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>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:>STICKY:Completed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vm4IJpq0Mbvb-Krl5_mJ_m6TsC_qjsaN/view
New collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
w/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
Hardcore: https://hackmd.io/7k0XRnIQR6SValR77TDfZw?view
>WHERE to get study materialsannas-archive.org
>>>/ic/artbook>>>/ic/video
sick ass fool lets get it goin boys
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Nothing much of interest, just recent drawing of my ocs in the rain after school
I finished the dress!
oh god it was so boring
I can sleep now
>>7586371Jesus those are some grippers
Imagine the footjobs
>>7586371Oh lawd, this is magnificent!
Is this the whole picture or just small part of it?
>>7586371Epic stuff. If you have the energy, please continue working on it
>>7582835I love the vibes of your... is it paintings or drawings? Reminds me of vamp hunter d?
>>7586371we need to get you checked in somewhere dude
>>7586447It's a very small part. I'm making this painting partially as a hyper-realism test.
>>7586371>this much time and attention and effort>not making an oil painting
Needs more werk. But i am spent. Will continue tomorow
How do we reinvigorate /draw/?
>>7594898It would help if people actually /drew/.
This board doesn't have enough /int/+
>>7594900Where does it say that this thread is /int/+ though.
>>7594906/beg/ has it's own thread
>>7582835goes hard
>>7586371youre insane
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drew this low effort comic
An abstract mass warped beyond all recognition and animated by magic, this creature, or thing, has come to be known as a โvesselโ. Do they think? Can they feel anything? Are they even alive? No one knows. But the magic spells they can cast indiscriminately can range from mostly harmless to devastating. Some have made trees grow faster. Some have set brush on fire. Some have flattened everything around them in a fifty foot radius into pulp and dust with a frighteningly powerful spell that dramatically increases the force of gravity itself. There no fighting a vessel, so if you see one - RUN!
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>>7579179 (OP)oh hey that's me
>>7595533your foreshortening of the near arm is fucked, it's shorter than it would be at that angle
>>7595043very cute
>>7595040unless you were intentionally going for the balloon silicone tits, dont make them balls
>>7590808cosy, but it feels like you could do with more hue variation towards warmer greens. that time of day is usually not that cold in temperature i think
>>7586371king shit
>>7586371Are you gonna change the lighting so her and her clothes feels like they're in the environment?
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>>7597497Probably right.
Basically i wanted to try to practice colors
So i mostly ignored a lot of shit.
Occasionally Doing something with mostly eyesight measuring will expose any flaws in my perception. When somebody else has a look at it. Or i look back on it. In theory at least. If i cant see it after being told i'll try and find a reference
>>7597497Yup right about arms.
I forgor that arms spread should be about full height from fingertip to fingertip
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>>7597494not pushing it any further today, i'll do some other ethnicity tomorrow
>>7597497thanks for the crit, anon!
I'm not happy with how this turned out. It's killing me.
Any tips of how to improve this? Or what to keep in mind if I decide to start from scratch?
Ignore the fucked up tentacle near Squidward's head... Just noticed that
>>7598636Oh I'll focus on Squidward if I want to mister, you can't tell me how I want to run my critique specially when Squidward fails to live to his lanky irl physique this is way too junkier and chunkier.
>>7598645Leave my fat fuck Squidward alone!!!
>>7598636your rendering skills are fine but your contrast is shit. the squid's head at one point almost blends into the background. go bolder. hit up the lasso and curve tools
>>7598683I swear I'm normally better at contrast. I'm just not used to trying to draw something "realistic" and it made me pussy out.
You're 100% right though. Everything needs to be significantly bolder.
I should also probably redraw Squidward, he's lacking. He's always been the hardest Spongebob character for me to draw. Weird ass head
>shade to bounds
>lines escape outside the surface
>try to avoid this
>lines don't reach the surface border
how do you avoid this? lots of practice?
>>7598706Be messy and not care. Then paint over all your mistakes on the top layer
>>7598712I'm using pencil and paper, I can't not care
>>7598636Restarting. Didn't realize how shit the shape was. Toony ass shapes made it look like Cthulhu
>>7599232cruelty squad esque
>>7599232they're doing this to me tomorrow
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>>7599233looks like an interesting game
>>7599238what happend?
land of the lustrous fanart
>>7585033>>7586880>>7600977I really like these. Good work guys.
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vroom vrroom
>>7582835This is the best coloring I have seen today.
