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Stop The Stillborns Edition
Previous Thread:
>>95922936
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RULES:
>Time period is 1994
>School is Hogwarts
>Canon characters do not exist, canon events do not happen
>Adventure benefits are received for free, right away. They also act as optional writing prompts
>Students
>Gryffindor
>Amalia Oceanborough (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95691122
>Merlin English (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95735567
>Frank Lee (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95750020
>Yukiri Sukasuka (Year ?)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/95801741/#q95807113
>Hufflepuff
>Oliver Ollivander (Y>2)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95789001
>Ciaran Whitehorn (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95734068
>Oaklynn Barlowe (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95667623
>Carl Heron (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95695721
>Arthur Abbott (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95777519
>Mythran Stonework (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95788097
>Otto Bramwell (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95881225
>Ravenclaw
>Olympia Stalward (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95699726
>Alric Yaxley (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95701302
>Minagi Sukasuka (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95710818
>Tina Crouch (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95784912
>Thomas P. Hippos (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786032
>Slytherin
>Tony Ricketts (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95711092
>Veronica Pressfield (Y5)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786370
>Zachary Oceanborough (Y2)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95691197
>Lennox Gaunt (Y4)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95700541
>Tibbits, Free House Elf (Y?)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95702791
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>Professors
>Slytherin
>Nicholas Firethorn (Head of Slytherin, Care of Magical Creatures)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95668164
>Marvin (Professor of Marvin)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95874885
>Hufflepuff
>Minrathous Cicero (Head of Hufflepuff, Charms)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95700987
>Ravenclaw
>Simon Stan (Divination)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95715770
>Dougal McCreedy (Potions, Arithmancy)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95715262
>Chantelle Shafiq (Head of Ravenclaw, Transfiguration)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95736283
>Gryffindor
>Henry Travers (Head of Gryffindor, D.A.D.A)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95733516
>Studios Gaunt (Herbology)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95812786
>Headmaster
>Dankinus Manastone
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95736012
>Relationship Charts
>Zachary Oceanborough
https://rentry.org/zach_relationship_chart
>Chantelle Shafiq
https://rentry.org/id_sevenfour_fiveone_twofourninenine
>Amalia Oceanborough
https://rentry.org/amalia_relationship_chart
>Lennox Gaunt
https://rentry.co/ssvinvqy
>Olympia Stalward
https://rentry.org/OlympiaRelationshipChart
>Veronica Pressfield & co
https://rentry.org/9xwqukhc
>Mythran Stonework
https://rentry.org/iv95ouiu
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>Writefags
>Care for Magical Creatures (Zachary Oceanborough, Professor Nicholas Firethorn)
https://rentry.org/zach_does_not_care_for_magical_creatures
>Hiroshima, Nagasaki (Professor Cicero; mention of Ciaran Whitehorn, Nicholas Firehorn and Tibbits)
https://rentry.org/dcvrnfe2
>Rich Boy Brings Trouble (Zachary & Amalia Oceanborough, Mr. Ollivander, Oliver Ollivander)
https://rentry.org/zachary_oceanborough_and_the_juggalo_grandson
>Paper Promise (Minagi Sukasuka, Olympia Stalward)
https://rentry.org/gwtr5ay3
>Public Service Animagus (Amalia Oceanborough, Minagi Sukasuka, Chantelle Shafiq, mention of Merlin English)
https://rentry.org/public_service_animagus
>Gryffindor Has Arrived (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Tony Ricketts, Nicholas Firethorn, Headmaster Manastone, Simon Stan)
https://rentry.org/vwxf357d
>Private Student Affairs (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Chantelle Shafiq)
https://rentry.org/private_student_affairs
>Dueling and Dragons (Zachary Oceanborough, Tony Ricketts, Professor Travers, Professor Firethorn)
https://rentry.org/dueling_and_dragons
>The Boy Who Forgot (Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Lennox Gaunt)
https://rentry.org/fvfbpon7
>Overgrown Expectations (Studios Gaunt)
https://rentry.org/7m9m4ie7
>Material Girl (Veronica Pressfield & Crew, Merlin English)
https://rentry.org/ek4umif9
>Dankinus Teaches a Class (Headmaster Dankinus)
https://rentry.org/DankinusTeachesAClass
>Playing Hero (Zachary Oceanborough and two others)
https://rentry.org/firethorn_playing_hero
>Buddy Holly (Veronica Pressfield & co, Oliver Ollivander, Ciaran Whitehorn, Zach Oceanborough)
https://rentry.org/ms7d4fs9
>They Live (In The Hufflepuff Common Room) (Oliver Ollivander, Ciaran Whitehorn)
https://rentry.org/ugf3z4i6
>No Bullying (Tina Crouch, Merlin English, Amalia Oceanborough, Professor McCreedy)
https://rentry.org/tyr8id8n
[cont.]
>Writefags (cont.)
>Lessons in Etiquette (Zachary Oceanborough, Professor Nicholas Firethorn, Amalia Oceanborough, Professor Minrathous Cicero)
https://rentry.org/lessons_in_etiquette
>Experiment 1 (Lennox Gaunt, Arthur Abbot, Olympia Stalward, Minagi Sukasuka, Dougal McCreedy, References to others)
https://rentry.co/5mfm9t84
>First Day of Summer School (Otto Bramwell, Professor Travers)
https://rentry.org/fdx75gdy
>Prompts
>Post a character theme for a character that isn't your own.
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95727291
>What do your builds do in their spare time? Any relations outside of their house?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95732492
>Do you have any notable family? If so, what's your relationship to and with them?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95742961
>Students: have you got any plans for life after Hogwarts? If not, what do you miss from your time before enrolling?
>Teachers: if you were forced to teach a subject that you don't normally teach or substitute for, which would you pick?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95756699
>What's your character's Patronus?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95776577
>What's your character's thoughts on the Houses?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95786423
>If your character had to Polyjuice switch with another character, who would be their most/least favorite choice?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95789121
>What is your build's combat style?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95794520
>Your build has just managed to get his/her hands on the Mirror of Erised. What does he/she see?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95797456
>Muggle-borns (or half/pure-bloods who weren't certain): how did you get the news that you'd be attending Hogwarts? How did you react?
>Half-bloods and pure-bloods (or fringe muggle-born cases who already knew): did the school surprise you in any way? Disappoint you? Live up to your expectations?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95819052
Prompts (cont.)
>Where does your character spend their summer holidays? What do they typically do on them?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866884
>What's your character's favorite magical candy?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95892509
>Students: whoโs your favorite teacher?
>Teachers: whoโs your favorite student?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95925663
For
>Artfags
>Shitposts
>Tiermaker
>etc.
please visit
>https://rentry.org/HPMP_full
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>RENTRY, WITH CUSTOM MYSTERIES, LORE BASICS, AND MORE, HERE:
https://rentry.org/pmd_synthetic_apocalypse/
RULES
>Grimbright setting. Usual PMD tech level with "relics" from the 80s found in dungeons.
>Mysteries are optional, and the Mystery selection is custom: see the rentry for this CYOA's Mysteries.
>All writefags/artfags grant both the author's character and any included characters 1MP or PP each.
>Type loss can only be taken once by dual-types. If you have one type, it cannot be taken at all.
>Characters from previous PMD runs should take isekai.
>Isekais cannot have comprehensive knowledge of how to repair and use advanced tech. They can recognize it, but not its purpose nor its inner workings.
>Humans do not exist in any capacity. Pokรฉmon don't know what humans are, either, and human isekais will have their memories scrambled so that they don't initially know that they were once human.
>Please check the rentry's "Mythical Asterisks" section before making a Mythical, esp. a Jirachi, Celebi, or Victini.
>Friendship Evolutions are counted as "evolving under level 20," but you must writefag the evolution for the discount to apply.
>Canon Megas only.
>The following abilities cost 3 MP to replace:
Defeatist
Emergency Exit
Klutz
Slow Start
Stall
Truant
Wimp Out
BUILDS
>Explorers
>Lushian the Riolu
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95865376
>Cheesburger the Jolteon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95865416
>Bell the Beldum
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866420
>Corrin the Hakamo-o
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95900600
>Guildmasters
>Wyze the Sneasler
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95868862
>Townmon
>Anne Tenna the Orbeetle
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95864231
>Valentine Happenstance the Hydrapple
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95873379
>Ganjamelia the Sprigatito
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95875325
>Gloop the Ditto
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917853
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>>95933268>Troublemakers>Mimi the Mimikyuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95863918
>Apollo the Torchichttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95887475
>Diana the Deoxyshttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95887475
>Lord Badsour the Primeape (+ Team Sour)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95901434
>Ebert Ponderbottom (NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95909188
>Relationship Charts>Ganjameliahttps://rentry.org/xkighkk5
>Apollo and Dianahttps://rentry.org/pmd_relations
WRITEFAGS
>A Normal Day for Cheeseburgerhttps://rentry.org/cheeseburgeropener
>Curiosity (Lushian, Cheeseburger, Wyze, Mentions of Tenna)https://rentry.co/nt63uneh
>Mimi Introduction (Mimi, Wyze)https://rentry.org/MimiIntroduction
>Wake Up, Apollo Dear (Apollo, Diana, Valentine Happenstance)https://rentry.org/triple_combo
>Villainous Scum (Apollo, Diana, Bell)https://rentry.org/stop_right_there
>Prompts>Which dungeon does your character want to explore first?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95866775
>Explorers, are you part of The Guard or a separate, undefined Guild?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95871235
>What's a move you wish you could learn but are unable to for whatever reason?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95873428
>Pokechads, pokepost you[r] pokethemes!https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/5874274
>Pokechads, if you have a home what does it look like?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95878263
>Pokechads, what do you do to unwind after a rescue mission?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95883469
>Pokechads, do you worship any deities?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95898757
>Pokechads, how much pro bono work do you do if any? For those morally challenged Pokemon, do you ever commit foul deeds just for the act?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95910215
>Pokechads, how would your build be at a rambunctious party?https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95912733
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Can we retire Harry Potter now, like we did MHA?
>>95933341People are still interested in HP, we got different prompt responses. Just a slower period but the entire thread is in a slow state in general. I think another week to see if the carcass started to swell is the best bet, we'll keep poking it with sticks in the meantime.
>>95933428Then why don't you post it?
>>95933428It died because Edward Palton frauded on his writefag that he promised. If he ever shows his face around here again we're putting him into Worm to be Gray Boy'd.
>>95933445what does that entail exactly?
anyway I- uh I mean HE said he would only write if there was enough interest and there just wasn't
well I think he said that I don't know for sure
>>95933462He said if Worm was alive the next day he'd write. It was alive for several days, and I think Nightmare wrote long before googledoc anon did.
Anyways I'm going to track him down and make sure he gets timelooped in the most unimaginable agony ever because I've never seen someone single handedly tank an MP that hard before. What are we thinkin, acid, 1000 bullet ants in his dick, a giant magnifying glass aimed at the soft spot on his head. All at once?
>>95933481I don't remember saying any of that. Mostly because I'm not him.
>a giant magnifying glass aimed at the soft spot on his head. He does NOT have one of those! Anyway, uh, those all sound, uh, painful. Good luck finding him.
>>95933481>1000 bullet ants in his dicksounds good as a starter
>>95933481>>95933490Why are you guys trying to make googledocs anon horny? Stop being weird.
>>95933533Googledocs anon gets a different punishment befitting for his crimes.
