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So is this the right thread?

Update, I couldn't finish the first part in time so it got scrapped and I had to turn this in before I was fully happy w/ it

>>7711499
Since no answer was provided
I'll use both of the threads

>>7711795
yeah i'll use this thread as well
don't know why there are 2 of them.

Anyway this is what polishing a turd looks like.
Needed to bend that perspective and anatomy really hard to pretend like it fits...

Sketch

>>7711795
Update

>>7712706
How did you achieve the aged, grainy look on this? I like it

>>7712713
Are you
https://x.com/USA37107692/status/1962467612719546666

Or is this a study done of them?

>>7711385 (OP)
I'm honored! Thank you!

Got this sketched up, but majority the day was wasted on it being too hot to really function. Still need to do all the color fills on all the sketched pages I have.

>>7712812
Study

Oh god, finally, a read thread. Be blessed, op.

>>7712810
I think he used some kind of gauze effect
Like a traditional canvas has

I've just been informed that this character always has clunge out, without exception, and I'm disappointed. I wanted fupa bulge against the undies.

>>7711742
This came out great. What's the meaning behind 66, am I missing a trick?

>>7712822
Can I ask what brush and what software you're using?

>>7713171
They can't be upset with an alt for their troubles. Slip it in as a little treat since you've already done it.
Have you returned to nsfw fully or are you splitting the difference with going up to spicy pinups?

The 66 is in reference to the female character being a One Piece fandom OC and they're a vinsmoke sibling from a kingdom called Germa whose army is referred to as the Germa 66. All that to say, she is a true patriot

>>7712706
My only gripe is the lack of skeletal landmarks with the musculature of his arms, so they come off more as more balloons, but it could also be an intentional cartoony stylistic choice. Overall I still like it and great job with that battering ram, it's got genuine aesthetic appeal.

The vintage anime fell is also pretty nice, did you apply a noise layer over the whole thing to get grains?

Fuck you you fucking niggers first you shit talk me and now you don’t include my drawing in your fucking dumbass op collage Jesus is going to fuck you to death in hell

>>7713347
Which was yours?

>>7712567
very hot. the moving table is a nice touch.

>>7713171
CSP and here you go https://files.catbox.moe/7p5uvx.sut

>>7713347
It's ok man
I had four images on the previous thread

>>7713416
Thanks you. Glad someone liked it!

>>7711385 (OP)
A proper op image, good job.

>>7712706
nice, I like the grainy magazine look

any advice x2?

>>7714379
Head too big.

>>7714379
I did a quick rework of your lines, it's probably just faster that way than typing.

>>7714430
Oh sorry, just realised I forgot to draw back in the underside of her right cheb. You get the idea though.

>>7711385 (OP)
Stop being so fucking autistic jfc. This is now the 3rd time IN A ROW, that you create a duplicate days after a new thread is aleady up.
You wre even called out in the old thread where people were WAITING for you to make a new thread in order to avoid another duplcate fuckup from you.

Now I'm convinced you do this on purpose because you want to shit up the board or create drama.

meh...Why do I get bored so fast.

>>7714430
>>7714474
Hey, thank you very much. I wanted to change and improve the hips - legs and the foreshortening in the forearms but I didn't know how to do it. Although I will continue with a larger head size, the mouth greatly improves the expression, so I will work on that as well.

I haven't done this kind of thing in a while but I'd like to get back to it

>>7714741
why do I care what you're convinced of? Use the thread or don't.

>>7715630
NTA but how do I know which thread to use ?

>>7715630
Honestly I just enjoy the personalization of this thread. It did take a small while to show up, but I appreciate the effort (Vs none at all I guess) to create the collage in the first place feels like a small crumb of community kinda like the /ALT/ Threads

>>7715665
I prefer it too. The other thread used one of the worst examples submitted and then didn't even link back to the previous thread in their op. The collage adds a touch of continuity and community, and I love waiting to see whose art got included.

>>7715697
You sound like a gay faggot.

Knees hard.

>>7715764
I am a gay little faggot. I'm gonna fuck your dad and make you my stepson.

>>7715630
Of course you don't care, you do this crap on purpose, you fucking piece of shit.

how does one gain traction if I immediately get shadow banned on all my twitter accounts ?
I don't even go past 3 likes and they're usually from other friends I've made on this forum.