>>7586393Damn, she needs to put a leash on them doggies
idk
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Started out as a landscape. Ended up being some church horror theme with what looks to be a pastor controlling the minds of people. Crazy.
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the buzz is wearing off so i'll stop here
>>7602115you might need more value contrast. sure the pastor is in focus, but the rest of the image fails to read at a glance or when squinting. add firmer edges too. can't wait to see what this'll turn out like
>>7604756>>7604601really in tune with the feel of your work. bet itโd be very fun drawing or collabing with you.
>>7604846thank you anon, hopefully it'll work out fine I was on half a dozen beers for that
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>>7604756happy with it as-is
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>>7605510ok no now it's fine
>>7605511>>7605324here
itโs gorgeous, dude.
in every way
>draw thread
>on the draw board
>5 posts a day
never change ic
>>7586880Hacker? Penetrator? Cracker. This is how I see them in my dreams lol
Diana Striker, Commission for Holy Dante 14
Still a werk in poggress.
We are doing a dnd campaign so im drawing the characters for funsies.
Need to fix das boot. And do some more werk on it
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Started out drawing a rectangle, cube, desk, but then it turned into an elevator.
Maybe I can animate this.
>>7606472I think im done. lets see how it looks uploaded just to make sure it dont get fucked up
first try with colors. any opinions?
once the main shapes are down, my shading is awful. pls any tips to improve.
>>7579179 (OP)Do you guys have tips for better shading? i kinda just blur it.
>>7608668Dont blur shading as much as you are bluring it.
With no secondery lightsources there is a very sharp transition into shadow and the shadow (no secondary light like reflected light) is 100% pitch black. Like a solitary asteroid in space, if it aint facing the sun its 100% black.
. And midtones belong where the light faces ALMOST completely away from the light (key word being almost, it is still facing it)
In other words, a thin(veeery thin) blurr where shadow transitions to midtones is ok on round objects , and a lil thin blur from midtones to brightly lit parts is also ok on a roundish surface but completely just bluring shadows should be avoided.
You can always simplyfyit
>>7608668Vid that could halp
https://youtu.be/V3WmrWUEIJo?si=TRb4E9_0d-_jBGY7
>>7608668hard round on the edges
Ive been trying a new line art style recently, but it looks too flat for my liking. this isn't my proudest piece, but it has potential, so I want to fix it. how do I do that?
>>7606527I like how you rendered the metal, looks nice
Worked on and off with this. I think I've matured as an artist, because I now abandon sketches. I used to believe finishing artwork was possible. It's not.
sketching is like an mmorpg. You pick up where left.
I'll probably work some more on this next year.
Iโve been neglecting redrawing thisโฆ thank you for the reminder op
Any big problems with it?
>>7614727needs harder edges on the neck and chest, the fabric looks like it's merging with her skin
is this anything? I feel like my monitor calibration is all fucked.
will probably add more tattoos
>>7609063delicious, would follow on ig
>>7615143It's perfect. From a phone, looks really good.
>>7607809love light pink and blue as a color combo, it goes so well with blonde hair too.
are you using the standard Ink-3 Gpen for your linework?
Drawing after a long break, mostly just warming up and returning back, getting used to drawing again
>>7601479The OP still lives rent free inside my head
>>7604756>>7605510awesome
>>7607649I can fix her
Current , Wip .
Im trying to translate cyberpunk character marie from peripetiea (slavjank imersive simm) into fantasyish setting. I will see if i can pull it off, got to catch some time this weekend, got work, got guests tonite, got to make a shortish dnd campaign this weekend . It will be a crawl uphill, will post again when i tink im done.
what are common prices for a Commission? with lineart,color and background? I got some that appear to be just to high....or Im just a poor fuck that thinks 300$ and more are fucking insane amount of money?
>>7615829Charge how long it takes you to finish it. Look at your actual jobs hourly wage then charge that amount. Don't do it for LESS then your actual job. Don't have a job? Look how much you get payed for washing dishes at mc McDonalds then charge that.
If you start getting more work then you can crank out, you can either A: be more selective about what you draw from the pool of offers or B: charge more.
If you are already getting offered more then an hourly wage then take it. You are not going to figure out the ~PERFECT~ price point on your first commission. When you are done, ask yourself "was this worth it?" then go from there.
First time rendering armor, how'd I do?
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Working on a scene. Tried to bring the feeling of momentum to the movement in it via the light-trail left by the sword and blood splatters.
Most of the remaining work in it that I have to do is coloring and adding further detail & texture to the background elements as well as refining & adjusting the lighting. Generally I am quite pleased with the composition of the scene itself.