>>95933543simpsons mp when?
>>95933558Right after the south park mp.
>>95923474>1600>1599Every page after the first have a pixel on the left cut off.
>>95933609Also, the text at the top after page 1 is stretched and have inconsistent positions.
Do you think a setting without any real civilizations could work? Just anons and their builds and any npcs they introduce in the wilderness
>>95933668I meant anon's builds and any NPCs btw, I don't think anon isekai is a good idea
>>95923474What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?
What can I get for level 3, 4, and 5 tools, exactly?
Not even reddit slop offloads nearly all explanations to references. Holy fuck, sometimes, there aren't even fucking references. How is anyone supposed to know what level 5 augments can do?????? Why is there absolutely nothing to quantify unnatural emanation????
WHY DO SOME OPTION NAMES HAVE JACK SHIT TO DO WITH THEIR EFFECTS? "Competent Fighting" = gun skills?? What the fuck does "This is this" even mean? Why is the monster hunting skill called "Whaling"? "Death, I, Survive" = pick any skill in a profession???
>>95933752then theres the special power option where you can just get any power you want for funsies
>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6
>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.
Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r
>New Stuff:
>New Writefag:
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)
https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
>New Artfag
https://i.4cdn.org/tg/1749712096028481.png
>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Former 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnaire
https://rentry.org/xudhyrnr
>Former 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n
>Classes Compilations
https://rentry.org/mcymha2D
https://rentry.org/mcymha2E
old former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g
>Relationship charts
https://rentry.org/MHA_Charts
>Dorms Prompt
Dorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730
>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969
>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
>>95933861>SHIKETSU STUDENTS>Hero Course>1-D>Koroma Kajล HN The Time-Loop Hero: Resethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Troublehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085
>Yagami Kirako HN Southpawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059
>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Calloushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904
>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548
>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720
>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701
>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831
>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetraphttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250
>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protectorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590
>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scourhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050
>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771
>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Herohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243
>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093
>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyrhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834
>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410
>Fukuchi Arai HN Musล-kahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805
>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925
>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwahttps://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w
>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshirehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176
>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244
>Tsuyoi Agnellihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559
>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089
>1-E>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girlhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
>>95933752I don't have answers for most of your points, I assumed it had something to do with the franchise.
Regarding tools how I imagine it is:
>1: Mundane stuff that is pretty normal for the setting, knuckle dusters or maybe an IRL bulletproof vest. Something like a tooled smart phone in terms of gimmicks.
>2:Better stuff like is broaching sci-fi tier. The example the cyoa uses is chain swords, I think stuff like john wicks bullet proof suit also fit. In terms of gadgets I'm thinking james bond or Agent 47 type stuff.
>3: Top tier shit. Power armor, judge dredds gun, Thunder Hammers. In terms of gadgets I think its reaching sci-fi 'normal', stuff that would be at home in Doctor Who or Star Trek.
>4: We are full science fantasy now, lightsabers, teleporters, maybe Space Marine Power Armor. That sort of level.
>5:Magic that is trying to not be magic but failing. Thor's Hammer. Ironmans suit. Time Machines, Infinite Mass Drivers, etc.
For augments I think its like a level down, with Angelic being the same as a tier 5 tool.
Full disclosure, I dont know shit about the setting, this was my best guess.
>>95933867>2-Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2D
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamatahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769
>Hailey Chang HN Recoilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903
>Faith Kang HN Dronehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774
>Minerva Kim HN Sparkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094
>Edith Lee HN Arenahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782
>Sally McCathy HN Last Ritehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995
>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu
>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yakohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radiushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624
>Runt HN Dust Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Forcehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrowhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765
>Ian Takenaka HN Rushhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991
>Takara Tame HN Androidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336
>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Questionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085
>Rob Williams HN Velvet Wormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>>95933872>2-Ehttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>Noah Abrams HN Archangelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Dayhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudevahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackouthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boosthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973
>Nayuki Kyokohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Arakenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Trainhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydrahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbithttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Millionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363
>Suki Yamada HN Sukebanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cubehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433
>Other NPCshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E
>3-D>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakenenekohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068
>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401
>Masayoshi Keito HN Crickethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742
>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcanahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432
>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdownhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617
>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knuthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659
>General Course>2-A>Satoru Tanihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217
>Support Course>3-B>Aura Curiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>>95933873>SHIKETSU STAFF>Pro Hero teachers>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034
>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484
>Amahagene Himekล HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509
>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353
>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486
>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644
>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019
>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485
>Support Staff>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597
>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416
>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288
>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135
>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666
>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
>>95933876>PRO HEROES>TOP #1Endeavour
>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780
>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384
>TOP #4Wash
>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494
>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632
>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063
>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkorohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847
>TOP #9Rosethorn
>TOP #10Yamamoto
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honokenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compoundhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelengthhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513
>Renji Kurokawa HN Mashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848
>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatchhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219
>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccinehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536
>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835
>SUPPORTERS>Rika Eichihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766
>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Holden Deckardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931
>Brightlyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966
>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clearhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294
>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
>>95933878>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS>Horrific 5>Samuel Wilson VN Desolatorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340
>On Giรชอt Nฤng VN Tetherhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Noxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddoxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercuryhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191
>Night Parade>Cammy Link VN Karmahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfingerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481
>Okane King VN Midashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250
> ??? VN Mawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272
> ??? VN Bogeyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889
> Tomihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913
>Luccionehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415
>Recino R. Percutiohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385
>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owarihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Nothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feralhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462
>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348
>VIGILANTES>Helene Lysingen VN Noctilucahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquariushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353
>Rebecca Weberhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Brighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707
>Ruihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187
>Kaori Kaoruhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075
>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivorehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658
>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndromehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
>>95933880>CULTISTS>The Red Finger>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988
>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weaselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518
>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573
>REVOLUTIONARIES>Legion>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Stormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954
>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS>Bruno Garcia VN Maulerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714
>Karuga Itohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242
>Ginji Gล VN Desperaidohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931
>Blankhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726
>Kลkishin Yuuki VN Shoggothhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987
>Mammogarhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410
>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>Suslikhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413
>Paul Crรฉmieux VN De Jaishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242
>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400
>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodokuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241
>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless Godhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436
>Mr. Therapisthttps://rentry.org/638neg63
>Rescue Rayhttps://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp
>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Daggerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719
>Doctor Ivon Kintoborhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140
>Saki Fuma VN Replicanthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
>>95933883>WRITEFAGS>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo
>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/gqgst77f
>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)https://rentry.org/chdorkto
>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokinโ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5
>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique): https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9
>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):https://rentry.org/7evesekv
>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi
>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)https://rentry.org/qqhxk757
>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i
>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)https://rentry.org/rusiv6te
>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h
>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze
>Visa Enquiryhttps://rentry.org/yvwhhh98
>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt
>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/hvct5iab
>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde
>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)https://rentry.org/iifohf9f
>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
>>95933889>WRITEFAGS (Final)>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):https://rentry.org/a8um8793
>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu
>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)https://rentry.org/o4mageo6
For more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
>>95933752The most insane thing is that the fixer grades section has nothing, not a word, on their actual power level and only states impossible to accurately determine shit like "strongest people in the city".
I'm convinced that cityanon maliciously obfuscated the cyoa as much as possible as revenge for being constantly shat on for so long (and this results in him being shit on more).
Color Grade doesnt imply power or skill, just Specialization in powers or skills at a Grade 1 level. Imagine Color as an EX rank that just gets muddy exactly how much better they are until stated.
I think LoR puts it best.
>9 - 6
human (street level) no stronger than Rats (common street thugs)
>5 - 2
above human (town level)
> 1 - Color
Superhuman (City (heh) level) (Able to contest anomalies)
This is going to sound like too much work for one person but can anyone do an audit of the augments and/or tools of our current cast and give suggestions on how to make them match the actual level bought? I think most of undersold how strong anything higher than level 2 if the conversation is anything to go by.
>>95934059Seconded. Lorefags put your powers of autism to good use.
>>95934059DESU, I was more worries I oversold my I and II's.
Cityanon here! Just gooned to Makima from chainsaw man farting in Kobeni's mouth and inflating her like a balloon. Update never.
>>95934139The one where she smothers Power with her sweaty ass is pretty good, and the artist os still updating it.
>>95934152is that the one where they both become futas aswell?
>>95933752>"This is this" even mean?I suspect it's a variant of "it is what it is".
new MP when
all the ongoing ones are boring
>>95934239when you start your kino mp that everyone will love
you do have it ready, don't you?
>>95934283ill start it soon
>get an asian sinner in the final slot
Whew. We were this close to breaking canon.
>>95934239When the moon is right
>Sinner line up complete
Post ships!
>>95934985>Post ships!Your wish is my command!
>>95934985no one even posted it in this thread
>>95933752CITY CORD, DESTROY HIM
>>95933861ah shit, thatโs what I forgot to post before falling asleep. Thank you, anon! Your work is appreciated
>>95935157If there is one thing we can rely on, it's that MHA somehow always manages to survive.
>>95935161lol, true. In an age of random and sudden death, its stability is welcome
>>95934478I was assuming they were all just korean, but most of the characters in the series aren't named park gonye or whatever and sinners arr literary references so i didn't spend 2 days putting together a name. Mentally, my character looks like a kpop star though.
Anyway guess someone should post it. I just woke and wouldn't be able to think up names even if I wasn't drowsy so that's on someone else.
>>95935098Surely someone is thinking hard about those nicknames
Reposting in the new thread for visibility
https://rentry.org/pmd_relations
Apollo + Diana relationship chart
(not anchoring this because itโs already in the threadslaving stuff)
>>95923474DA CITY
>Independent Fixers>Onyxia Grim, Van Helsing: The Sequelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95934345
>Death's Head Office>Lana Styx, Future is Now Old Womanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95910807
>Zwei>Joseph Ringohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95927394
>Independent Syndicates>Exterminator Erichttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917690
>Limbus Company Bus Department>Mr.Minoshttps://rentry.org/LCBDanteh
>Edward Hydehttps://rentry.org/umm8t2g3
>Fenrirhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917484
>Lancelot/Lancehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95917957
>R. Carterhttps://rentry.org/CitySinner04
>Damselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95925998
>Desdemonahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95926655
>Demi Karrashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95927187
>H. Watsonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95930888
>Morellahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95930901
>Milahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95932436
>Moriartyhttps://rentry.org/836t7e5e
>Roninhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95933307
>>95935558>You can do things such as free VIP Warp Train seats, armies of bodyguards, and an untouchable presence to fellow feathers ad Wing employeesThis isnโt fucking English
>>95935629If you removed Warp and Feather it reads pretty easily. Hell it still reads easily with them, already explains what a Wing is in the CYOA. Did you really get filtered that sentence by like two words?
>>95935540So we have a full team of sinners, a dante, a babysitter, we just need the driver/bus fixer
>>95935823Wasn't this
>>95932436 the driver?
>>95935834So it is. Were good then.
I see where cityanon gets it from, why does pm hate you being able to read shit?
>>95935886Translated from Korean.
>>95935664>You can do things such as free VIP Train seats, armies of bodyguards, and an untouchable presence to fellow and Wing employeesFuck off pajeet
>>95935907Nah, that's not the problem, it's them putting red or purple colour words on a dark background. I had to put my brightness setting near max just to make out the words.