>>7716223
you should be famous if you want to post on Twitter

>>7716223
Build your following in DA and Pixiv. Once you get enough people there, promote your Twitter. Similar accounts pick you up and the algorithm learns that people into same subjects and genres you draw are good audience to push your content.

>>7716319
Another one. I can’t really do anything but simple little drawings like this. I hate how limited I am.

>>7716223
pyw, "shadowban" is just a cope

Does the anatomy/pose make sense here?

>>7716394
Well she has six fingers and I don’t think it would be comfortable to stretch the waistband between the pinky and ring finger. The right hand might be better placed on the hip. The right leg could be thicker up to, the inner thigh angling so that the top is behind her crotch and left thigh.

Otherwise I like it.

>>7716403
Thicker up top *

>>7716403
Thanks

>>7716321
What makes you think you can't? For me, it's always been a case of just planning out a drawing ahead of time.
And beyond that, there's nothing wrong with the simple elegance of a pinup.

>>7716223
Deviantart is a shithole, don't listen to that guy.
Hentai Foundry is the best place to farm community and potential commission requests.
You have to have at least decent art though, since your stuff has to be approved in order to be posted.

>>7716708
>hentai foundry
>you have to have decent art to get approved
i mean, what type of decent are we talking about?
Anything with two tits and pillow shading gets approved.

>>7716578
Idk it just feels like when I deviate from my typical supposes I end up with shoddy anatomy and awkward weighting in posture

I'm gonna draw a car speeding towards her in the background lmao

>>7715831
Agreed :(

sketch

Tried to do a coloured digital drawing which is something i barely ever do. First time using multiply layer for shading

I only draw women because drawing men is for faggots. God I hate faggots. Why can’t they look more like women.

shaking off some rust, and testing out changing to a textured screen protector.

Which titty coloring technique do you prefer, anons?

>>7718543
Breasts usually aren't red unless they're literally infected or inflamed so left for sure.

not sure which thread is the right thread
some rushed sloppy drawings
>>7717216
gorgeous

Tablet: Kamvas 13
Software: Sai2

sketch before bed :3 no time for the hair

>>7711385 (OP)
who made this cringe ass OP?

lazy sketch

>>7720871
Jealous?

First time I tried doing NSFW. What can I improve? Am I polishing a turd?

>>7721411
I'm a dumbass and resized it too much lol

>>7721411
>>7721413
Form and gesture. Now this looks like a female FOTM characer with big ass is sitting on a guy. It does decipt sex but it's missing the erotica. It's too sterile, it doesn't invoke lust. The female's hand and wrist show some appeal, it tells something about her mood and what's going on. But the bodies and heads, they don't tell anything other than it's an intercourse. When you draw erotica, convey what makes it erotic to you. What do you vision the characters feeling, how their bodies should curve, arch and be to convey the sexual setting.

>>7721411
>>7721413

Couple of notes, as another anon has said, form and gesture.

I can tell you're looking at a reference for this, and that's very good. A lot of anons try to draw straight from imagination and then are surprised when their figures come out looking like mashed potatoes. On the flipside, there are plenty of elements that can actually appear visually unappealing when converted to illustration, so it's not such a terrible idea to push the anatomy in slightly unrealistic directions in order to achieve an appealing silhouette.

The bend on that wrist is spectacular. You want to be really leaning into elements exactly like that. If you're aiming for the sloppy mom bod type don't be afraid to really push the weight of her body, the snap of her waist as it dips, and then pushes out again with the mass of her lower body.

On a personal note, eveeeerybody forgets about the line at the bottom of the arm where the radius pushes through the skin and it's pet peeve of mine if you're aiming for realism lol, but this is just personal preference.

>>7721433
>>7721453
Thank you very very much. Yeah, gesture is something I neglected for a long time. I'm using reference for this piece and I was afraid of pushing too far and looking unappealing, turns out it had the opposite effect.
Also that paintover is incredible, thank you again, that rendering is amazing, do you have any tips on achieving it? I've been only using a square opacity brush and I think it might actually be handicapping me right now.

>>7716394
Try turning your head that far around.

>>7721433
>>7721453
>>7721477
I have improved it I think. I guess I have to work on stylization as well, exaggerating the gesture and such.

