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7/20/2025, 3:34:05 PM
>>42377019
Decent introduction, not amazing ("train ride to the equivalent of the olympic games" would be much clearer), but it's clear to anyone reading it what the premise is about even without knowing the episode.
Nice flowing prose, GPT4. Not the best vocabulary, but the punctuation is much better and without run-on sentences. This apparently is not GPT4 and not even assisted by grammarly, this is in fact Anon's real prose.
>Many Spike episodes attempt to milk humour from him trying to deceive others, here he is honest to a fault and it's quite endearing.
That is a very good point that puts into perspective how Spike should be written in relation to his personality: "we've firmly established the two main sides of Spike: supportive and hardworking, but also vain and gluttonous." and "Most episodes struggle to connect these differing personality traits into a cohesive character".
>That's right, this isn't Spike At Your Service, we're not going to spend the whole episode dancing around his feelings
Referencing the history and context of the character, that's good.
>he camera pans to the right to reveal Cadence enthusiastically waving at Twilight, a strong contrast to the refined demeanor of Celestia and Luna. Twilight waves back, but then looks uncomfortable again, gazing at something below. The camera pulls back rapidly to show her friends sitting in the crowd, the angle and speed of the moment emphasizing the great distance between them. This whole scene lasts about 20 seconds total, has no dialogue, and does an incredible job at communicating all of Twilight's thoughts and feelings on her ascension. It's scenes like this that make MLP stand out among children's shows.
Detailed visual audio analysis in relation to the characters, very good. The conclusion is only a little bit vague and questionable. "and does an incredible job at communicating all of Twilight's thoughts and feelings on her ascension." it does communicate her feelings, but the character arc and episode itself doesn't really have an objective conclusion where she sits beyond this grey zone where she's insecure. "It's scenes like this that make MLP stand out among children's shows." questionable.
Also the 20 seconds total with that many actions indicates a lot of rushed visuals and taking a look at the scene it is this weird animation of both fast and stilted at the same time.
1/4
Decent introduction, not amazing ("train ride to the equivalent of the olympic games" would be much clearer), but it's clear to anyone reading it what the premise is about even without knowing the episode.
Nice flowing prose, GPT4. Not the best vocabulary, but the punctuation is much better and without run-on sentences. This apparently is not GPT4 and not even assisted by grammarly, this is in fact Anon's real prose.
>Many Spike episodes attempt to milk humour from him trying to deceive others, here he is honest to a fault and it's quite endearing.
That is a very good point that puts into perspective how Spike should be written in relation to his personality: "we've firmly established the two main sides of Spike: supportive and hardworking, but also vain and gluttonous." and "Most episodes struggle to connect these differing personality traits into a cohesive character".
>That's right, this isn't Spike At Your Service, we're not going to spend the whole episode dancing around his feelings
Referencing the history and context of the character, that's good.
>he camera pans to the right to reveal Cadence enthusiastically waving at Twilight, a strong contrast to the refined demeanor of Celestia and Luna. Twilight waves back, but then looks uncomfortable again, gazing at something below. The camera pulls back rapidly to show her friends sitting in the crowd, the angle and speed of the moment emphasizing the great distance between them. This whole scene lasts about 20 seconds total, has no dialogue, and does an incredible job at communicating all of Twilight's thoughts and feelings on her ascension. It's scenes like this that make MLP stand out among children's shows.
Detailed visual audio analysis in relation to the characters, very good. The conclusion is only a little bit vague and questionable. "and does an incredible job at communicating all of Twilight's thoughts and feelings on her ascension." it does communicate her feelings, but the character arc and episode itself doesn't really have an objective conclusion where she sits beyond this grey zone where she's insecure. "It's scenes like this that make MLP stand out among children's shows." questionable.
Also the 20 seconds total with that many actions indicates a lot of rushed visuals and taking a look at the scene it is this weird animation of both fast and stilted at the same time.
1/4
7/4/2025, 10:07:01 PM
>>212346638
monkey paw'd way*
Adapt this fucking kino right now.
Alan Rickman would have been excellent in this role.
https://youtu.be/-latIFZ6xyA?t=1312
>But it doesn't have enough content, it's barely a 7 minute retelling of a story.
That's what you have writers & directors for. The concept writes itself, all you need are people who aren't completely incompetent at working with a concept this easy to write for.
monkey paw'd way*
Adapt this fucking kino right now.
Alan Rickman would have been excellent in this role.
https://youtu.be/-latIFZ6xyA?t=1312
>But it doesn't have enough content, it's barely a 7 minute retelling of a story.
That's what you have writers & directors for. The concept writes itself, all you need are people who aren't completely incompetent at working with a concept this easy to write for.
7/4/2025, 9:57:51 PM
Adapt this fucking kino right now.
>But it doesn't have enough content, it's barely a 7 minute retelling of a story.
https://youtu.be/-latIFZ6xyA?t=1312
THIS IS WHY IT'S CALLED AN ADAPTION, USE YOUR IMAGINATION AND FILL UP THE OTHER 133 MINUTES OUT OF A 140 MINUTE FILM
>But it doesn't have enough content, it's barely a 7 minute retelling of a story.
https://youtu.be/-latIFZ6xyA?t=1312
THIS IS WHY IT'S CALLED AN ADAPTION, USE YOUR IMAGINATION AND FILL UP THE OTHER 133 MINUTES OUT OF A 140 MINUTE FILM
6/18/2025, 3:19:18 PM
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