their hero there would be illegal consequences!
basically the mod explaining himself
Anonymous No.58162085
>>58162015
They don’t use those words specifically, but when nutrition is mentioned it’s implied an edge could/should be gained, and I’ve had nutrition mentioned a few times.

Obligatory
>Power Fantasy-slop writer gets mad when their audience wants more Power Fantasy tropes in their slop
Anonymous No.58162198 >>58162347
>>58161947
>can't even write teen love stories
What has the world come to
Anonymous No.58162319 >>58162364
>>58161474
Art thou po town guy? If you've shared the fic here it could be one of us joking.
Anonymous No.58162337 >>58162340 >>58162513
>Didn't get any interest at all on SB and gave up updating there
Wish I knew how to shill myself
Anonymous No.58162340 >>58162585
>>58162337
Tell us about your story and didnit cover the list or at least half of it?
Anonymous No.58162347
>>58162198
(((They))) want to monopolize everything, especially the things they love, and teen love stories comes too close to thing they love most.
Anonymous No.58162348
>>58161947
5k word rule list btw
Anonymous No.58162364 >>58162531
>>58162319
Yes, I am the Poop Town guy. Having too much fun writing Colress btw It was said in a way I didn't think they were joking, I figure it'd be pretty easy to tell if it was an anon from this thread.
Anonymous No.58162513
>>58162337
Tell us then.
Anonymous No.58162531
>>58162364
Hard to know exactly since ip count is gone but I'd reckon there's like maybe 10-15 anons in these threads.
Anonymous No.58162585 >>58162703 >>58163131
>>58162340
I've shilled it plenty of times on here, but for the sake of visibility:

>Adventure/Action story with Romance as a side aspect
>Heavily plot and character-focused
>Set in timeskipped game-verse, the events of Gens 1-9 have taken place at varying points over the prior 15 years
>Mostly-OC main cast, but with game characters appearing to varying degrees of importance

>Driving plotline is that the main character's parents, genetic researchers, vanished without a trace several years ago, and he has now come to Kalos to live with his aunt at their family's chateau.
>When he arrives, he crosses paths with two strange girls with no memories and identical faces, being chased by a mysterious group who bear some passing resemblance to the long-disbanded Team Flare. He attempts to defend them, but is hindered by his overwhelming fear of Pokemon battles.
>In the process of protecting his new friends and overcoming his fears, MC-kun has to uncover his family's secrets to find out what happened to his parents, and the purpose of the one who has declared themselves the future king of a world without Pokemon: Invictus Magnus Oberon.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/59572648/chapters/151934926

>didnit cover the list or at least half of it?
I'd have to see the checklist again to say for sure, I think I had a few of them but I don't think it reached half-list coverage.
Anonymous No.58162703
>>58162585
By checklist he means it's basically gotta be something SB readers can self-insert into (with usual Isekai/ power fantasy tropes sprinkled throughout). Something with actual original thought like your story won't be properly appreciated there. I will forever be jealous of your prose.
Anonymous No.58162797 >>58162809 >>58166518
>>58161474
I found it hilarious how QQ is so tolerant of various fetishes or fictional racism but the moment the main character in a fic I was reading said:
>Homosexuality is a sin
A bunch of people in the thread just have a meltdown.
Anonymous No.58162809 >>58162885
>>58162797
Do you have a link or it got deleted?
Anonymous No.58162885
>>58162809
https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/a-real-human-being-frieren.32410/
It's one of those fanfics where it's only in the nsfw section to get views even though there isn't a shred of depravity anywhere.
Anonymous No.58163086
>>58159121
The trainers were never the good guys in this universe. N and Team Plasma were trying to save Pokemon from their fate of enslavement and war between humans and Pokemon that inevitably ends with the Pokemon winning and the Mystery Dungeon series taking place. Why didn't we listen?
Anonymous No.58163131
>>58162585
Oh, it’s this story. tldr it’s not sloppified enough
Anonymous No.58163585 >>58163591
Does anyone know if magic has been mentioned in any canon? I think there's some magical girl manga and I guess Reburst
Anonymous No.58163591 >>58163659 >>58163877 >>58163887
>>58163585
There was an episode where they made a potion that turned Ash into a Pikachu that lasted until the start of the next episode.
Anonymous No.58163659
>>58163591
I remember Palcomix did a whole series based on that episode
Anonymous No.58163877 >>58163887
>>58163591
>Lily recruited Ash and his friends to search for the ingredients she needed for a spell that would let humans understand the speech of Pokémon. Her ancient spell book is a family heirloom passed down for hundreds of years. Lily is able to read the ancient script inside her book which dates back to the third King of Pokémania. However, when she actually got to perform that spell, she accidentally transformed Ash into a Pikachu
>Voiced by Kugimiya
Anyways I guess that and pic related count
Anonymous No.58163887 >>58163909 >>58163916 >>58163947
>>58163591
>>58163877
Sounds too retarded even for the anime
Anonymous No.58163909
>>58163887
The anime gets very retarded, not stupid is too stupid for it.
Anonymous No.58163916 >>58164007 >>58164065
>>58163887
The anime gets very retarded, no stupid is too stupid for it.
Anonymous No.58163947 >>58164019
>>58163887
If Bill did it with SCIENCE what's stopping magic from doing the same? Pokémon is a ridiculous setting even if they have been trying to get it in our world's level for some reason
Anonymous No.58164007
>>58163916
Which is what inspired me to write fanfiction in the first place.
Anonymous No.58164019
>>58163947
For me, it’s bodying Ash with my OC
Anonymous No.58164061
>>58152850
THEN THIS IS CANON

