>>96950680
Nah nah, I did want that criticism, but I have a tendency to react to criticism and think “I SUUUCK!!! I FUCKED UP!!! I FAILED THE ANONS!!! GOTTA REDO IT ALL!!!” so part of me feels like I made a mistake and I have to own up to it, but I can 100% just take the lesson of “make sure your characters have a bit more agency and don’t spell out the crux of their character arc to them as if they wouldn’t know or wouldn’t act upon it themselves”. In any case, I greatly appreciate your criticism and thoughts.
>it’s late here
Perhaps I am not alone after all…