>>95935540>Rhapsody 0: Prologue (Joseph Ringo, All Limbus Company except Mila, Moriarty and Ronin)https://rentry.org/t2i35ih2
This is the most people I've ever written in a single Writefag, so sorry in advance if I messed up characterization or didn't give someone much of a spotlight. If anyone has critique or wants changes so their character is more accurate, let me know and I'll try to get it done sometime after work.
>>95935919The best explanation I can think of is that the Koreans are living in a cyberpunk dystopia where the sun doesn't shine and having any better contrast would hurt their dark-adjusted eyes, but I'm not totally sure that's the case.
>>95935946I think it's because their target group is edgy teens, so they use poor visibility to filter out oldfags with poor eyesight.
>>95935910You getting baffled over a simple sentence like that isn't my problem. How is it that your understanding can be worse than the person you're trying to call out for being ESL? If it really took you 30 minutes to try and formulate some gotcha by taking removal literally and not substituting Feather then I'm not surprised at your weak reading comprehension.
I mean you could have chosen so many other phrases in there but you went for the one that can be boiled down to an easy straightforward statement if you didn't instantly get defeated by 2 terms you were unfamiliar with.
>>95935978eslbro... that sentence isn't even REMOTELY close to being correct even if you take out those words
>>95935978There are other measures beyond comprehensibility.
>>95935978You can "do" train seats and bodyguards? You can do an untouchable presence? Yes, you can grasp the meaning that you can obtain certain things with the perk, but it's not proper english. Stop dickriding the favela rat.
>>95936082Don't kinkshame. If someone wants to do train seats, bodyguards and the untouchables, they should be able to.
>>95936082technically you can do anything if you try hard enough
>>95936062Out of spite I put it through like 3 grammar sites and the only suggestions are fixing like 2 spelling errors. It doesn't exactly flow off the tongue but there's nothing thats breaking the rules of the english language so much as to make it completely unreadable.
>>95936079Yeah of course it can be written better but its not like its not understandable. He could have chosen so many other sentences in the CYOA which are far worse, there's like a dozen half sentences. Its the least offending one I've seen.
>>95936082I cannot imagine being so caught up in hating somebody that even the smallest infractions are blown up as if it was some huge issue. The point of the sentence could be easily understood but because its written with the elegance of a brick its apparently greek now.
>>95933668no
anons need civilizations to rape and pillage
Honestly the "an untouchable presence" is really the only thing that stands out, as doing an "army of bodyguards" is a bit odd but fine grammar wise. You could just put 'have/possess/gain/exude/etc. an untouchable presence" rather than just "do" it
>>95936120I'll do you Anon
>>95936110>Out of spite I put it through like 3 grammar sites and the only suggestions are fixing like 2 spelling errors. It doesn't exactly flow off the tongue but there's nothing thats breaking the rules of the english language so much as to make it completely unreadable.Those grammar sites are just as retarded as you. It's a garbled mess of a sentence, that would be plainly incorrect to 5th graders. That anon would have got nothing more than a "yeah city anon's esl, what can ya do?" but because you had the audacity to defend it and even say it's GOOD, you must now pay for your sins and be told that NO, it is in no way correct.
Hey dipshits, English is 12 languages in a trenchcoat shitting in a melting pot and stirring.
Don't make us get the Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo
>>95936120Doing an army of bodyguards is something you'd see Gokufan971 post in the youtube comment section
>>95936141Who in the world said it was good? I said it was perfectly readable. You can't even read my posts correctly, why would I take your judgement on what makes a sentence good or bad? I also slapped it onto Microsoft word, it didn't say shit. I think the fault lies with you Anon, not I.
>grammar checking sites in the humongous year of our Lord 2025
they're all unusable, rotten by AI slop
>>95936152if the language is too hard maybe you should use a site popular in another language
>>95936165anons, kill this man with buffalos
>>95936165James while John had had had had had had had had had had had a better effect on the teacher
>>95936171That that is is that that is not is not is that it it is.
>>95936158>I said it was perfectly readable>Who in the world said it was good?A sentence is only good if it's perfectly readable. This one is not, and requires assumptions to fill in the gaps.
Doing an army of bodyguards and a doing train seats? Is that meaning immediately clear to you?
>I also slapped it onto Microsoft wordSo? You can slap it into as many word checkers as you like, but that doesn't change the plain and simple reality that to ANYONE who understands the English language with any sort of high school reading level, it is clearly, absolutely, and plainly incorrect. You are either immensely retarded or arguing in bad faith and I am not sure which.
>>95936120I feel like in the case of an untouchable presence, it's more about becoming one.
>>95936194Wouldn't the sentence 'I want to put a hyphen between the words Fish and And and And and Chips in my Fish-And-Chips sign' have been clearer if quotation marks had been placed before Fish, and between Fish and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and And, and And and and, and and and Chips, as well as after Chips?
what is it about city slop that makes anons go berserk...? these mfs are really speaking like borderline retards and manga villains out here
>be me
>rebooting le DxD into a "proper" CYOA
>do it all in Paint
>get it all done
>post it /cyoag/ to make sure the files can fit in 4chan posts
>they all say its formatted like dogshit
>why is the text blurry af
>tell them i did it in Paint
>they tell me to "use Gimp dumbass"
>didn't know that Gimp was free-2-use or how to download it
>now doing the entire CYOA over again in Gimp along with learning how to use it to make it not look like dogshit
Well good news is you'll have plenty of time for your run of The City lmao
>>95936201Yes but you included capitalization which got it across anyway. It's good enough and requires no other context or assumptions unlike City anon's travesty sentence in question so it's actually readable and therefore good.
>>95936221Just put the Photopea in the bag bro
>>95936194I had a feeling you were going to take that literally. Is it autism or what because the only other people I've seen to hyperfixate on language are people who've been forced to learn it as a second language. The way you're on my ass about hyperbole and ignored my previous replies where I clearly stated my stance shows me you can only take stuff at face value and lack zero critical thinking skills while also having little to no object permeance cause apparently as soon as you scroll down that chapter in history is closed to you.
So if word checkers don't see a huge issue with it I'm just going to have to go with the "trust me bro everyone wouldn't understand this at all!", while it clearly reaches a minimum standard for a sentence in English. Come on now, like I said there's so many other glaring issues in the CYOA but you chose to die on the absolute smallest hill on there because your hateboner for the author.
>>95936222Can can can can can can can can can can.
>>95936230Will, will Will will Will Will's will?
No really, add eachother on discord or something you're both pedantic fops.
>>95936230Completely different anon here.
The sentence is dogshit.
Is it really so hard to discuss multiplayer choose your own adventures instead of semantics
>>95936243>Will, will Will will Will Will's will?All I'm hearing is KILL KILL KILL KILL
Unfortunately all I can do is waste my time calling an anon stupid for calling another anon stupid, and there's no better place to do it but here.
>>95936249Youre dogshit >:(
>>95936250wow that possum looks wicked
>>95936261NOT discussion relating to mcyoag. Sentenced to hard labor in the writefag mines for 40 years.
>>95936261ikr he's very stylish
>>95936274ok but it'll be for mha
>>95935929Gonna read this when work slows down, hopefully it doesn't get lost in the shitposting.
It really is a dogshit sentence though, what the fuck is that guy on about?
>>95936285Once again, it turns out mhafia is behind all the shitposting.
>>95935929The perfect Sinner ratio. 30% are violently unhinged, another 30% are mentally unstable, the other 30% are autistic, and the last 10% are aura farmers. Surprisingly a very successful transition into the role of a Manager considering what happened to the canon counterparts immediately killing eachother over one disagreement.
>>95935929Great shit. Loved the atmosphere. It felt gritty but also had a sense of comedy. Perfect fit for the setting and a great way to kick things off. Banter among the crew was great too.
On the critique side of things...I want to say that damaging residences is a taboo, so we're probably all going to die soon? On a much more minor side note, Morella is a fist rather than a key. She's just a weirdo who uses a weapon for personal reasons. Otherwise her characterization was good to go.
pmd anons, where would your explorers most likely be exploring? this isn't a prompt i'm just asking for writing purposes
>>95936362Someones gonna take a baseball bat to our bus's windows and then an arbiter is gonna fall from heaven like a rod from god and splat them.
>>95936335Which are which?
>>95936461nta. Depends. The law is a bit more specific.
>"No destruction of residential areas during the Night in the Backstreets."So as long as they break our windows during the day or inside a nest they get off without being splat'd.
I wonder how hard it would be to create a program that lets users create CYOA by dropping the pictures they want to use into a folder and then clicking the boxes they want to appear in.
>>95936484Buses count as residential areas?
>>95936473>Violently Unhinged:Hyde
Damsel
>Mentally Unstable:Carter
Desdemona
>Autistic:Lance
Fenrir
Morella
>Aura Farmers:Karras
Watson
>>95936506If you file for a residency permit they do! (Which is the case here.)
>>95936250you can't make me willingly play HP, Worm, PMD, or City
start the new KTH or Fate run already
>>95936536Can I make you unwillingly play them?
>>95936509>Karras>WatsonHaven't read it, but they just seem like autists from the builds
>>95936544It's a thin blurry line between autism and aura farming.
>>95936539Of course, but only if you make an offer I can't refuse
>>95936551Watson has zero aura to farm tho
>>95936568Trust, when the first battle goes down and everyone is going all out they'll be standing in the corner watching in a cool pose talking to their umbrella or something.
>>95936597That's like Steve Urkel doing it. Doesn't work.
>>95935929Good intro, hope this works out, also
>Was that pain going to be what he had to go through for every revival? That... That couldn't be right. Even just doing it once was enough to make him scream at the top of his clockwork lungs. If he had to revive all nine Sinners at once...>all nine Sinners at oncewho's going to tell him?
>>95936597that's bum farming not aura farming
WHAT DOES HE EVEN DO!? :speak: :fire:
>>95935432>not anchoring this because itโs already in the threadslaving stuffI think you should still anchor stuff, otherwise people will not know what it's for. This time it has a drawing so you can tell but it's still easy to miss.
Anyway, really cool to see. It's interesting to see what the two batnter about. Apollo is very self deprecating, more than I was expecting.
>>95936390I think you should link this to the cyoa, it's getting lost in the shitposting, I almost missed it.
Lushian would be in the Bygone Market or Spooky Station if exploring by himslef for "fun", I was about to write him going to the station. If there is someone to be rescued and he sees it's a particularly dangerous place he will also go, especially if the other explorers seem like they are not willing to risk it.
I had a subplot in mind involving the Grimy Ghettos, but I forgot to write about it before. I wanted to ask Wyze anon about it first.
>>95936993>>95937078lol if you insist
>>95933268relationship chart
>>95935432"prompt" (literally just a question i'm not putting this in the rentry)
>>95936390thank you for answering lushialennox-anon
for some reason the ghost-type hanging out in a dead mall is making me chuckle
>>95936993if you think apollo's self-deprecating you should see diana
>>95936665>who's going to tell him?Just wait until we get a 13, 14, and 15th sinner...
Calling it now as a soul read.
The fangers are going to fraud first because they're going to run into the issues of how to balance the Knights of the Roundtable, Orthello, and Sherlock Holmes in the same family.
Ronin is next but will put a couple writefags out before they fade out of existence, while Fenrir won't write at all and string along with prompt responses before they also jump ship.
The next ones to go are Watson and Mila as activity winds down, and the rest will try and recuperate with new sinners in the mix but eventually leave in no particular order.
See you all in a month.