I started this last week. The development was slow. It's my own fault for this.
Over the entire length of years spent drawing. I have also destroyed every single drawing and painting that was created.
This has set me back. I should have kept every painting for the purpose of developing them more. Ultimately they could be used for assets in future projects.
>>7617832I already took notes on how to improve painting characters like this next time, but if anyone has any critique or any thoughts about this particular painting, I'd be happy to hear you out
>>7579179 (OP)Any good resources for learning to render in digital? I'm half-decent with linework and cell-shading, but I'm hopeless when it comes to rendering.
>>7619965Cute Falin
>>7619022Would play this MMO/10
>>7617991Nice seeing more scenes from you.
>>7620112Why thank you.(mmo)
You got some stuff to share right now?
>>7620112Actually got the scene more or less done yesterday
>>7579179 (OP)baraslop but how y'all feeling about this
Working on a cutout of my dnd character still a work in progress. Got bored with chainmail so i will stop for now
Scarlett, commissioned by Nightmare
>>7623577Bayerische motoren werke engeneered catgirls.
Must be very fun but needy
>>7623621Lmao yes she is needy indeed.
>>7624397Is that supposed to B a dissipator ?
>>7616708ใใใใงใใI know you get asked this a lot but ใฉใใชๆฌใใใใใใงใใ?For a beg.
>>7621239Homoerotic oni?
That is what it reminds me of.
Maybe that sais more bout me then the piece though.
New character reference for a small comic Iโve been planning
>>7628263Psst
That's a 2010s camcorder
>>7628289Fuck
Thanks, I need to get better at remembering to check dates
>>7586371>this amount of patience wasted on digital slop art. why even bother dude?
>>7586371You always amaze me man, one of the last lights of /ic/
>>7628263I finished this guys โboyfriendโ
>>7627245Yes! It's a commission of my client's demon character that's gay and hot
>>7579179 (OP)Here's my first Artfight attack, going for at least 2 daily
>>7629599Haha . I was right on accident!!!
>>7629479Rendrering is fun and satisfying so why not take it to the limit?
Also apartments are generally too small to fit an 8 foot canvas :/
The overlaping legs were hard to get right, no idea if they are actually correct now, I stared at them for too long.
Im still /beg/ ill take any critique
But specifically id really like help with the circled foot
>>7586371Amazing
>>7584655Lovely
>>7629500>>7579417Very nice, I live your life drawings
>>7632564Soul
>>7632904Give the hair some more form
ltn
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>>7599232really cool, do you have more like this?
>>7616208so cute, looks like an enemy in a snes game, saved. i like the rendering too.
>>7633300Im the one drawing a Magik
She'll be coming out of a portal so i wanted to give kind of a wild wind feel to the hair. Like two air pressures fighting.
Do you have any recommendations to achieve that kind of a look?
>>7633691The hair looks too uniform as of now in terms of the direction itโs moving. Like the hair strands on the right are all moving upwards then down. Make the hair more inconsistent and random if you really want it to look like wind Is hitting it, and establish where the wind is coming from in the drawing similar to a light source
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5 min color sketches
>>7633882It would be the same as the primary light source from the portal. But when magik is using a portal shes stepping into limbo and then out again. I imagined limbo would have hotter air pressure to normal life since its like hell and so the air would rush out the portal into the lower cooler pressure. But i also thought the momentum of moving forward would still push her hair back.
Kimda of two different forces acting against eachother
>>7634129Turbulence is still a thing.
how do i get my line art to be less shit? i know some people go over it with "local colors" so it blends more, but surely there's more to it than that
help
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First time trying (and completing) to do a reference painting. Used paint's brush and airbrush tool since I wanted to get the basics down first before the fancy stuff (probably a retarded idea). Critique as harsh as you want, I know it's shit but I'm excited to improve. Took me around 3 hours.
There are too many great artists in here to quote, I'm amazed by all of you
>>7628054But especially you pineappleman
I'm worried that my newfound confidence is making me self-absorbed and obnoxious?
>>7586371Came into this thread and immediately had to kneel
>>7634366Where can I find more of your stuff dude? Who're your inspos?
>>7634406Thanks man, I'm kazwfiev on X/Insta
Mostly Otomo, bit of R. Crumb (on a more philosophical than aesthetic level) but it seems like the Moebius influence is coming out lately
>>7634411I can see the Otomo shapes in the faces now that you mention it. Thanks for the reply! I'm more of a weeb artist but i'm also a fan of western comics like Herge so i'm really drawn to styles like this.
