Can I get some feedback ic

>>7643079 (OP)
THIS BITCH KILLED PIG SAMA

>>7643079 (OP)
cute, reminds me of those canadian cartoons of the early 2000s.
the nipples are garish though. please flatten them for the love of god

>>7643079 (OP)
a howie thread died for this

>>7643427

>>7643079 (OP)
Its spinning way too fast

>>7643649
Still spinning way too fast to process anything

>>7643079 (OP)
Please stop spamming both /ic/ and /co/ with thesee threads that you don't even respond in.

>>7643649
yeah again, thanks for slowing down, but the nipples are distracting

if it's warm enough for her to wear a bikini top she's not going to be pokey like that unless she's aroused

just looks out of place and coomerish

>>7643741
It’s not spam, these are a valuable resource, really valuable to have fresh eyes on your work

>>7643858
Yeah sure except you get advice and post updates of you doing whatever random shit pops into your head while ignoring it every time.

>>7643758
>just looks out of place and coomerish

Why is this such a common criticism on this board? What if the artist wanted to make something coomerish? Do you look at anime styled art and state "it just looks too cartoonish"? Or abstract paintings and complain its too abstract?

Just because you don't like coomer art or you have problems with integrating your sexuality in your life doesn't make it a legitimate criticism.

Lowbrow art, tasteless coomer farming, coom art with a touch of America wildness. OP, What is this for?

>>7643995
This board is the most coomer board but at the same time the most conservative and prudish, its very funny.

>>7643998
It is the pick me girls, orphans and weak men that pushes coomer art because they can't help themselves but be degenerate, you can blame society, you can blame their parents, or lack of parents. In the end, they made their own choice.

>>7644005
The projection is insane. That is a whole lot of very specific assumptions you have about coomer artists.

>>7643427
>>7643736
>>7643737
>>7643758
How about give actual advice?

>>7644026
I don't have assumption, I have facts, they made their own choices in life, you can stop them.

>>7644104
(You) do have a lot of assumptions. You've stated that those who push coomer art are either:
1. pick me girls
2. orphans
3. weak men

Another assumption you've made is that they push this art because they are unable to control their sex drive. (they can't help themselves but be degenerate). And then you precede to try and solidify your argument that only they, the individual, did this to themselves.

These are a lot of very specific assumptions that say more about you then the coomers you dislike.

>>7644481
I did not assume, these are just the kind of people who does it. It requires a certain desired for the outcome. They have a need to chase after trends, to be accepted by their peers. If I can be more honest, they are narcissistic, self absorbed, vain and probably care how they look instead of what they actually are. It is their Psychological profile.

>>7644099
What are you trying to go for in this artwork? What are you trying to communicate to the viewer here? Without this the best advice one can give is this >>7643997, That is they can really only give their initial impression of the piece.

For my impression of it, I'm getting total drama island meets thick GILF in Louisiana/South Florida. She looks wild/untamed, hunts for her food, and a bit asocial. The piece has a lot of sexual energy put into it. If that's what you were trying to go for then great.

>>7644483
>I did not assume
Then you proceed to make a lot more negative assumptions and generalizations about coomer artists. These are projections and often come from a place of resentment. You may feel a lack of creative fulfillment, influence, or recognition and instead of confronting that, you moralize against those who express themselves openly, that is, in coomer art.

>>7644526
>claim I make assumptions
>assume my take on their psychological profile are negative
>assume I lack fulfillment, influence or recognition
Accusing others of assuming, while immediately assume that what i said is negative. You need to calm your tits down and take time to read what I've actually said. At no point have I made my feelings known, for your information, I like degenerates. I have friends who are degenerates. They are also proud to be. Now go read what I wrote again, but with zero assumptions.

>>7644531
There is a difference between what I have stated and the assumptions you have made. I built my psychological profile only from the posts (You)'ve made. You made a ton of assumptions on all "degenerate" coomer artists in the general sense. Yes, you didn't explicitly make you feeling known, I'm reading between the lines. This is textbook psychological projection.

In what world is this not a negative description?
>they are narcissistic, self absorbed, vain and probably care how they look instead of what they actually are
>It is the pick me girls, orphans and weak men that pushes coomer art because they can't help themselves but be degenerate,

Is it maybe the language barrier here?

>>7643079 (OP)
Stop spamming the board with specifica artworks and use the generals instead, you absolute mongoloid. You've been told this several times already.

>>7644557

>>7643995
holy fuck lmao it's a legitimately bad part of the character's design. if you want to jerk off to extremely out of place pokey nipples be my guest but that's not how nipples work. if it's warm AND she's unaroused then they have NO reason to be so fucking pokey. it looks fucking retarded and yes, like coomer garbage. by the way i am a fucking gigacoomer and if i am saying this and you're all like
>M-M-MUH MORAL PANIC
you really need to stop jerking off dude

>>7644649
Missy Nipple expert ova here!!