>>95937254>balance the Knights of the Roundtable, Orthello, and Sherlock Holmes in the same family.That's something they have to do though.
>>95937254>Diagnosed as critically soullessdamn
>>95937254you swapped fenrir and ronin king
>>95937254Exterminator Eric... it's all up to you... save City Society.
>>95937275Plus the canon sinners have "cowardly guy who was too afraid to get augments (that's pretty much it)" and "literally a centuries old second kindred who's fought in multiple high-scale wars as a frontliner and lived" both on the same team. Our shit's a cakewalk compared to that.
>>95937275>>95937302If they don't it'll be lame since they won't have any cool character arc moments since they are all tied to each other. And family as in actual fanger family cause of the whole kindred thing, not found family shit with the sinner crew.
>>95937280It's okay anon, slander isn't indicative of quality and its totally not a prophecy of what is yet to come. Just let nature take its course...
>>95937292I decided to be daring and switch things up a bit. Its like an underdog story, except the underdog does something heroic once before getting struck down and slowly bleeds out.
>>95937296An Exterminator can't breathe back life into the dead anon, I'm sorry to say.
>>95937302>"cowardly guy who was too afraid to get augments (that's pretty much it)"In defense of Sinclair, he's the Potentialman and his story is actually supposed to be one of the grander things in the whole Limbus Company journey. He's literally destined to become something ridiculously strong which is why his antagonist's goal is to get him on their side unlike the rest. Dude has a guardian angel pushing him to be more, and also that guardian obliterated someone who kicked the entire team's asses with a single wave of his hand.
The real boring and mundane one is Rodion. She just kind of has a hero/fame complex which drove her to do something bad.
>>95937391>he's the PotentialmanBro, your Gregor? Jokes aside, fair. Out the box Rodian can kick his ass, but Sinclair's going to be way stronger in the end and the bottom bitch position will go to her or Yi Sang (bro just wasn't made for this life).
Just goes to prove the point though. If sinclair gets random bullshit go to save his ass, so can our sinners.
>>95937254I'm scandalized and offended.
>>95935540I need tier lists, who's the strongest? Who's the smartest? Who has the most bs hax? Who has the most sovl?
>>95937453Give us a tiermaker first little bro.
>>95937443I don't think the point was like a power ranking or calling the fangers weak, it was that they all have ties to a single origin and their issues stem from the same Father figure. How would 3 different people have different resolutions when it can be fixed by confronting one guy.
>>95937454I can't bro, downloading pics from desu archive is too annoying
>>95937470Three-in-one Canto would certainly win an award for the most efficient writefag this place has ever had.
>>95937487>Three-in-one canto, but nine times the length.
>>95937254Inaccurate, I am the biggest fraud in this general and you didn't name my character.
>>95937487>Three-in-one canto, AND one third the lengthPeak efficiency.
>>95937503>I am the biggest fraud in this generallol
lmao
>>95937355Yeah, but they don't have to "balance" them. It's not like they have to shove the whole of the source material into something cohesive.
>>95937487This is how we squeeze in the 15th Sinner, we just lump the Fangers into one climatic event... its genius. Now we just need to compress the rest into hyper efficient narrative nutrition bars. Maybe we could get away with Carter and Karras dual Eldritch Demon canto...
>>95937503I don't remember writing this post...
>>95937523The perfect fraud can dupe even himself.
>>95937523You were too much of a fraud to post it, so someone else did it for you.
>>95937513They can't even have the main part which is the antagonists of their respective stories. Hell they already barely differ in their origins since its all tied to getting kicked out of the Family. Sure you don't need all of it but they only share the names right now. They all got a Golden Bough attuned to em and some antagonist individual having 3 of them to use at once would pretty much kill us all for good.
Can't have the same dude be King Arthur/Othello/Sherlock Holmes at the same time... well maybe I could see the King Arthur/Othello being mashed together even still if it could be done would make for a really, really boring three way.
>>95937543>Can't have the same dude be King Arthur/Othello/Sherlock Holmes at the same time...Maybe it's a REALLY bored fanger that loves taking different identities? He might have been those three people and dozens others, all in some kind of elaborate and autistic role play series played out over centuries.
>>95937543Moriarty's Bough will be Watson's after he turns evil, trvst the plan.
>>95937543>>95937470The Father is meant to be a side objective for Moriarty, he's more Lancelot and Desdemona's antagonist than hers. Can't blame you for being confused about it since you'd need to read my mind to know what I intended there.
>>95937556See the last line about a really, really boring three way. I mean even if we didn't plan to actually play it like a Canto, its 3 people who can only take individual baby steps because no one can take significant progress without forcing the others to be pulled along since every step they take would lead them all closer and closer to the one guy they all share as the source of their issues.
>>95937560Bro is not HIM in any version of reality. You need electrotherapy to cure your delusions, but luckily the exposed wiring panel on the bus means you're never far from it.
Jesus Christ you people are insufferable.
Hear me out, Moon Cell Fate run.
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On the note of Antagonists, I doodled a design last night for Damsel's and words just to get my mind in tune
>Flavor Snippet
"It was Magnificent. And it was bright. An Anomalous child that could sustain its properties indefinitely. I dare say, possibly, powered by the very desire of the host and nothing more. And so I carved. I took pieces and scraps searching for this desire, giving the pieces to those willing to betray her for my gifts. And I produced such beautiful EGO with their parts."
O. Solomon smiles under his mask.
"Run, my dear. As fast as you can. As far as you can go. But never die. Never die so I may resume my work."
>>95932873This sounds good to me, and you're right that she's inclined to call him things like and act affectionately regardless his attempts to keep distance. She'd also also be concerned with Lance and Moriarty believing she's innocent despite their own intentions their Father.
>>95935929This was nice. I have no problems with how Desdemona was depicted.
>>95937470For Desdemona, I don't see her problems being resolved by confronting their Father. Not entirely, at least. She still feels loyal to him, and if she was aware of the full picture, her issue would lie with Lance and Moriarty. Moriarty is essentially playing the roll of Iago for her, and both their actions would unsettle her.
>>95937636This is cool as he'll anon.
I'm going to ask this
>>95933668 again.
>>95937701Anything "could" work if you get effortfags to care about it.
>>95933668Sounds fun desu
>>95937706Interactive CSM mp...
>>95937701How and why are they there then? Did they just materialize from the fog? Its kind of hard to make some backstory when everything was just "they were alone until now" because a person's character can hardly differ that much under the circumstances. If it was like a Forest situation where we all crash landed from a plane maybe you could run it further on the survival aspect but I don't see any real qualities to just removing civilization as its not a concept that can really be talked about unless there was more context. Its like saying if you think a setting where it's always night would work. Yeah I mean there's an idea but what exactly are you doing with it?
>>95937701I don't think it would. It offers too little variety in the stories.
>>95937706... except for overlord
>>95937726>Its like saying if you think a setting where it's always night would work.Not really. It doesn't matter if really if it's night, day, or some secret third thing. But not having any civilization is a massive thing that anons bounce off of a lot.
>>95937644>>95937636Might as well make it a prompt desu
>>95937793If the builds aren't native or something recently happened that rid the world of all civilization then yeah, otherwise it'll be a very short mp. Like that anon said, it depends on what you're doing with it.
>>95937543This reads like someone who's never read a single work of fiction besides this specific series
>>95937793The point is its so little information. A lot of time it is just our characters interacting with NPC's we introduced. The only difference he said is that we're in the wilderness but does that rule out campsites and small tribes being made or is it literally just individuals plopped down somewhere, and why is that the case?
That's why I brought up a world where its always night. Its one huge detail but thats all we know about the world. We don't know if its got like vampires to it or what complications that really entail during an MP because of it. If he said just player characters it'd be different, but the fact he threw in other NPC's means its not totally isolated like its being made out to be.
>>95937818nta, but from what he said before, no civ means literally nothing. Not even NPCs.
>>95937818How many popular settings do you know without any civilizations? And I don't mean popular works like that, but settings that contain multiple of them. You can have a successful survival stories, even long-running ones, sure, but the issue here is that due to the multiplayer structure, we need to have space for multiple concurrent, usually short, plots that can interweave from time to time. Lack of civilization very strongly limits that, much more strongly than eternal night or stuff like that.
>>95937828Bruh, he specifically stated that there would be npcs.
>>95937833It would probably just lead to the PC builds teaming up and making their own tribe/camp
>>95937849Yes, but this is a very centralized plot of "building a tribe". People complain about mps being too decentralized and characters not having reasons to interact, but this is the opposite side of the spectrum, where it's too connected. Anons would struggle to find writefag subjects that aren't redundant/mess with writefags of others.
>>95937726I was just thinking of scenarios for an MP using a higher powered cyoa and maybe even a WIP. My first scenario was the idea that all the builds were from civilizations obviously but became trapped for some reason in some large enough location to host an MP, meaning that the only people would be builds and NPCs similar to the builds (ie, fellow explorers if all the builds were explorers investigating a strange new land but got stranded or fellow prisoners if all the builds were kidnapped by some sort of Jigsaw type and put in some supermassive torture dungeon).
The second scenario would be builds as deities/colonizers sowing life on some planet or something where it would just be them and any other colonizers with maybe native lifeforms.
>>95937875List 10 writefag ideas for these scenarios.
>>95937817I mean like, its talking about how they'd fare narratively in Limbus Company's set up. I even stated you could combine several of them, and since then I found a way to pop in Sherlock Holmes but I'm not going to go into it since it ain't my Canto to write. It's just lame cause each Sinner is supposed to face their respective Traumas. Even disregarding canon guidelines, a premise of focusing on individual characters which can all get resolved by one dude is boring. Some have already popped in and clarified that there's more to their stories, so the point doesn't really matter as much anymore.
I mean just take MHA. If Inigo, Kaylee, and Noah all had the same problem that stemmed from one source and basically all of them got affected/treated the same, that'd be boring as hell since their individual struggles would all be solved by handling it and even how they go through their issues wouldn't change. That's basically just the same character with a different flavor.
>>95937841Thanks for answering for me, I spent like 3 minutes blankly trying to think of a response that wasn't just "Did you read the prompt at all because he posted it twice."
>>95937543>they only share the names right nowThat's not really true. Desdemona's crippling innocence that keeps her trapped in a loop of being hurt by those she loves and her EGO making her what people think of her are directly related.
>>95937895I should also state that since making that post a couple of the fangers came out of their blood pits to clarify that there's more to the story, so the point doesn't matter as much, I'm just explaining the view I had when it seemed like they were all intrinsically tied to the same antagonist who was the root of all their problem. I don't really know what it has to do with media comprehension, but we're not writing a book here since I know that shit happens all the time. There's no main character with the rest being supporting side characters, all these guys are supposed to be main characters.
>>95937875The context for that is a lot different then. Its basically a mp about making a civilization at that point. If we're still dealing with NPC's I don't think its too much of a problem since people have always introduced characters to suit a specific scenario, whether they actually stuck around or not after that isn't always consistent however. If you have enough people in a room who know how to speak to each other, boom, that's civilization. It sounds like a perfectly normal idea, just replace any lore about the people with lore about the setting itself since anons would do most of the heavy lifting for the former.
