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If you're gonna write a first draft high, you have to at least edit and rewrite when you're sober, and be brutally honest with yourself about whether the things that seemed profound in an altered state actually make sense under the light. You might get a good idea or two out of that state, but your prose and style are all over the place, sometimes you're acting like you're writing poetry, sometimes you're barely making complete sentences, and sometimes this reads like a /tv/ shitpost, and I wouldn't hand any of the above in to a professor
You could also cut the entire first page up to "Film is Dead" without losing anything of value
