>>24824493
here's an excerpt, I posted it in another thread. I am an ESL and it is originally written in different language, so I translated it using AI. Any critique is welcome.
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>>24822271
>It’s like I’m in a fight with my brain every day to start writing
Lol, it's the same for me. I have 'thought it up' and even written out a plan, yet I can sit at my computer for whole day looking at blank document page and not write. Then as soon as 11PM hits I start writing...
This is not my first rodeo, I have started and never finished many projects. What helped me so far:
1) plan it out and write the plan - the plan should just be general plot in like 10 points and characters
2) do not write in order - when you get an idea for a chapter, write that chapter
3) write even if it's shit, try to view your text uncritically WHEN writing, leave the critique for after you are done (this is the hardest for me)
4) NO DREAM SEQUENCES (this is personal)
Anyway here's a beginning of a recent chapter I wrote, I am ESL, so I translated it with AI and edited the translation to be more precise. I edited out character names, so if I am ever done, nobody will be able to proove I posted here.
I feel like my writing isn't wordy / descriptive enough but idk, I find wordy text outside of 19th century to be an 'attempt at artistry' - if you are not one of select unique writers who can pull it off.
>It’s like I’m in a fight with my brain every day to start writing
Lol, it's the same for me. I have 'thought it up' and even written out a plan, yet I can sit at my computer for whole day looking at blank document page and not write. Then as soon as 11PM hits I start writing...
This is not my first rodeo, I have started and never finished many projects. What helped me so far:
1) plan it out and write the plan - the plan should just be general plot in like 10 points and characters
2) do not write in order - when you get an idea for a chapter, write that chapter
3) write even if it's shit, try to view your text uncritically WHEN writing, leave the critique for after you are done (this is the hardest for me)
4) NO DREAM SEQUENCES (this is personal)
Anyway here's a beginning of a recent chapter I wrote, I am ESL, so I translated it with AI and edited the translation to be more precise. I edited out character names, so if I am ever done, nobody will be able to proove I posted here.
I feel like my writing isn't wordy / descriptive enough but idk, I find wordy text outside of 19th century to be an 'attempt at artistry' - if you are not one of select unique writers who can pull it off.