CRY MAD COON

>>58148668
HOW DID DIANTHA REACT TO CYNTHAI BEING KILLED OFF FOR GOOD HAHA
Anonymous No.58164065 >>58164160
>>58163916
The anime setting is probably the only one where I could do something stupid like in the video without it being out of place because they have stupid magitech weapons already, fun as fuck desu
Anonymous No.58164160 >>58164196
>>58164065
Does the anime have any combat magitech that tops Emma's supersuit and Lysandre's docock arms?
Anonymous No.58164166 >>58164171
>>58149401
>>58149348
Would aldith be as popular as Cynthia from DEFETAING her or what? Would the world respect and fear her strength
Anonymous No.58164171 >>58164175
>>58164166
WILL YOU WRITE THE ALDITH BACKSTIRY YOU OWE ME FOR TWO YEARS NOW OR WHAT

YOU HAVE AN OBLIGATION ITS YOUR HONOR OR GOD SENDS YOU TO GEHENNA
Anonymous No.58164175 >>58164221 >>58167288
>>58164171
I'm gonna be real with you, I don't think that guy even lurks here anymore.
Anonymous No.58164196 >>58164243 >>58166858 >>58166865
>>58164160
J's gun and some other guy that can petrify in seconds, TR mechas that are ridiculous and they also made an armor able to travel the multiverse in the Hisui special, a stick, airships and firearms.

What are their best feats tho? Kicking a Pokémon is a literal nothingburger in the anime and manga
Anonymous No.58164221 >>58164223
>>58164175
What was this in reply to?
Anonymous No.58164223 >>58164229
>>58164221
The board's schizo
Anonymous No.58164229 >>58164232
>>58164223
should’ve known. I thought it was the escalation thing for some reason.
Anonymous No.58164232
>>58164229
To be fair, having a Seviper consume and digest the renowned champion of a region would be quite the escalation.
Anonymous No.58164243 >>58164342 >>58166865
>>58164196
>J's gun and some other guy that can petrify in seconds
J's gun isn't combat, it circumvents combat entirely. You wouldn't get something like in that video if a single press of a button can defeat a continent-towing legendary. Did they ever explain where her gun came from? Why does this random fuck have a laser that can petrify legendaries in one shot, and why doesn't she just use it more? Evidently the ammo isn't expensive since she uses it to capture shitmons, and it's not like she's very limited in the capacity since she's fired multiple times in singular episodes. I hate it, I hate it so much it doesn't fit it doesn't work reeeeeee
>TR mechas that are ridiculous and they also made an armor able to travel the multiverse in the Hisui special
Not having your shit blow up from a strong gust of wind is a major feat. Joke aside, Emma's suit gave her shadow triad ish powers and Lysandre very wisely chose not to escalate against the two children of heaven who double-handedly dismantled his most elite cronies so we never got to see them in action.
>a stick
Hah! Only one person in the entire world has been able to truly wield such a weapon. The stick is not an option for just anyone.
>airships and firearms.
Colress' and AZ's/Xerosic's top them all.

>What are their best feats tho? Kicking a Pokémon is a literal nothingburger in the anime and manga
If we're talking purely in terms of a human beating up pokemon, the Veilstone Swordsmen is peerless.
Anonymous No.58164342 >>58164650
>>58164243
>I hate it, I hate it so much it doesn't fit it doesn't work reeeeeee
She's hot tho
Anonymous No.58164509
>>58151055
Personally I do not give a shit.