>>7644649
>Erm actually, your cartoon drawing isn't h*cking realistic enough.
>You're having a MORAL PANIC over this
>I'm actually a coomer so haha (Deflection)
I'm specifcally calling out your argument there. Did OP say anything about the environment the character is in? What if it's a chilly winter day?

>>7644743
if it's a chilly winter day WHY IS SHE WEARING A BIKINI TOP AND DAISY DUKES ANON

>>7644754
Maybe she was wearing more layers but it got ripped off from the gator she just fought and killed?
Maybe it's a fall day which is hot during the day chilly at nightfall?

>>7643079 (OP)
Besides the ugly colors why is she staring at the camera in side view?

>>7644776
The gator head still looks weird to me. any ideas? >>7644757
>>7644754
No shes in a hot climate, I just like drawing tits

>>7644784
Nice tits

>>7644538
Narcissistic, self absorbed and vain are just the default traits for the gen z. Because they born with a screen, smartphone, iPad etc. On top of living in an environment of censorship and self censorship, they probably care how they look instead of what they actually are. I say this as a matter of fact, you assume and claim it is negative. What you feel is what you feel. It is not how I feel or think. I made it abundantly clear that I like them, the pick me girls, orphans and weak men, and if you ask me, I see them more like opportunities than negative. It is not language barrier, more like you are not reading what I wrote and instead assuming you know better by having the worst take you can about me. Here is an easier picture for you, I am saying this is ball is red, you then assume red is associated with rage and then claim that I am being angry and negative. If there is any barrier it is your own inability to see the good.

>>7643079 (OP)
You have the art skill of a 12 year old beg

>>7645067

>>7645118
Tits

>>7645067

>>7644099
here's some advice
you're not supposed to get advice every step of the way of the process
even if you were to listen to it

most experienced artists aren't showing every step to people, not even their bosses. if they were they would be waiting for responses more than drawing

>>7645647
Thanks guy

>>7643858
Why are you going on 4chan of all places for feedback? You already have very competent art, all you need is a portfolio site to show off your character designs and turnarounds to show you can do this. Apply for a job at a studio and see what happens

>>7643079 (OP)
I've seen a bunch of your threads and i just want to say you have really good consistancy

>>7643858
thats why we have threads dedicated for people looking for criticism
if everyone just made a thread for themselves every time they drew a line then it just becomes spam
also ideally when someone goes into those threads looking for critique they also critique other peoples work and thats the community

you are just self serving and want attention

>>7646868
Thanks man, this is just personal work, I worked in the animation industry for years, it wasn’t for me >>7646887
thanks pal>>7646919
yeah fair

>>7647128
Nice tits

>>7648048
Hell yeah, Pig King is my guy

>>7648048
Nobody gives a fuck

>>7647128
>I worked in the animation industry for years
Yeah as a janitor

looks kinda ugly but has is very soulful.

>>7648481

>>7643079 (OP)
why is she wearing his head
theft isn't cool op

>>7651031
forgot pic

Tits out for the boys

>>7652847
Ignore any criticism anon, tits mean this is good art.

>>7652847
How old is she?

>>7652857
She’s a cartoon image

>>7652847
Are you gonna answer why you stole from Nintendo? Or why it takes you 3 days to make 1 tiny change to your spinning whore?

>>7653299

>>7655407

>>7655408
>surely if keep making threads for myself, ignore criticism, and make snarky replies to people who give me negative comments it advertises my work to people and doesn't build up distain for my very presence
>this is how you get your art in front of eyes that want to see it!

>>7655411
How am I advertising? I havnt linked to anything.

>>7655415
You realize Nintendo will sue your ass into the ground for your blatant theft, right? You can keep being snarky and moody all you want, it won't help when your webcomic gets a cease and desist

>>7655727
You are a schizo

>>7643079 (OP)
Alright I wasn't gonna do this but since OP is such an insufferable twat. Pic related, he's a terminal redditor. Same shtick there, he asks for critiques. Anything negative regardless of being constructive, he flat out ignores or tells them to make their own characters. Any praise he gets, he immediately starts shilling his commissions. I made an account just to test and he even spams you with PMs trying to get you to commission him.
This is all whatever, the real nail in the coffin for this faggot is that he uses AI. When called out on it his response is typical AI jeet lingo.
picrel
Oh by the way, he's already been told that he's ripping off a Nintendo character. He doesn't give a fuck because his "Gator Girl" is his love obsession.

