Not much improvement but I'm done with this turd. I'll try harder next time. This is sorta of what I want my manga to be about, except that I want my scenes to look *way* better in the future.

Not as good as I wanted it to be, but I am tired. Calling it done. For context, it's a bandits vs mercenaries scene inside a spaceship wreck. Perspective looks tilted because the wreck itself is tilted.