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Anonymous No.58174735 >>58174745 >>58174795 >>58174934
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>Thread question:
What real world tech of ours would the Pokemon world be most interested in acquiring?

>Previous thread:
>>58148625
Anonymous No.58174745 >>58174833
>>58174735 (OP)
Guns because people who aren't Pokemon trainers can defend themselves. And if evil team leaders are anything to go by, nukes.
Anonymous No.58174795 >>58174912
>>58174735 (OP)
I agree with guns but mostly about design and mobility because they would fuse their crazy tech to give them special bullshit like type energy bullets like in the TCG or J's gun, oh and the space program too since theirs is limited by fugg
Anonymous No.58174833 >>58174992
>>58174745
surely authority forces have laser guns or something similar considering most electric gyms have literal electric barriers
Anonymous No.58174891 >>58174955
Looking for any pokemonxpokemon smut, any universe, any scenario, just no scat or mindbreak. Will attempt a haphazard review
Anonymous No.58174912 >>58174924 >>58175728
>>58174795
People always say that Rayquaza would interfere in sending rockets to space, but I don't ever recall that being an issue mentioned in any media.
Seems to be a real lazy guy as well since he needed to be pointed at the meteor before destroying it.
Anonymous No.58174924
>>58174912
>Seems to be a real lazy guy as well since he needed to be pointed at the meteor before destroying it.
That's a PMD thing. The ORAS thing was more about him feeling like he needs mega evolution to win, but being too lazy to actively search for a "worthy" human and instead expecting one to come to him.
Zinnia was basically her game's Kieran. A self-obsessed psychopath with a hero's delusion who finds out in the end they're not the chosen one. The difference is she took it in stride instead of having a mental breakdown.
Anonymous No.58174934
>>58174735 (OP)
>What real world tech of ours would the Pokemon world be most interested in acquiring?
Jails
Anonymous No.58174955
>>58174891
I'm tempted to write some vore smut but I'm not that into pokemonxpokemon.
Anonymous No.58174992
>>58174833
without type energy and intent, bullets and lasers slow down. High quality tech requires lots of pokeinovation which is why bad guys use shitty cobbled together stuff and pokemon, and rich bad guys use the good stuff like statue laser beams.
firing a gun from earth would result in it poofing to dust under the pressures of type aura on the world.
Anonymous No.58175083 >>58175101 >>58176277
Pofag, if you're there, your presentation of Colress was a solid beginning for now (Your strongest feat is deinitely the characters and their dialogue).
From his curious nature a well as well as him being prepared to make polite gifts/payments to other people.
Although I personally think, when jut before Ian captured the sandshrew, Colress would be more nonchalant instead of cold (I can imagine his voice would be clear and 'cold' and I suppose it may as well be since it's Ian's perspective)
Anonymous No.58175088
I love corny shit so I would give top tier trainers stupid reflexes to do shit like pic related as a way to explain why gun are useless not only against most Pokémon but also humans
Anonymous No.58175101 >>58176277
>>58175083
There is also his overal atmosphere that can makes one reading it on edge. Pretty cool!
Anonymous No.58175728 >>58175755 >>58176390
>>58174912
Rayquaza would intervene againt Aliens invading Earth, not Earthoids going out to colonize alien scum. It's Xenophobic like that.
Anonymous No.58175755 >>58175765
>>58175728
Fugg did nothing about Kyurem or Eternatus though
Anonymous No.58175765 >>58176447
>>58175755
Kyurem might've properly applied for his Visa, and Eternatus iirc was already a fractured entity by the time the sword dogs fought it so it's possible Fug kicked his ass in space.
Anonymous No.58175806 >>58175812 >>58176051
If handling Pokemon can apparently give you superpowers, would being a good trainer be something people instinctively find attractive? Do Pokeworld roasties dream of dating a Chad that has completed a Gym circuit? Can you get away with being ugly as shit if you're a strong trainer the same way you can if you're rich?
Anonymous No.58175812
>>58175806
Yes to all. See Steven, Diantha, Kukui, Leon, Ash, and Cynthia. Only one of these are bait.
Anonymous No.58176051
>>58175806
By that vein wouldn't the women be attracted to the trainer's male pokemon since they're the ones with the real power?
Anonymous No.58176065 >>58176161
I honestly forgot Ash and Pikachu can be quite brutal when needed, gonna have to think of a way to implement that without making the edgy man making hard decisions
Anonymous No.58176161
>>58176065
Tanked by everyone there btw
Anonymous No.58176272 >>58176380 >>58177095 >>58177095
I read fanfics but not really pokemon fanfics, what are people's thoughts on FeMCs? A skip? Ok if they have het or yuri? Don't care?
Anonymous No.58176277 >>58176285 >>58176350 >>58176355 >>58176380
>>58175083
>>58175101
Thank you very much for the feedback, anon. Yup, my pride is pretty trash (I studied a lot of theater in HS/college). I’m trying to make Colress seem really nice but have these little drops of menace. I am such a geek I’ll actually play a certain song on repeat for scenes involving him when I write.
Anonymous No.58176285
>>58176277
prose* not pride wtf
Anonymous No.58176350 >>58176355
>>58176277
Damn, I do that too.
Anonymous No.58176355 >>58176385 >>58176395 >>58176450 >>58176655
>>58176277
>>58176350
Do any of you faggots listen to music while writing/reading fics?
Anonymous No.58176380 >>58176655
>>58176272
