>>1018687 (OP)
Eyes need to be sunken in more and maniscus' should be added
Eyelid rims need more definition
Corners of the mouth are fake
Eyes and skin need to share the same SSS trace set
Edge of the corneas need darkening
A bit of double eyelid action would probably look better
The skin and eye surfacings are more completed than the rest
I assume this is a WIP