Then again I don't normally put overrated mons in my team. What I do insert, however, are what I want or what I feel fits regardless of such factors. The only factor I take into account is the concept of team balance i.e. if type overlap is overkill.
Anonymous No.58164544 >>58164618 >>58167070 >>58168146
Humans are dead in the future btw, or they fucked off to space I guess
Anonymous No.58164618
>>58164544
What if pokemon made those things and either their civilization got reset or they fucked off to another planet?
Anonymous No.58164650 >>58165145
>>58164342
I remember her saying "go back to Digimon, you good-for-nothings" in the spanish dub
Anonymous No.58165145
>>58164650
>it's real
https://youtu.be/qq4x1Y4FSJY?si=j77AjwjTsDgj1UFm
Holy SOVL
Anonymous No.58165713 >>58165818 >>58165842 >>58165895 >>58166419 >>58166428 >>58167147
At what age should a trainer stop wandering around if they didn't make it far as profesional battlers?
Anonymous No.58165818
>>58165713
30 years
Anonymous No.58165842
>>58165713
No limit. There’s veteran trainers still wandering around.
Anonymous No.58165895
>>58165713
No matter the age when they give up and see themselves as stagnant losers they should kill themselves immediately via hara kiri.
Anonymous No.58166419
>>58165713
You can thug it out as a hobo for your entire life.
Anonymous No.58166428
>>58165713
3,001.
Anonymous No.58166487
>>58149164
There's that team aqua leader fic, calls himself poseidon or whatever the fuck.
Anonymous No.58166518 >>58166528 >>58167402
>>58162797
Show religion in a good light or not side with evil deprived hell demons and they'll chimpout, it's actually hilarious in hindsight
Anonymous No.58166528 >>58166588 >>58166754 >>58167402
>>58166518
What, really? So if you have a priest housing homeless people they’ll ban you?
Anonymous No.58166529 >>58166592
What is QQ exactly?
Anonymous No.58166588 >>58166730 >>58166755
>>58166528
Anything that reminds that their depravity are indeed deprived, even showing the Church as a neutral being and not some Isekai Caricature will make some faggots furious in the thread
Anonymous No.58166592 >>58166755 >>58167001
>>58166529
Questionable Questing, spacebattles gooner bro though I don't know if they're as bad and pretentious as SB tho
Anonymous No.58166730
>>58166588
Even if it’s worldbuilding relevant? How boring.
Anonymous No.58166754
>>58166528
Priest housing homeless people always leads to sexual assault and human trafficking.
But when a demon does it it's purely out of the goodness of their heart, plus they'll be heavily encouraged to participate in orgies that will liberate their hearts and minds and maybe they'll even find a demon to move in with.
Anonymous No.58166755 >>58166891 >>58166911 >>58167001 >>58167402
>>58166592
Every story is some flavour of wish fulfillment power fantasy using a cyoa or celestial 'X' system. At anytime, the front pages are filled with SI.
There's an entire section of stories tagged with 'anti-ntr' dedicated to people butthurt about ankoman and how the FGO protag gets NTR'd in a bunch of doujins.
>>58166588
I don't think I've seen it on QQ but I have heard some authors get harassment from various discords for writing Monster Girl Encyclopedia fics where the Mamono are indeed the bad guys because they will directly lead to extinction of humanity.
Anonymous No.58166858
>>58164196
J was mostly written to be the only person capable of capturing the lake trio and delivering them to Team Galactic so that they can wrap up Spear Pillar finale in two episodes straight. That's why Uxie killed her off since they viewed her as the ultimate threat.
Anonymous No.58166865
>>58164243
>>58164196
Either they btfo by legends or outsmarted by children who are Pokémon Masters in training. Hell, one could say that Ash disbanded Team Rocket organization off screen without the TRio even realizing it.
Anonymous No.58166891
>>58166755
>I don't think I've seen it on QQ but I have heard some authors get harassment from various discords for writing Monster Girl Encyclopedia fics where the Mamono are indeed the bad guys because they will directly lead to extinction of humanity.

It annoys me alot, every time an author appears with a story that just doesn't instantly get his dick wet with monster puss or are more sympathetic to humans than the existential threat of mindcontrolling rape monsters that forcibly turn humans into one of them, only driven by endless hedonistic lust.
Anonymous No.58166911 >>58166954
>>58166755
>people butthurt about ankoman and how the FGO protag gets NTR'd in a bunch of doujins.
Has any other doujin reached the same level of seething as the Gilgamesh x Mashu one?
Anonymous No.58166949 >>58167019 >>58167280
Languages in Pokemon are so weird, there are multiple like the real world but no ones talk them and only get referenced
Anonymous No.58166954 >>58167143
>>58166911
Which one is that?
Anonymous No.58167001
>>58166592
>>58166755
>Only NSFW I'm writing is canon-but-unshown sex scenes to fill in the blanks from the main fic's fades to black, which includes technically underage characters
Damn, guess I'm not shilling there then.
Anonymous No.58167019
>>58166949
Unova won the world war and brought the other region's to heel, obviously.
Anonymous No.58167070
>>58164544
Humanity kills all life via the Ultimate Weapon, the world gets reseeded with only Pokemon by Zygarde whose cells copied all Pokemon DNA and then they discover what Humanity has left behind.
Anonymous No.58167143
>>58166954
Zettai Mash Sensen | Absolute Mash Battlefront
Anonymous No.58167147
>>58165713
>be young lad in Naranja Academy
>watch crush get groomed and fucked by the super super senior with a car
It's not about being good at battling. It's about looking cool and having access to young and impressionable female trainers
Anonymous No.58167280
>>58166949
It's more like regional dialects than different languages per se.
Anonymous No.58167288
>>58164175
I DONT CARE COON

