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Stop The Stillborns Edition
Previous Thread: >>95922936
Anonymous No.95933228 [Report]
RULES:
>Time period is 1994
>School is Hogwarts
>Canon characters do not exist, canon events do not happen
>Adventure benefits are received for free, right away. They also act as optional writing prompts

>Students
>Gryffindor
>Amalia Oceanborough (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95691122
>Merlin English (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95735567
>Frank Lee (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95750020
>Yukiri Sukasuka (Year ?)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/95801741/#q95807113

>Hufflepuff
>Oliver Ollivander (Y>2)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95789001
>Ciaran Whitehorn (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95734068
>Oaklynn Barlowe (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95667623
>Carl Heron (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95695721
>Arthur Abbott (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95777519
>Mythran Stonework (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95788097
>Otto Bramwell (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95881225

>Ravenclaw
>Olympia Stalward (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95699726
>Alric Yaxley (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95701302
>Minagi Sukasuka (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95710818
>Tina Crouch (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95784912
>Thomas P. Hippos (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786032

>Slytherin
>Tony Ricketts (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95711092
>Veronica Pressfield (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786370
>Zachary Oceanborough (Y2)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95691197
>Lennox Gaunt (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95700541
>Tibbits, Free House Elf (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95702791
Anonymous No.95933230 [Report]
>Professors
>Slytherin
>Nicholas Firethorn (Head of Slytherin, Care of Magical Creatures)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95668164
>Marvin (Professor of Marvin)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95874885

>Hufflepuff
>Minrathous Cicero (Head of Hufflepuff, Charms)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95700987

>Ravenclaw
>Simon Stan (Divination)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95715770
>Dougal McCreedy (Potions, Arithmancy)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95715262
>Chantelle Shafiq (Head of Ravenclaw, Transfiguration)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95736283

>Gryffindor
>Henry Travers (Head of Gryffindor, D.A.D.A)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95733516
>Studios Gaunt (Herbology)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95812786

>Headmaster
>Dankinus Manastone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95736012

>Relationship Charts
>Zachary Oceanborough
https://rentry.org/zach_relationship_chart
>Chantelle Shafiq
https://rentry.org/id_sevenfour_fiveone_twofourninenine
>Amalia Oceanborough
https://rentry.org/amalia_relationship_chart
>Lennox Gaunt
https://rentry.co/ssvinvqy
>Olympia Stalward
https://rentry.org/OlympiaRelationshipChart
>Veronica Pressfield & co
https://rentry.org/9xwqukhc
>Mythran Stonework
https://rentry.org/iv95ouiu
Anonymous No.95933247 [Report]
>Writefags
>Care for Magical Creatures (Zachary Oceanborough, Professor Nicholas Firethorn)
https://rentry.org/zach_does_not_care_for_magical_creatures
>Hiroshima, Nagasaki (Professor Cicero; mention of Ciaran Whitehorn, Nicholas Firehorn and Tibbits)
https://rentry.org/dcvrnfe2
>Rich Boy Brings Trouble (Zachary & Amalia Oceanborough, Mr. Ollivander, Oliver Ollivander)
https://rentry.org/zachary_oceanborough_and_the_juggalo_grandson
>Paper Promise (Minagi Sukasuka, Olympia Stalward)
https://rentry.org/gwtr5ay3
>Public Service Animagus (Amalia Oceanborough, Minagi Sukasuka, Chantelle Shafiq, mention of Merlin English)
https://rentry.org/public_service_animagus
>Gryffindor Has Arrived (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Tony Ricketts, Nicholas Firethorn, Headmaster Manastone, Simon Stan)
https://rentry.org/vwxf357d
>Private Student Affairs (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Chantelle Shafiq)
https://rentry.org/private_student_affairs
>Dueling and Dragons (Zachary Oceanborough, Tony Ricketts, Professor Travers, Professor Firethorn)
https://rentry.org/dueling_and_dragons
>The Boy Who Forgot (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Lennox Gaunt)
https://rentry.org/fvfbpon7
>Overgrown Expectations (Studios Gaunt)
https://rentry.org/7m9m4ie7
>Material Girl (Veronica Pressfield & Crew, Merlin English)
https://rentry.org/ek4umif9
>Dankinus Teaches a Class (Headmaster Dankinus)
https://rentry.org/DankinusTeachesAClass
>Playing Hero (Zachary Oceanborough and two others)
https://rentry.org/firethorn_playing_hero
>Buddy Holly (Veronica Pressfield & co, Oliver Ollivander, Ciaran Whitehorn, Zach Oceanborough)
https://rentry.org/ms7d4fs9
>They Live (In The Hufflepuff Common Room) (Oliver Ollivander, Ciaran Whitehorn)
https://rentry.org/ugf3z4i6
>No Bullying (Tina Crouch, Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Professor McCreedy)
https://rentry.org/tyr8id8n
[cont.]
Anonymous No.95933254 [Report]
>Writefags (cont.)
>Lessons in Etiquette (Zachary Oceanborough, Professor Nicholas Firethorn, Amalia Oceanborough, Professor Minrathous Cicero)
https://rentry.org/lessons_in_etiquette
>Experiment 1 (Lennox Gaunt, Arthur Abbot, Olympia Stalward, Minagi Sukasuka, Dougal McCreedy, References to others)
https://rentry.co/5mfm9t84
>First Day of Summer School (Otto Bramwell, Professor Travers)
https://rentry.org/fdx75gdy

>Prompts
>Post a character theme for a character that isn't your own.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95727291
>What do your builds do in their spare time? Any relations outside of their house?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95732492
>Do you have any notable family? If so, what's your relationship to and with them?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95742961
>Students: have you got any plans for life after Hogwarts? If not, what do you miss from your time before enrolling?
>Teachers: if you were forced to teach a subject that you don't normally teach or substitute for, which would you pick?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95756699
>What's your character's Patronus?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95776577
>What's your character's thoughts on the Houses?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786423
>If your character had to Polyjuice switch with another character, who would be their most/least favorite choice?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95789121
>What is your build's combat style?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95794520
>Your build has just managed to get his/her hands on the Mirror of Erised. What does he/she see?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95797456
>Muggle-borns (or half/pure-bloods who weren't certain): how did you get the news that you'd be attending Hogwarts? How did you react?
>Half-bloods and pure-bloods (or fringe muggle-born cases who already knew): did the school surprise you in any way? Disappoint you? Live up to your expectations?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95819052
Anonymous No.95933261 [Report]
Prompts (cont.)
>Where does your character spend their summer holidays? What do they typically do on them?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866884
>What's your character's favorite magical candy?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95892509
>Students: who’s your favorite teacher?
>Teachers: who’s your favorite student?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95925663

For
>Artfags
>Shitposts
>Tiermaker
>etc.
please visit
>https://rentry.org/HPMP_full
Anonymous No.95933268 [Report] >>95933274 >>95937110 >>95939764 >>95940943
>RENTRY, WITH CUSTOM MYSTERIES, LORE BASICS, AND MORE, HERE:
https://rentry.org/pmd_synthetic_apocalypse/

RULES
>Grimbright setting. Usual PMD tech level with "relics" from the 80s found in dungeons.
>Mysteries are optional, and the Mystery selection is custom: see the rentry for this CYOA's Mysteries.
>All writefags/artfags grant both the author's character and any included characters 1MP or PP each.
>Type loss can only be taken once by dual-types. If you have one type, it cannot be taken at all.
>Characters from previous PMD runs should take isekai.
>Isekais cannot have comprehensive knowledge of how to repair and use advanced tech. They can recognize it, but not its purpose nor its inner workings.
>Humans do not exist in any capacity. Pokémon don't know what humans are, either, and human isekais will have their memories scrambled so that they don't initially know that they were once human.
>Please check the rentry's "Mythical Asterisks" section before making a Mythical, esp. a Jirachi, Celebi, or Victini.
>Friendship Evolutions are counted as "evolving under level 20," but you must writefag the evolution for the discount to apply.
>Canon Megas only.
>The following abilities cost 3 MP to replace:
Defeatist
Emergency Exit
Klutz
Slow Start
Stall
Truant
Wimp Out

BUILDS
>Explorers
>Lushian the Riolu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95865376
>Cheesburger the Jolteon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95865416
>Bell the Beldum
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866420
>Corrin the Hakamo-o
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95900600

>Guildmasters
>Wyze the Sneasler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95868862

>Townmon
>Anne Tenna the Orbeetle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95864231
>Valentine Happenstance the Hydrapple
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95873379
>Ganjamelia the Sprigatito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95875325
>Gloop the Ditto
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917853
Anonymous No.95933274 [Report] >>95933295
>>95933268
>Troublemakers
>Mimi the Mimikyu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95863918
>Apollo the Torchic
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95887475
>Diana the Deoxys
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95887475
>Lord Badsour the Primeape (+ Team Sour)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95901434
>Ebert Ponderbottom (NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95909188

>Relationship Charts
>Ganjamelia
https://rentry.org/xkighkk5
>Apollo and Diana
https://rentry.org/pmd_relations

WRITEFAGS
>A Normal Day for Cheeseburger
https://rentry.org/cheeseburgeropener
>Curiosity (Lushian, Cheeseburger, Wyze, Mentions of Tenna)
https://rentry.co/nt63uneh
>Mimi Introduction (Mimi, Wyze)
https://rentry.org/MimiIntroduction
>Wake Up, Apollo Dear (Apollo, Diana, Valentine Happenstance)
https://rentry.org/triple_combo
>Villainous Scum (Apollo, Diana, Bell)
https://rentry.org/stop_right_there

>Prompts
>Which dungeon does your character want to explore first?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866775
>Explorers, are you part of The Guard or a separate, undefined Guild?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95871235
>What's a move you wish you could learn but are unable to for whatever reason?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95873428
>Pokechads, pokepost you[r] pokethemes!
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/5874274
>Pokechads, if you have a home what does it look like?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95878263
>Pokechads, what do you do to unwind after a rescue mission?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95883469
>Pokechads, do you worship any deities?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95898757
>Pokechads, how much pro bono work do you do if any? For those morally challenged Pokemon, do you ever commit foul deeds just for the act?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95910215
>Pokechads, how would your build be at a rambunctious party?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95912733
Anonymous No.95933284 [Report]
Anonymous No.95933295 [Report] >>95933302
>>95933274
Anonymous No.95933302 [Report] >>95933310
>>95933295
Anonymous No.95933310 [Report] >>95933317
>>95933302
Anonymous No.95933317 [Report]
>>95933310
Anonymous No.95933341 [Report] >>95933415
Can we retire Harry Potter now, like we did MHA?
Anonymous No.95933415 [Report]
>>95933341
People are still interested in HP, we got different prompt responses. Just a slower period but the entire thread is in a slow state in general. I think another week to see if the carcass started to swell is the best bet, we'll keep poking it with sticks in the meantime.
Anonymous No.95933428 [Report] >>95933431 >>95933439 >>95933445
post worm! its not dead!
Anonymous No.95933431 [Report]
>>95933428
lol
Anonymous No.95933439 [Report]
>>95933428
Then why don't you post it?
Anonymous No.95933445 [Report] >>95933462
>>95933428
It died because Edward Palton frauded on his writefag that he promised. If he ever shows his face around here again we're putting him into Worm to be Gray Boy'd.
Anonymous No.95933462 [Report] >>95933481
>>95933445
what does that entail exactly?
anyway I- uh I mean HE said he would only write if there was enough interest and there just wasn't
well I think he said that I don't know for sure
Anonymous No.95933463 [Report]
worm re-run?
Anonymous No.95933481 [Report] >>95933488 >>95933490 >>95933533
>>95933462
He said if Worm was alive the next day he'd write. It was alive for several days, and I think Nightmare wrote long before googledoc anon did.

Anyways I'm going to track him down and make sure he gets timelooped in the most unimaginable agony ever because I've never seen someone single handedly tank an MP that hard before. What are we thinkin, acid, 1000 bullet ants in his dick, a giant magnifying glass aimed at the soft spot on his head. All at once?
Anonymous No.95933488 [Report]
>>95933481
I don't remember saying any of that. Mostly because I'm not him.
>a giant magnifying glass aimed at the soft spot on his head.
He does NOT have one of those! Anyway, uh, those all sound, uh, painful. Good luck finding him.
Anonymous No.95933490 [Report] >>95933533
>>95933481
>1000 bullet ants in his dick
sounds good as a starter
Anonymous No.95933533 [Report] >>95933543
>>95933481
>>95933490
Why are you guys trying to make googledocs anon horny? Stop being weird.
Anonymous No.95933543 [Report] >>95933558
>>95933533
Googledocs anon gets a different punishment befitting for his crimes.
Anonymous No.95933558 [Report] >>95933574
>>95933543
simpsons mp when?
Anonymous No.95933574 [Report]
>>95933558
Right after the south park mp.
Anonymous No.95933609 [Report] >>95933648
>>95923474
>1600
>1599
Every page after the first have a pixel on the left cut off.
Anonymous No.95933648 [Report]
>>95933609
Also, the text at the top after page 1 is stretched and have inconsistent positions.
Anonymous No.95933668 [Report] >>95933677 >>95936113 >>95937701 >>95937711
Do you think a setting without any real civilizations could work? Just anons and their builds and any npcs they introduce in the wilderness
Anonymous No.95933677 [Report]
>>95933668
I meant anon's builds and any NPCs btw, I don't think anon isekai is a good idea
Anonymous No.95933752 [Report] >>95933764 >>95933871 >>95933959 >>95934181 >>95935099 >>95941303
>>95923474
What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?

What can I get for level 3, 4, and 5 tools, exactly?

Not even reddit slop offloads nearly all explanations to references. Holy fuck, sometimes, there aren't even fucking references. How is anyone supposed to know what level 5 augments can do?????? Why is there absolutely nothing to quantify unnatural emanation????

WHY DO SOME OPTION NAMES HAVE JACK SHIT TO DO WITH THEIR EFFECTS? "Competent Fighting" = gun skills?? What the fuck does "This is this" even mean? Why is the monster hunting skill called "Whaling"? "Death, I, Survive" = pick any skill in a profession???
Anonymous No.95933764 [Report]
>>95933752
then theres the special power option where you can just get any power you want for funsies
Anonymous No.95933861 [Report] >>95933867 >>95935157 >>95940115
>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>New Artfag
https://i.4cdn.org/tg/1749712096028481.png

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969

>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
Anonymous No.95933867 [Report] >>95933872
>>95933861
>SHIKETSU STUDENTS
>Hero Course
>1-D
>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Reset
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Trouble
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpaw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Callous
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetrap
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protector
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scour
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Hero
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miracle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyr
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-ka
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwa
https://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshire
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooter
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnelli
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089

>1-E
>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girl
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
Anonymous No.95933871 [Report]
>>95933752
I don't have answers for most of your points, I assumed it had something to do with the franchise.

