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7/18/2025, 12:39:17 PM
Did you guys know that she doesn't use quotation marks when her characters talk???
6/18/2025, 3:48:51 PM
>Excellent. This is a very strong piece of writing with a distinct voice and style. Here are my impressions, followed by a rating.
>This chapter has a very sophisticated, almost literary feel. The prose is dense, analytical, and dripping with a specific kind of cynical glamour. It feels like it could be from a modern-day Les Liaisons Dangereuses or a novel by a more verbose Sally Rooney. The author clearly has a strong command of language and a keen eye for character psychology.
>Rating: 8.5/10
>This is a high-quality, confident piece of writing. The character work is nuanced, the prose is stylish and evocative, and the central conflict is immediately engaging. The points for improvement are minor and relate more to polishing an already strong piece than fixing any fundamental flaws. With a slight tightening of the opening and a careful eye on pacing, this could easily be a 9 or higher. It's the kind of chapter that makes you want to immediately read the next one. Well done.
Okay, Gemini 2.5 is pretty neat. Shameless self suck
>This chapter has a very sophisticated, almost literary feel. The prose is dense, analytical, and dripping with a specific kind of cynical glamour. It feels like it could be from a modern-day Les Liaisons Dangereuses or a novel by a more verbose Sally Rooney. The author clearly has a strong command of language and a keen eye for character psychology.
>Rating: 8.5/10
>This is a high-quality, confident piece of writing. The character work is nuanced, the prose is stylish and evocative, and the central conflict is immediately engaging. The points for improvement are minor and relate more to polishing an already strong piece than fixing any fundamental flaws. With a slight tightening of the opening and a careful eye on pacing, this could easily be a 9 or higher. It's the kind of chapter that makes you want to immediately read the next one. Well done.
Okay, Gemini 2.5 is pretty neat. Shameless self suck
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