YOU BULLDYKES OWE ME AND PROVE YOUR SKILL THEN AND MAKE AN ALDITH BACKSTORY AND VICTORY SEQUEL

KILL OFF DIANTHA TOO OR STAY SEETHING AND STAY USELESS

YOU WILL NEVER WRITE FOR MONEY
Anonymous No.58167378 >>58167412
Anime? The strongest.
Anonymous No.58167402 >>58167422 >>58167530
>>58166528
No.
>>58166518
I remember that thread there was a bunch of people defending the author on it too.
>>58166755
Fate-Fags scare me.
Anonymous No.58167412 >>58167417
>>58167378
I mean, have you seen the kind of shit they tank there? I wonder if SIs have ever touched that
Anonymous No.58167417
>>58167412
>literal children and a homunculi Jenny clone
Holy FUARK...imagine how powerful an adult male human is. No wonder every Pokemon KNEELS to humanity
Anonymous No.58167422 >>58167435 >>58167510
>>58167402
>Fate-Fags scare me.
The desire to L O R E is difficult to resist, and Fate lets you double up on OCs and twists on historical/mythical figures at the same time
Anonymous No.58167435 >>58167472
>>58167422
>double up on OCs
I have never seen an OC MC in Fate fanfics, what I have seen is Shirou and Fujimura fags seething about muh NTR in crossover stories and them sperging if Nasu isn't the strongest verse in a crossover
Anonymous No.58167472
>>58167435
The prompt I'm sitting on for one if I ever have the 'tism for it has pre-existing characters too, but most of the MCs were original.
https://pastebin.com/wh7B7pd3