Regarding tools how I imagine it is:
>1:
Mundane stuff that is pretty normal for the setting, knuckle dusters or maybe an IRL bulletproof vest. Something like a tooled smart phone in terms of gimmicks.
>2:
Better stuff like is broaching sci-fi tier. The example the cyoa uses is chain swords, I think stuff like john wicks bullet proof suit also fit. In terms of gadgets I'm thinking james bond or Agent 47 type stuff.
>3:
Top tier shit. Power armor, judge dredds gun, Thunder Hammers. In terms of gadgets I think its reaching sci-fi 'normal', stuff that would be at home in Doctor Who or Star Trek.
>4:
We are full science fantasy now, lightsabers, teleporters, maybe Space Marine Power Armor. That sort of level.
>5:
Magic that is trying to not be magic but failing. Thor's Hammer. Ironmans suit. Time Machines, Infinite Mass Drivers, etc.

For augments I think its like a level down, with Angelic being the same as a tier 5 tool.

Full disclosure, I dont know shit about the setting, this was my best guess.
Anonymous No.95933872 [Report] >>95933873
>>95933867
>2-D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Drone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arena
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)
https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devil
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Android
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Question
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Worm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
Anonymous No.95933873 [Report] >>95933876
>>95933872
>2-E
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Nayuki Kyoko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukeban
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCs
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E

>3-D
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Cricket
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcana
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdown
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knut
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659

>General Course
>2-A
>Satoru Tani
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217

>Support Course
>3-B
>Aura Curie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
Anonymous No.95933876 [Report] >>95933878
>>95933873
>SHIKETSU STAFF
>Pro Hero teachers
>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485

>Support Staff
>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
Anonymous No.95933878 [Report] >>95933880
>>95933876
>PRO HEROES
>TOP #1
Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4
Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsy
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkoro
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9
Rosethorn
>TOP #10
Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honoken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelength
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mash
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatch
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skyward
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835

>SUPPORTERS
>Rika Eichi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckard
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightly
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clear
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
Anonymous No.95933880 [Report] >>95933883
>>95933878
>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS
>Horrific 5
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191

>Night Parade
>Cammy Link VN Karma
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Maw
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomi
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccione
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutio
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348

>VIGILANTES
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weber
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Rui
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivore
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndrome
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
Anonymous No.95933883 [Report] >>95933889
>>95933880
>CULTISTS
>The Red Finger
>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion
https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombie
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weasel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hat
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573

>REVOLUTIONARIES
>Legion
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954

>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Ito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blank
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogar
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslik
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Man
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodoku
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless God
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapist
https://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Ray
https://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Dagger
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintobor
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicant
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
Anonymous No.95933889 [Report] >>95933894
>>95933883
>WRITEFAGS
>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)
https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)
https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)
https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique):
https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):
https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).
https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)
https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)
https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)
https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiry
https://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)
https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)
https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)
https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)
https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
Anonymous No.95933894 [Report] >>95933899
>>95933889
>WRITEFAGS (Final)
>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):
https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)
https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6

For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
Anonymous No.95933899 [Report]
>>95933894
Anonymous No.95933959 [Report]
>>95933752
The most insane thing is that the fixer grades section has nothing, not a word, on their actual power level and only states impossible to accurately determine shit like "strongest people in the city".

I'm convinced that cityanon maliciously obfuscated the cyoa as much as possible as revenge for being constantly shat on for so long (and this results in him being shit on more).
Anonymous No.95934024 [Report]
Color Grade doesnt imply power or skill, just Specialization in powers or skills at a Grade 1 level. Imagine Color as an EX rank that just gets muddy exactly how much better they are until stated.

I think LoR puts it best.

>9 - 6
human (street level) no stronger than Rats (common street thugs)

>5 - 2
above human (town level)

> 1 - Color
Superhuman (City (heh) level) (Able to contest anomalies)
Anonymous No.95934059 [Report] >>95934072 >>95934122
This is going to sound like too much work for one person but can anyone do an audit of the augments and/or tools of our current cast and give suggestions on how to make them match the actual level bought? I think most of undersold how strong anything higher than level 2 if the conversation is anything to go by.
Anonymous No.95934072 [Report]
>>95934059
Seconded. Lorefags put your powers of autism to good use.
Anonymous No.95934122 [Report]
>>95934059
DESU, I was more worries I oversold my I and II's.
Anonymous No.95934139 [Report] >>95934152
Cityanon here! Just gooned to Makima from chainsaw man farting in Kobeni's mouth and inflating her like a balloon. Update never.
Anonymous No.95934152 [Report] >>95934165
>>95934139
The one where she smothers Power with her sweaty ass is pretty good, and the artist os still updating it.
Anonymous No.95934165 [Report]
>>95934152
is that the one where they both become futas aswell?
Anonymous No.95934181 [Report]
>>95933752
>"This is this" even mean?
I suspect it's a variant of "it is what it is".
Anonymous No.95934239 [Report] >>95934283 >>95934737
new MP when

all the ongoing ones are boring
Anonymous No.95934283 [Report] >>95934316
>>95934239
when you start your kino mp that everyone will love
you do have it ready, don't you?
Anonymous No.95934316 [Report]
>>95934283
ill start it soon
Anonymous No.95934478 [Report] >>95935389
>get an asian sinner in the final slot
Whew. We were this close to breaking canon.
Anonymous No.95934737 [Report]
>>95934239
When the moon is right
Anonymous No.95934985 [Report] >>95935006 >>95935098
>Sinner line up complete
Post ships!
Anonymous No.95935006 [Report]
>>95934985
>Post ships!
Your wish is my command!
Anonymous No.95935098 [Report] >>95935392
>>95934985
no one even posted it in this thread
Anonymous No.95935099 [Report]
>>95933752
CITY CORD, DESTROY HIM
Anonymous No.95935157 [Report] >>95935161
>>95933861
ah shit, that’s what I forgot to post before falling asleep. Thank you, anon! Your work is appreciated
Anonymous No.95935161 [Report] >>95935183
>>95935157
If there is one thing we can rely on, it's that MHA somehow always manages to survive.
Anonymous No.95935183 [Report]
>>95935161
lol, true. In an age of random and sudden death, its stability is welcome
Anonymous No.95935389 [Report]
>>95934478
I was assuming they were all just korean, but most of the characters in the series aren't named park gonye or whatever and sinners arr literary references so i didn't spend 2 days putting together a name. Mentally, my character looks like a kpop star though.
Anyway guess someone should post it. I just woke and wouldn't be able to think up names even if I wasn't drowsy so that's on someone else.
Anonymous No.95935392 [Report]
>>95935098
Surely someone is thinking hard about those nicknames
Anonymous No.95935432 [Report] >>95936993 >>95937110
Reposting in the new thread for visibility

https://rentry.org/pmd_relations

Apollo + Diana relationship chart
(not anchoring this because it’s already in the threadslaving stuff)
Anonymous No.95935540 [Report] >>95935552 >>95935823 >>95935929 >>95937453 >>95938433 >>95938930 >>95940344 >>95940421 >>95940458 >>95940534 >>95940685 >>95940748 >>95942087 >>95942462
>>95923474
DA CITY

>Independent Fixers
>Onyxia Grim, Van Helsing: The Sequel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95934345

>Death's Head Office
>Lana Styx, Future is Now Old Woman
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95910807
>Zwei
>Joseph Ringo
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95927394

>Independent Syndicates
>Exterminator Eric
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917690

>Limbus Company Bus Department
>Mr.Minos
https://rentry.org/LCBDanteh
>Edward Hyde
https://rentry.org/umm8t2g3
>Fenrir
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917484
>Lancelot/Lance
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917957
>R. Carter
https://rentry.org/CitySinner04
>Damsel
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95925998
>Desdemona
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95926655
>Demi Karras
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95927187
>H. Watson
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95930888
>Morella
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95930901
>Mila
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95932436
>Moriarty
https://rentry.org/836t7e5e
>Ronin
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95933307
Anonymous No.95935552 [Report] >>95935558
>>95935540
Anonymous No.95935558 [Report] >>95935566 >>95935629
>>95935552
Anonymous No.95935566 [Report] >>95935573
>>95935558
Anonymous No.95935573 [Report]
>>95935566
Anonymous No.95935629 [Report] >>95935664
>>95935558
>You can do things such as free VIP Warp Train seats, armies of bodyguards, and an untouchable presence to fellow feathers ad Wing employees
This isn’t fucking English
Anonymous No.95935664 [Report] >>95935910
>>95935629
If you removed Warp and Feather it reads pretty easily. Hell it still reads easily with them, already explains what a Wing is in the CYOA. Did you really get filtered that sentence by like two words?
Anonymous No.95935823 [Report] >>95935834
>>95935540
So we have a full team of sinners, a dante, a babysitter, we just need the driver/bus fixer
Anonymous No.95935834 [Report] >>95935861
>>95935823
Wasn't this >>95932436 the driver?
Anonymous No.95935861 [Report]
>>95935834
So it is. Were good then.
Anonymous No.95935886 [Report] >>95935907
I see where cityanon gets it from, why does pm hate you being able to read shit?
Anonymous No.95935907 [Report] >>95935919
>>95935886
Translated from Korean.
Anonymous No.95935910 [Report] >>95935978
>>95935664
>You can do things such as free VIP Train seats, armies of bodyguards, and an untouchable presence to fellow and Wing employees
Fuck off pajeet
Anonymous No.95935919 [Report] >>95935946
>>95935907
Nah, that's not the problem, it's them putting red or purple colour words on a dark background. I had to put my brightness setting near max just to make out the words.
Anonymous No.95935929 [Report] >>95936298 >>95936335 >>95936362 >>95936665 >>95937644 >>95938727 >>95942462 >>95943064
>>95935540
>Rhapsody 0: Prologue (Joseph Ringo, All Limbus Company except Mila, Moriarty and Ronin)
https://rentry.org/t2i35ih2
This is the most people I've ever written in a single Writefag, so sorry in advance if I messed up characterization or didn't give someone much of a spotlight. If anyone has critique or wants changes so their character is more accurate, let me know and I'll try to get it done sometime after work.
Anonymous No.95935946 [Report] >>95935967
>>95935919
The best explanation I can think of is that the Koreans are living in a cyberpunk dystopia where the sun doesn't shine and having any better contrast would hurt their dark-adjusted eyes, but I'm not totally sure that's the case.
Anonymous No.95935967 [Report]
>>95935946
I think it's because their target group is edgy teens, so they use poor visibility to filter out oldfags with poor eyesight.
Anonymous No.95935978 [Report] >>95936062 >>95936079 >>95936082
>>95935910
You getting baffled over a simple sentence like that isn't my problem. How is it that your understanding can be worse than the person you're trying to call out for being ESL? If it really took you 30 minutes to try and formulate some gotcha by taking removal literally and not substituting Feather then I'm not surprised at your weak reading comprehension.

I mean you could have chosen so many other phrases in there but you went for the one that can be boiled down to an easy straightforward statement if you didn't instantly get defeated by 2 terms you were unfamiliar with.
Anonymous No.95936062 [Report] >>95936110
>>95935978
eslbro... that sentence isn't even REMOTELY close to being correct even if you take out those words
Anonymous No.95936079 [Report] >>95936110
>>95935978
There are other measures beyond comprehensibility.
Anonymous No.95936082 [Report] >>95936101 >>95936103 >>95936110
>>95935978
You can "do" train seats and bodyguards? You can do an untouchable presence? Yes, you can grasp the meaning that you can obtain certain things with the perk, but it's not proper english. Stop dickriding the favela rat.
Anonymous No.95936101 [Report]
>>95936082
Don't kinkshame. If someone wants to do train seats, bodyguards and the untouchables, they should be able to.
Anonymous No.95936103 [Report]
>>95936082
technically you can do anything if you try hard enough
Anonymous No.95936110 [Report] >>95936141
>>95936062
Out of spite I put it through like 3 grammar sites and the only suggestions are fixing like 2 spelling errors. It doesn't exactly flow off the tongue but there's nothing thats breaking the rules of the english language so much as to make it completely unreadable.

>>95936079
Yeah of course it can be written better but its not like its not understandable. He could have chosen so many other sentences in the CYOA which are far worse, there's like a dozen half sentences. Its the least offending one I've seen.