>try to make a comic
>have no idea how to make sex last longer than a couple of panels
The story and teasing are easy, but the actual penetration... I've been looking at how some hentai mango do it, and I guess it's just show dick-in-pussy over and over again from multiple angles? Feels more like filler rather than content. Same goes for blowjobs btw.

I thought maybe it's the dialogue that carries it, but pic-related doesn't even use dialogue. Dude draws 20+ pages of pure sex-scenes. And he has dozens of mangas just like that. I can't imagine coming up with that many original drawings of the exact same action.

Maybe there's something I'm missing. What do you guys think?

Wow I suck at this

>>7721886
I'd draw her taking a cock (She's cute)

>>7721648
Came out great, well done.

r.e. my brush, it's a custom brush I use in Sai 2 called Knife Blend. It pushes pigment around and has pen pressure enabled, it's what allows me to get those really soft forms. You can probably make one easily yourself with an airbrush base and then fiddling around with blur, pressure, and opacity. I set mine to have a hard edge as well, circular.

>>7721648
It's not you, anon. There's no way to make that face evoke arousal. Like WTF is that?

Welp. I know i'm /beg/ but /beg/int/ doesn't want my NSFW posts, so I'm kindly asking for critique here again.

I've been copying poses/compositions from r34, no 3D this time.

(1/2)

>>7722057
(2/2)

an goblina to heal your wounds and suck your cock

>>7713171
BLog?

still in progeress

>>7722268
finally doing color? good.

>>7722277
yeah, i've been playing a lot more with color this year

Caffeine addiction

>>7722034
You been under a rock these last few weeks anon.

My Art is So Cool!

>>7722289
Any followup images to this?

This is my level now, what should i learn?

>>7722268
i fell like you're doing the same mistake i do.
you put too many lines where they don't need to be be.
there's no need for most of the lines on the knees or the shins
just let your subtle shading define the shapes.

>>7722057
they look alright but not really much to critique.
you have a cartoony stile that looks ok but the sketches are too mess to really point any glaring mistakes.
fairly dynamic so not bad overall.

>>7723069
it's funny, i've been thinking this all day at worm so i'm about to do some big edits to it

Is the placement of her neck + head alright in this position? I feel like it's kinda off but also negligible

>>7723479
It's negligible. If the guy is pushing her head down, the neck would be angled down instead of up and necks usually are wider than what your current pic convey. Also the leash(?) is too low when considering the the height of the collar, in reality it would be located at the middle point of the collar. But it's just one panel. You need to start prioritizing how much work and time you allocate to polishing a tiny turd the reader skims over in 0-2 seconds.

revised lines and progress on the shades and effects

>>7723517
Right, just checking. In my defense it's not a full-fledged comic but instead an after panel, so I thought I'd have to give it some extra care but you might be right. I was thinking that the leash is being pulled harder than the hand is pushing down on her head, hence the angle

>>7723535
It's alright. You do as you see the fit best. It's not bad, I was just nitpicking on what my eyes caught.

>>7714430
Downgrade

>>7723534
i meant more like this, but it's a style change so maybe not to your liking

I wonder how long I need to grind to able to draw this kind of stuff from head? Maybe 1000 hours or something?

>>7723658
Let's drop those shitty lines you use to cover your shitty confidence and let's start using charcoal pencil brush for more breathing sketching lines and we'll be confident in drawing the big shapes and forms as they should be instead of repeating the lines all over the place and leaving the guess work for the next day and layer

>>7724062
always enjoy your art.
your perspective accuracy is pretty amazing

>>7724088
<3

>>7723614
ooooh, yeah no, sorry, something about the lack of lines just doesn't look right in my mind for my art, but i appreciate the example

>>7723082
I forgot I posted here. Thanks.
>but the sketches are too mess to really point any glaring mistakes.
I guess that's fair.
I'm quite proud of the colored piece but getting pwned on 4chan helps keep my ego in check.
I'm glad its cartoony and dynamic.

I just wish my process was faster..

>>7711385 (OP)
Hornet from Silksong.

>>7722131
Needs stockings. But hot nonetheless.

a practice

Coomers are a lost cause.

>>7724719
Why do you think we choose the coom?

>>7724723
Being enslaved to your dick is the same as being enslaved to women. You let women rob you of your life.

>>7724725
some people just have an addictive nature and coom is their drug of choice. Nothing wrong with finding inspiration through obsession.