>>95937954>If you have enough people in a room who know how to speak to each other, boom, that's civilizationThat's just being pedantic
Anon's clearly (well, murkily) saying if an MP where builds don't have access to villages and cities and what not where everyone is instead a fighterman or something could work, and the answer to that is probably no lmao
>>95937893fight monster
fight build
fight npc
fuck monster
fuck build
fuck npc
talk to monster
talk to build
talk to npc
jerk off
>>95937895>supposed toproved his point
>>95937978It's not being that pedantic. I get his point. It's just if theres other people beyond our PC's and we can basically make them ourselves, albeit they are presumably limited in number and we can't just keep spawning them, then an MP would be fine. It's just be a really, really small civilization to fall back on. Even just 3-4 NPC's wouldn't be that different from like, I don't know, Townmon in PMD.
>>95938006...how is that specific to Limbus Company? We're /mcyoag/. Multiplayer. It's collaborative writing. Come on man, thats literally what every build is for anything.
>>95938012So what if it's a situation where it's not that there aren't people who would want to make civilization, but some external factor preventing it? Like some god hates civilization and the moment people gather past a point he nukes them.
>if I count up every alternate form, these edits alone would get me 19 points
probably for the better that I decided not to count sprite edits
>>95938023sinners having to have separate unique villains is not universal for all settings and not a secret for collaborative writing
you're creating a problem where there isn't one
>>95938030I mean, shit, that's when we'd really have to get into the nitty gritty of what exactly is civilization. Like I said I think having 3-4 significant NPC's is perfectly fine. It's like what they say, 3's a crowd. The plot of getting together and getting nuked would be something like Death Stranding, there's still character interactions albeit mainly not in person, but small clusters going their own way and only meeting up a few times is pretty much the exact format of every single dungeon crawler team put out into the threads. Like how long in isolation with just our groups would we be with before meeting other people? A lot of those details would drastically affect how much it'd actually impact an MP.
>>95938058Dude, its being affected by the same person and all taking it in the exact same way which I mentioned being the most problematic part. You can have one dude as your antagonist, but if you are all equally affected as them its boring as shit. This isn't a Limbus exclusive viewpoint man this is just literally thinking of characters as characters and not having them as almost direct equivalents as each other with no different individual drives that fail to separate methods of dealing with the same issue.
>>95937893Everything you can do in a normal MP that doesn't require an establishment (unless anon makes one in which case you can) or a crowd of people to gawk and stare (unless there's enough people for that in which case you can)
>>95937893Builds fall in love and have to figure out how to raise a child amongst the strife.
>>95938097>being affected by the same personnot a problem and doesn't stop them from having other antagonists as well
>all taking it in the exact same waynot true, just read the builds
>all equally affected as themnot true, just read the builds
>almost direct equivalents as each other with no different individual drives that fail to separate methods of dealing with the same issuenot true, just read the builds
how come this stillborn cyoa generates so much shitposting, whining, and discussion about what works and what doesn't
>>95938131I don't even get why you're arguing about this. The war's over bro. I already stated multiple have come out and clarified further so the point didn't matter. I'm just seeing you hinge on some points and stating thats not what I meant to clarify, but in case you missed it because well, you did miss it, it doesn't affect the MP cause the problem isn't there.
>>95938144the problem is there, because you still wont be able to read the next time you have a stupid knee jerk reaction to something not completely matching canon
>>95938142Do you know how when you have a food you like, you come back for more? It's that but for shitposters. Anons keep accepting the bait, it makes them happy, and now every time we have a city mp they come back for more.
>>95938142It seems to be almost as cancerous as Worm
>>95938144City anon, why are you killing your own MP?
>>95938170Even after stating its not about just canon stuff I don't think you realized much of what I said. If you want you can build a time machine and take it up with the me a half hour ago but as far as I'm concerned everything is done and dusted and there is 0 issues that exist. If you want to get mad because you think I'm going to get mad at something in the future I personally think thats a waste of time.
>>95938190City anon, why are you like this? Go make a build or something.
>>95938198But Ronin's right there tho?
>>95938190Come on at least do something that he'd tangibly interact with. The most he does is talk about stuff relating to powerfagging on options, narratively why would cityanon give a shit about builds not lining up exactly to canon stuff?
>>95938208You are actually retarded lol
>>95938223I'm pretty sure he learned his lesson trying to force in Superhuman Constitution to make it accurate and relying on being rigid with what options and opportunities should be with what. Last time he swung around it was over Special Power and Singularity shit, I haven't really seen anything otherwise.
>>95938205I was going to say that that's insulting to Ronin anon, but then I considered saying it's insulting to City anon. I got stuck alternating between the two.
>>95938193you can state what you want, but you proved that's what it was about with your retarded claims about the characters
your issues were entirely created by your emotional response to things not following canon instead of you actual reading the builds
>>95938258>Smartest emotional poster anon projects his issues onto others, more news at 11
>>95938258Well I guess its good for me that the issue was solved and a solution was personally catered to my tastes. So now we can both be happy.
>>95938266it's ok to just admit you're a dumbass who made claims about builds you didn't read
>>95938142There's actually one specific anon with a deep personal hatred for City who wants to drown the CYOA and discussions about it out by starting arguments whenever there's new content for it.
My source? I'm a beholder.
>>95938294That anon? Cityanon.
>>95936390The Dragon Warrior, if he's not hunting some particular miscreant, will be playing to his strengths while avoiding his weaknesses; if he resists most of the wild 'mons there, the chance of spotting him goes up, and if there are abundant Fairies, the chance goes way down (but isn't zero!). Beyond that, it's largely a toss-up, with a slight lean towards Grimy Ghettos due to its criminal population. One might also spot him in Stone Edge Summit; whether he's broken the verified record or not, he is unusually well equipped to tackle at least its lower floors between his typing, movepool, and his Hidden Ability, Overcoat.
There's also a good chance of spotting him at the base of the Neverending Tower, staring up at it. Whether he's actually cleared more than a few floors, who knows.
>>95938294That IS me but I haven't been participating in this discussion, too busy jerking off.
>>95938270then where's my thanks for forcing you to read the builds and teaching you a lesson in humility?
That reminds me
1. Delude myself into thinking I'll effortfag
2. Jerk off
>>95938348no dice.
I choose 1.
>>95938341I already read the builds originally, but anons responded and said they had more in store than just the Father thing. So unless you're one of the fangers, you'll get none, and even if you were, eh, still none cause I didn't go back to look again. Unless you count reading any post from them as reading a build. Still can't reward you for psionically compelling other people to post.
>>95938348Rollfags always lose
>>95938348No dice. I choose 2.
>>95938351>>95938361>both start with 1post number has spoken, Anon. I await the effort.
Rolled 1 (1d2)
>>95938359@grok is this true?
1. no
2. yes
>>95938358Actually what am I even saying, you only jumped in after I already said the point didn't matter. There was literally no contribution in any single way. It wasn't even continuing a war after it was over bro looked at it and thought "but what if I joined as a third party even after it was done."
literally what is stopping you from deluding yourself WHILE jerking off? skill issues?
>>95938358so someone offered you free english lessons so you can comprehend obvious things about future builds?
>>95938382Unfortunately it is, while jerking off I can only think about Wario bara.
>>95938400yknow what that's understandable, that shit is like crack cocaine
>>95938378it's not done, because you're going to keep being retarded
>>95938413Right after our Kirby MP.
>>95935540Not quite a proper intro, just some character voice practice. Will probably have something out with her meeting up with the rest of the Sinners in a few days.
>The Wheels on the Limbus (Mila, Hyde)https://rentry.org/2wzenyhh
>>95938449I'm repulsed that you think my grasp of their/there/they're is that bad.
>>95938449Unironically my first thought but it just looks like Sally, that AGentlemenP probably just has similar taste in women he wants to be
>>95938050nevermind these have taken me three hours and at least four have needed enough editing to basically just be new sprites entirely
I might end up snagging points for those as actual artfags as opposed to edits
>>95938489Sorry anon, but it's actually a 1000 pixel minimum for artfags. You've earned enough for half a point which rounds back down to 0.
>>95938504Would you believe me if I said Iโve actually drawn in places where guidelines were that strict before
God I hate internet people sometimes
>>95938510we need strict guidelines for MP to truly flourish
2k+ word writefag that has to be rated at least 7/10 by a council of anons WEEKLY or else your build gets killed off
>>95938433Damn, Hyde was driving that while drunk?
>>95938581Probably made it easier, honestly.
>>95936221actually instead of re-doing the entire CYOA, i might as well just copy it into Gimp in order to get rid of the text blur. I mean unless people actually do care about what it looks like in which case idk
>>95938667Im pretty sure MHA's success is at least partially due to it being good looking.
>>95938679>>95938699Alrighy then, decision made. Luckily I got done the hard part already (writing the actual CYOA).
So I guess anyhting you would want/advice for the design? Stuff like frames, backgrounds, etc.
>>95935929Based, very fun read anon I liked the atmosphere and characterisations.
You gave Ringo some very cool moments and I appreciate that. I thought you did a good job or depicting his "I don't care as long as my clients surviving, I'm getting paid" philosophy.
>>95936250That file name gave me a hearty chuckle.
>>95936518I wonder if a person could file as a residency? Just walk around and have the sweepers ignore you. Surely if you paid enough right.
>>95938714Use layers. It sounds obvious, but I feel like in this case it warrants saying.
>>95938727>I wonder if a person could file as a residency? Just walk around and have the sweepers ignore you. Surely if you paid enough right.I could see it work if you're pregnant. Where's pregfag where he's needed?
>>95938738If it works for pregnant people, I put forth that my 'body' is actually the residence of my consciousness. And I, as in what defines and characterizes me, is solely my consciousness. Ipso facto ergo vergo my body fits the legal definition of a dwelling and is permissible under legislation to receive a residency licence.
I rest my case.
>>95938859>Gets executed for being a robot (of a mecha variety).
>>95935540What's up with the organization section? Does every build get an organization of their own?
>>95938859>3 in the morning, drinking Technically, It's Drinkable!, watching the rain>only 16 hours at work tomorrow, feels good man>trying to listen in on all the Sweepers doing their sweeper thing between the lightning and artillery strikes (fucking Thumbs)>imagine getting swept by cute Sweeper girls>sudden some lunatic starts screaming>"I AM A SOVEREIGN CITIZEN OF THIS CITY DISTRICT">"MY BRAIN IS RESIDING WITHIN MY SKULL, RENDERING ME A RESIDENTIAL STRUCTURE, AND THUS PROTECTED BY THE LAW">"MY BODY IS NOT FOR COMMERCIAL USE, AND IS A PRIVATE HOUSING ARRANGEMENT, SO I HAVE NO NEED FOR A RESIDENTIAL LICENSE">wet thump, trails off into soft moaning>lucky bastard
ive spent an hour trying to give this motherfucker a proper cape and I have finally given up
I don't think it's happening it just clashes too much with the body itself
and primeape's original portrait already had all sorts of weird color bleeding that makes it even more of a clusterfuck
lord badsour shall be going capeless
>>95936362Edited the Morella note - I'll blindly believe what
>>95936484 said and my excuse for them not getting destroyed is 'it happened a few minutes before the Night in the Backstreets actually began', that way I don't have to do bigger changes.
>>95938433Nice work! I like how you portrayed Hyde, he would definitely talk down to the other Sinners based off something as petty as their number. I like their dynamic a lot - they play into each others bullshit when the more sane Sinners would probably just relent and fuck off.
Looking forward to when Mila joins the bus proper and meets with the other Sinners!