>>95936082
I cannot imagine being so caught up in hating somebody that even the smallest infractions are blown up as if it was some huge issue. The point of the sentence could be easily understood but because its written with the elegance of a brick its apparently greek now.
Anonymous No.95936113 [Report]
>>95933668
no
anons need civilizations to rape and pillage
Anonymous No.95936120 [Report] >>95936131 >>95936154 >>95936198
Honestly the "an untouchable presence" is really the only thing that stands out, as doing an "army of bodyguards" is a bit odd but fine grammar wise. You could just put 'have/possess/gain/exude/etc. an untouchable presence" rather than just "do" it
Anonymous No.95936131 [Report]
>>95936120
I'll do you Anon
Anonymous No.95936141 [Report] >>95936158
>>95936110
>Out of spite I put it through like 3 grammar sites and the only suggestions are fixing like 2 spelling errors. It doesn't exactly flow off the tongue but there's nothing thats breaking the rules of the english language so much as to make it completely unreadable.
Those grammar sites are just as retarded as you. It's a garbled mess of a sentence, that would be plainly incorrect to 5th graders. That anon would have got nothing more than a "yeah city anon's esl, what can ya do?" but because you had the audacity to defend it and even say it's GOOD, you must now pay for your sins and be told that NO, it is in no way correct.
Anonymous No.95936152 [Report] >>95936165
Hey dipshits, English is 12 languages in a trenchcoat shitting in a melting pot and stirring.
Don't make us get the Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo
Anonymous No.95936154 [Report]
>>95936120
Doing an army of bodyguards is something you'd see Gokufan971 post in the youtube comment section
Anonymous No.95936158 [Report] >>95936194
>>95936141
Who in the world said it was good? I said it was perfectly readable. You can't even read my posts correctly, why would I take your judgement on what makes a sentence good or bad? I also slapped it onto Microsoft word, it didn't say shit. I think the fault lies with you Anon, not I.
Anonymous No.95936163 [Report]
>grammar checking sites in the humongous year of our Lord 2025
they're all unusable, rotten by AI slop
Anonymous No.95936165 [Report] >>95936171 >>95936179
>>95936152
if the language is too hard maybe you should use a site popular in another language
Anonymous No.95936171 [Report] >>95936186
>>95936165
anons, kill this man with buffalos
Anonymous No.95936179 [Report]
>>95936165
James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
Anonymous No.95936186 [Report]
>>95936171
That that is is that that is not is not is that it it is.
Anonymous No.95936194 [Report] >>95936201 >>95936230
>>95936158
>I said it was perfectly readable
>Who in the world said it was good?
A sentence is only good if it's perfectly readable. This one is not, and requires assumptions to fill in the gaps.
Doing an army of bodyguards and a doing train seats? Is that meaning immediately clear to you?
>I also slapped it onto Microsoft word
So? You can slap it into as many word checkers as you like, but that doesn't change the plain and simple reality that to ANYONE who understands the English language with any sort of high school reading level, it is clearly, absolutely, and plainly incorrect. You are either immensely retarded or arguing in bad faith and I am not sure which.
Anonymous No.95936198 [Report]
>>95936120
I feel like in the case of an untouchable presence, it's more about becoming one.
Anonymous No.95936201 [Report] >>95936222
>>95936194
Wouldn't the sentence 'I want to put a hyphen between the words Fish and And and And and Chips in my Fish-And-Chips sign' have been clearer if quotation marks had been placed before Fish, and between Fish and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and Chips, as well as after Chips?
Anonymous No.95936220 [Report]
what is it about city slop that makes anons go berserk...? these mfs are really speaking like borderline retards and manga villains out here
Anonymous No.95936221 [Report] >>95936227 >>95936228 >>95938667
>be me
>rebooting le DxD into a "proper" CYOA
>do it all in Paint
>get it all done
>post it /cyoag/ to make sure the files can fit in 4chan posts
>they all say its formatted like dogshit
>why is the text blurry af
>tell them i did it in Paint
>they tell me to "use Gimp dumbass"
>didn't know that Gimp was free-2-use or how to download it
>now doing the entire CYOA over again in Gimp along with learning how to use it to make it not look like dogshit

Well good news is you'll have plenty of time for your run of The City lmao
Anonymous No.95936222 [Report] >>95936231
>>95936201
Yes but you included capitalization which got it across anyway. It's good enough and requires no other context or assumptions unlike City anon's travesty sentence in question so it's actually readable and therefore good.
Anonymous No.95936227 [Report]
>>95936221
Bro...
Anonymous No.95936228 [Report]
>>95936221
Just put the Photopea in the bag bro
Anonymous No.95936230 [Report] >>95936243 >>95936249
>>95936194
I had a feeling you were going to take that literally. Is it autism or what because the only other people I've seen to hyperfixate on language are people who've been forced to learn it as a second language. The way you're on my ass about hyperbole and ignored my previous replies where I clearly stated my stance shows me you can only take stuff at face value and lack zero critical thinking skills while also having little to no object permeance cause apparently as soon as you scroll down that chapter in history is closed to you.

So if word checkers don't see a huge issue with it I'm just going to have to go with the "trust me bro everyone wouldn't understand this at all!", while it clearly reaches a minimum standard for a sentence in English. Come on now, like I said there's so many other glaring issues in the CYOA but you chose to die on the absolute smallest hill on there because your hateboner for the author.
Anonymous No.95936231 [Report]
>>95936222
Can can can can can can can can can can.
Anonymous No.95936243 [Report] >>95936253
>>95936230
Will, will Will will Will Will's will?

No really, add eachother on discord or something you're both pedantic fops.
Anonymous No.95936249 [Report] >>95936253
>>95936230
Completely different anon here.
The sentence is dogshit.
Anonymous No.95936250 [Report] >>95936261 >>95936536 >>95938727
Is it really so hard to discuss multiplayer choose your own adventures instead of semantics
Anonymous No.95936253 [Report]
>>95936243
>Will, will Will will Will Will's will?
All I'm hearing is KILL KILL KILL KILL

Unfortunately all I can do is waste my time calling an anon stupid for calling another anon stupid, and there's no better place to do it but here.

>>95936249
Youre dogshit >:(
Anonymous No.95936261 [Report] >>95936274 >>95936275
>>95936250
wow that possum looks wicked
Anonymous No.95936274 [Report] >>95936285
>>95936261
NOT discussion relating to mcyoag. Sentenced to hard labor in the writefag mines for 40 years.
Anonymous No.95936275 [Report]
>>95936261
ikr he's very stylish
Anonymous No.95936285 [Report] >>95936299
>>95936274
ok but it'll be for mha
Anonymous No.95936298 [Report] >>95943064
>>95935929
Gonna read this when work slows down, hopefully it doesn't get lost in the shitposting.
It really is a dogshit sentence though, what the fuck is that guy on about?
Anonymous No.95936299 [Report]
>>95936285
Once again, it turns out mhafia is behind all the shitposting.
Anonymous No.95936335 [Report] >>95936473
>>95935929
The perfect Sinner ratio. 30% are violently unhinged, another 30% are mentally unstable, the other 30% are autistic, and the last 10% are aura farmers. Surprisingly a very successful transition into the role of a Manager considering what happened to the canon counterparts immediately killing eachother over one disagreement.
Anonymous No.95936362 [Report] >>95936461 >>95938986
>>95935929
Great shit. Loved the atmosphere. It felt gritty but also had a sense of comedy. Perfect fit for the setting and a great way to kick things off. Banter among the crew was great too.

On the critique side of things...I want to say that damaging residences is a taboo, so we're probably all going to die soon? On a much more minor side note, Morella is a fist rather than a key. She's just a weirdo who uses a weapon for personal reasons. Otherwise her characterization was good to go.
Anonymous No.95936390 [Report] >>95937078 >>95937110 >>95938306
pmd anons, where would your explorers most likely be exploring? this isn't a prompt i'm just asking for writing purposes
Anonymous No.95936461 [Report] >>95936484
>>95936362
Someones gonna take a baseball bat to our bus's windows and then an arbiter is gonna fall from heaven like a rod from god and splat them.
Anonymous No.95936473 [Report] >>95936509
>>95936335
Which are which?
Anonymous No.95936484 [Report] >>95936506 >>95938986
>>95936461
nta. Depends. The law is a bit more specific.
>"No destruction of residential areas during the Night in the Backstreets."
So as long as they break our windows during the day or inside a nest they get off without being splat'd.
Anonymous No.95936505 [Report]
I wonder how hard it would be to create a program that lets users create CYOA by dropping the pictures they want to use into a folder and then clicking the boxes they want to appear in.
Anonymous No.95936506 [Report] >>95936518
>>95936484
Buses count as residential areas?
Anonymous No.95936509 [Report] >>95936544
>>95936473
>Violently Unhinged:
Hyde
Damsel
>Mentally Unstable:
Carter
Desdemona
>Autistic:
Lance
Fenrir
Morella
>Aura Farmers:
Karras
Watson
Anonymous No.95936518 [Report] >>95938727
>>95936506
If you file for a residency permit they do! (Which is the case here.)
Anonymous No.95936536 [Report] >>95936539
>>95936250
you can't make me willingly play HP, Worm, PMD, or City
start the new KTH or Fate run already
Anonymous No.95936539 [Report] >>95936565
>>95936536
Can I make you unwillingly play them?
Anonymous No.95936544 [Report] >>95936551
>>95936509
>Karras
>Watson
Haven't read it, but they just seem like autists from the builds
Anonymous No.95936551 [Report] >>95936568
>>95936544
It's a thin blurry line between autism and aura farming.
Anonymous No.95936565 [Report]
>>95936539
Of course, but only if you make an offer I can't refuse
Anonymous No.95936568 [Report] >>95936597
>>95936551
Watson has zero aura to farm tho
Anonymous No.95936597 [Report] >>95936626 >>95936768
>>95936568
Trust, when the first battle goes down and everyone is going all out they'll be standing in the corner watching in a cool pose talking to their umbrella or something.
Anonymous No.95936626 [Report]
>>95936597
That's like Steve Urkel doing it. Doesn't work.
Anonymous No.95936665 [Report] >>95937162
>>95935929
Good intro, hope this works out, also
>Was that pain going to be what he had to go through for every revival? That... That couldn't be right. Even just doing it once was enough to make him scream at the top of his clockwork lungs. If he had to revive all nine Sinners at once...
>all nine Sinners at once
who's going to tell him?
Anonymous No.95936768 [Report]
>>95936597
that's bum farming not aura farming
WHAT DOES HE EVEN DO!? :speak: :fire:
Anonymous No.95936993 [Report] >>95937110 >>95937110
>>95935432
>not anchoring this because it’s already in the threadslaving stuff
I think you should still anchor stuff, otherwise people will not know what it's for. This time it has a drawing so you can tell but it's still easy to miss.

Anyway, really cool to see. It's interesting to see what the two batnter about. Apollo is very self deprecating, more than I was expecting.
Anonymous No.95937078 [Report] >>95937110
>>95936390
I think you should link this to the cyoa, it's getting lost in the shitposting, I almost missed it.

Lushian would be in the Bygone Market or Spooky Station if exploring by himslef for "fun", I was about to write him going to the station. If there is someone to be rescued and he sees it's a particularly dangerous place he will also go, especially if the other explorers seem like they are not willing to risk it.

I had a subplot in mind involving the Grimy Ghettos, but I forgot to write about it before. I wanted to ask Wyze anon about it first.
Anonymous No.95937110 [Report]
>>95936993
>>95937078
lol if you insist

>>95933268
relationship chart
>>95935432
"prompt" (literally just a question i'm not putting this in the rentry)
>>95936390

thank you for answering lushialennox-anon
for some reason the ghost-type hanging out in a dead mall is making me chuckle

>>95936993
if you think apollo's self-deprecating you should see diana
Anonymous No.95937160 [Report] >>95937410 >>95939764 >>95940795
Anonymous No.95937162 [Report]
>>95936665
>who's going to tell him?
Just wait until we get a 13, 14, and 15th sinner...
Anonymous No.95937254 [Report] >>95937275 >>95937280 >>95937292 >>95937296 >>95937448 >>95937503
Calling it now as a soul read.
The fangers are going to fraud first because they're going to run into the issues of how to balance the Knights of the Roundtable, Orthello, and Sherlock Holmes in the same family.
Ronin is next but will put a couple writefags out before they fade out of existence, while Fenrir won't write at all and string along with prompt responses before they also jump ship.
The next ones to go are Watson and Mila as activity winds down, and the rest will try and recuperate with new sinners in the mix but eventually leave in no particular order.

See you all in a month.
Anonymous No.95937275 [Report] >>95937285 >>95937302 >>95937355
>>95937254
>balance the Knights of the Roundtable, Orthello, and Sherlock Holmes in the same family.
That's something they have to do though.
Anonymous No.95937280 [Report] >>95937355
>>95937254
>Diagnosed as critically soulless
damn
Anonymous No.95937285 [Report]
>>95937275
*not something
Anonymous No.95937292 [Report] >>95937355
>>95937254
you swapped fenrir and ronin king
Anonymous No.95937296 [Report] >>95937355
>>95937254
Exterminator Eric... it's all up to you... save City Society.
Anonymous No.95937302 [Report] >>95937355 >>95937391
>>95937275
Plus the canon sinners have "cowardly guy who was too afraid to get augments (that's pretty much it)" and "literally a centuries old second kindred who's fought in multiple high-scale wars as a frontliner and lived" both on the same team. Our shit's a cakewalk compared to that.
Anonymous No.95937355 [Report] >>95937513
>>95937275
>>95937302
If they don't it'll be lame since they won't have any cool character arc moments since they are all tied to each other. And family as in actual fanger family cause of the whole kindred thing, not found family shit with the sinner crew.

>>95937280
It's okay anon, slander isn't indicative of quality and its totally not a prophecy of what is yet to come. Just let nature take its course...


>>95937292
I decided to be daring and switch things up a bit. Its like an underdog story, except the underdog does something heroic once before getting struck down and slowly bleeds out.

>>95937296
An Exterminator can't breathe back life into the dead anon, I'm sorry to say.
Anonymous No.95937391 [Report] >>95937443
>>95937302
>"cowardly guy who was too afraid to get augments (that's pretty much it)"
In defense of Sinclair, he's the Potentialman and his story is actually supposed to be one of the grander things in the whole Limbus Company journey. He's literally destined to become something ridiculously strong which is why his antagonist's goal is to get him on their side unlike the rest. Dude has a guardian angel pushing him to be more, and also that guardian obliterated someone who kicked the entire team's asses with a single wave of his hand.

The real boring and mundane one is Rodion. She just kind of has a hero/fame complex which drove her to do something bad.
Anonymous No.95937410 [Report]
>>95937160
This is cool.
Anonymous No.95937443 [Report] >>95937470
>>95937391
>he's the Potentialman
Bro, your Gregor? Jokes aside, fair. Out the box Rodian can kick his ass, but Sinclair's going to be way stronger in the end and the bottom bitch position will go to her or Yi Sang (bro just wasn't made for this life).