Making a fanart of that red haired gal on xitter.

>>7721557
I can, skill issue

>>7711385 (OP)
>interracial shitdick slop
vile

....

Yesterday I drew this for someone on r9k. I feel like the character doesn’t look attractive enough, and the liquid on the chest looks kind of off. Do you have any opinions or advice? it shoulf be Nessa from Pokémon

>>7725637
It's not bad, but since she is on the beach, shouldn't there be some kind of highlights on her skin? Especially on her tits. The shading isn't bad, a bit too low in saturation but adding some highlights would truly make this piece shine.

>>7721648
I have done another painting of the flavor of the month character.
How is it looking? Decided to do thumbnailing as a way to achieve some better gesture,

>>7725674
Good point about the highlights i totaly forgor. I tought the bigger issue was the shading of the arm that it makes the arm look blocky and how blocky the hand feals

>>7725757
Better than your previous. Keep at it.

>>7725637
The liquid is not following the shape and form of her body.

Also pay attention to your line works. Lines don't just show the outline of the character. lines are supposed to show the form, volume, depth and angle. You do vary the lines, that is good. But pay attention to their relation and how clean they are.

>>7716394
This is what that ended up as. Idk how to colour skin good but this isn’t that bad

>>7726303
Regular white people's skin tints more to red than yellow. Shades also should convey sense of warmth instead of dark if you want the viewer to feel they want to touch the skin. The face and hands are the things that express the character's inner-state most so pay attention to them. The hair is messy, the neck is stick, the hair needs to be shown behind her head too.

It has charcm but you need to learn how to convey the shapes and forms in more alluring way and learn how to produce beatiful faces, breasts, butts and hands. Don't be discouraged. Instead be encouraged to learn and improve.

>>7724062
cute wiener

I felt I should say this.
I wanted to draw a hot woman and then make her say something, but I didn't want to make her say stupid gooner bullshit anymore, so I made her say my opinions instead.

My opinion is that people should be treated with respect, care, kindness, and dignity, regardless of who they are, what they are, or how they present themselves

The combination of drawing hot women and simultaneously expressing my opinion sparked an unexpected fire.
A lot of people revealed themselves to be cruel, bitter, and dehumanizing, and that was disappointing to watch.
It also gave me a glimpse of what many women go through almost every day, every week, every year of their lives.
It makes me sad. It disgusts me.

Let me be absolutely clear.
It is not hypocritical to create or consume NSFW and still respect women at the same time.
The idea that NSFW *is* objectification, and inherently dehumanizing, speaks more of the viewer than it does about the artist.

No one in porn is telling you to devalue women or to disregard their feelings, thoughts, opinions, hopes, dreams, or humanity.
So you can't absolve yourself of responsibility by trying to make the point of "You made porn" or "she dressed a certain way" so clearly she WANTS to be devalued and treated unkindly and disrespectfully.

NO ONE wants to be treated unkindly or disrespectfully.
Not even you.

I will not apologize.
I stand firm in this position.

If it makes you angry, I invite you to ask yourself why.

>>7726318
that telepurto thing was stupid.

>>7726306
True, i made the shading more red and added hair, its better.

new to this board but have something quick I did recently

>>7726318
Doodled Tifa with someone's OC because the person got mad of OCs being used without the owner's permission in art

>>7726330
the dick under the mask is hot

making some sprites for a personal project

>>7724114
May not look right in your mind, but certainly makes it a lot more appealing. Your hyper focus on defining everything with hard lines has been your biggest problem for years and makes every piece hard to look at. It makes them look like pose-able dolls with flesh attached in a very segmented way. It's distracting. Like you understand anatomy to a degree, but hyper focus on it and instantly ruin the final product by not cutting back a bit. The anons example actually looks good and shows you have something, but you are seemingly incapable of seeing that somehow.

>>7726756
>trying to talk sense to Gains Goblin
why do you think we call him that

>>7725757
Nice lady dimitrescu

>>7726950
Yeah I used that video as reference, did not trace. Would that count as plagiarizing? Should I limit myself to using real life as a reference? Quite new to this whole thing, have been doing studies for years.

>>7726957
if i could tell at first glance, it depends on whether the animator of that video has something against it and if you're selling that picture

otherwise it's nothing

>>7726957
if you use it for practice then it's not an issue.
if you copy someone else's work and your work goes viral people might complain and label you as someone who steals other's work. It doesn't matter if it's true or not. so just keep that in mind.