>>95938930I thinks it's mainly for if you're in charge of an organization - like a Fixer with their own office, or a minor Syndicate. Anyone joining one that's already a thing (another player's organization or a canon one like the Associations) can skip it like the Sinners did.
>>95938930It's so solo syndicate builds can take 5x authentic style with New Old, get 5 Level V tools/augments, and bumrush the Head.
>>95939001my hero eric needs no help
>>95939001>Bumrush the head>Gets solo'd by a single claw. Not even an arbitor.Syndicatekeks, please never change.
>>95939001You can solo the Head without all that. Just use Special Power: Head Killer 9000.
>>95939033You got that the other way around, a single low ranking crew member of a mid syndicate is going to gape the head and every single claw and arbitor at the same time because they're a gang star and that's how mafia works
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>>95939033Nah, Implants Guy is taking the whole district with him when all of his tools and implants backfire simultaneously.
>>95938466We have both never gotten and will never get kino on the level of Brawl on a Vanishing Island
>>95938953>>95938859Really makes me want to create a sovcit sinner who has death, I, survive 3: Law
And just skirts through conflicts with legal jargon and finding holes in rules. His ultimate move is some sort of legal requirement for an arbiter to arrive and protect him from a threat only for the arbiter to wipe out the threat then stomp him for wasting the arbiters time
>>95939128this would have been dragon ball the MP if anons played it btw
>>95939159When Limbus inevitably fucks up and pisses off the Head, he tricks the Claw or whatever trying to kill us into breaking a taboo, so an Arbiter comes to fuck them up while the Sinners try to run.
Could be Portia from the Merchants of Venice, or Frollo as an ex-N Corp inquisitor maybe.
>>95939128U this would have spunchbob the MP if anons played it btw
>>95939159Does it really need to be a sinner? I guess he could resonate with a golden bough, but others resonated harder than he could so he's part of the company's legal team while waiting for a sinner to quit the contract for whatever reason.
>>95939258>>95939293THERMOTRVCLEAR BOMB or DEMON OF BABYLON WEARING THE SKIN OF A PROPHET? call it
>>95939362Even better. He is part of the legal department, called in to audit the shenanigans
>Death I Survive 3: Law
>Color Fixer tier
>The Red Tape
>>95939427Please stop I can only get so erect
>>95939159>post-hoc incident severity ratings based entirely around how hurt this guy is by arbiters
>>95933268>>95937160six hours well spent
there are so many of these that I posted them individually I'm pretty sure I'd get flagged for spam so if you want either the original portrait sprite (TINY) or the resized 200x200 version of your character, please let me know individually
>>95939764oh i forgot to mention
I am by no means a sprite artist, I think this is the first time i've tried spriting more than some extremely minor edits
Wyze, Corrin, and Bell are unchanged from their PMD portrait depository variants: I did not make them and didn't edit them, the original creators can be found here
be warned the site is aids
https://sprites.pmdcollab.org/
anyways I'm going to go tally up which of these barely count as sprite edits and which of these are basically do-overs Mimi, Mega X, and most of Diana's forms are currently in the running for that then add that to the point total
>>95939764it's always the garbage stillborn mps that get nice art, oh well
good job anon
>>95939764Even though I think PMD sucks mondo ass, you did something cool, and I can respect that.
>>95938208This is true. I have been busy immersing myself in the study of TTODPTW, and the dichotomy between Jedi and Sith.
>>95939785alright, I'm going to tally this for 8 points because about half of these had to be redone either partially or completely
Diana alone doubled the time it took to make all the portraits
if I go based on time that's about 0.9 points per hour
fitting enough for me
>>95939832thank you anon, I appreciate it
i'm glad you like it too
>>95939764I hate the mp but I respect the work. Keep it up anon. (And join MPs I actually like)
>>95940072lol, I might if one catches my attention. I'm still splitting my attention between HP and PMD right now the HP writefag has ballooned into a monster that's become very difficult to write due to some irl circumstances mentioned previously, but I hope to get it out within the next three days but the latter's probably going to be a very quick arc so I'll probably be free to join something else by mid-July if all goes well
>>95933861I was scared! But now all is familiar and right with the world. Now back to my writefag that is at short story length and has taken exponentially longer than I thought it would, including rewrites.
I will not learn from this.
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>>95940115What did anon mean by this?
>>95940120I dunno but looks like he died.
>>95939764I fucking despise PMD with my entire being and wish it was never brought up into this thread or even witnessed by human eyes so that the thought of it would never cross the minds of any conscious being.
But besides that this is great, good work anon.
>>95940167woah calm down facility rat
so are all the replies talking about how much they hate pmd a bit or serious? because I know I was serious.
>>95940264What's the difference?
>>95940264100% serious over here
>>95940264I don't think about it at all
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>>95923474>NameBasil Hallward
>GiftEGOist
>OriginSinner/Syndicate
>PerksAdaptability
This is This
Distortion
Shin
Creative License
Geburah
Netzach
Hod
Viciousness of Combat
>Distortion Form: Jealousy Turned WildePower: Normal
Ability: One Trick Pony
Form: E.G.O. Suit
Range: Self
A Distortion that causes Basil's body to be wrapped in velvet white satin canvas with a bloodfiend-like hunger for blood. By absorbing the blood of others, Basil can take on the appearance, memories, and/or abilities of those whose blood was absorbed. However, the power is temporary, normally only allowing a day of normal day to day actions for a pint of blood with strenuous combat or copying of extraordinary abilities lasting only an hour to 10 minutes per pint depending on the level of power emulated.
>E.G.O.: A Canvas of My Own>PowerExtreme
>VarietyOne Trick Pony
>FormAn Item
>Range: Short Range
While this EGO cannot be used directly by Basil, if another person willingly gives him their blood, he can paint into being any object they desire with powers tied to said desire. If they wished to fly, they could be given an EGO Suit with angelic wings or a futuristic backpack. If they wished for eternal youth, they could be painted over and made into a pseudo-bloodfiend in the form of a younger version of themselves. Sadly, while this power extremely powerful, it is also dangerous as said objects act like Abnormality EGO and tax the spirit/sanity of the users if overused which can either cause the person to Distort or suffer EGO Corrosion at worst.
>EGO TOOL: What Remains UnderneathA Paintbrush Sword and Square Canvas Riot Shield Combo imbued with the essence of the Portrait of Another World Abnormality. It gives Basil the ability to link two targets and cause any effects both harmful and/or positive to be shared between said targets.
>DrawbacksNo Augments (Superhuman Constitution)
Betrayed (20 PTS)
Hunted (20 PTS/Lord Henry of the Fauvism Ring)
>>95940264Taking the piss because 3 replies in a row saying the same thing was so ridiculous. Literally none of em had to mention the first part and just say wow thats cool.
>>95940294Setup and payoff.
>>95940294>Literally none of em had to mention the first part how else am I gonna make my hatred known???
>>95940306Nah I get it thats why I'm saying they're taking the piss.
>>95940296Feels pretty ironic that the build based on a painter decided to use ai instead of looking harder for a faceclaim.
>>95935540Wing of the world and fixer perk sections have the same description.
>>95940264I didn't reply but I do genuinely think it's awful. If other people enjoy it then that's great though. I hope it has a long and satisfying life so that the anons into it have an mp for them. My ideal world have every anon in an mp they love.
>>95940345My ideal world has every anon in an MP I love and they all effortfag with me anyway for 4 months at least
>>95940354I'm not picky so I'll join most things regardless of my personal feelings as long I have an idea and believe it will contribute positively to the over all experience.
>>95940344City anon made it with ai and didn't check all the way, sorry about that
>>95940383AI would unironically have done a better job lol.
>>95940379That's pretty picky. Real unpicky anons make at least a dump for the foulest, stinkiest, most unplayable slop imaginable no matter how they feel about the dump's quality
>>95940344Oh, I missed that. Fixed.
>>95940393As a whole? No, it can't make the cyoa. But the writing and grammar? Certainly.
>>95940400I find dumping to only decrease the enjoyment of others. If I don't think anons would enjoy something then there's not much a point in it, and a low quality dump certainly won't lead to 4 months of activity.
>>95935540https://tiermaker.com/create/-mcyoag--city-limbus-edition-16639737
Tiermaker done and dusted with all builds-
>>95940290aw, hell.
>>95940421Isn't it missing Moriarty
>>95940427Don't be silly. Me? Forget something? There is no war in the City.
>>95940421Finally we can put it to paper.
>>95940290>One Trick Pony (power copying)>One Trick Pony (give people whatever powers they want)>AI slop>Not one line of personalityWinner of the most /cyoag/esque build contest.
>>95940290Shiet we doing 12+ Sinners?
I miss when this thread was mostly discussion and not a bunch of apes flinging shit at each other over some terrible ESL CYOA
>>95940450PMD isn't very ESL tho?
>>95935540Paste everything into a grammar checker.
>>95940445in his defense I actually think its alright. I was going to complain about it being way more than a one trick but I thought about it and an EGO he can't actually use himself isn't all that great to begin with, and the effects he gives doesn't even seem that strong. It technically does only one thing, makes a temporary EGO ability attuned to the person that gave blood. So every individual person who uses it couldn't change what it manifests as for them, at least as far as I understand it.
Not saying its a great build otherwise. Some cool references here and there but ai slop gets double penalties when making an artist build, and didn't follow up with any motivations he has.
>>95940460Anon, did you miss that he also copies powers?
Any power he gives somebody else he can just copy. If he didn't have the first one I could maybe give him the benefit of the doubt, but it's absolute wank when combined.
Technically the two powers are illegal because of Cityanon retconning how EGOtist and Distortion work but that's not a fair complaint to make of the build.
>>95940469You know what I did miss the fact he had an entirely different distortion effect. The ai slop worked as a cognito hazard and made my eyes glaze over. -20 points then.
>>95940469desu, it's not like you can even go crazy and max out all your stats even adding both pools so i don't see why it'd be a problem
>>95940441The amount of motherfuckers on this bus with red eyes is too damn high.
>>95940499To be fair, red eyes are pretty popular. Ocular implants are pretty common and I think red is like the most commo too.
>>95940503Yeah, it's why it's not a giveaway for someone bloodfiend. People just assume you have implants instead of being a fanger.
>>95940521If you ask me to say who is a bloodfiend the actual top of the list is the bloodfiend hunter. She looks like the most stereotypical fanger ever.
>>95935540Would the Limbus Company Before/After Team (or any other department really) be Fixers or Feathers?
>>95940534You could probably use either.
>>95940534You could fluff it either way, depending on what they were doing before joining the Clear team.
>>95940534Either or, it really doesn't need to be concrete. Before team is focused on scouting the area and priming it for the Sinners to come on in with as minimal complications as possible. Not always possible due to the nature of the Sinner's work but they basically get the leads for people to go to. After Team cleans up the mess left behind. Kill some remaining abnormalities, make sure to smooth things over with the Nests. Probably more Feather leaning for both of them since they aren't expected to be the ones tossed to the frontlines since thats what the Sinners are for.
>>95940450I have been here for I think 2 years and nothing much has changed other than anons acting less zesty now.
I thought the zest was gross and since it was the MHA anons doing it... it was.
But I miss that zest. I shouldn't, but I do.