Just goes to prove the point though. If sinclair gets random bullshit go to save his ass, so can our sinners.
Anonymous No.95937448 [Report]
>>95937254
I'm scandalized and offended.
Anonymous No.95937453 [Report] >>95937454 >>95937456 >>95937477
>>95935540
I need tier lists, who's the strongest? Who's the smartest? Who has the most bs hax? Who has the most sovl?
Anonymous No.95937454 [Report] >>95937480
>>95937453
Give us a tiermaker first little bro.
Anonymous No.95937456 [Report]
>>95937453
kill yourself
Anonymous No.95937470 [Report] >>95937487 >>95937582 >>95937644
>>95937443
I don't think the point was like a power ranking or calling the fangers weak, it was that they all have ties to a single origin and their issues stem from the same Father figure. How would 3 different people have different resolutions when it can be fixed by confronting one guy.
Anonymous No.95937477 [Report] >>95940795
>>95937453
be patient
Anonymous No.95937480 [Report]
>>95937454
I can't bro, downloading pics from desu archive is too annoying
Anonymous No.95937487 [Report] >>95937493 >>95937508 >>95937514
>>95937470
Three-in-one Canto would certainly win an award for the most efficient writefag this place has ever had.
Anonymous No.95937493 [Report]
>>95937487
>Three-in-one canto, but nine times the length.
Anonymous No.95937503 [Report] >>95937510 >>95937523
>>95937254
Inaccurate, I am the biggest fraud in this general and you didn't name my character.
Anonymous No.95937508 [Report]
>>95937487
>Three-in-one canto, AND one third the length
Peak efficiency.
Anonymous No.95937510 [Report]
>>95937503
>I am the biggest fraud in this general
lol
lmao
Anonymous No.95937513 [Report] >>95937543
>>95937355
Yeah, but they don't have to "balance" them. It's not like they have to shove the whole of the source material into something cohesive.
Anonymous No.95937514 [Report]
>>95937487
This is how we squeeze in the 15th Sinner, we just lump the Fangers into one climatic event... its genius. Now we just need to compress the rest into hyper efficient narrative nutrition bars. Maybe we could get away with Carter and Karras dual Eldritch Demon canto...
Anonymous No.95937523 [Report] >>95937529 >>95937536
>>95937503
I don't remember writing this post...
Anonymous No.95937529 [Report]
>>95937523
The perfect fraud can dupe even himself.
Anonymous No.95937536 [Report]
>>95937523
You were too much of a fraud to post it, so someone else did it for you.
Anonymous No.95937543 [Report] >>95937556 >>95937560 >>95937582 >>95937817 >>95937930
>>95937513
They can't even have the main part which is the antagonists of their respective stories. Hell they already barely differ in their origins since its all tied to getting kicked out of the Family. Sure you don't need all of it but they only share the names right now. They all got a Golden Bough attuned to em and some antagonist individual having 3 of them to use at once would pretty much kill us all for good.

Can't have the same dude be King Arthur/Othello/Sherlock Holmes at the same time... well maybe I could see the King Arthur/Othello being mashed together even still if it could be done would make for a really, really boring three way.
Anonymous No.95937556 [Report] >>95937590
>>95937543
>Can't have the same dude be King Arthur/Othello/Sherlock Holmes at the same time...
Maybe it's a REALLY bored fanger that loves taking different identities? He might have been those three people and dozens others, all in some kind of elaborate and autistic role play series played out over centuries.
Anonymous No.95937560 [Report] >>95937590
>>95937543
Moriarty's Bough will be Watson's after he turns evil, trvst the plan.
Anonymous No.95937582 [Report]
>>95937543
>>95937470
The Father is meant to be a side objective for Moriarty, he's more Lancelot and Desdemona's antagonist than hers. Can't blame you for being confused about it since you'd need to read my mind to know what I intended there.
Anonymous No.95937590 [Report]
>>95937556
See the last line about a really, really boring three way. I mean even if we didn't plan to actually play it like a Canto, its 3 people who can only take individual baby steps because no one can take significant progress without forcing the others to be pulled along since every step they take would lead them all closer and closer to the one guy they all share as the source of their issues.

>>95937560
Bro is not HIM in any version of reality. You need electrotherapy to cure your delusions, but luckily the exposed wiring panel on the bus means you're never far from it.
Anonymous No.95937609 [Report]
Jesus Christ you people are insufferable.
Anonymous No.95937612 [Report]
Hear me out, Moon Cell Fate run.
Anonymous No.95937636 [Report] >>95937683 >>95937816
On the note of Antagonists, I doodled a design last night for Damsel's and words just to get my mind in tune

>Flavor Snippet
"It was Magnificent. And it was bright. An Anomalous child that could sustain its properties indefinitely. I dare say, possibly, powered by the very desire of the host and nothing more. And so I carved. I took pieces and scraps searching for this desire, giving the pieces to those willing to betray her for my gifts. And I produced such beautiful EGO with their parts."

O. Solomon smiles under his mask.

"Run, my dear. As fast as you can. As far as you can go. But never die. Never die so I may resume my work."
Anonymous No.95937644 [Report] >>95937816
>>95932873
This sounds good to me, and you're right that she's inclined to call him things like and act affectionately regardless his attempts to keep distance. She'd also also be concerned with Lance and Moriarty believing she's innocent despite their own intentions their Father.

>>95935929
This was nice. I have no problems with how Desdemona was depicted.

>>95937470
For Desdemona, I don't see her problems being resolved by confronting their Father. Not entirely, at least. She still feels loyal to him, and if she was aware of the full picture, her issue would lie with Lance and Moriarty. Moriarty is essentially playing the roll of Iago for her, and both their actions would unsettle her.
Anonymous No.95937683 [Report]
>>95937636
This is cool as he'll anon.
Anonymous No.95937701 [Report] >>95937706 >>95937726 >>95937728
I'm going to ask this >>95933668 again.
Anonymous No.95937706 [Report] >>95937718 >>95937745
>>95937701
Anything "could" work if you get effortfags to care about it.
Anonymous No.95937711 [Report]
>>95933668
Sounds fun desu
Anonymous No.95937718 [Report]
>>95937706
Interactive CSM mp...
Anonymous No.95937726 [Report] >>95937793 >>95937875
>>95937701
How and why are they there then? Did they just materialize from the fog? Its kind of hard to make some backstory when everything was just "they were alone until now" because a person's character can hardly differ that much under the circumstances. If it was like a Forest situation where we all crash landed from a plane maybe you could run it further on the survival aspect but I don't see any real qualities to just removing civilization as its not a concept that can really be talked about unless there was more context. Its like saying if you think a setting where it's always night would work. Yeah I mean there's an idea but what exactly are you doing with it?
Anonymous No.95937728 [Report]
>>95937701
I don't think it would. It offers too little variety in the stories.
Anonymous No.95937745 [Report]
>>95937706
... except for overlord
Anonymous No.95937793 [Report] >>95937816 >>95937818
>>95937726
>Its like saying if you think a setting where it's always night would work.
Not really. It doesn't matter if really if it's night, day, or some secret third thing. But not having any civilization is a massive thing that anons bounce off of a lot.
Anonymous No.95937816 [Report]
>>95937644
>>95937636
Might as well make it a prompt desu
>>95937793
If the builds aren't native or something recently happened that rid the world of all civilization then yeah, otherwise it'll be a very short mp. Like that anon said, it depends on what you're doing with it.
Anonymous No.95937817 [Report] >>95937895
>>95937543
This reads like someone who's never read a single work of fiction besides this specific series
Anonymous No.95937818 [Report] >>95937828 >>95937833
>>95937793
The point is its so little information. A lot of time it is just our characters interacting with NPC's we introduced. The only difference he said is that we're in the wilderness but does that rule out campsites and small tribes being made or is it literally just individuals plopped down somewhere, and why is that the case?

That's why I brought up a world where its always night. Its one huge detail but thats all we know about the world. We don't know if its got like vampires to it or what complications that really entail during an MP because of it. If he said just player characters it'd be different, but the fact he threw in other NPC's means its not totally isolated like its being made out to be.
Anonymous No.95937828 [Report] >>95937841
>>95937818
nta, but from what he said before, no civ means literally nothing. Not even NPCs.
Anonymous No.95937833 [Report] >>95937849
>>95937818
How many popular settings do you know without any civilizations? And I don't mean popular works like that, but settings that contain multiple of them. You can have a successful survival stories, even long-running ones, sure, but the issue here is that due to the multiplayer structure, we need to have space for multiple concurrent, usually short, plots that can interweave from time to time. Lack of civilization very strongly limits that, much more strongly than eternal night or stuff like that.
Anonymous No.95937841 [Report] >>95937895
>>95937828
Bruh, he specifically stated that there would be npcs.
Anonymous No.95937849 [Report] >>95937868
>>95937833
It would probably just lead to the PC builds teaming up and making their own tribe/camp
Anonymous No.95937868 [Report]
>>95937849
Yes, but this is a very centralized plot of "building a tribe". People complain about mps being too decentralized and characters not having reasons to interact, but this is the opposite side of the spectrum, where it's too connected. Anons would struggle to find writefag subjects that aren't redundant/mess with writefags of others.
Anonymous No.95937875 [Report] >>95937893 >>95937954
>>95937726
I was just thinking of scenarios for an MP using a higher powered cyoa and maybe even a WIP. My first scenario was the idea that all the builds were from civilizations obviously but became trapped for some reason in some large enough location to host an MP, meaning that the only people would be builds and NPCs similar to the builds (ie, fellow explorers if all the builds were explorers investigating a strange new land but got stranded or fellow prisoners if all the builds were kidnapped by some sort of Jigsaw type and put in some supermassive torture dungeon).
The second scenario would be builds as deities/colonizers sowing life on some planet or something where it would just be them and any other colonizers with maybe native lifeforms.
Anonymous No.95937893 [Report] >>95937998 >>95938107 >>95938129
>>95937875
List 10 writefag ideas for these scenarios.
Anonymous No.95937895 [Report] >>95937954 >>95938006
>>95937817
I mean like, its talking about how they'd fare narratively in Limbus Company's set up. I even stated you could combine several of them, and since then I found a way to pop in Sherlock Holmes but I'm not going to go into it since it ain't my Canto to write. It's just lame cause each Sinner is supposed to face their respective Traumas. Even disregarding canon guidelines, a premise of focusing on individual characters which can all get resolved by one dude is boring. Some have already popped in and clarified that there's more to their stories, so the point doesn't really matter as much anymore.

I mean just take MHA. If Inigo, Kaylee, and Noah all had the same problem that stemmed from one source and basically all of them got affected/treated the same, that'd be boring as hell since their individual struggles would all be solved by handling it and even how they go through their issues wouldn't change. That's basically just the same character with a different flavor.

>>95937841
Thanks for answering for me, I spent like 3 minutes blankly trying to think of a response that wasn't just "Did you read the prompt at all because he posted it twice."
Anonymous No.95937930 [Report]
>>95937543
>they only share the names right now
That's not really true. Desdemona's crippling innocence that keeps her trapped in a loop of being hurt by those she loves and her EGO making her what people think of her are directly related.
Anonymous No.95937954 [Report] >>95937978
>>95937895
I should also state that since making that post a couple of the fangers came out of their blood pits to clarify that there's more to the story, so the point doesn't matter as much, I'm just explaining the view I had when it seemed like they were all intrinsically tied to the same antagonist who was the root of all their problem. I don't really know what it has to do with media comprehension, but we're not writing a book here since I know that shit happens all the time. There's no main character with the rest being supporting side characters, all these guys are supposed to be main characters.

>>95937875
The context for that is a lot different then. Its basically a mp about making a civilization at that point. If we're still dealing with NPC's I don't think its too much of a problem since people have always introduced characters to suit a specific scenario, whether they actually stuck around or not after that isn't always consistent however. If you have enough people in a room who know how to speak to each other, boom, that's civilization. It sounds like a perfectly normal idea, just replace any lore about the people with lore about the setting itself since anons would do most of the heavy lifting for the former.
Anonymous No.95937978 [Report] >>95938012
>>95937954
>If you have enough people in a room who know how to speak to each other, boom, that's civilization
That's just being pedantic
Anon's clearly (well, murkily) saying if an MP where builds don't have access to villages and cities and what not where everyone is instead a fighterman or something could work, and the answer to that is probably no lmao
Anonymous No.95937998 [Report]
>>95937893
fight monster
fight build
fight npc
fuck monster
fuck build
fuck npc
talk to monster
talk to build
talk to npc
jerk off
Anonymous No.95938006 [Report] >>95938023
>>95937895
>supposed to
proved his point
Anonymous No.95938012 [Report] >>95938030
>>95937978
It's not being that pedantic. I get his point. It's just if theres other people beyond our PC's and we can basically make them ourselves, albeit they are presumably limited in number and we can't just keep spawning them, then an MP would be fine. It's just be a really, really small civilization to fall back on. Even just 3-4 NPC's wouldn't be that different from like, I don't know, Townmon in PMD.
Anonymous No.95938023 [Report] >>95938058
>>95938006
...how is that specific to Limbus Company? We're /mcyoag/. Multiplayer. It's collaborative writing. Come on man, thats literally what every build is for anything.
Anonymous No.95938030 [Report] >>95938097
>>95938012
So what if it's a situation where it's not that there aren't people who would want to make civilization, but some external factor preventing it? Like some god hates civilization and the moment people gather past a point he nukes them.
Anonymous No.95938050 [Report] >>95938489
>if I count up every alternate form, these edits alone would get me 19 points
probably for the better that I decided not to count sprite edits
Anonymous No.95938058 [Report] >>95938097
>>95938023
sinners having to have separate unique villains is not universal for all settings and not a secret for collaborative writing
you're creating a problem where there isn't one
Anonymous No.95938097 [Report] >>95938131
>>95938030
I mean, shit, that's when we'd really have to get into the nitty gritty of what exactly is civilization. Like I said I think having 3-4 significant NPC's is perfectly fine. It's like what they say, 3's a crowd. The plot of getting together and getting nuked would be something like Death Stranding, there's still character interactions albeit mainly not in person, but small clusters going their own way and only meeting up a few times is pretty much the exact format of every single dungeon crawler team put out into the threads. Like how long in isolation with just our groups would we be with before meeting other people? A lot of those details would drastically affect how much it'd actually impact an MP.