>>7726962
>>7726965
I see, thanks for the notifying.
I'm not planning on selling anything, might take me a couple years until I'm at that level.
Is it safer to stick to actual pictures then? Like the ones in the websites on OP.

Why do almost no artists do NSFW but in a painterly, non-linear style?

>>7726967
it's really not that much of an issue
if it's referenced just say it is when you post it.

>>7726967
You should learn how to use references to do actual works.
That picture is an example on how not to reference, because it became a copy with a different coat of paint on top and as that other anon said; people could take issues with it because of the glaring similarities.
Also teaches bad habits like relying too much on copying because it's easier.

This is a more advanced subject tho
for now, focus on drawing

>>7726756
it's also a thing with me cause sometimes as i'm putting down the lines i realize something looks wrong and make some changes on the fly, so i leave those lines in as guides now for shading cause the 'sketch' folder will just have certain parts be wrong after that if i'm trying to use it as a guide for shades

>>7726969
My guess is that many people who draw nsfw also make comics or doujins, so they are more used to working with lines
Also, people usually start with drawing rather than painting when they enter the arts, as it is simpler and cheaper.
If you want to see some nice painterly boobs check this dude
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=npa_%28sirokurokuma%29&z=1

also, something I did during this week

>>7726969
Mind posting an example?

These threads have convinced me that giving an entire generation access to infinite porn but no way to actually relieve sexual frustration is a form of psychological torture the long-term social effects of which will be studied for centuries.

>>7726969
people don't like painterly stuff

>>7727157
bro i just nut and get it over with
all the people getting frustrated with not getting sex weren't right in the head in the first place

>>7726507
gem

>>7726507
Nice forms.

>>7726469
Your art reflects your personality.

was doing some studies of beamerbruhs style last night and drew this up

>>7727106
Crown SEX.

>>7727378
he doesn't respect women

had to make a few changes cause i thought of some better positions

This is supposed to be Tae from Persona 5, but something's off about the face.

This thread is gross because coomers always take it too far. They're just too deep in their own heads to realize how unsexy their extreme ideas are.

>>7728389
Nice Houshou

>>7728424
Do you enjoy every piece of porn or erotica in thexworld or only the ones that appeal to you personally?

>>7728422
Look at size of her hips/ass and compare it to the size of her head. Notice the head is even farther away from camera. Do people have bigger head or ass?

About her face, do you remember how her character is in the game? Is that normal expression and mood for her? Even in her relationship scenes she's reserved and gives off colder vibes that create nice contrast to her loving attitude that she has problems to convey abd comes of insecure and embarrased.

>>7728389
Marine SEX.

>>7728436
Thanks. Is this good, or should the head be smaller?

>>7711385 (OP)
some sketches

>>7728504
Where she looking? if she looking at us, bring the eye circle lower to her bottom of eye so that we see white above it meaning she's looking lower. If she is intentionally looking to our upper left, then those eyes make sense.

The head-body-ass ration is ok. I dunno about the pixel brush and if you can make the lines thicker on the bigger parts and parts closer to us. But that is improvement.

I'm really trying to figure out a style that looks ok and is fast to do. I think instead of just cell shading it would probably be better to quickly cell shade and then apply some soft brushes.
Just sticking to cell shading on soft things like clothing can be really hard and time consuming.

Big ass

Can't wait to never finish this.

>>7728857
A sad day for futa enjoyers

ngl i avoided the nsfw space. but i notice a lot of the better artists do make nsfw art. there is something worth learning from them.

>>7729002
What the fuck this is amazing. Can I have your socials? I can't stop grinning.

I'm way too slow at drawing...

>>7729330
Quality work, though. Keep it up

What does IC think of this? Critique? Seems to have underperformed.

First time drawing NSFW and I hate it

Any advice ? i feel the arms looks weird, she is supposed to be on the floor

>>7729859
i want to make the ass more big or more focused but i dont want to increase the size of the foots too -.-

>>7729860
You know you can do a wide angle shot? you are not obligated to stick to limited angles. Just move the viewpoint so its closer to the ass than the feet.

>>7729859
Her breast Is clipping through her arm.