>>95940553we lost the ironically zesty anons and gained more actual homos
>>95940290Backstory:
Basil Hallward was a two-person street rat team with his childhood friend Dorian Grey under a ward protected by Lord Henry Wotton, a Bloodfiend within The Ring's Fauvism Ring. Both of them hoped that one day they could finally make it as either Ring or Fixers, Basil scrounging and fighting with various other street gangs, turning them into art pieces to keep favor for his ward while Dorian had the innate charm to upsell his art within the Ring via his charm and charisma. Sadly while Basil was gifted in combat and would get meager passing grades on his art, he always seemed to come up short of being able to join the Ring as an official member, only being kept as a civilian/rat enforcer as his art would be derided as derivative and lacking true substance worthy of the Ring's Membership by a few of Lord Henry's enforcers without Dorian being able to run interference for him.
However, when Dorian was severely wounded in a retaliation attack by a rival rat gang seeking to steal Lord Henry's favor, he went mad with rage, slaughtering them in a macabre waltz of gore and viscera that finally got Lord Henry's attention. Seeing Basil vulnerable to manipulation, Lord Henry allowed Basil to become a probationary member in exchange for holding Dorian hostage as they paid for his recuperation. However, as Basil worked for Ring to pay off his debt, Lord Henry had started to seduce Dorian away from Basil.
During Dorian's physical therapies and trainings, he was given lavish gifts and attention he had never seen before when working with Basil. The ecstasy of the high life was within Dorian's hands while Basil toiled on the streets unknowing of the rift growing between them. Eventually Dorian made a full recovery but through the hedonism he had cultivated, he began to see Basil as an inconvenience he had grown bored of but needed as Dorian was not a Ring Member just yet.
>>95940563How embarrassing for you
>>95940563This is a psyop by Morella anon.
olympia-anon, if you're here, are you still working on that shafiq/olympia writefag you mentioned a while back? Was considering adding a reference to it but I don't want to do what ended up happening with the glowie Gryffindor and mention something that never ends up existing
>>95940562Feels more like the other way around
too much irony poisoning
>>95940563YOU DIDN'T EVEN TRY WITH THIS BAIT
>>95940553A little zest is fine. It adds some spice to the stone soup that any good MP resembles. It's only when anons start talking about what their builds jerk off too that things get weird.
The pendulum will swing back eventually. Just keep moving through these insincere times.
>>95940586that's a different type of irony, we definitely had less literal faggots before
>>95940589yes I did
cute girls go into sovl
everyone else goes into garbage
>>95940591and remember not to let the irony poisoning get to you
as long as you stay sincere, you can help other people have a little bit more fun on the way
>>95940565The amount of run on sentences makes it hard to read. I'm also going to bash this as taking an hour to put out while having those errors too. Take your time to cook up something better, especially looking for a faceclaim that isn't slop. You're already trying to be the 13th sinner so its not like you're in a rush to claim a slot.
>>95940264I replied and I think its dumb
>>95940599I'm sorry anon, they've poisoned the well. My sincere state is now entirely shitposts. I've already put out several engagement baits and I can't stop it...
>>95940600Fucking faceclaim police. My next faceclaim is going to be lightning mcqueen and I'll just describe what he actually looks like in the bio (5'10 caucasian male with brown hair).
>>95940296I have found a damn near perfect faceclaim and is the final part of my build but its AI slop and I've been trying on and off to find something similar that isn't but have had no luck so far. If I can't by tonight I'm going with the slop and may god have mercy on my soul
>>95940565>he did his build pitch at runtime instead of putting it together beforehandcan't tell if based or retarded or both. bloodfiends continue to be the cause of all ills in the City, we need N Corp Van Helsing STAT.
>>95940609I'm the number one AI hater in this general and I'll still give your slopper a chance if the rest of it is good enough.
>>95940591I've always been sincere but my sincerity is scorned.
>>95940608NTA but AI is so shit
>>95940597Eric's trans? Is she an egg or is he ftm and you're a terf?
>>95940597>eric in cute girl tiersomething doesn't add up...
>>95940621Oh shit, the shitposters are going woke
>>95940597Saberanon's facelciams are not cute. They just give sorta interesting npc vibes.
The build I made that I think anons liked the most was AI.
>>95940618if you allow the opinions of other people to influence your mannerisms in such a way you are no better than the faggots telling you to stop being honest
>>95940608Its just sort of indicative of being a lazy anon. There has to be some better option. Go scroll through a booru or pixiv if Pintrest doesn't work out. Or the forbidden option...
Pick up a pencil
>>95940609It's alright anon. We're only going to strap you to the front of the Sinner bus as we crash through the gate into a new district. You're broken body will be our mascot.
>>95940618It's different because your taste is bad on top of zesty. Work on fixing that first.
>>95940631They're usually cute too
>>95940634I've never stopped being honest. I'm just less open.
>>95940565This isn't even finished
>>95940621Worst post in this thread and that's saying something
>>95940648I think he's still writing as we speak.
>>95939764Beautiful. I'd appreciate one for Corrin.
>>95940653He objectively makes cuter builds than average
>>95940653Idk. If someone put a gun to my head and I had to make vore chatbots of anon's builds and jerk off to them, Chihiro would be up there. Not saying I would, I'd have to be forced to do this.
>>95940666Anon why did you tape a gun to a mic stand aimed at your head...
>>95940656This is what I get for not rechecking the thread before a late reply, disregard.
>>95940663If that was true than someone would try to push ships for them.
>>95935540What's everybody cooking? Anyone have an idea for the first canto (Rhapsody?)? Or are we skipping those entirely for something less reliant on a single character?
>>95940673That mic stand has a dead child's spirit (don't worry, died 18 years ago) making me goon to vore, dammit! It comes to life at night! I was method acting for the fnaf MP but it all went horribly wrong!
>>95940678nigga literally had a gang of ESLs leeching off his builds and hoping he'd magically start liking yuri
>>95940678The brutal truth is that cute alone isn't enough for a ship.
Rolled 2 (1d2)
>>95940685Idk yet.
1. relationship chart for Eric
2. writefag
>>95940693The only good ships are enemies to lovers anyway.
>>95940685I was just going to work on something small to get comfortable. Likely mainly focusing on Lance and Desdemona, but I'm still considering how exactly I want it to play out since it'll probably be occurring around the other sinners as well.
>>95940678I ship his characters basically every time. It just never end up happening because he doesn't desperately force it like most of you.
>>95940685Waging and allergies are killing me.
Gonna try to do a driving downtime writefag sooner rather than later, or at least a chart.
>>95940702Wrong. Lovers to enemies to lovers is superior.
>>95940704I've never forced anything. I just play along when someone shows interest.
>>95940685Well if we're actually doing it Canto style it'd probably go in order by who was introduced first. So it'd probably be something like Hyde, Desdemona, Lancelot, Morella, Karras, Carer, Fenrir, Damsel, Watson, and the rest to be determined. Of course that's if we're being autistic about matching canon and that hinges entirely on the introduction writefag which I have absolute confidence didn't have that in mind when it was written.
We're probably going to go for something much more casual unless someone steps up to take the lead or we force them to. That's why I'm voting for Ronin being the first Canto/Rhapsody to put immense pressure to prove that their build isn't a nothingburger.
>>95940713Make it enemies to lovers to enemies to lovers and we have a deal.
>>95940296>>95940342It's partially by design as his backstory is about how he feels inadequate on his own after his muse/best friend Dorian Grey betrayed him and caused him to distort giving him an uncanny valley beauty as he tried to emulate the Bloodfiend powers he coveted from Dorian and Lord Henry.
>>95940565>>95940290>Backstory Part 2Eventually Dorian was given a chance to become a Ring Student like Basil. Both of them were tasked on recovering a "relic" from an art dealer and ex-Ring Member who had tried to escape the ward for K Corp. As they pursued the dealer, he later revealed he had been a Bloodfiend 2nd Kindred of Lord Henry that had gotten tired of his abuse and manipulations. Even with his Ring training Basil wasn't ready to fight a desperate Bloodfiend going all out with his powers. Suffering severe wounds, Basil was only able to distract the dealer while Dorian took the relic from him. When the Bloodfiend tried to unleash a torrent of blood bullets upon them, Basil heard an eerie voice in his head. "Do you truly think you have enough power to beat him? Is your own power truly enough?" Knowing the truth that he was inadequate in the moment, he relented to the voice, admitting that he was a failure that would lead his best friend to death once more.
In that moment, his body contorted, turning into a marble clay like putty wrapped in a white satin sheet. The blood bullets pelted his new form but instead of piercing his veiled flesh, it merged and morphed it into a hideous mockery of the Bloodfiend before him. Though Dorian was taken aback at first, he worked with Basil in his new form to take down the Bloodfiend and talk Basil back into his human form.
When they got the relic back to Lord Henry, Basil had passed out from the ordeal while Dorian was nearly unscathed. While Basil rested, Lord Henry congratulated Dorian on a job well done. Dorian took credit for most of the job both as a way to hide Basil's ability and a way to gain Henry's favor.
>>95940685I'll cook later for a Mila intro + RC, right now I'm still in my cooldown period. She's got much less going on than the other Sinners so her Canto could slot somewhere into the first half comfortably.
>>95935540Is there any point in not making a Sinner?
They seem like the only people in the MP actually doing anything and it seems like you can only really interact with them if you're a sinner.
>>95940722i will save you some time and tell you ronin anon is a certified bum ass nigga, no source on it but my pattern recognition aka schizophrenia
>>95940738>It's partially by design as his backstoryYes, by design... and not because you didn't prepare anything beforehand as we're seeing now with your backstory posts that take almost an hour to make each time.
>>95940751trve. the edgier a weeb build is the more of a flake the anon is.
>>95940762So fuarking trve, and they have the most potential for kino so it's such a shame.
>>95940748no
all the non sinners except (*snickers*) Eric APPARENTLY (*chuckles in suspension of disbelief*) are dumps anyway
>>95940762>>95940776My build Deathblood Darkkatana has infinity kino potential but so flake it'll never be posted, alas.
>>95940782m.. my knees... they're bending on their own for a build that hasn't even been posted
>>95940748I mean this was touted as the Sinner run. It's completely possible to do a normal City run in this but Sinners are taking the main stage. The only reason I can think of to not make one is that fact we already have a dozen and you shouldn't just make one if you're doing it out of FOMO, but there's also nothing stopping you either.
>>95940785You really need to get your knees checked anon, that can't be healthy.
>>95937160Cute! Cute! Cute!
>>95937477Dis so kino mi breddah. Good vibes all da wey
>>95939764Good vibes mi bredren!. Dis has so much soul in jah. Much love
>>95940794tumblr/reddit/vg is THAT way ma'am
>>95940666Stay away Satan! You wont get Chihiro from me, she's mine!
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>>95940722>City is dying well before I have to shoulder an entire arcFinally, some good news.
>>95940748>They seem like the only people in the MP actually doing anythingbro it's been like 2 days, the MP has barely even started. our first writefag kino featuring nearly every Sinner? 6 replies, one of them being "this is going on the reading list" for an MP with zero writefags before it. we have no idea which sinners are real and which are flop ass dumps at this point.
if you want on the bus but are too autistic to want to go past the canon sinner limit you can try to make a guide, but your post mostly just reads like FOMO of trying to get into "the new 1D"
>>95940822so do I make my cultivator now
>>95940822>6 replies, one of them being "this is going on the reading list" for an MP with zero writefags before itthis is grim, I give a reply to every writefag that features or mentions my build like a good anon should
>>95940837Only if he's based on Water Margin or Journey to the West kino. We need more strong personalities on the bus anyways, bellowing about "JUNIOR, YOU DARE?!"