But I've never gotten the mindset of people obsessed with self-inserts. The appeal of Shirou is how much he WASN'T a blank slate and was completely fucking insane.
Anonymous No.58167510 >>58167518
>>58167422
I made a Fate SI OC actually a historical figure once. Magoichi Saika, inspired grom Samurai Warriors and Sengoku Basara. Huh, I just realized that means he's actually a pokemon character too.
Anonymous No.58167518
>>58167510
Forgot picrel
Anonymous No.58167530 >>58167535
>>58167402
>Fate-Fags scare me.
Don't be afraid. We're mostly reasonable.
Anonymous No.58167535 >>58167623
>>58167530
Didn’t one of you burn a cuck artist’s house down?
Anonymous No.58167608 >>58167625 >>58167634 >>58167675 >>58167844 >>58171479
Is Eternatus one of Arceus's hands?
Anonymous No.58167623
>>58167535
I did say mostly.
Anonymous No.58167625
>>58167608
Yes. Along with every legendary, MC of every game and spinoff, and my dick.
Anonymous No.58167634 >>58167649 >>58167658 >>58168878
>>58167608
What would (You) do if you caught an Eternatus?
Anonymous No.58167649
>>58167634
Use it to charge my phone.
Anonymous No.58167658 >>58167665
>>58167634
Teach him to become a hero of justice.
Anonymous No.58167665 >>58168128
>>58167658
Anonymous No.58167675
>>58167608
No, it’s just an oddly powerful alien.
Anonymous No.58167844
>>58167608
Yes, and Arceus is one of Kyogre's grandchildren. All life came from the sea and Kyogre and Kyogre is the mother of the sea.
Anonymous No.58168128
>>58167665
Kino
Anonymous No.58168146 >>58168448 >>58168467
>>58164544
imagine a story in a distant future where the last human awakens from a cryogenic vat or dehydrated cube (think the shit in Megamind) to find that it's just Poke-Planet post-apocalypse. Also she's naked.
Anonymous No.58168448 >>58168467 >>58168469
>>58168146
>Makes friends with a team of cute, reliable Pokemon
>Joins their rescue team as a supporter and goes on their adventures, hoping to learn what happened to the other humans
>As she adventures, grows more and more sickly
>Her friends go on a daring trek to the far corners of the Earth in search of a Pokemon who can save her
>Stumble across Celebi, who shows them the distant past of the MD world: once, a world where people and Pokemon lived in harmony
>But something changed in the atmosphere's composition, becoming toxic to humans
>They built great ships to depart the Earth for the stars in search of a new home, taking most of their Pokemon with them
>But as they left, a small child happened upon Jirachi, watching the humans go, and made a wish on it, that all the Pokemon who had to stay behind would forever remember the love humans have for them
>Jirachi manifested their wish by making Pokemon develop human-level sapience, leading to the world of Mystery Dungeon
>In the end, the human has to choose between wishing on Jirachi to become a Pokemon and stay with her friends, or be sent out into the stars to join humankind.
Anonymous No.58168467
>>58168146
>>58168448
Would this new PokeWorld be Guzzlord's Ultra Space?
Anonymous No.58168469 >>58168496 >>58168541
>>58168448
>not wishing to change the atmosphere back
Anonymous No.58168496 >>58168877 >>58169626
>>58168469
To what end? The humans have likely found a new home, and the Pokemon have their own civilization. Changing back the atmosphere wouldn't bring the humans back, and if it did it could spark a war.
Anonymous No.58168541 >>58168640 >>58168877
>>58168469
You cannot wish away an existing wish.
Anonymous No.58168640 >>58168852
>>58168541
Wish to go back in time with your rescue team and beat the evil team who made that wish. Now you have a mystery dungeon fic with a journey fic arc.
Anonymous No.58168852 >>58168864 >>58168870
>>58168640
Depending on how time travel to the past works, you've either created a new timeline where the problem never began thus leaving the original timeline to its fate or you've reset the timeline to that point and effectively killed everyone who was in the future. Were you really a hero?
Anonymous No.58168864
>>58168852
How did timetravel work in LA? The MC was Isekai'd from the "real" world and that somehow affected the world so that some Hisui mons are still alive
Anonymous No.58168870
>>58168852
If MD Sky was any indicator, then it's initially the latter but then because of Arceus, everyone alive in the future stays alive and it's only the world around them that changes.
So all the Pokemon and Humans of the future stay where they are while the atmosphere becomes habitable for Humans again.
You can then have a Wall-E situation where the Future Humans detect that the homeworld is livable again and then send a colony back to recolonize it.
Anonymous No.58168877
>>58168496
According to that scenario I replied to, Pokémon only became sapient due to a wish and only developed a civilization after, this isn't a natural progression. That same wish could have also been used to prevent a planetary catastrophe that creates exiles out of a whole species. Note that I don't really believe Pokémon aren't sapient but I'm just giving my thoughts on the scenario I'm reading.
I also think many humans would want to live on their own home planet without being poisoned to death. I highly doubt literally every human would enjoy alien landscapes and space ships more, terraforming alien worlds without none-earth atmospheres would cost far more.. Wait. If they can live on hostile planets why can't they live in earth with a changed atmosphere? Lmao.
Plus many of them like Pokémon and would want to be around them. And the planet being emptied out would actually make it more appealing for settlers. Not less.
Mystery dungeon "civilizations" exist in bumfuck nowhere, surrounded by untamed wilderness full of dungeons and feral pokemon. No, the humans don't want to fight to live in Pokémon mud huts. There is plenty of room.
Human civilizations in Pokémon are also way less urbanized than our own and show a far greater coexistence and respect for nature.
>>58168541
In that scenario. A wish didnt poison the atmosphere to insta kill humans. It just le happened.
Anonymous No.58168878 >>58168885
>>58167634
Use it to make any woman I want into a giantess
Anonymous No.58168885 >>58169013 >>58169582 >>58171198
>>58168878
SCIENCE can do that tho just like how it can make them small
Anonymous No.58169013 >>58169113 >>58169359 >>58169388 >>58171198
>>58168885
What is that horrible creature?
Anonymous No.58169113 >>58169201
>>58169013
you mean Sophocles? he's just a fat kid
Anonymous No.58169201
>>58169113
He should exercise more often
Anonymous No.58169359
>>58169013
Thats a rude thing to say about one of the thousand arms of the original one.
Anonymous No.58169388
>>58169013
That's not very nice, anon. It's just Lillie.
Anonymous No.58169582 >>58169717
>>58168885
Everyone in the Pokemon world, including the Pokemon, should shrink themselves and that way they would use way less resources.
Anonymous No.58169626
>>58168496
hmofa paradise
Anonymous No.58169717
>>58169582
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Downsizing_(film)
It's not a very good movie btw
Anonymous No.58170229 >>58171233
Bump faggots
Anonymous No.58170414 >>58170712
>Get a negative response from commenter
>Was about something I was afraid wouldn't land right, take the note in stride
>Recognize name from a prior comment tho
>Find earlier comment
>They unintentionally admit they cannot into character development or the nuance I'm attempting
I'm learning all of the wrong lessons here.
Anonymous No.58170457
Wish more fics showed how daily life is in the Pokemon world
Anonymous No.58170712 >>58171188
>>58170414
What'd he say?
Anonymous No.58171188 >>58171274 >>58171321 >>58171448
>>58170712
Basically was "I can't stand how much of a pussy your MC is." Which is fair game, especially since I wasn't sure how the reception would be for my most recent update (I knew it wouldn't exactly be overwhelmingly positive).

But the original comment that basically made me dismiss the guy was basically "trade the aggro Pokemon to the aggro guy and the ranged Pokemon to the strategic guy," when I'd basically spelled it out in the narrative that the "strategic guy" needed to get more aggro and the "aggro guy" needed to be more strategic. The Pokemon the commenter wanted swapped were literally put with their respective trainers to spur this character growth.
Anonymous No.58171198
>>58169013
>>58168885
What is this creature?
Anonymous No.58171233 >>58172276 >>58172678
>>58170229
That's actually reminding me of a terrible idea for a fic I've had. Some 8 badge trainer gets caught in some sort of standard disaster while going through an abandoned lab, as one does, and wakes up in a cave with none of his team of 'mon, but he does have the Rotom or Porygon that was handling his Pokedex.

