>>106025353
you know, i actually really liked this to an extent, but there's something overwhelming gaudy in a way that clashes with it's otherwise brutalist aura.
displaying a game case for the Witcher is really gay and ugly. i would replace that with a book. the particular colorway of tartan for your bedsheets and pillowcase is also.. offputting. don't know how else to describe it.
lastly, two things of note. the lamp positioning. i know that has to be uncomfortable sitting underneath that with the bulb directly exposed to your eyes, same for the one above your bed, i know that shit is an eyesore when turned on.
also the armrests of your chair do not engage peacefully with the edge of your desk in a way that allows you to sit with a comfortable posture. likely you seat yourself at the edge of the chair and hunch over toward your keyboard. this theory is supported by the tilted nature of your monitor.
i'd suggest, positioning the lamp on the lower part of the desk with it rotated toward the wall, allowing the light to be refracted off it rather than directly blasting the surfaces, this would allow some light behind your monitor so it doesnt feel like such a dingy shadowy area. same for the one above the bed, it has an adjustable arm so just turn the lamp toward the corner and upward toward the ceiling so it feels less like a spotlight and more like a soft ambient light.