>>7655834
Youre awesome man. You might be my biggest fan. I hope you have sex at some point. Get some exercise and get offline. That's my advice. You got this.

>>7655945
you need to go back

>>7655834
>turns out op is a literal faggot
>ai user to boot

>>7655834
LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>7655834
I hate this guy now. Death to AI niggers.

>>7655945
Ask ChatGPT for feedback. Now kindly fuck off.

Let’s keep it civil my baby boys. Enjoy my new pig characters

>>7656366
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7656450

>>7656521
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7656521
>>7656366
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7655834
AHAHAHA

>>7656521
Looks cool, maybe make the snout goles a but smaller?

>>7657167
Looks slick, I will say you could make the pigs a bit smaller. They look kind of large compared to the humans

>>7657167
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7657480
You’re AI (Autistic Incel) lol

So do you ever animate anything or do you just generate AI trash and edit it into turnarounds all day long?

>>7655834
Oof all of a sudden the attention whoring is even more pathetic. This has to be a troll, there's no way somebody is this out of touch

>>7657670
No AI used in my art. Only used for auxiliary purposes. Like critique.

>>7657698
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7657855
Bro just gets it. Acts like hater, but stalks me online, and gives me great tips about litigious game companies. I love you ma

>>7657882
Now please kindly fuck off to talk with ChatGPT.

>>7657167
So this is the power... of AI...

Sure! Here's a recipe for baked ziti -- and one you're sure to enjoy! Just remember -- ziti is a very carb-heavy pasta!

>>7655834
Irishgangsta... See the name is a red herring because I already know they're a shitskin

>>7655834
Wait, so is all the art that he's been posting AI then, turnarounds included?

>>7658490
Yes. That's why he only is able to change a color or add stupid simple tattoos...

>>7658490
Nah that retard is obsessed with me, trying to ruin my good name. If you know anything about AI you know it coundnt produce work like this, not yet. Not chatgpt anyway. Ai art is often inconsistent anyway, furthermore I’ve been posting steps in my process along the way. Here’s a new character for example

>>7658490
Yes. He uses AI to come up with the character ideas, then traces over them. If you look at his reddit account he repeatedly states that he uses AI and that he believes it is the future of art. He denies it here because he's buttmad he got caught.

>>7659141
My guy, stop making shit up. Go outside. In fact please go ahead and post some of your own art.

>>7659161
>uses AI
>goons over how awesome AI is
>NOOOO YOU AREN'T HECKIN ALLOWED TO POINT OUT THE THINGS I'VE SAID!!!
picrel

>>7658490
My guy, AIjeets don't "kind of" us AI, especially when they make dissertations over the "inevitability" and "superiority" of AI. Of course he uses AI, and of course he isn't going to admit to anything beyond what he's already been caught admitting to. Bro is a retard, he didn't think anyone would find his comment. Now it's going to follow him forever. His only move now is to rebrand and change styles completely. But he's too retarded to do that. I know personally if I ever see this literal nigger get an ounce of attention I will be posting his AI quote.

>>7659161
>do you use AI
>"yes I heckin love AI"
>stop using AI
>"wtf I don't use AI stop saying that"
sage in the options field

Kek. Once again, retard /beg/s have no idea what AI art looks like, but hate it anyway because they're impressionable retards.

A tale as old as time.

>>7659425
based
fuck AI niggers
no mercy

>>7659431
>retard /beg/s have no idea what AI art looks like
So what did you mean by "I've only just started using AI, I actually don't have a problem with AI generated images. There's no fighting the advancement of technology, this is where we are."?

>>7659425
me too i've saved the image so have other anons I saw posted in this faggot's 2nd thread he just had to make

>>7659438
I'm not OP, I just think you're a dumbass.

Also, I looked up that comment, and it's not even on the post you linked. So who's the disingenuous faggot here?

>>7659445
>I'm not op
x

>>7659445
>UM ACKSHUALLY HE USED AI ON THIS OTHER POST OF HIS AND TOTALLY NOT ON THE ONES ITT SO CLEARLY HE DOESNT USE AI UM OK WELL HE DOES BUT JUST NOT HERE OKAY????

>>7659425
I mean, they don't have to rebrand. If they are transparent about their use of AI their work will become a lot less impressive, but it will also unironically open them up to job opportunities at corner cutting studios. Being deceitful is what makes people loathe 'ai artists'. Trying to be on equal grounds as people who have dedicated years and decades of their lives to their craft by using software that was was trained on and their data, I don't see how AI jeets don't find that problematic. Sure, AI empowers you, you can now cut corners and 'play' with the big boys, but what makes them think they've actually earned the respect of their colleagues? The best course is to just own being an AI user because if the future they claim is inevitable will come around, then AI users who have been transparent will eventually be accepted. Trying to hide the fact you're using AI is not only a nigger move, it's extremely shortsighted, which leads me to believe this isn't really a forward thinker as much as they are some self aggrandizing technoretard or a troll.