Turns out he got dropped in the Digital World, and now has to figure out how to handle the other monster training style. I'd keep the power level nonsense to a minimum the best I could, but he probably wouldn't be the only human dropped in there. Something something, villain scheming in Cocytus, etc.
Anonymous No.58171274 >>58171395
>>58171188
Yeah, that does sound stupid. I wonder how he came to that train of thought when you have shown (I think you're Pofag?) that Ian and Tupp needed to grow in both battle technique as well as overall character.
Perhaps he thought this was some more strategic fic?? As in, he may have thought the characters were gonna scheme their way up to the top, which may happen in your fic, but with actual character growth.
Anonymous No.58171321
>>58171188
sounds like a boomer sitting on a couch watching a football game
Anonymous No.58171395 >>58171424
>>58171274
Yes this is Pofag. Honestly though, this was on FFN and a good chunk of the reviews are pretty shallow. It was just funny to see someone trash me while having already outed themselves as being an idiot.

Although I should probably stop bitching about dumb commenters, I am writing Isekai after all. And it is cool to get commenters
Anonymous No.58171424 >>58171450
>>58171395
I gotta say Pofag, I really respect your consistency regarding chapter outputs. I just don't know how you do it.
I was struggling with a chapter for four months before it was finished, only posted it a few days ago.
Anonymous No.58171448 >>58171468
>>58171188
>"I can't stand how much of a pussy your MC is."
But the whole fic has been a humiliation ritual though?
I think that commenter is a little silly.
Anonymous No.58171450 >>58171456 >>58171468 >>58172026
>>58171424
Thanks! The output rate probably won't remain at its neck-breaking pace forever. The current rate is a combination of my new job is only working me 2-3 days a week so I have lots of free time, and also I'm really psyched about showing Ian's next rival/AU-ex-gf named Suzy-Marie where she was the Pokemon fan and he cheated on her. I've also decided I'm going to start my SB push when I get to that chapter, so I have a clear, reasonably attainable goal to get to. I also have no shame since I've posted so much smut that if something's not perfect I don't really stress about it anymore.
Anonymous No.58171456 >>58171468
>>58171450
Did you just spoil the big reveal lmao
Anonymous No.58171468 >>58171520
>>58171450
>>58171456
TIL don't put slashes at the beginning of spoiler tags as they will erase the tags. That spoiler's been in the thread long enough desu, just the AU part of it is new and I'm so close to it idgaf anymore lmao
>>58171448
I genuinely laughed out loud when I realized it was that guy. Also, does anyone who's up to date have any feedback on this Colress? I'm really trying to nail his vibe.
Anonymous No.58171479 >>58171904
>>58167608
That's a boss form, imagine Shin Arceus have 255 in all stats.
Anonymous No.58171520 >>58171554
>>58171468
Currently rereading your fic, since its a threadfic and I want to support you faggots as best I can. I'll see if I can answer on the morrow.
Anonymous No.58171554 >>58171569
>>58171520
Us writefags greatly appreciate it, threadbros.

Literally brought to tears writing the next chapter's scene with Ingo
Anonymous No.58171569 >>58171577
>>58171554
Kinda womanly post, bro...
Anonymous No.58171577
>>58171569
Tigga please. Ingo is based and very tragic.
Anonymous No.58171904 >>58172034
>>58171479
>j-just imagine Arceus is powerful bro...
KEKAROO!
>b-but he created the univer—
He created the galaxy, which might as well have been the universe to ancient, uneducated primitive people. You know how ancient mesopotamian kings declared themselves "ruler of the universe" despite holding a few shitty villages? It's like that. Eternatus is the STRONGER God of a bigger, better universe, and if he wanted to he would make Arceus his BITCH.
Anonymous No.58171938 >>58171955 >>58172061 >>58174404
If you ate a megastone would you gain powers or just diarrhea?
Anonymous No.58171955 >>58171984
>>58171938
>diarrhea
You really think a human would be able to digest a mega stone?
Anonymous No.58171984
>>58171955
Maybe, no one tried
Anonymous No.58172026 >>58172205 >>58172215
>>58171450
>my new job is only working me 2-3 days a week so I have lots of free time
Had this going for me at the start of the year. Laptops aren't allowed at my work, but I'm chill enough that I just acted like I should have it and nobody questioned it. So I spent a lot of time writing. But then my job started cracking down on stuff. My new supervisor is chill so I didn't get in trouble when he found me on the laptop, but he did insist I stop bringing it. So my output has been trash since.
Anonymous No.58172034 >>58172048 >>58172073 >>58172572
>>58171904
>beaten by 2 dogs
I love the boy but come on.
Anonymous No.58172048
>>58172034
I've come to understand anyone stupid enough to fucking type "Kekaroo" is objectively wrong in all fields.
Anonymous No.58172061
>>58171938
As an expert on this thing, yes but for best results you would also need to eat the corresponding pokemon. The most effective method would be to absorb the creature's essence into your being directly, but most humans can't do this so eating them the more traditional way will suffice. The more you eat the more effective it becomes. Be careful about making it a common part of your diet as if you're not careful your cells will become predominantly made of pokemon.
Anonymous No.58172073 >>58172096
>>58172034
At least it took two legendaries to take him down. Arceus thouever dies to a puddle of water.
Anonymous No.58172096 >>58172103
>>58172073
Ultra Necrozma also took two legendaries to be put down in the manga. I don’t really like the thing though, gamefreak didn’t really put in some contingency measure for why (You) should be able to stop it.
Anonymous No.58172103 >>58172119
>>58172096
"It sensed your power of friendship and let you challenge it in a friendly battle" was the excuse they used iirc. They did the same shit with some other legendaries iirc.
Anonymous No.58172119
>>58172103
Ah, the old Giratina protocol? I don’t remember that at all, but I don’t want to ever replay USUM again, so I’ll take your word for it.
Anonymous No.58172205 >>58172215
>>58172026
Time is such an absolute necessity to even being slightly prolific with writing. Being bogged down with the old full time job gave me so little time. So now that I have time I've been really good at locking in and being productive with it.
Anonymous No.58172215
>>58172205
>>58172026
Definitely cherish every free second you can tuck away from writing. Running my business and spending time with my partner takes up most of my day, so I'm usually looking at between 2-3 hours a night where I can write, play games, or generally do leisure activities.
Anonymous No.58172276 >>58172574
>>58171233
I would probably have a similar idea while mixing Pokemon & Digimon in the same team of six. Digimon can also shrink albeit through external mechanisms so they can fit in Pokeballs just fine, or maybe one can create a new type of Pokeball that homages a Digivice.
Anonymous No.58172572 >>58173140
>>58172034
>takes two box legendaries with weapons hyper-specialized for fighting him to defeat him
No other Legendary besides Palkia (who he fodderizes btw) can even get past his dimension warp bullshit. The earth is lucky to have the dogs.
Anonymous No.58172574 >>58172678
>>58172276
Ah, I was going to make it more nonsense, and have multiple different monster training styles. A Devil Summoner, for example.

