Only took 8 pictures. I tested out an additional bounce card bottom right to more evenly light the side opposite my strobe. I think I'm getting closer to what I want.

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I tried your idea tonight by adding the curved card thing on the left pointed at a 45ish upwards. Thoughts?

I think it definitely helps evenly light him, but I don't know how I feel about the added catch light. Not really much that can be done about that I guess..