Op here, this thread has devolved into a schizo/ autistic man talking to himself. . But if that isn’t the point of 4chan I don’t what it is. Anyway, I clearly am not as upset about AI as some of you. Number 1: I’d never make an image in AI and try and pass off off as my own. I’m an experienced artist, and the main point of creating art is to express oneself. Plus I have no interest in fooling people online, especially on 4chan. A pointless, pointless endeavour. In fact I don’t need the validation of anyone. I don’t really have a point, and I don’t really give a fuck, but the only reason I made this thread was to get some fresh eyes on my project. It helps when someone points out something like the posture of a character being slightly off, and so on and so fourth. Also I am interested in seeing any art with the Nintendo troll guy who stalked me has done. I just wanna see what he has produced. Or not, again I don’t give a fuck

>>7659859
Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7659859
>Number 1: I’d never make an image in AI and try and pass off off as my own.
stopped reading here, you've already done this. you're a worse liar than Trump

Ask the AI for feedback.

>>7659859
1. "Nintendo troll guy" is right. Turnaround girl's gator hat is quite literally a 1:1 copy of King K Rool, a very famous Nintendo character. He's in Donkey Kong, Super Smash, even a brand new game. Somehow you don't know this, whatever, who cares. Personally I don't think you stole it, you just came up with the idea and didn't realize it was already done 20 years ago. The main problem here was your response. You got all moody and sarcastic and started accusing everyone of being "Nintendo troll guy", even though he was clearly trying to help. You've also made it clear you're moving forward with your turnaround girl's gator head and don't give a fuck. Not a good look.

2. You don't want criticism. You don't need anyone to "point out something like the posture of a character being slightly off". You aren't a fucking /beg/ you don't need basic shit like that. You claim to be an industry veteran so it's clear you are lying here. Not helping your image.

3. All you want is attention. When someone offers criticism, you either ignore it, reject it, or give a sarcastic comment. When you get praise, you push your commissions. Your look has descended into the deepest depths.

4. You use AI and admit to it. AI users are notorious for being dishonest. You can't exactly walk back your love letter to AI.

5. You're just a prick in general, you seem unpleasant, you act all flippant and egotistical until someone touches a nerve and then you get childish. As is evidenced by the likelihood of your response to this post either calling me Nintendo troll, a schizo, a /beg/, saying "didn't read lol" or just not replying at all.

If you can accept all of this as fact, I personally will forgive you and advocate for you.

>>7659859
Then why create multiple threads? Or was that a schizo autist?

>>7659859
im not nintendo guy but you can have my art

>>7659859
>the main point of creating art is to express oneself
this >>7659445 looked like a chance to express yourself with art but you used AI. what are you even "expressing" with your art, do you do anything other than pointless animation ref sheets and characters standing in a row?

>>7649611
>>7655407
Your character turnarounds look overall pretty volumetric and seamless, barring one subtle but nonetheless perceptible detail: their feet don't remain in a consistent angle of horizontal inclination while spinning.

To be more specific, the feet of your characters basically flap with a downwards and upwards motion whenever they undergo the frontal phase of their rotations.

>>7655407
>>7655408
calarts styled slop, please learn from anime instead; these designs are fucking ugly.


>>7655834
HAHGAHAHHAHAHAAH REDDIT FAGGOT TAUIWHTAOWIUEHGEOIAJWTGEFHjoniFTEGWAaWFR

>>7661696
>calarts

ZOOMER DETECTED

>>7661702
faggot ive been here since 1998, tf you mean

>>7661709

>>7661694
That’s a good point, I’m kind of okay with it tho

>>7662075
Ask the AI for advice.

>>7662076
>give me critiques
>gives critique
>you're right, but no
Further proof you are only here for attention and to shill your AI art

>>7661694
he can't change it now, he's already spent 8 weeks adding tattoos and pockets and stuff

>>7662075
Looking good! What AI do you use fellow nigger?

>>7662475
C;mon man, troll me all you want but using the N word flippantly like that is a step too far. What if I was black, how do you think that'd make me feel? using hateful language like that is good for nobody. Give your head a shake

>>7662496
Ask the AI for advice.

>>7662506
I did it says you're a faggot

>>7662496
>steals from others
>lies constantly
>massive dunning kruger
>huge ego
>draws 90% black characters and pigs
>"i'm not black"

>>7662512
Ask the AI for advice.