>>95938058
Dude, its being affected by the same person and all taking it in the exact same way which I mentioned being the most problematic part. You can have one dude as your antagonist, but if you are all equally affected as them its boring as shit. This isn't a Limbus exclusive viewpoint man this is just literally thinking of characters as characters and not having them as almost direct equivalents as each other with no different individual drives that fail to separate methods of dealing with the same issue.
Anonymous No.95938107 [Report]
>>95937893
Everything you can do in a normal MP that doesn't require an establishment (unless anon makes one in which case you can) or a crowd of people to gawk and stare (unless there's enough people for that in which case you can)
Anonymous No.95938129 [Report]
>>95937893
Builds fall in love and have to figure out how to raise a child amongst the strife.
Anonymous No.95938131 [Report] >>95938144
>>95938097
>being affected by the same person
not a problem and doesn't stop them from having other antagonists as well
>all taking it in the exact same way
not true, just read the builds
>all equally affected as them
not true, just read the builds
>almost direct equivalents as each other with no different individual drives that fail to separate methods of dealing with the same issue
not true, just read the builds
Anonymous No.95938142 [Report] >>95938179 >>95938180 >>95938294
how come this stillborn cyoa generates so much shitposting, whining, and discussion about what works and what doesn't
Anonymous No.95938144 [Report] >>95938170 >>95938190
>>95938131
I don't even get why you're arguing about this. The war's over bro. I already stated multiple have come out and clarified further so the point didn't matter. I'm just seeing you hinge on some points and stating thats not what I meant to clarify, but in case you missed it because well, you did miss it, it doesn't affect the MP cause the problem isn't there.
Anonymous No.95938170 [Report] >>95938193
>>95938144
the problem is there, because you still wont be able to read the next time you have a stupid knee jerk reaction to something not completely matching canon
Anonymous No.95938179 [Report]
>>95938142
Do you know how when you have a food you like, you come back for more? It's that but for shitposters. Anons keep accepting the bait, it makes them happy, and now every time we have a city mp they come back for more.
Anonymous No.95938180 [Report]
>>95938142
It seems to be almost as cancerous as Worm
Anonymous No.95938190 [Report] >>95938198 >>95938208
>>95938144
City anon, why are you killing your own MP?
Anonymous No.95938193 [Report] >>95938258
>>95938170
Even after stating its not about just canon stuff I don't think you realized much of what I said. If you want you can build a time machine and take it up with the me a half hour ago but as far as I'm concerned everything is done and dusted and there is 0 issues that exist. If you want to get mad because you think I'm going to get mad at something in the future I personally think thats a waste of time.
Anonymous No.95938198 [Report] >>95938205
>>95938190
City anon, why are you like this? Go make a build or something.
Anonymous No.95938205 [Report] >>95938243
>>95938198
But Ronin's right there tho?
Anonymous No.95938208 [Report] >>95938223 >>95939883
>>95938190
Come on at least do something that he'd tangibly interact with. The most he does is talk about stuff relating to powerfagging on options, narratively why would cityanon give a shit about builds not lining up exactly to canon stuff?
Anonymous No.95938223 [Report] >>95938240
>>95938208
You are actually retarded lol
Anonymous No.95938240 [Report]
>>95938223
I'm pretty sure he learned his lesson trying to force in Superhuman Constitution to make it accurate and relying on being rigid with what options and opportunities should be with what. Last time he swung around it was over Special Power and Singularity shit, I haven't really seen anything otherwise.
Anonymous No.95938243 [Report]
>>95938205
I was going to say that that's insulting to Ronin anon, but then I considered saying it's insulting to City anon. I got stuck alternating between the two.
Anonymous No.95938258 [Report] >>95938266 >>95938270
>>95938193
you can state what you want, but you proved that's what it was about with your retarded claims about the characters
your issues were entirely created by your emotional response to things not following canon instead of you actual reading the builds
Anonymous No.95938266 [Report] >>95938283
>>95938258
>Smartest emotional poster anon projects his issues onto others, more news at 11
Anonymous No.95938270 [Report] >>95938341
>>95938258
Well I guess its good for me that the issue was solved and a solution was personally catered to my tastes. So now we can both be happy.
Anonymous No.95938283 [Report]
>>95938266
it's ok to just admit you're a dumbass who made claims about builds you didn't read
Anonymous No.95938294 [Report] >>95938305 >>95938333
>>95938142
There's actually one specific anon with a deep personal hatred for City who wants to drown the CYOA and discussions about it out by starting arguments whenever there's new content for it.
My source? I'm a beholder.
Anonymous No.95938305 [Report]
>>95938294
That anon? Cityanon.
Anonymous No.95938306 [Report]
>>95936390
The Dragon Warrior, if he's not hunting some particular miscreant, will be playing to his strengths while avoiding his weaknesses; if he resists most of the wild 'mons there, the chance of spotting him goes up, and if there are abundant Fairies, the chance goes way down (but isn't zero!). Beyond that, it's largely a toss-up, with a slight lean towards Grimy Ghettos due to its criminal population. One might also spot him in Stone Edge Summit; whether he's broken the verified record or not, he is unusually well equipped to tackle at least its lower floors between his typing, movepool, and his Hidden Ability, Overcoat.

There's also a good chance of spotting him at the base of the Neverending Tower, staring up at it. Whether he's actually cleared more than a few floors, who knows.
Anonymous No.95938333 [Report]
>>95938294
That IS me but I haven't been participating in this discussion, too busy jerking off.
Anonymous No.95938341 [Report] >>95938358
>>95938270
then where's my thanks for forcing you to read the builds and teaching you a lesson in humility?
Anonymous No.95938348 [Report] >>95938351 >>95938359 >>95938361
That reminds me
1. Delude myself into thinking I'll effortfag
2. Jerk off
Anonymous No.95938351 [Report] >>95938369
>>95938348
no dice.

I choose 1.
Anonymous No.95938358 [Report] >>95938378 >>95938383
>>95938341
I already read the builds originally, but anons responded and said they had more in store than just the Father thing. So unless you're one of the fangers, you'll get none, and even if you were, eh, still none cause I didn't go back to look again. Unless you count reading any post from them as reading a build. Still can't reward you for psionically compelling other people to post.
Anonymous No.95938359 [Report] >>95938371
>>95938348
Rollfags always lose
Anonymous No.95938361 [Report] >>95938369
>>95938348
No dice. I choose 2.
Anonymous No.95938369 [Report]
>>95938351
>>95938361
>both start with 1
post number has spoken, Anon. I await the effort.
Anonymous No.95938371 [Report]
Rolled 1 (1d2)

>>95938359
@grok is this true?
1. no
2. yes
Anonymous No.95938378 [Report] >>95938415
>>95938358
Actually what am I even saying, you only jumped in after I already said the point didn't matter. There was literally no contribution in any single way. It wasn't even continuing a war after it was over bro looked at it and thought "but what if I joined as a third party even after it was done."
Anonymous No.95938382 [Report] >>95938400
literally what is stopping you from deluding yourself WHILE jerking off? skill issues?
Anonymous No.95938383 [Report]
>>95938358
so someone offered you free english lessons so you can comprehend obvious things about future builds?
Anonymous No.95938400 [Report] >>95938408 >>95938413
>>95938382
Unfortunately it is, while jerking off I can only think about Wario bara.
Anonymous No.95938408 [Report]
>>95938400
yknow what that's understandable, that shit is like crack cocaine
Anonymous No.95938413 [Report] >>95938426 >>95938466
>>95938400
Mario MP when?
Anonymous No.95938415 [Report]
>>95938378
it's not done, because you're going to keep being retarded
Anonymous No.95938426 [Report]
>>95938413
Right after our Kirby MP.
Anonymous No.95938433 [Report] >>95938449 >>95938581 >>95938986 >>95943064
>>95935540
Not quite a proper intro, just some character voice practice. Will probably have something out with her meeting up with the rest of the Sinners in a few days.
>The Wheels on the Limbus (Mila, Hyde)
https://rentry.org/2wzenyhh
Anonymous No.95938449 [Report] >>95938471 >>95938479
>>95938433
sallyanon?
Anonymous No.95938466 [Report] >>95939128
>>95938413
SMBZ MP...
Anonymous No.95938471 [Report]
>>95938449
I'm repulsed that you think my grasp of their/there/they're is that bad.
Anonymous No.95938479 [Report]
>>95938449
Unironically my first thought but it just looks like Sally, that AGentlemenP probably just has similar taste in women he wants to be
Anonymous No.95938489 [Report] >>95938504
>>95938050
nevermind these have taken me three hours and at least four have needed enough editing to basically just be new sprites entirely
I might end up snagging points for those as actual artfags as opposed to edits
Anonymous No.95938504 [Report] >>95938510
>>95938489
Sorry anon, but it's actually a 1000 pixel minimum for artfags. You've earned enough for half a point which rounds back down to 0.
Anonymous No.95938510 [Report] >>95938554
>>95938504
Would you believe me if I said I’ve actually drawn in places where guidelines were that strict before
God I hate internet people sometimes
Anonymous No.95938554 [Report]
>>95938510
we need strict guidelines for MP to truly flourish
2k+ word writefag that has to be rated at least 7/10 by a council of anons WEEKLY or else your build gets killed off
Anonymous No.95938581 [Report] >>95938604
>>95938433
Damn, Hyde was driving that while drunk?
Anonymous No.95938604 [Report]
>>95938581
Probably made it easier, honestly.
Anonymous No.95938667 [Report] >>95938679 >>95938699
>>95936221
actually instead of re-doing the entire CYOA, i might as well just copy it into Gimp in order to get rid of the text blur. I mean unless people actually do care about what it looks like in which case idk
Anonymous No.95938679 [Report] >>95938714
>>95938667
I CARE.
Anonymous No.95938699 [Report] >>95938714
>>95938667
Im pretty sure MHA's success is at least partially due to it being good looking.
Anonymous No.95938714 [Report] >>95938729
>>95938679
>>95938699
Alrighy then, decision made. Luckily I got done the hard part already (writing the actual CYOA).

So I guess anyhting you would want/advice for the design? Stuff like frames, backgrounds, etc.
Anonymous No.95938727 [Report] >>95938738 >>95939054
>>95935929
Based, very fun read anon I liked the atmosphere and characterisations.
You gave Ringo some very cool moments and I appreciate that. I thought you did a good job or depicting his "I don't care as long as my clients surviving, I'm getting paid" philosophy.

>>95936250
That file name gave me a hearty chuckle.

>>95936518
I wonder if a person could file as a residency? Just walk around and have the sweepers ignore you. Surely if you paid enough right.
Anonymous No.95938729 [Report]
>>95938714
Use layers. It sounds obvious, but I feel like in this case it warrants saying.
Anonymous No.95938738 [Report] >>95938859
>>95938727
>I wonder if a person could file as a residency? Just walk around and have the sweepers ignore you. Surely if you paid enough right.
I could see it work if you're pregnant. Where's pregfag where he's needed?
Anonymous No.95938859 [Report] >>95938871 >>95938953 >>95939159
>>95938738
If it works for pregnant people, I put forth that my 'body' is actually the residence of my consciousness. And I, as in what defines and characterizes me, is solely my consciousness. Ipso facto ergo vergo my body fits the legal definition of a dwelling and is permissible under legislation to receive a residency licence.

I rest my case.
Anonymous No.95938871 [Report]
>>95938859
>Gets executed for being a robot (of a mecha variety).
Anonymous No.95938930 [Report] >>95938986 >>95939001
>>95935540
What's up with the organization section? Does every build get an organization of their own?
Anonymous No.95938953 [Report] >>95939159
>>95938859
>3 in the morning, drinking Technically, It's Drinkable!, watching the rain
>only 16 hours at work tomorrow, feels good man
>trying to listen in on all the Sweepers doing their sweeper thing between the lightning and artillery strikes (fucking Thumbs)
>imagine getting swept by cute Sweeper girls
>sudden some lunatic starts screaming
>"I AM A SOVEREIGN CITIZEN OF THIS CITY DISTRICT"
>"MY BRAIN IS RESIDING WITHIN MY SKULL, RENDERING ME A RESIDENTIAL STRUCTURE, AND THUS PROTECTED BY THE LAW"
>"MY BODY IS NOT FOR COMMERCIAL USE, AND IS A PRIVATE HOUSING ARRANGEMENT, SO I HAVE NO NEED FOR A RESIDENTIAL LICENSE"
>wet thump, trails off into soft moaning
>lucky bastard
Anonymous No.95938971 [Report]
ive spent an hour trying to give this motherfucker a proper cape and I have finally given up
I don't think it's happening it just clashes too much with the body itself
and primeape's original portrait already had all sorts of weird color bleeding that makes it even more of a clusterfuck
lord badsour shall be going capeless
Anonymous No.95938986 [Report]
>>95936362
Edited the Morella note - I'll blindly believe what >>95936484 said and my excuse for them not getting destroyed is 'it happened a few minutes before the Night in the Backstreets actually began', that way I don't have to do bigger changes.

>>95938433
Nice work! I like how you portrayed Hyde, he would definitely talk down to the other Sinners based off something as petty as their number. I like their dynamic a lot - they play into each others bullshit when the more sane Sinners would probably just relent and fuck off.

Looking forward to when Mila joins the bus proper and meets with the other Sinners!

>>95938930
I thinks it's mainly for if you're in charge of an organization - like a Fixer with their own office, or a minor Syndicate. Anyone joining one that's already a thing (another player's organization or a canon one like the Associations) can skip it like the Sinners did.
Anonymous No.95939001 [Report] >>95939029 >>95939033 >>95939043
>>95938930
It's so solo syndicate builds can take 5x authentic style with New Old, get 5 Level V tools/augments, and bumrush the Head.
Anonymous No.95939029 [Report]
>>95939001
my hero eric needs no help
Anonymous No.95939033 [Report] >>95939059 >>95939076
>>95939001
>Bumrush the head
>Gets solo'd by a single claw. Not even an arbitor.
Syndicatekeks, please never change.
Anonymous No.95939043 [Report]
>>95939001
You can solo the Head without all that. Just use Special Power: Head Killer 9000.
Anonymous No.95939054 [Report]
>>95938727
i have more
Anonymous No.95939059 [Report]
>>95939033
You got that the other way around, a single low ranking crew member of a mid syndicate is going to gape the head and every single claw and arbitor at the same time because they're a gang star and that's how mafia works
Anonymous No.95939076 [Report]
>>95939033
Nah, Implants Guy is taking the whole district with him when all of his tools and implants backfire simultaneously.
Anonymous No.95939128 [Report] >>95939258 >>95939293
>>95938466
We have both never gotten and will never get kino on the level of Brawl on a Vanishing Island
Anonymous No.95939159 [Report] >>95939281 >>95939362 >>95939540
>>95938953
>>95938859
Really makes me want to create a sovcit sinner who has death, I, survive 3: Law

And just skirts through conflicts with legal jargon and finding holes in rules. His ultimate move is some sort of legal requirement for an arbiter to arrive and protect him from a threat only for the arbiter to wipe out the threat then stomp him for wasting the arbiters time
Anonymous No.95939258 [Report] >>95939416
>>95939128
this would have been dragon ball the MP if anons played it btw
Anonymous No.95939281 [Report] >>95939350
>>95939159
When Limbus inevitably fucks up and pisses off the Head, he tricks the Claw or whatever trying to kill us into breaking a taboo, so an Arbiter comes to fuck them up while the Sinners try to run.

