/beg here, I posted in last thread and I was told not to shadow drawings but I'm confused.

I'm trying to escape from symbolic drawing so how I'm supposed to if not defining features through shadowing?

Any sensei welcome to help out/comment provide a sample

Last time I posted I was picked on because of symbolic drawing, so like a good /beg I tried to work on it to get any better.

Suggestions are welcome in all forms