>>7634530Oh yeah Tintin indeed the synthesis of east and west I find interesting to explore
>>7634138Something like this?
I haven't improved at all
For Art Contest on discord.
>>7635453It's a game in my head called the Hot Dog Bishoujo, where I throw hot dogs at hot girls who are annoying.
>>7635363You're trying too hard. Just draw nothing but box rotations and stacked boxes, sometimes with curves. Think about how to use JUST lines to show that stuff.
But what do I know, I'm ass too.
>>7635452Apparently the discord mod do not allow characters that is Not oRiGiNaL, so I pal-world it, Here is a Burger Version.
>>7590831Where's the light coming from?
>>7579179 (OP)sketch of griffith that idk if i'm going to finish
In this world, it's borzoi or bok choy
>>7635363Copy your favorite artist instead. This clearly isn't working for you.
>>7634854>>7637109Somehow they look like the same style.
>>7637086I tried this tonight and the results were pretty bad. I'm not sure I did that kind of study properly.
>>7637133Can I see? Is there anyone who does lineart, like a manga artist or something you like? Try and make a copy of one of their drawings.
>>7637134I don't have a favorite artist so I just picked one at almost random. Everything about the copy ended up wrong.
>>7637109Anime gun girl guy is better than me ngl
And he draws more than once a month
>>7637137Uma musume? Can I see the original?
>>7637137It did. But you can see it now, soon you will be able to fix it. Ya
Can someone critique me please? Here is the reference art I used
>>7637185and the second pic is what I drew
>>7616050There's still more to do on the girl but she's mostly done I'm starting the background now
>>7637236You should get a giant print and hang it up when it's done, sincerely.
i've been kind of in a weird depressive plateau where I haven't felt like putting any effort into anything, but for some reason drawing Bionicles are activating my neurons again. Must be the autism
>>7638092Because you keep avoiding the elephant in the room, you do not want to find god, you believe in nothing, it is not autism, it is you avoiding your problems.
i did a thing with blending. idk. its uncanny and i liked it. thermal hell.
>>7579179 (OP)(PLEASE DONT KILL ME FOR PONY!!!! I DONT WANNA POST THIS THERE!!)'
how do i color this kinda look? I cant figure it out. She just looks unfinished and not like a flash is on her. Any tips/fixes? I really wanna get this idea done but have no idea how.
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I got impatient and just decided to call it done. Should have figured out where all my shadows are before I colored and did details
>>7639208>>7638092Yo I had that Gahlok and a Tahnok when I was younger. These're great to see.
yes, i am allergic to further steps (drawn yesterday, touched up today)
(i am planning to draw a comic/manga/doujin for myself so i dont consider colour and shading a necessity as of now, i just was focusing on other things of my art)
Not my drawing but my friend drew this. How bad is this? Where could you recommend he improve?
>>7639350*clogs toilet* that wasn't me.
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>>7638774polished the turd
>>7641250Whoop whoop.
I snip you down
Whoop whoop
wasn't sure what to draw today so I drew boxes
I accomplished nothing
>>7641405Boxu sama is our lord and saviour.
Do not desecrate his name.
How to overcome the "painfully mediocre" stage?
>>7641421By being painfully mediocre untill you aren't.
Did you at least put some time into all ur fundies. Good. Now study other people.
>>7639989Still working it
My stupid ugly old men
Drawn poorly on a post it note
>>7641815I also finished the lining for my redraw of an older piece, Iโll be relining and coloring it digitally when I get the time
Sorry for the bad quality pic, my phones old
A submition for the Art Fight thing. I still have a lot of trouble with hair (and controlling my linework. And construction. And proportion. And perspective.)
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it's completely fucked
>>7635590that's literally just Terryman now
I don't know exactly what im doing no more. But im gona continue anyways
>>7637236How do I get as good as you? I'd like to think I'm not too shabby at drawing and painting after doing it for a large part of my life but your stuff is next level. I always love seeing your WIPs on here. Anything you can recommend to study/do? I'd legit be willing to pay you to have your guidance.
wait shit I forgot to draw today
I will have to do two sessions tomorrow to make up for it
>>7629577Blog? I'd like to read the comic whenever you start it.
And i am laying down my pen,
can somebody give her a hug, she seems like she needs it
>>7615143finally got around to this over the weekend. Iโll do one last pass and then wrap it up.