Could be Portia from the Merchants of Venice, or Frollo as an ex-N Corp inquisitor maybe.
Anonymous No.95939293 [Report] >>95939416
>>95939128
U this would have spunchbob the MP if anons played it btw
Anonymous No.95939350 [Report]
>>95939281
Kino
Anonymous No.95939362 [Report] >>95939417
>>95939159
Does it really need to be a sinner? I guess he could resonate with a golden bough, but others resonated harder than he could so he's part of the company's legal team while waiting for a sinner to quit the contract for whatever reason.
Anonymous No.95939416 [Report]
>>95939258
>>95939293
THERMOTRVCLEAR BOMB or DEMON OF BABYLON WEARING THE SKIN OF A PROPHET? call it
Anonymous No.95939417 [Report]
>>95939362
Even better. He is part of the legal department, called in to audit the shenanigans
Anonymous No.95939427 [Report] >>95939447
>Death I Survive 3: Law
>Color Fixer tier
>The Red Tape
Anonymous No.95939447 [Report]
>>95939427
Please stop I can only get so erect
Anonymous No.95939540 [Report]
>>95939159
>post-hoc incident severity ratings based entirely around how hurt this guy is by arbiters
Anonymous No.95939764 [Report] >>95939785 >>95939820 >>95939832 >>95940072 >>95940167 >>95940656 >>95940795
>>95933268
>>95937160
six hours well spent
there are so many of these that I posted them individually I'm pretty sure I'd get flagged for spam so if you want either the original portrait sprite (TINY) or the resized 200x200 version of your character, please let me know individually
Anonymous No.95939785 [Report] >>95939906
>>95939764
oh i forgot to mention
I am by no means a sprite artist, I think this is the first time i've tried spriting more than some extremely minor edits

Wyze, Corrin, and Bell are unchanged from their PMD portrait depository variants: I did not make them and didn't edit them, the original creators can be found here
be warned the site is aids
https://sprites.pmdcollab.org/

anyways I'm going to go tally up which of these barely count as sprite edits and which of these are basically do-overs Mimi, Mega X, and most of Diana's forms are currently in the running for that then add that to the point total
Anonymous No.95939820 [Report]
>>95939764
it's always the garbage stillborn mps that get nice art, oh well
good job anon
Anonymous No.95939832 [Report] >>95939906
>>95939764
Even though I think PMD sucks mondo ass, you did something cool, and I can respect that.
Anonymous No.95939883 [Report]
>>95938208
This is true. I have been busy immersing myself in the study of TTODPTW, and the dichotomy between Jedi and Sith.
Anonymous No.95939906 [Report]
>>95939785
alright, I'm going to tally this for 8 points because about half of these had to be redone either partially or completely
Diana alone doubled the time it took to make all the portraits
if I go based on time that's about 0.9 points per hour
fitting enough for me

>>95939832
thank you anon, I appreciate it
i'm glad you like it too
Anonymous No.95940072 [Report] >>95940086
>>95939764
I hate the mp but I respect the work. Keep it up anon. (And join MPs I actually like)
Anonymous No.95940086 [Report]
>>95940072
lol, I might if one catches my attention. I'm still splitting my attention between HP and PMD right now the HP writefag has ballooned into a monster that's become very difficult to write due to some irl circumstances mentioned previously, but I hope to get it out within the next three days but the latter's probably going to be a very quick arc so I'll probably be free to join something else by mid-July if all goes well
Anonymous No.95940115 [Report] >>95940120 >>95942992
>>95933861
I was scared! But now all is familiar and right with the world. Now back to my writefag that is at short story length and has taken exponentially longer than I thought it would, including rewrites.

I will not learn from this.
j
Anonymous No.95940120 [Report] >>95940128
>>95940115
What did anon mean by this?
Anonymous No.95940128 [Report]
>>95940120
I dunno but looks like he died.
Anonymous No.95940167 [Report] >>95940213
>>95939764
I fucking despise PMD with my entire being and wish it was never brought up into this thread or even witnessed by human eyes so that the thought of it would never cross the minds of any conscious being.

But besides that this is great, good work anon.
Anonymous No.95940213 [Report]
>>95940167
woah calm down facility rat
Anonymous No.95940264 [Report] >>95940269 >>95940280 >>95940288 >>95940294 >>95940345 >>95940601
so are all the replies talking about how much they hate pmd a bit or serious? because I know I was serious.
Anonymous No.95940269 [Report]
>>95940264
What's the difference?
Anonymous No.95940280 [Report]
>>95940264
100% serious over here
Anonymous No.95940288 [Report]
>>95940264
I don't think about it at all
Anonymous No.95940290 [Report] >>95940296 >>95940421 >>95940445 >>95940446 >>95940565 >>95940738
>>95923474
>Name
Basil Hallward
>Gift
EGOist
>Origin
Sinner/Syndicate
>Perks
Adaptability
This is This
Distortion
Shin
Creative License
Geburah
Netzach
Hod
Viciousness of Combat
>Distortion Form: Jealousy Turned Wilde
Power: Normal
Ability: One Trick Pony
Form: E.G.O. Suit
Range: Self
A Distortion that causes Basil's body to be wrapped in velvet white satin canvas with a bloodfiend-like hunger for blood. By absorbing the blood of others, Basil can take on the appearance, memories, and/or abilities of those whose blood was absorbed. However, the power is temporary, normally only allowing a day of normal day to day actions for a pint of blood with strenuous combat or copying of extraordinary abilities lasting only an hour to 10 minutes per pint depending on the level of power emulated.
>E.G.O.: A Canvas of My Own
>Power
Extreme
>Variety
One Trick Pony
>Form
An Item
>Range:
Short Range
While this EGO cannot be used directly by Basil, if another person willingly gives him their blood, he can paint into being any object they desire with powers tied to said desire. If they wished to fly, they could be given an EGO Suit with angelic wings or a futuristic backpack. If they wished for eternal youth, they could be painted over and made into a pseudo-bloodfiend in the form of a younger version of themselves. Sadly, while this power extremely powerful, it is also dangerous as said objects act like Abnormality EGO and tax the spirit/sanity of the users if overused which can either cause the person to Distort or suffer EGO Corrosion at worst.
>EGO TOOL: What Remains Underneath
A Paintbrush Sword and Square Canvas Riot Shield Combo imbued with the essence of the Portrait of Another World Abnormality. It gives Basil the ability to link two targets and cause any effects both harmful and/or positive to be shared between said targets.
>Drawbacks
No Augments (Superhuman Constitution)
Betrayed (20 PTS)
Hunted (20 PTS/Lord Henry of the Fauvism Ring)
Anonymous No.95940294 [Report] >>95940306 >>95940320
>>95940264
Taking the piss because 3 replies in a row saying the same thing was so ridiculous. Literally none of em had to mention the first part and just say wow thats cool.
Anonymous No.95940296 [Report] >>95940342 >>95940609 >>95940738
>>95940290
>AI slop
Anonymous No.95940306 [Report] >>95940324
>>95940294
Setup and payoff.
Anonymous No.95940320 [Report]
>>95940294
>Literally none of em had to mention the first part
how else am I gonna make my hatred known???
Anonymous No.95940324 [Report]
>>95940306
Nah I get it thats why I'm saying they're taking the piss.
Anonymous No.95940342 [Report] >>95940738
>>95940296
Feels pretty ironic that the build based on a painter decided to use ai instead of looking harder for a faceclaim.
Anonymous No.95940344 [Report] >>95940383 >>95940403
>>95935540
Wing of the world and fixer perk sections have the same description.
Anonymous No.95940345 [Report] >>95940354
>>95940264
I didn't reply but I do genuinely think it's awful. If other people enjoy it then that's great though. I hope it has a long and satisfying life so that the anons into it have an mp for them. My ideal world have every anon in an mp they love.
Anonymous No.95940354 [Report] >>95940379
>>95940345
My ideal world has every anon in an MP I love and they all effortfag with me anyway for 4 months at least
Anonymous No.95940379 [Report] >>95940400
>>95940354
I'm not picky so I'll join most things regardless of my personal feelings as long I have an idea and believe it will contribute positively to the over all experience.
Anonymous No.95940383 [Report] >>95940393
>>95940344
City anon made it with ai and didn't check all the way, sorry about that
Anonymous No.95940393 [Report] >>95940415
>>95940383
AI would unironically have done a better job lol.
Anonymous No.95940400 [Report] >>95940419
>>95940379
That's pretty picky. Real unpicky anons make at least a dump for the foulest, stinkiest, most unplayable slop imaginable no matter how they feel about the dump's quality
Anonymous No.95940403 [Report]
>>95940344
Oh, I missed that. Fixed.
Anonymous No.95940415 [Report]
>>95940393
As a whole? No, it can't make the cyoa. But the writing and grammar? Certainly.
Anonymous No.95940419 [Report]
>>95940400
I find dumping to only decrease the enjoyment of others. If I don't think anons would enjoy something then there's not much a point in it, and a low quality dump certainly won't lead to 4 months of activity.
Anonymous No.95940421 [Report] >>95940427 >>95940441 >>95940563
>>95935540
https://tiermaker.com/create/-mcyoag--city-limbus-edition-16639737
Tiermaker done and dusted with all builds-
>>95940290
aw, hell.
Anonymous No.95940427 [Report] >>95940440
>>95940421
Isn't it missing Moriarty
Anonymous No.95940440 [Report]
>>95940427
Don't be silly. Me? Forget something? There is no war in the City.
Anonymous No.95940441 [Report] >>95940499
>>95940421
Finally we can put it to paper.
Anonymous No.95940445 [Report] >>95940460
>>95940290
>One Trick Pony (power copying)
>One Trick Pony (give people whatever powers they want)
>AI slop
>Not one line of personality
Winner of the most /cyoag/esque build contest.
Anonymous No.95940446 [Report]
>>95940290
Shiet we doing 12+ Sinners?
Anonymous No.95940450 [Report] >>95940453 >>95940553
I miss when this thread was mostly discussion and not a bunch of apes flinging shit at each other over some terrible ESL CYOA
Anonymous No.95940453 [Report]
>>95940450
PMD isn't very ESL tho?
Anonymous No.95940458 [Report]
>>95935540
Paste everything into a grammar checker.
Anonymous No.95940460 [Report] >>95940469
>>95940445
in his defense I actually think its alright. I was going to complain about it being way more than a one trick but I thought about it and an EGO he can't actually use himself isn't all that great to begin with, and the effects he gives doesn't even seem that strong. It technically does only one thing, makes a temporary EGO ability attuned to the person that gave blood. So every individual person who uses it couldn't change what it manifests as for them, at least as far as I understand it.

Not saying its a great build otherwise. Some cool references here and there but ai slop gets double penalties when making an artist build, and didn't follow up with any motivations he has.
Anonymous No.95940469 [Report] >>95940475 >>95940476
>>95940460
Anon, did you miss that he also copies powers?
Any power he gives somebody else he can just copy. If he didn't have the first one I could maybe give him the benefit of the doubt, but it's absolute wank when combined.
Technically the two powers are illegal because of Cityanon retconning how EGOtist and Distortion work but that's not a fair complaint to make of the build.
Anonymous No.95940475 [Report]
>>95940469
You know what I did miss the fact he had an entirely different distortion effect. The ai slop worked as a cognito hazard and made my eyes glaze over. -20 points then.
Anonymous No.95940476 [Report]
>>95940469
desu, it's not like you can even go crazy and max out all your stats even adding both pools so i don't see why it'd be a problem
Anonymous No.95940499 [Report] >>95940503
>>95940441
The amount of motherfuckers on this bus with red eyes is too damn high.
Anonymous No.95940503 [Report] >>95940521
>>95940499
To be fair, red eyes are pretty popular. Ocular implants are pretty common and I think red is like the most commo too.
Anonymous No.95940521 [Report] >>95940530
>>95940503
Yeah, it's why it's not a giveaway for someone bloodfiend. People just assume you have implants instead of being a fanger.
Anonymous No.95940530 [Report]
>>95940521
If you ask me to say who is a bloodfiend the actual top of the list is the bloodfiend hunter. She looks like the most stereotypical fanger ever.
Anonymous No.95940534 [Report] >>95940540 >>95940544 >>95940547
>>95935540
Would the Limbus Company Before/After Team (or any other department really) be Fixers or Feathers?
Anonymous No.95940540 [Report]
>>95940534
You could probably use either.
Anonymous No.95940544 [Report]
>>95940534
You could fluff it either way, depending on what they were doing before joining the Clear team.
Anonymous No.95940547 [Report]
>>95940534
Either or, it really doesn't need to be concrete. Before team is focused on scouting the area and priming it for the Sinners to come on in with as minimal complications as possible. Not always possible due to the nature of the Sinner's work but they basically get the leads for people to go to. After Team cleans up the mess left behind. Kill some remaining abnormalities, make sure to smooth things over with the Nests. Probably more Feather leaning for both of them since they aren't expected to be the ones tossed to the frontlines since thats what the Sinners are for.
Anonymous No.95940553 [Report] >>95940562 >>95940591
>>95940450
I have been here for I think 2 years and nothing much has changed other than anons acting less zesty now.
I thought the zest was gross and since it was the MHA anons doing it... it was.
But I miss that zest. I shouldn't, but I do.
Anonymous No.95940562 [Report] >>95940586
>>95940553
we lost the ironically zesty anons and gained more actual homos
Anonymous No.95940563 [Report] >>95940570 >>95940571 >>95940575 >>95940589
>>95940421
Anonymous No.95940565 [Report] >>95940578 >>95940600 >>95940611 >>95940648 >>95940738
>>95940290
Backstory:

Basil Hallward was a two-person street rat team with his childhood friend Dorian Grey under a ward protected by Lord Henry Wotton, a Bloodfiend within The Ring's Fauvism Ring. Both of them hoped that one day they could finally make it as either Ring or Fixers, Basil scrounging and fighting with various other street gangs, turning them into art pieces to keep favor for his ward while Dorian had the innate charm to upsell his art within the Ring via his charm and charisma. Sadly while Basil was gifted in combat and would get meager passing grades on his art, he always seemed to come up short of being able to join the Ring as an official member, only being kept as a civilian/rat enforcer as his art would be derided as derivative and lacking true substance worthy of the Ring's Membership by a few of Lord Henry's enforcers without Dorian being able to run interference for him.

However, when Dorian was severely wounded in a retaliation attack by a rival rat gang seeking to steal Lord Henry's favor, he went mad with rage, slaughtering them in a macabre waltz of gore and viscera that finally got Lord Henry's attention. Seeing Basil vulnerable to manipulation, Lord Henry allowed Basil to become a probationary member in exchange for holding Dorian hostage as they paid for his recuperation. However, as Basil worked for Ring to pay off his debt, Lord Henry had started to seduce Dorian away from Basil.

