Anonymous
11/6/2025, 4:55:30 PM
No.3870270
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Fallout New Vegas Writing
I don't hate Fallout: New Vegas, but sometimes I notice some unnatural lines:
"A free woman. It's... been awhile since I've seen a woman who wasn't a slave. I forget myself -are you injured?"
Something like “A free woman, are you injured?” would be enough. I already know the Legion enslaves women — show, don’t tell. I get it!
I think The Frontier did even worse, but some dialogues in New Vegas are also a bit bad. Still, I like NV’s writing overall. But is afar of being perfect.
"A free woman. It's... been awhile since I've seen a woman who wasn't a slave. I forget myself -are you injured?"
Something like “A free woman, are you injured?” would be enough. I already know the Legion enslaves women — show, don’t tell. I get it!
I think The Frontier did even worse, but some dialogues in New Vegas are also a bit bad. Still, I like NV’s writing overall. But is afar of being perfect.