>>105925104 (OP)it's really good, but there's still a few weird things in it, like the ending with her just stopping in the middle of the road and talks calmly without even smiling or panting after just running while grinning
her bag almost slips off even though both straps are on
there's 3 pedestrian crossings right next to each other, which seems unlikely
her footsteps when running are inconsistently timed
etc