The main focus would be on the MC learning to apply their skills to a new system, etc, with the villain plot being there as a motivator.
Anonymous No.58172678 >>58173904
>>58171233
>>58172574
NTA but Digimon and SMT could fit together very seamslessly, hell, the new Digimon games are very SMT-like already.
I have a harder time imagining Pokemon with those creatures (at least the non-legendary Pokemon) unless you make some concessions like limiting Digimon to Adult/Champion level, etc
Anonymous No.58172890 >>58172897 >>58172972 >>58173072 >>58173904
>Digimon
>SMT
How strong do you guys think is Pokémon anyways? You can Say whatever cope about power levels being bullshit or that who cares because it doesn't affect the narrative
Anonymous No.58172897
>>58172890
I'd say they're pretty up there in terms of power.
Anonymous No.58172972 >>58172986
>>58172890
Digimon are stronger than the average pokemon and the average digidestined is stronger than most game trainers and all anime+manga trainers. Tai would kick Ash's ass
Anonymous No.58172986
>>58172972
Well duh, with monsters I mean because without them that's a hard no chief
Anonymous No.58173072
>>58172890
I'd say most fully evolved Pokemon would be around a Champion's level and most Legendaries around Ultimate. The more high tier legendaries could pass for Megas
Anonymous No.58173140 >>58173193 >>58173702
>>58172572
I didn’t play Gen 8, is there any truth to this or is it power scaler overhype?
Anonymous No.58173193 >>58173255
>>58173140
It's true. Gamefreak loves their gimmicks so Eternatus is unkillable unless the fairysword dogs are there to deal with him.
Anonymous No.58173255 >>58173340
>>58173193
Well, I don't expect Gamefreak to really care about their legendary coherency that much. which sucks, you'd think some legends would be more widespread throughout the world
Anonymous No.58173340
>>58173255
You'd think religions can at least sneak past nation borders. Kanto should have some Ho-oh idols as well, unless they all got blown to bits or melted down during the war like the Taliban did with the the Buddhist statues.
Anonymous No.58173424 >>58173605 >>58173613 >>58173628 >>58173772 >>58174111 >>58174179 >>58174319
I want to read vp anons works. Where you you all upload them because webnovel doesn't have much.
Anonymous No.58173577 >>58173705
I've been reading into the unown and it's kinda bad and has some of the weirdest grammatical errors I've ever seen (slipping into the present tense at random) but on the other hand it has a lot of chapters.
Anonymous No.58173605 >>58174022
>>58173424
I see a lot of AO3.
Anonymous No.58173613
>>58173424
There's this https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1PtN4D_9CSw8JJ9uO6v0oQqdtKEkS8aFAvfxqI96XfSE/edit?gid=0#gid=0
Back when there was a /vpwt/
Anonymous No.58173628
>>58173424
I upload all my works straight into the recycle bin where they belong.
Anonymous No.58173702
>>58173140
In game you need the dogs to beat Eternatus once its awakened from being fed power, but once you actually capture it it loses access to its fuck huge form beyond using a single attack. But the dogs don't have any explanation to why they are so powerful, and ultimately it might just be down to the fact that they have access to their sword and armor that makes them steel types to counter the poison/dragon. We don't have anything on them beyond that they are immortal guardians who have protected Galar from Eternatus in the past.

