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8/6/2025, 1:13:18 AM
Episodic series about an immortal human who hides their identity and just wanders the planet observing humanity and occasionally meddling in events. Each episode is a different time and place, and the organization chasing them almost catches up each time. Since it takes place over time the org changes as well, from a knights templar to a modern intelligence agency, etc. Said organization keeps the identity of the immortal secret as they want to monopolize their genetics for themselves. The immortal is aware he's being tailed and finds it fun to evade the organization, while also meddling with important events and just generally causing a bit of chaos all over.
8/1/2025, 1:54:02 PM
7/28/2025, 2:11:10 AM
>>96156996
You absolute madman. I've been catching up with the Unterwelt and seeing this I wish I did it sooner, because I feel there's something that should be addressed.
You yourself pointed out a while ago that you've been mistaken about Errum's location when writing the story and even suggested just treating it as semi-to-non-canon. But I feel there is a very easy solution to this problem. Just replace Errum with a different Yazata city. It's not like Errum is the only one there is and it would also avoid the awkward lore conflict it creates not just by its location but also the fact that Germans just fucking gassed and destroyed the greatest Yazata city in semi-canon supplementary material lmao.
Oh, and just to clarify the story itself is great. Everything about Errum was just pure unadulterated KINEMA mercilessly assaulting the reader with a barrage of some of the rawest lines and scenes ever written. But it is all the more reason to make it completely canon, which can be easily achieved by changing the city to somewhere else.
Picrel: Kaiser writing "A Monstrous Crime"
You absolute madman. I've been catching up with the Unterwelt and seeing this I wish I did it sooner, because I feel there's something that should be addressed.
You yourself pointed out a while ago that you've been mistaken about Errum's location when writing the story and even suggested just treating it as semi-to-non-canon. But I feel there is a very easy solution to this problem. Just replace Errum with a different Yazata city. It's not like Errum is the only one there is and it would also avoid the awkward lore conflict it creates not just by its location but also the fact that Germans just fucking gassed and destroyed the greatest Yazata city in semi-canon supplementary material lmao.
Oh, and just to clarify the story itself is great. Everything about Errum was just pure unadulterated KINEMA mercilessly assaulting the reader with a barrage of some of the rawest lines and scenes ever written. But it is all the more reason to make it completely canon, which can be easily achieved by changing the city to somewhere else.
Picrel: Kaiser writing "A Monstrous Crime"
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