>>95940837Hold, hooooold, Young Master... KTH nears...
>>95940837Wasn't the pinky syndicate recently introduced as chinawank?
>>95940873Yup, they're chinese glowies with cover identities and codenames.
>>95940738>>95940760it's mostly the damned time restraint on posting from where I'm at. Having to constantly wait 3-5 minutes per post and trying to squish the backstory into the word limits. I had the idea already but internet sucks where I'm at.
>Backstory Part 3Dorian afterwards became a darling within the Ring as a fellow Student. Attending more lavish parties with Lord Henry and gaining a name as the Grey Wolf as he dawned his Fauvism Mask. Trying to swallow his pride, Basil tried to improve his art during his rest but without Dorian to be his wingman, it was derided once again as without merit, even getting his first failure grade. Trying his best to swallow his pride, Basil tried to get back in contact with Dorian, but he was brushed aside every time. As stress piled on and a second failure was given to him, putting Basil back to civilian status, he had come to wits end and desperately went to confront Dorian during the relic's unveiling Gala.
Cornering Dorian behind stage, Basil laid into Dorian for giving him the cold shoulder after everything they had been through. While Dorian tried to talk him down, they eventually came to blows, Dorian taking a cheap blow that stained the relic's canvas with Basil's Blood. Eventually Dorian gained the upper hand and took a nearby brush to strike at Basil's heart but was stopped dead as the wound rebounded on him. As he fell to the floor dead, the relic turned to a garish painting of Dorian and Basil's hearts pierced by thorns entwining them in a bloody embrace.
Lord Henry stood in the gallery with the rest of the gallery members clapping and laughing at the ordeal as Basil went to resuscitate Dorian. As Basil panicked, Lord Henry revealed this was all his grand design to unveil his magnum opus, The Bloodstained Brothers. As Basil realized they had both been played for fools, he lunged at Lord Henry only to be laid low instantly.
>>95940685I think I'll wait a little bit before doing an intro, I need to watch some gameplay to learn more about the lore.
>>95940866i wholeheartedly believe a KTH run would kill this general for good. the adhd era has already decimated our numbers
>>95933268another writefag fo today
>The Starving Prophet (Apollo, Diana)https://rentry.org/starving_prophet
written while having not eaten for 12 hours, so you *know* it's authentic!
>>95940887>Having to constantly wait 3-5 minutes per post and trying to squish the backstory into the word limits.And that's why a lot anons just make their entire backstory on a rentry page and just post the mechanical parts + a short version of the description.
>>95940934we literally just lived through a HP run and MHA dying for real, we're unkillable
>>95940887>Backstory Part 4As Lord Henry got ready to execute Basil, the mysterious voice came in once again chiding him for his weakness. As Lord Henry's Blood Blade barreled down on Basil's neck, his body began to distort once more. Taken aback by Basil's transformation, Lord Henry retreated while Basil went on another rampage. As his thrashing caused the gallery to burn, Basil took the Relic along with Dorian's body far away in his bloodcrazed state.
When he awoke, Basil was clutching the dead body of Dorian and the relic as they both began to melt into a slurry of bloody paint. Crying and cursing his lot in life, he heard the voice once more admonish him and promise him more power. Vengefully, he cursed it out, saying that it's brought him nothing but misery and that he'd trade it all away if it could him back to the way things were, ripping the veil off his body as he returned to his human form. As he layed in the gutter tattered and defeated, what was left of the relic and his once distorted form laid a tarnished canvas shield and paintbrush sword. As he picked them up and fled deep into the city, he wondered on how his life had turned for the worse, bouncing from hovel to hovel until he joined up with Limbus Company when he was again at wits end. Maybe one of these sinners can help him bring Dorian back, or least let him die with Lord Henry for being an easily manipulated fool.
>>95940946Didn't know about rentry sadly, this is one of my first posts for stuff like this.
>>95940943PMD's strongest soldier...
I guess this blows my theory of "any MP can make it if you effortfag" out of the water, sad to see.
>>95940943MY CHARACTER IS NOT IN IT. BACK TO THE MINES YOU GO! REEEEE
>>95941004PMD is too niche and has too many faults for it to ever make it as an MP, even before the ADHDark Times. The fact that it started off with a controversy that immediately pushed away some of the few anons that would actually be interested put it in an even worse position. Just Effortfag can't overcome a fundamental lack of population.
I wish the PMD anons longevity and fun, but realistically speaking two autists and a handful of semi-invested hanger ons can't continue for very long.
The only way to save PMD is to put on the biggest, flashiest talent show this general has ever seen...
only way to save PMD is to make a cultivator pokemon
only way to save PMD is to combine it with KTH
We need to do a humiliation ritual for cultivationcucks.
Kill the Heavens but it's sci fi and the power level caps at wall.
Martial Path except it's an otome isekai academy with no martial arts.
Mundane chinese history MP with mercury drinking and fireworks.
>>95941225special power: golden core cultivator
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This is why saber anon never finished KTH.
Interesting how the shitposters always seem to wait 40-60 minutes after an effortpost drops to come back in full force
I wonder if theyโre all just glorified bots on a schedule.
>>95941236I don't have a schedule
>>95941225>Martial Path except it's an otome isekai academy with no martial arts.>Mundane chinese history MP with mercury drinking and fireworks.These are genuine kino tho.
>>95941236Ya got me. I've been running a botnet to destroy this place for months now, but the server is in Australia so there's always a delay when I go to deploy them. Also, sometimes the posts come out upside down.
>>95941236Shitpost? No, my posts are all genuine effortposts thoughbeit
>>95941225no one wants to engage in your weird humiliation fetish...
>>95933752>What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?>What can I get for level 3, 4, and 5 tools, exactly?>What can unnatural emanation do, exactly?Seriously, what are the answers to these questions? Can't make a build without knowing this kind of critical information.
>>95941275the anon cannot help but yearn for the schoolslop
>>95941303special power: golden core cultivator
>>95941309What the fuck do you mean?
>>95941304no, i just yearn for otome and mundane history slop
>>95941313Ability: Unaware
wait wrong MP
>>95941313Stand: Does He Know?
>>95941313Stranger 10 victim
>>95941313You have much to learn junior brother
Meditate on it
>>95941303Anon replied with the power level of each item tier and no turbo autist lorefag corrected him. Thats as good as you're going to get unless cityanon descends himself with an answer.
>>95941365I buy a, no, TWO infinite mass drivers to destroy the world. Double tap.
>>95941382My KING Eric stops you.
Anon, I'm gonna cash in my fraud points for the next few days. Mouth hurty real bad...
>>95941489Get over here and I'll kiss it better.
>>95941303Not gonna do the Tools since another anon did it pretty well but:
>What can level 4 and 5 augments do, exactly?Tier 4 is the best augment a Grade 1 Fixer and probably many Colors have access to. Nemo is a Grade 1 Fixer from Library of Ruina, and his head prosthetic is a screen that can shoot a fucking hyper beam that is one of the strongest non-ego attacks in the game. The Sandevistan from Cyberpunk would probably fall here too.
Tier 5 is complete bullshit and basically magic. Only a few people in the city have something even close. Best example in canon is probably Dante's Clock, which can revive a set group of individuals (sinners) at the cost of experiencing the pain of their deaths, as well as a bunch of supportive abilities. Considering that comes with the Danteh perk though, you should go for something in the same realm. Another example might be Gesellschaft, a hivemind that allows the character Faust to communicate and exchange information with an unspecified number of alternate versions of herself, making her one of the most knowledgeable characters in the setting.
>What can unnatural emanation do, exactly?It seems pretty obvious? It's an elemental damage effect for your attacks. You can fluff it however you want (punching so hard the air ignites, one of your augs has its power supply connected to your weapon for electrical bursts, etc) but the end result is your attacks have extra power behind them and might be harder for the enemy to resist.
>>95941508nta, but are any of our Tier 5 augs in the right ballpark?
>>95941508>hyper beam that is one of the strongest non-ego attacks in the gameWhat is its actual destructive capability though? Can it destroy a town?
>>95941725NTA but yes, strongest characters in the setting seem to cap out at Multi-City Block levels of destructive capacity. Hax in here is a lot more impressive.
>>95941762>strongest characters in the setting seem to cap out at Multi-City Block levels of destructive capacityhttps://nuclearsecrecy.com/nukemap/?&kt=1&lat=38.895037&lng=-77.036543&airburst=0&hob_ft=0&psi=20,5,1&zm=15
According to https://www.reddit.com/r/PowerScaling/comments/1fzxjt0/whats_the_difference_between_multicity_block_and/lr4vp9v/, "Multi-City Block ends at 1 Kiloton", so I plugged that into the nukemap.
Now, we have an accurate and measurable top power level.
>>95941800Would you say this is foundation establishment or golden core level?
>>95941838Depends on the setting, but I'd say foundation establishment because I don't think I've ever read a novel with golden core cultivators that have lower than city level power.
How did cultivation get into City discussion?
>>95941903The chinese chicken.
>>95941903Cultivationfag can't stop forcing his mental illness everywhere, it already happened with Harry Potter. He'll make a shitty potentialman and get ignored.
>>95935540My idea for a guide
https://rentry.org/LobotomyTerminator
Silas is a towering and stern figure, content to sit back and watch the lambs of L-Corp grind themselves to paste before his eyes. He views the group with largely undisguised scorn, but is not above laughing at their interactions (and misfortune). He has no issue with disciplining the motley crew knowing that their manager can revive them endlessly.
Silas is no conversationalist, but in his role of guide will offer up suggestions and advice on how they can overcome challenges.
Likewise, while he seems to relish their individual suffering, if all of the group is in danger he will act in their defence without hesitation.
>>95942087>Sinners are trauma victims trying to get better>He's going to make them worseKino.
No one is supposed to be happy in the City, not even the main characters.
>>95942087Not a bad build, unfortunately he's a victim of my elderly color fixer bvll with abnormal EGO.
>>95941933Meditate on the Dao, Junior Brother.
>>95942134>not even the main characters.especially the main characters.
>>95935540>>95935929>Ringo's Ride. https://rentry.org/RingoInTheCity
Ringo's POV during the Prologue.
dead activity, dead thread, dead everything
>>95940115Looking forward to it, mystery MHAnon!
>>95942956Europeans are finishing work and Americans are still in the morning.
>>95935929>>95936298I keep my promises, anon!
Kino. One of my favorite writefags in a while. I ended up liking Minos a lot more than I expected, he plays a good straight man to the rest of the absurdity. No complaints about spotlight or character, I'm just happy to be mentioned.
Thanks for cooking, Hydeanon.
>>95938433Based vehicle design, all the coolest mobile bases are constant threats to your life.
>>95942462>Pet buildWasn't expecting that from the cowboy vibe, but I can dig it. He just needs a horse and a falcon, too.
>>95942462Are they VIs, or does he have DID?
>>95942956No thanks to cunts like you.
>>95942995work is a non-issue for college students tbf, though idk how many of those there are around these parts
>>95943346Some of us both work and study.
>>95943437Yes, but that's not the default so I didn't account for it. Plenty of people still on summer break and taking advantage of that first and foremost
preemptive new thread for all the burnt-out hogs still around
>>95943295>>95943295>>95943295I have no idea if Worm is still a thing, I just listed off all the recent MPs I could remember. If I missed one let me know I guess
how do I feel more confident about writing boring, bottom of the barrel slop that nobody likes?