>>7637236>>7641865kino
Sunday is Drawpile (
>>7629566 ) Day paisanos. Considering checking in and leaving a doodle at some point
software: https://drawpile.net/download
in-software session url: drawfie.com
Browser access URL (iPad):
https://drawpile.net/invites/drawfie.com/01jd543a2nnf5xtnqgewhzy51f?web
4chan thread:
>>7373012MEGA archive: https://mega.nz/folder/hbAURDBB#htWRoOsPOG30XnMmKV_zNA
Sunday is Drawpile (
>>7629566 ) Day paisanos. Considering checking in and leaving a doodle at some point
software: https://drawpile.net/download
in-software session url: drawfie.com
Browser access URL (iPad):
https://drawpile.net/invites/drawfie.com/01jd543a2nnf5xtnqgewhzy51f?web
MEGA archive: https://mega.nz/folder/hbAURDBB#htWRoOsPOG30XnMmKV_zNA
Been always struggling with my shading style, just worried that my anatomy and faces read as cartoony then my render process reads as semi-real
does it look uncanny at all?
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doodled this while listening to Nu Genea's new song on repeat
>>7637236>>7644266Hmmm What I think is unique to me and my process is that I'm very patient and I don't get discouraged when working on a painting so no matter how long I think it will take, or what I need to learn to get it done, I just do it and don't get hung up on it and I also don't get hung up on what other things I could be doing instead. If a new idea pops in my head that I would rather work on, I just put that excitement toward finishing what I'm working on right now so that I can move on to that other idea later.
I think I developed good painting habits at a young age and have kept it up since then so I genuinely want to paint even when I don't want to and I like seeing the small progresses I make each day, no matter how insignificant. I focus on that rather than the bigger picture which I know will be formed in due time.
Think of it like working out, just enjoy the process of doing pushups and look forward to that feeling afterwards like you've gotten something done. Even if your arms look exactly the same tomorrow as they do today, if you keep it up, in a few months you'll notice progress. But focus on building the habit of enjoying those daily wins, those are what keep you going.
>>7647693I should say, just to reiterate my point more concisely: it all comes down to your mentality and your habits. Good habits generate good progress no matter how/what you draw/paint.
Also I genuinely think you learn a lot more when you force yourself to finish a drawing/painting so you cover all your bases ie: sketching, refining, composition, rendering etc.
>>7647633mm
this is so beautiful
>>7648049i just got back to drawing for not work stuff so i don't have one
>>7647693Blog? Do you have any social media? Your art is seriously on another whole level, even most art teachers (real art teachers, not the YouTube ones) aren't at this level.
>>7647693NTA but you're so cool. Ty for the advice and sharing your beautiful art!
>>7634019the deer is so cute
>>7647633so pretty
>>7648867Your opinion is exactly wrong
I wish I could draw mechs
>>7648870Good thing I don't take critique from pajeets.
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Quick zelda sketch
>>7647571Just my two cents
Working on a walpaper.
Gota fix dat gate
>>7649132Nah, too bright. Deliberately trying to avoid generic anime colors.
>>7648911Your proportions need work. The head is absolutely huge for that body, for example.
>>7647571I was going to ask why you don't post these things on twitter then I realized I wasn't following you.
>>7647693Thank you for your encouraging response, much appreciated! (And I wasnโt joking about paying for mentorshop lol.) Iโll be โmirin your stuff.
>>7649132looks way better
>>7649768Nta. That is the problem BUT
I dont think that is the exact root of the problem.
The face seems too wide or the face doesnt follow the direction if the rest of the skull. Not sure which one. If i cover the face it looks fine more or less, but if i cover the back of the head it looks unfitting
>>7649757Ok but still there's a problem with the values you're using across the piece. I tried to greater separate the sky and the earth because their respective values are muddying together in a way that's neutering the feeling I think you're going for. I might have gone too far with my changes but the sky and trees and such definitely need some more separation.
Also you have the shadow of the tunnel overpowering the reflection in the water, it should be the other way around with the reflection on the water effectively deleting that shadow line.
>>7649960It's indeed not just the head that's off but it is one of the biggest offenders, so I said 'for example' for a reason. I agree that the face itself is not correctly proportioned either on the head, and there are proportional issues in the body as well, same for the hands. So my general sweeping advice was 'work on your proportions'.
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>>7579179 (OP)I'm a permabeg
And there's lots of flaws here but where do I start to improve
>>7650306That's fair. Honestly I think I just have too much saturation in a lot of places.