My fellow chuds don't like Pokémon Trainer Vicky for things unrelated to the sex but it seems to have been popular with the masses for a time, so I'd look into why that became popular and the mistakes it made to drop off. I'm not aware of any other notable FeMC fics. I do prefer reading a dude's perspective to be honest and I'm sure women would like a chicks perspective, so you need to know how to market towards them which most of us can't help with. The biggest reason I avoid FeMC is a lot of authors make it a genderbent dude so they can excuse not knowing how women act or live out their trans fantasies.
>>58176277
Prince of poop town. What's your Colress AMV song?
Anonymous No.58176385
>>58176355
I live in a bad neighborhood so listening to music is a must if I don't want my flow or immersion to be broken by retards fighting each other in the street.
Anonymous No.58176390
>>58175728
Fug doesn’t even stop meteor Pokemon from showing up. That other anon was right, it’s lazy as fuck. It doesn’t even immediately show up to kick Kyogre and Groudon to the curb, it only ever shows up at humanity’s final hour or some shit.
Anonymous No.58176395 >>58176552
>>58176355
Yeah but never ever add those lyrics to the story content, it will scare the hoes away.
Anonymous No.58176447 >>58176574
>>58175765
Where is this fractured shit coming from, I don’t see it anywhere on bulbapedo
Anonymous No.58176450 >>58176655
>>58176355
All the time. While I'm commuting, I think of scenes that feel appropriate for the song I'm listening to at the moment. I'm constantly fiddling around with the controls to replay certain parts 7-8 times so I can replay the scene in my head.
Sometimes I get annoyed because I think of a scene but then the song switches to something that's appropriate for another moment.
Anonymous No.58176552
>>58176395
Don't worry, I already scared the hoes away with a GaoGaiGar reference I could put fucking Pain lyrics in there and they wouldn't be around to know.
Anonymous No.58176574
>>58176447
The "meteor" it arrived in was already smashed in pieces 20k years ago, the Darkest Day was its heart in the meteor waking up from its 17k year deathrest and trying to suck its scattered power back up to stay alive.
Bulbapedo has the suction part on the Darkest Day page.
Anonymous No.58176655
>>58176380
https://youtu.be/5ymDW6qJt2Q?si=ayBJqhX68eGq2c_T
>>58176355
Yeah, I need something low-key in the background usually. There’s some “epic version” of Lugia’s song that really hits certain scenes really well.
>>58176450
I have a pretty good playlist that give vibes to certain scenes, characters, arcs and stuff.
Anonymous No.58177095
>>58176272
Don't really care. All that really matters is if your mc is insufferable or not. And more often than not, if your Fem MC is, it's written by a dude. They have this vibe to them, sometimes snarky, sometimes gay.
>>58176272
If you want to know how to write a fem MC thats written by an actual women, there are literal tons of /reader fics out there. It'll melt your brain.
Anonymous No.58177268
Continuing from previous thread: Where do I go to read vp anons works? Aside from AO3 I mean. I don't get why people use that shit, the filter is horrendous.
Anonymous No.58177309 >>58177390 >>58177590 >>58178211
Real talk, when do you guys think Orre happens? Further than Z-A? Before BW?
Anonymous No.58177390 >>58177421
>>58177309
I like the headcanon that Eagun is elderly Ash, so much further than Z-A.
Anonymous No.58177421
>>58177390
Oh right, that was a really popular theory back in the day
>In his youth, Eagun was one of the greatest Pokémon Trainers in Orre, if not the world. However, once he started to age, he retired and now lives in the base of a large living tree in Agate Village
>Despite his age, Eagun is still in excellent shape, being able to easily outrun two healthy people a fraction of his age.
>Eagun still keeps the first Pokémon he ever received with him, a Level 50 Pikachu.
>The old Trainer is highly enthusiastic about Pokémon legends and myths, two of his favorites being Ho-Oh and Celebi
>He's also known for having seen a Ho-Oh at least twice in his lifetime
>Eagun has trouble with gadgets, especially new technology
Anonymous No.58177590 >>58177644
>>58177309
Look at all those poor Varoom corpses.
Anonymous No.58177644
>>58177590
That's the final evo of varoom, Paldea is just such a shitter region that nobody there discovered it.
Anonymous No.58177654 >>58178168 >>58179365
I wrote a small folklore-style story about the old people of Hisui. It's extremely short, because it's meant to imitate the Old Verses and Pokémon writing in general. I appreciate any sort of feedback or thoughts in general, I had a lot of fun thinking of this one last night.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/69936851
Anonymous No.58177741 >>58177761 >>58178005 >>58178169 >>58178211 >>58178792
It's feasible to use Post-Gen 3 mons for an Orre setting right?
Anonymous No.58177761
>>58177741
No, you're forbidden from using pokemon and things that didn't appear in the game UNLESS your SIOC is the one who discovers them!
Anonymous No.58178005
>>58177741
Orre has barely any native Pokémon so when its not as much of a shithole it makes sense for it to be resettled by those from other regions. You decide what sort of Pokémon come over.
Anonymous No.58178168 >>58178216
>>58177654
Left a comment. Pretty sick. I'm to literal minded to figure out any deeper meaning.
Anonymous No.58178169
>>58177741
Yes, Orre is a lawless shithole, they don't even require a license to fly on a pokemon or brush your teeth or give nutrition advice. Fugitives definitely bring pokemon from their home region all the time, but they probably die right away in battles because they are all just so heckin lawless and brutal over there.
Anonymous No.58178211
>>58177309
Orre happens maybe 5-10 years pre-XY, so yes, before BW.