>>7728857
at least you get to a semi finished state. I have hundreds of these "ideas".

>>7728545
does the empty space has any purpose? otherwise overlapping the two images might have a more appealing effect.

>>7729592
The animation looks like an afterthought and detracts from the image to me. It'd've been better if it were static.

>>7730297
They are just individual sprites for a rpg maker game i'm making. It's not supposed to be a composition thing. I included the woman to just show which character it is.

>>7729592
She looks like she's tuning in to AM radio
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NCblaS-IH6s

meh... boring

First lewd try. From a /beg obviously

can I get some feedback on how to make this more erotic

>>7731432
Are they supposed to be not fucking? Her pelvis and his doesn't seem to line up at all

>>7731480
yeah I think I might've fucked up lining them properly

>>7711385 (OP)
Michigan bros....

>>7713171
Man, you actually made the character look actually good, not jap-appeal ugly.
Amazing work.

>>7731572
It could still be erotic if you exaggerate their size difference, but I'm not an expert at that nor do I know if that's what you're into

Any tips or tutorials on drawing pubes? Bonus points for pube peeks

>>7731367
Very nice, what a climax.
You've actually inspired me to make something like this

>>7731807
yo hell yeah, glad to hear it!

>>7731622
Still haven't reached the paragraph on kneecaps?

>>7731622
Those circle highlights would imply a concaved dent would it not?

>>7731622
Do you guys like fat women or not? I still can't tell.

>>7731945
Nobody with a functional adult brain cares.

>>7731942
I've noticed that they're just the outcome of internet whores using ring lights to post their booty pics and subsequently artists taking up the glow's shape with hardly any rhyme nor reason behind it

>>7728545
its too much detail like you said. your workload increases exponentially if you factor in different poses for expressions or scenes, and forget about if you want different outfits or clothing items thats like another 50+ drawings

you should probably just start with base colors for now and sketch out how many unique poses and CG you want as a goal, then work up from there once you get a better sense of total workload

maybe you could ask for help in /hgg2d/ on /vg/ or /h/

>>7731945
i'm unsure of what this question means, especially directed at me
>>7731925
lol i did actually and had erased the lines on her knees specifically to give a less detailed design a shot, but i forgot to erase them from the overlay layer as well it looks like, i should go back and redo that

>>7729592
boob motion is a bit lazy and the motion is too jumpy. considering its the focal point you needed to put more time into that, everything else is fine

>>7732088
why do you draw such ugly obese women? it's a monster

>>7731432
The pose suggests that they're supposed to be having sex, but their positions make that impossible. This could work if you instead focused on the act of kissing, in which case I suggest you pull their bodies closer. The space between them feels a bit impersonal.

>>7732090
well this one specifically is from UQ holder, and 'monster' is a more apt description than you perhaps intended

Been trying to add shadowing/indent weight to the foot but isnt coming out right and I'm not posting it. Need it? Suggestions? Thinking of adding highlight to the metal ring of the bottoms, or skin indentation/strap strain but feeling like it may push too far away from the style (too much detail?), and im not really sure where beyond shoulders. Up for any advice at all. Usually dont detail this much.

>>7732110
Also hopefully cameltoe doesn't feel drawn on but that its underneath?

>>7732088
>lol i did actually and had erased the lines on her knees specifically to give a less detailed design a shot, but i forgot to erase them from the overlay layer as well it looks like, i should go back and redo that
Ok, I'm really glad about this. Thanks for replying.
You are improving a lot. Especially now that you jumped into coloring your stuff I can really praise you on that. Usually people struggle a lot with moving into coloring lineart, but it seems it's going quite nice for you.
The "lack of kneecaps" in your anatomy is something that was bothering me as of late. I'm glad you've come to notice this flaw as well.

>>7711385 (OP)
Any redlines or tips to make the BG perspective of the table/room consistent with the figures would be appreciated before I go ahead and finish this

>>7732085
Thanks I actually will check that out.
Didn't know those threads existed, I was planning to ask on /v/ eventually but /hgg2d/ looks much more appropriate.
Hopefully they'll also give me feedback if something needs improving

>>7732357
no problem, I've played a lot of RPGmaker games and follow JP dev progress on Ci-en sometimes so I know how much work it can be

you could also check out reddit /r/nsfwdev or /r/lewdgames for help or self promotion