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7/6/2025, 1:50:05 PM
>>3797218
Just finished reading, loved your work. Aoyusumu is truly becoming holy cinema. At the moment I can't even think of much to criticize; only 2 things come to mind.
I believe it's after you start falling in the volcano and you hear the prayers and begin the process of the transformation, it's written that then the mc starts 'laughing maniacally' at a certain point. I don't think it fits the.. style? or the moment in question for the style?
The other is at the end. I don't know what you have in mind for/if any possible consequences of telling or not telling, but couldn't there be an 'honorable' option of telling Khan that you can't tell the whole truth because it puts a mark on him or smth? Then it is up to you if he pushes for the truth or decides to leave it at that.
Side content, idk.
For aoyusumu, if people will start viewing the mc as a saint, the temple could approach him with a simple request? Maybe even just PR. Since he's broken at the start (right?), it gives room for some unpowered content and at the same time it could start delving into temple politics/problems/lore.
Just finished reading, loved your work. Aoyusumu is truly becoming holy cinema. At the moment I can't even think of much to criticize; only 2 things come to mind.
I believe it's after you start falling in the volcano and you hear the prayers and begin the process of the transformation, it's written that then the mc starts 'laughing maniacally' at a certain point. I don't think it fits the.. style? or the moment in question for the style?
The other is at the end. I don't know what you have in mind for/if any possible consequences of telling or not telling, but couldn't there be an 'honorable' option of telling Khan that you can't tell the whole truth because it puts a mark on him or smth? Then it is up to you if he pushes for the truth or decides to leave it at that.
Side content, idk.
For aoyusumu, if people will start viewing the mc as a saint, the temple could approach him with a simple request? Maybe even just PR. Since he's broken at the start (right?), it gives room for some unpowered content and at the same time it could start delving into temple politics/problems/lore.
6/22/2025, 2:25:02 AM
Nothing happen bros, tonight we hold the line
ID: kR0iz5r//pol/508138397#508138898
6/21/2025, 1:20:22 AM
>>508138662
shhhhhhhh sit down, anon. no more angriness.
shhhhhhhh sit down, anon. no more angriness.
6/17/2025, 7:48:26 PM
With your brain, you can create any scenario, dialogue, system, landscape, and so on. Honestly, I don’t know how people don’t just sit around imagining things all day. You can LITERALLY imagine anything you want.
6/17/2025, 3:29:47 AM
>>507669886
I just farted, does it count?
I just farted, does it count?
6/17/2025, 12:56:15 AM
ID: AE771NOm/pol/507346134#507350565
6/14/2025, 5:41:24 PM
>>507350403
no, just sit
no, just sit
6/14/2025, 6:22:54 AM
Iran seens calm now or just a shitty nothingburger.
What else is new? Sumy?
What else is new? Sumy?
6/14/2025, 1:48:32 AM
6/14/2025, 12:00:10 AM
6/13/2025, 4:32:00 PM
>WHY DID IRAN FALL?!
Because they do not have a nuclear weapon, and the kikes took the advantage by killing them. They cannot attack China, Russia, North Korea and Pakistan since they will be nuked. This is common sense and was due to happen eventually.
Because they do not have a nuclear weapon, and the kikes took the advantage by killing them. They cannot attack China, Russia, North Korea and Pakistan since they will be nuked. This is common sense and was due to happen eventually.
ID: XX6pS6nM/pol/507109070#507109159
6/12/2025, 6:26:34 PM
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