>>58177741
Yes. I'm working on a fic in Orre, and I'm already planning on dropping some stuff that makes sense in it- Varoom, Skorupi, Maractus, etc. Mostly using an Unova based dex, though.
Anonymous No.58178216
>>58178168
Thank you so much! I based the story on a few concepts (lore of ancient Sinnoh culture disappearing as foreign people arrive and colonize the land, the Pokédex entry for Poltchageist/Sinistcha, etc.) and tried to turn it into a short character journey that explores those themes through a broken family from the old Sinnoh people.
I wanted to leave details somewhat open to interpretation to make it similar to how Pokémon myths tend to go, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Anonymous No.58178456 >>58178797 >>58178904
Bea upscale, who is the only trainer that even uses this thing
Anonymous No.58178792
>>58177741
Yeah. Should focus on Unova and Alola Pokemon because Unova and Alola are also based on American countries like Orre is.
Anonymous No.58178797 >>58178950
>>58178456
So what does this have, moxie?
Anonymous No.58178904 >>58179051 >>58179094
>>58178456
No "Being Mega is suffering" moment? No matter how you look at it there's no way they can insert that here.
Anonymous No.58178950
>>58178797
Legends didn't have abilitirs, so we probably won't know until it gets home access.
Anonymous No.58179051
>>58178904
Yeah we've decided Hawlucha is by far the most compatible with mega evolution. *raughs
Anonymous No.58179094
>>58178904
he's permanently blind
Anonymous No.58179365 >>58179468 >>58179499
>>58177654
>Another fic on AO3
That one anon is not gonna be happy about this!
Anonymous No.58179468 >>58179675 >>58180124
>>58179365
>Fanfiction is borderline unusable
>Not using SIs so I got literally zero replies on SB
>Not smut so I can't use QQ
Genuinely where the fuck does he expect me to post my shit
Anonymous No.58179499
>>58179365
Honestly, I just like how easy AO3 makes it for me to post stuff and mess with CSS/HTML for presentation if I need to. I don't really care a lot about discoverability or things like that, if that makes sense.
Anonymous No.58179675 >>58180124
>>58179468
>Not using SIs so I got literally zero replies on SB
Is this real?
Anonymous No.58180124 >>58180172 >>58180200
>>58179675
Unfortunately yes.

>>58179468
I will say there is a SFW writing board for QQ that, while it has low readership, has a pretty devoted Pokemon community. I've gotten a lot of engagement there and I know it's just a trickle of Spacebattles and QQ's NSFW board.

I did not expect to see paragraphs of Spanish in my comments when I woke up this morning, but holy fuck it's cool to see someone's literally google translating my Isekai-slop and enjoying it.
Anonymous No.58180172 >>58180256
>>58180124
>Unfortunately yes
I thought it was just a meme about the list
Anonymous No.58180200 >>58180205 >>58180241 >>58180281
>>58180124
I don't get it. Do they just ignore fics if it doesn't contain SI's? That sounds alien and bizarre.
Anonymous No.58180205
Alright, someone post the list.

>>58180200
Some stuff just gets no feedback over there, it's wild
Anonymous No.58180241
>>58180200
There used to be a lot of haremshit in High School settings like DxD but I think they're mostly dead because mods went on a rampage to kill underaged stuff
Anonymous No.58180256
>>58180172
The list is only a meme insofar as it's funny how true it is.
Anonymous No.58180281
>>58180200
Don't fully underestand why but people can no longer enjoy a setting for the in-universe characters themselves, maybe because the product is already out there they think its redundant to bother. The second most popular types of fics are MC wank fics that do the same glazing OC/Inserts get and are pretty much a pre-cursor to them.
Anonymous No.58180315 >>58180419
I checked out one of those anti-ntr fics and had a hilarious realization. These are just BETRAYED fics but for fgo.
Anonymous No.58180419
>>58180315
Anti-NTR fics? Anti-R?