During Dorian's physical therapies and trainings, he was given lavish gifts and attention he had never seen before when working with Basil. The ecstasy of the high life was within Dorian's hands while Basil toiled on the streets unknowing of the rift growing between them. Eventually Dorian made a full recovery but through the hedonism he had cultivated, he began to see Basil as an inconvenience he had grown bored of but needed as Dorian was not a Ring Member just yet.
Anonymous No.95940570 [Report]
>>95940563
How embarrassing for you
Anonymous No.95940571 [Report]
>>95940563
Grimanon...
Anonymous No.95940575 [Report]
>>95940563
This is a psyop by Morella anon.
Anonymous No.95940576 [Report]
olympia-anon, if you're here, are you still working on that shafiq/olympia writefag you mentioned a while back? Was considering adding a reference to it but I don't want to do what ended up happening with the glowie Gryffindor and mention something that never ends up existing
Anonymous No.95940578 [Report]
>>95940565
lol
Anonymous No.95940586 [Report] >>95940592
>>95940562
Feels more like the other way around
too much irony poisoning
Anonymous No.95940589 [Report] >>95940597
>>95940563
YOU DIDN'T EVEN TRY WITH THIS BAIT
Anonymous No.95940591 [Report] >>95940599 >>95940618
>>95940553
A little zest is fine. It adds some spice to the stone soup that any good MP resembles. It's only when anons start talking about what their builds jerk off too that things get weird.
The pendulum will swing back eventually. Just keep moving through these insincere times.
Anonymous No.95940592 [Report]
>>95940586
that's a different type of irony, we definitely had less literal faggots before
Anonymous No.95940597 [Report] >>95940621 >>95940623 >>95940631
>>95940589
yes I did
cute girls go into sovl
everyone else goes into garbage
Anonymous No.95940599 [Report] >>95940603
>>95940591
and remember not to let the irony poisoning get to you
as long as you stay sincere, you can help other people have a little bit more fun on the way
Anonymous No.95940600 [Report] >>95940608
>>95940565
The amount of run on sentences makes it hard to read. I'm also going to bash this as taking an hour to put out while having those errors too. Take your time to cook up something better, especially looking for a faceclaim that isn't slop. You're already trying to be the 13th sinner so its not like you're in a rush to claim a slot.
Anonymous No.95940601 [Report]
>>95940264
I replied and I think its dumb
Anonymous No.95940603 [Report]
>>95940599
I'm sorry anon, they've poisoned the well. My sincere state is now entirely shitposts. I've already put out several engagement baits and I can't stop it...
Anonymous No.95940608 [Report] >>95940620 >>95940638
>>95940600
Fucking faceclaim police. My next faceclaim is going to be lightning mcqueen and I'll just describe what he actually looks like in the bio (5'10 caucasian male with brown hair).
Anonymous No.95940609 [Report] >>95940614 >>95940638
>>95940296
I have found a damn near perfect faceclaim and is the final part of my build but its AI slop and I've been trying on and off to find something similar that isn't but have had no luck so far. If I can't by tonight I'm going with the slop and may god have mercy on my soul
Anonymous No.95940611 [Report]
>>95940565
>he did his build pitch at runtime instead of putting it together beforehand
can't tell if based or retarded or both. bloodfiends continue to be the cause of all ills in the City, we need N Corp Van Helsing STAT.
Anonymous No.95940614 [Report]
>>95940609
I'm the number one AI hater in this general and I'll still give your slopper a chance if the rest of it is good enough.
Anonymous No.95940618 [Report] >>95940634 >>95940641
>>95940591
I've always been sincere but my sincerity is scorned.
Anonymous No.95940620 [Report]
>>95940608
NTA but AI is so shit
Anonymous No.95940621 [Report] >>95940630 >>95940633 >>95940652
>>95940597
Eric's trans? Is she an egg or is he ftm and you're a terf?
Anonymous No.95940623 [Report]
>>95940597
>eric in cute girl tier
something doesn't add up...
Anonymous No.95940630 [Report]
>>95940621
Oh shit, the shitposters are going woke
Anonymous No.95940631 [Report] >>95940643 >>95940683
>>95940597
Saberanon's facelciams are not cute. They just give sorta interesting npc vibes.
Anonymous No.95940632 [Report]
The build I made that I think anons liked the most was AI.
Anonymous No.95940633 [Report]
>>95940621
kill yourself
Anonymous No.95940634 [Report] >>95940645
>>95940618
if you allow the opinions of other people to influence your mannerisms in such a way you are no better than the faggots telling you to stop being honest
Anonymous No.95940638 [Report]
>>95940608
Its just sort of indicative of being a lazy anon. There has to be some better option. Go scroll through a booru or pixiv if Pintrest doesn't work out. Or the forbidden option...
Pick up a pencil

>>95940609
It's alright anon. We're only going to strap you to the front of the Sinner bus as we crash through the gate into a new district. You're broken body will be our mascot.
Anonymous No.95940641 [Report]
>>95940618
It's different because your taste is bad on top of zesty. Work on fixing that first.
Anonymous No.95940643 [Report] >>95940653
>>95940631
They're usually cute too
Anonymous No.95940645 [Report]
>>95940634
I've never stopped being honest. I'm just less open.
Anonymous No.95940648 [Report] >>95940654
>>95940565
This isn't even finished
Anonymous No.95940652 [Report]
>>95940621
Worst post in this thread and that's saying something
Anonymous No.95940653 [Report] >>95940663 >>95940666
>>95940643
Wrong.
Anonymous No.95940654 [Report]
>>95940648
I think he's still writing as we speak.
Anonymous No.95940656 [Report] >>95940677
>>95939764
Beautiful. I'd appreciate one for Corrin.
Anonymous No.95940663 [Report] >>95940678
>>95940653
He objectively makes cuter builds than average
Anonymous No.95940666 [Report] >>95940673 >>95940816
>>95940653
Idk. If someone put a gun to my head and I had to make vore chatbots of anon's builds and jerk off to them, Chihiro would be up there. Not saying I would, I'd have to be forced to do this.
Anonymous No.95940673 [Report] >>95940686
>>95940666
Anon why did you tape a gun to a mic stand aimed at your head...
Anonymous No.95940677 [Report]
>>95940656
This is what I get for not rechecking the thread before a late reply, disregard.
Anonymous No.95940678 [Report] >>95940692 >>95940693 >>95940704
>>95940663
If that was true than someone would try to push ships for them.
Anonymous No.95940683 [Report]
>>95940631
Which one?
Anonymous No.95940685 [Report] >>95940696 >>95940703 >>95940705 >>95940722 >>95940741 >>95940929
>>95935540
What's everybody cooking? Anyone have an idea for the first canto (Rhapsody?)? Or are we skipping those entirely for something less reliant on a single character?
Anonymous No.95940686 [Report]
>>95940673
That mic stand has a dead child's spirit (don't worry, died 18 years ago) making me goon to vore, dammit! It comes to life at night! I was method acting for the fnaf MP but it all went horribly wrong!
Anonymous No.95940692 [Report]
>>95940678
nigga literally had a gang of ESLs leeching off his builds and hoping he'd magically start liking yuri
Anonymous No.95940693 [Report] >>95940702
>>95940678
The brutal truth is that cute alone isn't enough for a ship.
Anonymous No.95940696 [Report]
Rolled 2 (1d2)

>>95940685
Idk yet.
1. relationship chart for Eric
2. writefag
Anonymous No.95940702 [Report] >>95940713
>>95940693
The only good ships are enemies to lovers anyway.
Anonymous No.95940703 [Report]
>>95940685
I was just going to work on something small to get comfortable. Likely mainly focusing on Lance and Desdemona, but I'm still considering how exactly I want it to play out since it'll probably be occurring around the other sinners as well.
Anonymous No.95940704 [Report] >>95940720
>>95940678
I ship his characters basically every time. It just never end up happening because he doesn't desperately force it like most of you.
Anonymous No.95940705 [Report]
>>95940685
Waging and allergies are killing me.
Gonna try to do a driving downtime writefag sooner rather than later, or at least a chart.
Anonymous No.95940713 [Report] >>95940733
>>95940702
Wrong. Lovers to enemies to lovers is superior.
Anonymous No.95940720 [Report]
>>95940704
I've never forced anything. I just play along when someone shows interest.
Anonymous No.95940722 [Report] >>95940751 >>95940821
>>95940685
Well if we're actually doing it Canto style it'd probably go in order by who was introduced first. So it'd probably be something like Hyde, Desdemona, Lancelot, Morella, Karras, Carer, Fenrir, Damsel, Watson, and the rest to be determined. Of course that's if we're being autistic about matching canon and that hinges entirely on the introduction writefag which I have absolute confidence didn't have that in mind when it was written.

We're probably going to go for something much more casual unless someone steps up to take the lead or we force them to. That's why I'm voting for Ronin being the first Canto/Rhapsody to put immense pressure to prove that their build isn't a nothingburger.
Anonymous No.95940733 [Report]
>>95940713
Make it enemies to lovers to enemies to lovers and we have a deal.
Anonymous No.95940738 [Report] >>95940760 >>95940887
>>95940296
>>95940342
It's partially by design as his backstory is about how he feels inadequate on his own after his muse/best friend Dorian Grey betrayed him and caused him to distort giving him an uncanny valley beauty as he tried to emulate the Bloodfiend powers he coveted from Dorian and Lord Henry.
>>95940565
>>95940290
>Backstory Part 2
Eventually Dorian was given a chance to become a Ring Student like Basil. Both of them were tasked on recovering a "relic" from an art dealer and ex-Ring Member who had tried to escape the ward for K Corp. As they pursued the dealer, he later revealed he had been a Bloodfiend 2nd Kindred of Lord Henry that had gotten tired of his abuse and manipulations. Even with his Ring training Basil wasn't ready to fight a desperate Bloodfiend going all out with his powers. Suffering severe wounds, Basil was only able to distract the dealer while Dorian took the relic from him. When the Bloodfiend tried to unleash a torrent of blood bullets upon them, Basil heard an eerie voice in his head. "Do you truly think you have enough power to beat him? Is your own power truly enough?" Knowing the truth that he was inadequate in the moment, he relented to the voice, admitting that he was a failure that would lead his best friend to death once more.

In that moment, his body contorted, turning into a marble clay like putty wrapped in a white satin sheet. The blood bullets pelted his new form but instead of piercing his veiled flesh, it merged and morphed it into a hideous mockery of the Bloodfiend before him. Though Dorian was taken aback at first, he worked with Basil in his new form to take down the Bloodfiend and talk Basil back into his human form.

When they got the relic back to Lord Henry, Basil had passed out from the ordeal while Dorian was nearly unscathed. While Basil rested, Lord Henry congratulated Dorian on a job well done. Dorian took credit for most of the job both as a way to hide Basil's ability and a way to gain Henry's favor.
Anonymous No.95940741 [Report]
>>95940685
I'll cook later for a Mila intro + RC, right now I'm still in my cooldown period. She's got much less going on than the other Sinners so her Canto could slot somewhere into the first half comfortably.
Anonymous No.95940748 [Report] >>95940781 >>95940789 >>95940822
>>95935540
Is there any point in not making a Sinner?
They seem like the only people in the MP actually doing anything and it seems like you can only really interact with them if you're a sinner.
Anonymous No.95940751 [Report] >>95940762
>>95940722
i will save you some time and tell you ronin anon is a certified bum ass nigga, no source on it but my pattern recognition aka schizophrenia
Anonymous No.95940760 [Report] >>95940887
>>95940738
>It's partially by design as his backstory
Yes, by design... and not because you didn't prepare anything beforehand as we're seeing now with your backstory posts that take almost an hour to make each time.
Anonymous No.95940762 [Report] >>95940776 >>95940782
>>95940751
trve. the edgier a weeb build is the more of a flake the anon is.
Anonymous No.95940776 [Report] >>95940782
>>95940762
So fuarking trve, and they have the most potential for kino so it's such a shame.
Anonymous No.95940781 [Report]
>>95940748
no
all the non sinners except (*snickers*) Eric APPARENTLY (*chuckles in suspension of disbelief*) are dumps anyway
Anonymous No.95940782 [Report] >>95940785
>>95940762
>>95940776
My build Deathblood Darkkatana has infinity kino potential but so flake it'll never be posted, alas.
Anonymous No.95940785 [Report] >>95940791
>>95940782
m.. my knees... they're bending on their own for a build that hasn't even been posted
Anonymous No.95940789 [Report]
>>95940748
I mean this was touted as the Sinner run. It's completely possible to do a normal City run in this but Sinners are taking the main stage. The only reason I can think of to not make one is that fact we already have a dozen and you shouldn't just make one if you're doing it out of FOMO, but there's also nothing stopping you either.
Anonymous No.95940791 [Report]
>>95940785
You really need to get your knees checked anon, that can't be healthy.
Anonymous No.95940794 [Report] >>95940800
Live
Laugh
Lobotomy
Anonymous No.95940795 [Report]
>>95937160
Cute! Cute! Cute!

>>95937477
Dis so kino mi breddah. Good vibes all da wey

>>95939764
Good vibes mi bredren!. Dis has so much soul in jah. Much love
Anonymous No.95940800 [Report]
>>95940794
tumblr/reddit/vg is THAT way ma'am
Anonymous No.95940816 [Report]
>>95940666
Stay away Satan! You wont get Chihiro from me, she's mine!
Anonymous No.95940821 [Report]
>>95940722
>City is dying well before I have to shoulder an entire arc
Finally, some good news.
Anonymous No.95940822 [Report] >>95940837 >>95940838
>>95940748
>They seem like the only people in the MP actually doing anything
bro it's been like 2 days, the MP has barely even started. our first writefag kino featuring nearly every Sinner? 6 replies, one of them being "this is going on the reading list" for an MP with zero writefags before it. we have no idea which sinners are real and which are flop ass dumps at this point.
if you want on the bus but are too autistic to want to go past the canon sinner limit you can try to make a guide, but your post mostly just reads like FOMO of trying to get into "the new 1D"
Anonymous No.95940837 [Report] >>95940852 >>95940866 >>95940873
>>95940822
so do I make my cultivator now
Anonymous No.95940838 [Report]
>>95940822
>6 replies, one of them being "this is going on the reading list" for an MP with zero writefags before it
this is grim, I give a reply to every writefag that features or mentions my build like a good anon should
Anonymous No.95940852 [Report]
>>95940837
Only if he's based on Water Margin or Journey to the West kino. We need more strong personalities on the bus anyways, bellowing about "JUNIOR, YOU DARE?!"
Anonymous No.95940866 [Report] >>95940934
>>95940837
Hold, hooooold, Young Master... KTH nears...
Anonymous No.95940873 [Report] >>95940879
>>95940837
Wasn't the pinky syndicate recently introduced as chinawank?
Anonymous No.95940879 [Report]
>>95940873
Yup, they're chinese glowies with cover identities and codenames.
Anonymous No.95940887 [Report] >>95940946 >>95940985
>>95940738
>>95940760
it's mostly the damned time restraint on posting from where I'm at. Having to constantly wait 3-5 minutes per post and trying to squish the backstory into the word limits. I had the idea already but internet sucks where I'm at.
>Backstory Part 3
Dorian afterwards became a darling within the Ring as a fellow Student. Attending more lavish parties with Lord Henry and gaining a name as the Grey Wolf as he dawned his Fauvism Mask. Trying to swallow his pride, Basil tried to improve his art during his rest but without Dorian to be his wingman, it was derided once again as without merit, even getting his first failure grade. Trying his best to swallow his pride, Basil tried to get back in contact with Dorian, but he was brushed aside every time. As stress piled on and a second failure was given to him, putting Basil back to civilian status, he had come to wits end and desperately went to confront Dorian during the relic's unveiling Gala.