Also since Dynamax is caused by Eternatus's power having seeped into the land it cannot Dynamax itself. It's boss form is arguably its dynamax form, but you don't have access to it in game. The dogs also do not dynamax, probably because they don't want to use the power of their sworn enemy. All three of them have signature moves that do extra damage to dynamax enemies though. So their is some story telling in the gameplay. The only other pokemon that does not dynamax through Eternatu's power is Calyrex, but he is able to dynamax under his own power (as his dynamax aura is a different color than every other mon).

So theoretically Arceus could dynamax under its own power as well, but god was dexcut. So its really not as concrete how well they match up since lore wise the dogs have nothing more going for them than being strong.
Anonymous No.58173705
>>58173577
Your grammar made me think you were studying the pokemon, not the fic.
Anonymous No.58173772 >>58174022
>>58173424
As the other anon said, most seem to go to AO3, but I know that there are other sites they are crossposted on like FF1, RR or SB.
I think if you ask writefags to shill their work or just wait for the next bread they'll be posted as reminders they're stirjs2gll active.
Anonymous No.58173904
>>58172678
Those two would slide together fine, but Pokemon would need some tweaking. I'd probably say something about the physical world for Pokemon prevents some of the most bullshit abilities from kicking in unless there's some kind of 'naturalization' effect.

>>58172890
Depends on the Pokemon.
Anonymous No.58173934 >>58174013
Where the hell are super-powered aliens like Deoxys and Eternatus coming from anyway?
Anonymous No.58174013
>>58173934
A space-time anomaly barely understood, theorized to be anywhere from the size of an entire solar system, to that of a planet. All measuring tools fail to identify it, cameras and telescopes shatter attempting to capture it. All we know is that every so often, things come out of that amalgamation of impossible space. Within the map of our known universe, where systems and galaxies are broken into sectors and assigned numerical markers, it is known only as...the Missing Number...
Anonymous No.58174022 >>58174111
>>58173605
>>58173772
Why the fuck would you ever use AO3? The sorting system is a fucking nightmare.
Anonymous No.58174111 >>58174214
>>58174022
It’s author-friendly compared to FFN, and your story might actually get traction if it’s not SI like it must be for QQ and SB.


>>58173424
Since most writefags in here try to keep their shilling to a non-obnoxious amount, I will shill (a little bit) for them. I will do a bad job of it.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/59572648/chapters/151934926
>A Kalos fic that takes place after XY

https://archiveofourown.org/works/63406333/chapters/162454279
>Final Fantasy 1 but done with Pokémon
>Also has comfy ghost story on their profile

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66210784/chapters/170669461
>Pokemon fan Isekais as a Team Skull grunt, shenanigans ensue

Obligatory “I don’t have the schizofag’s link cuz I don’t read PMD but he’s around here too” (I mean schizofag in an endearing way)
Anonymous No.58174163 >>58174361 >>58174419
I don't like AO3 because the readership is almost entirely fujoshits.
Anonymous No.58174179 >>58174407 >>58174414
>>58173424
I'll self shill.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/49048243/chapters/123742576

>tl;dr
PMD. Follows a vagabond absol as she tries to make ends meet by taking up jobs and contracts where she can get them. It's rude, crude lewd and with a rollercoaster of events and emotions.

I recently finished the sequel, too. Even has some side stories to go along, so there's plenty to chew on if you want to dig into something for a while.
Anonymous No.58174214 >>58174243
>>58174111
May I ask why you don't like PMD? I'm curious.
Anonymous No.58174243 >>58174357
>>58174214
It’s just not my thing.
Anonymous No.58174319
>>58173424
I haven't been shilling my work because I'm in a rut and haven't been able to update. I've been trying to catch up on other anon's fics instead. I check this thread constantly throughout the day still.
Anonymous No.58174357
>>58174243
Fair.
Anonymous No.58174361
>>58174163
Readers and authors it feels, wonder what makes AO3 such a magnet for fujoshits.
Anonymous No.58174404
>>58171938
Same dangers as eating any other gemstone or mineral.
There might be some radiation if its still fresh off a meteor.
Unless you have some Pokémon ancestry compatible with that specific stone you should be fine. If you do, I'd be worried about turning into a monstrosity but the hybrid abominations already are.
Anonymous No.58174407
>>58174179
Make her try gambling.
Anonymous No.58174414
>>58174179
Ah, Lonesome no more, my beloved!
Anonymous No.58174419
>>58174163
I think I finally got a comment from a chick on my WIP (and then they replied like they were a scammer so who actually knows).
Anonymous No.58174525 >>58174553
Goodbye faggots
Anonymous No.58174553
>>58174525
owari da...
Anonymous No.58174738
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>>58174735