>>7617871>>7618721How do you know what lines to use?
>>7651476Is this referenced or off the dome? It looks wonderful
>>7647693Do you shoot your own references? I cant imagine how do you learn to paint out he cloth like that without shooing it or copying it from something
>>7652179I almost never use direct reference. It feels like cheating. Like what happens when the apocalypse rolls around and you have no access to good reference? In the apocalypse there is no internet or cameras. u must prepare.
For cloth, it was drawn out and the folds were painted, then I drew over a rough grid and then used that grid as a guide to place and warp checkerboard patterns I'd pre painted. Making sure to keep each part on its own layer so everything can be adjusted/color corrected etc.
When the idea to give her dress a tartan pattern popped into my head. I knew it would take months lol it really wasn't fun.
>>7652471>Like what happens when the apocalypse rolls around and you have no access to good reference?Well for starters, you wouldn't be drawing in digital anymore.
I started with a gatsu reference and ended up with a chick
Oh well, I think it's one of my best results as a permabeg....
Critiques and suggestions are welcome.
Always ready to improve.
Currently working on my copying technique. No matter how much I try, my version looks more like Rei Ayanami than Talim's face. Guess I'll have to try more. Open to advice.
Also, regarding my reference, do anyone know if this kind of style, often found in video games artworks, have a name? By merely looking at it, it looks like really easy to copy : not overly detailed, simple forms, lot of symmetry and it looks like it was first draw by hand, then vectorized. Yet once you get to copy it, it's a bit harder than expected.
>>7652493Life finds a way...
>>7652531That's literally exactly what you're supposed to be doing and you're already doing it well, see Kim Jung Gi's lessons. Be careful around these parts if you didn't know already...
>>7652535I'm sorry if I presumed to know more than you
>>7652497Try the following.
Dont know if it is going to help but.
Try and start with a box to figure out the direction of the face.
Extend the jaw downwards.(could also start as a box or go for straight for the jaw if confident) And try drawing the step by step. Place eyes. Place mouth place nose refine from there to the best of your abilityes. Dont expect miracles
Loomis fun with a pencil might help.. it is a 100+ pages but mostly pictures you can chew through (while following the instructions)it in about 2-6 hours depends on your read speed, comprehension , distractions, and focus
Learn 1 fundie and you are nolonger a prebeg
It seems like the back of your head was a 3 /4 view but the face was a forward view with you just shifting the features to his right..
If anyone disagrees please help this beg.
>>7652911Didn't even come to my mind, I'm a beginner so no worries
>>7652908Thank you for directing me to Kim Jung GI, never heard of him before. But I didn't get your warning, what parts should I be careful about ?
>>7653243Just anybody who wants to stop you from being you out of jealousy, AKA "Crabs". I listened to those faceless idiots and wasted quite a bit of time. I think I came out strong despite it though. Just the idea imo is learning patterns of visual data like a language instead of "construction", you seem to have a knack for it.
>>7653251Thanks for the reminder. I postponed drawing for like 15 years just because of peer pressure and crabing myself so I get what you mean. Recently lost my job and I guess the thing that was growing on me for so long needed to express itself. Hope I'll come out stronger too.
>>7653732You certainly will. And as for crabs, you will know them by their (lack of) works...
I think crabs also crab because of insecurity and fear of failure. If drawing is impossible, and no one can draw, then they can't be blamed for failing, but if someone proves it's not, then they have only themselves to blame, and that hurts.
And sometimes it's just gatekeeping bullshit. Throughout my teens and twenties I gave up trying any creative hobbies at all because "real" creatives I knew through school and work told me I could never be good enough at them for it to matter. Maybe they were right, or perhaps not, but when I chose not to try it made them right for sure.
I think one of the most important lessons I've learned artistically is to do it as though the whole world is watching, no matter how small the audience appears to be. Early performances by TOOL are demonstrative of this concept.
Those people were full of shit, man. But this general is clearly a refuge for the weary talented of this board.
>>7653101>>7653101I should try to source that book, if you have be any link it'll be useful.
I started with Loomis and got to hate it with all myself, but maybe revisiting may the right path to go.
>>7653798Just google
>"insert book name"(For example: Loomis fun with a pencil)
Followed by
>pdf archiveOr
> internet archive or
>something like that and you should find it
Same method for any other text on art
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md5: 500e2b4fd271bf82491ccb74f4f7876d
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>>7644550nvm, hated how it looked
and yes, I am aware I am polishing a turd
New poster what you think?