Cornering Dorian behind stage, Basil laid into Dorian for giving him the cold shoulder after everything they had been through. While Dorian tried to talk him down, they eventually came to blows, Dorian taking a cheap blow that stained the relic's canvas with Basil's Blood. Eventually Dorian gained the upper hand and took a nearby brush to strike at Basil's heart but was stopped dead as the wound rebounded on him. As he fell to the floor dead, the relic turned to a garish painting of Dorian and Basil's hearts pierced by thorns entwining them in a bloody embrace.

Lord Henry stood in the gallery with the rest of the gallery members clapping and laughing at the ordeal as Basil went to resuscitate Dorian. As Basil panicked, Lord Henry revealed this was all his grand design to unveil his magnum opus, The Bloodstained Brothers. As Basil realized they had both been played for fools, he lunged at Lord Henry only to be laid low instantly.
Anonymous No.95940929 [Report]
>>95940685
I think I'll wait a little bit before doing an intro, I need to watch some gameplay to learn more about the lore.
Anonymous No.95940934 [Report] >>95940970
>>95940866
i wholeheartedly believe a KTH run would kill this general for good. the adhd era has already decimated our numbers
Anonymous No.95940943 [Report] >>95941004 >>95941005
>>95933268
another writefag fo today

>The Starving Prophet (Apollo, Diana)
https://rentry.org/starving_prophet

written while having not eaten for 12 hours, so you *know* it's authentic!
Anonymous No.95940946 [Report] >>95940992
>>95940887
>Having to constantly wait 3-5 minutes per post and trying to squish the backstory into the word limits.
And that's why a lot anons just make their entire backstory on a rentry page and just post the mechanical parts + a short version of the description.
Anonymous No.95940970 [Report]
>>95940934
we literally just lived through a HP run and MHA dying for real, we're unkillable
Anonymous No.95940985 [Report]
>>95940887
>Backstory Part 4
As Lord Henry got ready to execute Basil, the mysterious voice came in once again chiding him for his weakness. As Lord Henry's Blood Blade barreled down on Basil's neck, his body began to distort once more. Taken aback by Basil's transformation, Lord Henry retreated while Basil went on another rampage. As his thrashing caused the gallery to burn, Basil took the Relic along with Dorian's body far away in his bloodcrazed state.

When he awoke, Basil was clutching the dead body of Dorian and the relic as they both began to melt into a slurry of bloody paint. Crying and cursing his lot in life, he heard the voice once more admonish him and promise him more power. Vengefully, he cursed it out, saying that it's brought him nothing but misery and that he'd trade it all away if it could him back to the way things were, ripping the veil off his body as he returned to his human form. As he layed in the gutter tattered and defeated, what was left of the relic and his once distorted form laid a tarnished canvas shield and paintbrush sword. As he picked them up and fled deep into the city, he wondered on how his life had turned for the worse, bouncing from hovel to hovel until he joined up with Limbus Company when he was again at wits end. Maybe one of these sinners can help him bring Dorian back, or least let him die with Lord Henry for being an easily manipulated fool.
Anonymous No.95940992 [Report]
>>95940946
Didn't know about rentry sadly, this is one of my first posts for stuff like this.
Anonymous No.95941004 [Report] >>95941043
>>95940943
PMD's strongest soldier...
I guess this blows my theory of "any MP can make it if you effortfag" out of the water, sad to see.
Anonymous No.95941005 [Report]
>>95940943
MY CHARACTER IS NOT IN IT. BACK TO THE MINES YOU GO! REEEEE
Anonymous No.95941043 [Report]
>>95941004
PMD is too niche and has too many faults for it to ever make it as an MP, even before the ADHDark Times. The fact that it started off with a controversy that immediately pushed away some of the few anons that would actually be interested put it in an even worse position. Just Effortfag can't overcome a fundamental lack of population.

I wish the PMD anons longevity and fun, but realistically speaking two autists and a handful of semi-invested hanger ons can't continue for very long.
Anonymous No.95941135 [Report]
The only way to save PMD is to put on the biggest, flashiest talent show this general has ever seen...
Anonymous No.95941212 [Report]
only way to save PMD is to make a cultivator pokemon
Anonymous No.95941218 [Report]
only way to save PMD is to combine it with KTH
Anonymous No.95941225 [Report] >>95941230 >>95941275 >>95941295
We need to do a humiliation ritual for cultivationcucks.
Kill the Heavens but it's sci fi and the power level caps at wall.
Martial Path except it's an otome isekai academy with no martial arts.
Mundane chinese history MP with mercury drinking and fireworks.
Anonymous No.95941230 [Report]
>>95941225
special power: golden core cultivator
Anonymous No.95941231 [Report]
>
This is why saber anon never finished KTH.
Anonymous No.95941236 [Report] >>95941248 >>95941276 >>95941282
Interesting how the shitposters always seem to wait 40-60 minutes after an effortpost drops to come back in full force
I wonder if they’re all just glorified bots on a schedule.
Anonymous No.95941248 [Report]
>>95941236
I don't have a schedule
Anonymous No.95941275 [Report] >>95941304
>>95941225
>Martial Path except it's an otome isekai academy with no martial arts.
>Mundane chinese history MP with mercury drinking and fireworks.
These are genuine kino tho.
Anonymous No.95941276 [Report]
>>95941236
Ya got me. I've been running a botnet to destroy this place for months now, but the server is in Australia so there's always a delay when I go to deploy them. Also, sometimes the posts come out upside down.
Anonymous No.95941282 [Report]
>>95941236
Shitpost? No, my posts are all genuine effortposts thoughbeit
Anonymous No.95941295 [Report]
>>95941225
no one wants to engage in your weird humiliation fetish...
Anonymous No.95941303 [Report] >>95941309 >>95941365 >>95941508
>>95933752
>What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?
>What can I get for level 3, 4, and 5 tools, exactly?
>What can unnatural emanation do, exactly?
Seriously, what are the answers to these questions? Can't make a build without knowing this kind of critical information.
Anonymous No.95941304 [Report] >>95941319
>>95941275
the anon cannot help but yearn for the schoolslop
Anonymous No.95941309 [Report] >>95941313
>>95941303
special power: golden core cultivator
Anonymous No.95941313 [Report] >>95941321 >>95941323 >>95941332 >>95941345
>>95941309
What the fuck do you mean?
Anonymous No.95941319 [Report]
>>95941304
no, i just yearn for otome and mundane history slop
Anonymous No.95941321 [Report]
>>95941313
Ability: Unaware

wait wrong MP
Anonymous No.95941323 [Report]
>>95941313
Stand: Does He Know?
Anonymous No.95941332 [Report]
>>95941313
Stranger 10 victim
Anonymous No.95941345 [Report]
>>95941313
You have much to learn junior brother

Meditate on it
Anonymous No.95941365 [Report] >>95941382
>>95941303
Anon replied with the power level of each item tier and no turbo autist lorefag corrected him. Thats as good as you're going to get unless cityanon descends himself with an answer.
Anonymous No.95941382 [Report] >>95941431
>>95941365
I buy a, no, TWO infinite mass drivers to destroy the world. Double tap.
Anonymous No.95941431 [Report]
>>95941382
My KING Eric stops you.
Anonymous No.95941489 [Report] >>95941496
Anon, I'm gonna cash in my fraud points for the next few days. Mouth hurty real bad...
Anonymous No.95941496 [Report]
>>95941489
Get over here and I'll kiss it better.
Anonymous No.95941508 [Report] >>95941550 >>95941725
>>95941303
Not gonna do the Tools since another anon did it pretty well but:
>What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?
Tier 4 is the best augment a Grade 1 Fixer and probably many Colors have access to. Nemo is a Grade 1 Fixer from Library of Ruina, and his head prosthetic is a screen that can shoot a fucking hyper beam that is one of the strongest non-ego attacks in the game. The Sandevistan from Cyberpunk would probably fall here too.

Tier 5 is complete bullshit and basically magic. Only a few people in the city have something even close. Best example in canon is probably Dante's Clock, which can revive a set group of individuals (sinners) at the cost of experiencing the pain of their deaths, as well as a bunch of supportive abilities. Considering that comes with the Danteh perk though, you should go for something in the same realm. Another example might be Gesellschaft, a hivemind that allows the character Faust to communicate and exchange information with an unspecified number of alternate versions of herself, making her one of the most knowledgeable characters in the setting.

>What can unnatural emanation do, exactly?
It seems pretty obvious? It's an elemental damage effect for your attacks. You can fluff it however you want (punching so hard the air ignites, one of your augs has its power supply connected to your weapon for electrical bursts, etc) but the end result is your attacks have extra power behind them and might be harder for the enemy to resist.
Anonymous No.95941550 [Report]
>>95941508
nta, but are any of our Tier 5 augs in the right ballpark?
Anonymous No.95941687 [Report]
ships for this feel?
Anonymous No.95941725 [Report] >>95941762
>>95941508
>hyper beam that is one of the strongest non-ego attacks in the game
What is its actual destructive capability though? Can it destroy a town?
Anonymous No.95941762 [Report] >>95941800
>>95941725
NTA but yes, strongest characters in the setting seem to cap out at Multi-City Block levels of destructive capacity. Hax in here is a lot more impressive.
Anonymous No.95941800 [Report] >>95941838
>>95941762
>strongest characters in the setting seem to cap out at Multi-City Block levels of destructive capacity
https://nuclearsecrecy.com/nukemap/?&kt=1&lat=38.895037&lng=-77.036543&airburst=0&hob_ft=0&psi=20,5,1&zm=15

According to https://www.reddit.com/r/PowerScaling/comments/1fzxjt0/whats_the_difference_between_multicity_block_and/lr4vp9v/, "Multi-City Block ends at 1 Kiloton", so I plugged that into the nukemap.

Now, we have an accurate and measurable top power level.
Anonymous No.95941838 [Report] >>95941865
>>95941800
Would you say this is foundation establishment or golden core level?
Anonymous No.95941865 [Report]
>>95941838
Depends on the setting, but I'd say foundation establishment because I don't think I've ever read a novel with golden core cultivators that have lower than city level power.
Anonymous No.95941903 [Report] >>95941932 >>95941933
How did cultivation get into City discussion?
Anonymous No.95941932 [Report]
>>95941903
The chinese chicken.
Anonymous No.95941933 [Report] >>95942213
>>95941903
Cultivationfag can't stop forcing his mental illness everywhere, it already happened with Harry Potter. He'll make a shitty potentialman and get ignored.
Anonymous No.95942087 [Report] >>95942134 >>95942199
>>95935540
My idea for a guide
https://rentry.org/LobotomyTerminator

Silas is a towering and stern figure, content to sit back and watch the lambs of L-Corp grind themselves to paste before his eyes. He views the group with largely undisguised scorn, but is not above laughing at their interactions (and misfortune). He has no issue with disciplining the motley crew knowing that their manager can revive them endlessly.

Silas is no conversationalist, but in his role of guide will offer up suggestions and advice on how they can overcome challenges.
Likewise, while he seems to relish their individual suffering, if all of the group is in danger he will act in their defence without hesitation.
Anonymous No.95942134 [Report] >>95942286
>>95942087
>Sinners are trauma victims trying to get better
>He's going to make them worse
Kino.
No one is supposed to be happy in the City, not even the main characters.
Anonymous No.95942199 [Report]
>>95942087
Not a bad build, unfortunately he's a victim of my elderly color fixer bvll with abnormal EGO.
Anonymous No.95942213 [Report]
>>95941933
Meditate on the Dao, Junior Brother.
Anonymous No.95942286 [Report]
>>95942134
>not even the main characters.
especially the main characters.
Anonymous No.95942462 [Report] >>95943064 >>95943240
>>95935540
>>95935929
>Ringo's Ride.
https://rentry.org/RingoInTheCity
Ringo's POV during the Prologue.
Anonymous No.95942956 [Report] >>95942995 >>95943258
dead activity, dead thread, dead everything
Anonymous No.95942992 [Report]
>>95940115
Looking forward to it, mystery MHAnon!
Anonymous No.95942995 [Report] >>95943346
>>95942956
Europeans are finishing work and Americans are still in the morning.
Anonymous No.95943064 [Report]
>>95935929
>>95936298
I keep my promises, anon!
Kino. One of my favorite writefags in a while. I ended up liking Minos a lot more than I expected, he plays a good straight man to the rest of the absurdity. No complaints about spotlight or character, I'm just happy to be mentioned.
Thanks for cooking, Hydeanon.

>>95938433
Based vehicle design, all the coolest mobile bases are constant threats to your life.

>>95942462
>Pet build
Wasn't expecting that from the cowboy vibe, but I can dig it. He just needs a horse and a falcon, too.
Anonymous No.95943240 [Report]
>>95942462
Are they VIs, or does he have DID?
Anonymous No.95943258 [Report]
>>95942956
No thanks to cunts like you.
Anonymous No.95943346 [Report] >>95943437
>>95942995
work is a non-issue for college students tbf, though idk how many of those there are around these parts
Anonymous No.95943437 [Report] >>95943446
>>95943346
Some of us both work and study.
Anonymous No.95943446 [Report]
>>95943437
Yes, but that's not the default so I didn't account for it. Plenty of people still on summer break and taking advantage of that first and foremost
Anonymous No.95943501 [Report]
preemptive new thread for all the burnt-out hogs still around

>>95943295
>>95943295
>>95943295

I have no idea if Worm is still a thing, I just listed off all the recent MPs I could remember. If I missed one let me know I guess
Anonymous No.95943918 [Report]
how do I feel more confident about writing boring, bottom of the barrel slop that nobody likes?
Anonymous No.95945684 [Report]
Last for good times