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7/21/2025, 9:32:33 AM
>>212986737
sekunden du fäst dig vid någon ny så kommer du inse hur värdelös hon var t. vetare
sekunden du fäst dig vid någon ny så kommer du inse hur värdelös hon var t. vetare
7/18/2025, 6:56:25 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mb-mY9nCUw
When's our P&S coillab, bros?
When's our P&S coillab, bros?
7/13/2025, 10:19:40 PM
>>715377140
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ncxqww4VyhY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ncxqww4VyhY
7/13/2025, 12:46:37 PM
>>76369091
best post in the thread.
best post in the thread.
7/9/2025, 1:01:34 AM
>>714903038
Yes? Got a problem with that?
Yes? Got a problem with that?
7/5/2025, 11:41:54 PM
STEPPIN ON THE GAS NO BRAKE LIGHT
I GOT A BIG DREAM AND I'M AIM HIGH
TAKE A RISK EVERY TIME I PLAY DICE
I SHAKE EM UP
I SHAKE EM UP
I'M THE SAME GUY
I GOT A BIG DREAM AND I'M AIM HIGH
TAKE A RISK EVERY TIME I PLAY DICE
I SHAKE EM UP
I SHAKE EM UP
I'M THE SAME GUY
6/22/2025, 5:52:37 AM
>>713315936
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwW3zdALfB8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwW3zdALfB8
6/15/2025, 2:06:41 PM
>>24468197
>I'm just confused on the rituals/connection between Adamu and Lod. Thematic, not just familial/tribe connection. I'm sad for Adamu, he did nothing wrong but got all the worst luck. I'm sad that Lod went out like a chump, he could have been a powerful
guard* when he grows up
derp.
>>24459718
>by this point, I'm wondering about the narrator situation. it's all very external and it feels very disembodied, like it's just words and not actually a character in a place somewhere.
One of the main points was I wanted to capture the passiveness of watching traffic, until I snap and decide to do something.
>at the end of the story, im not sure if i like this dish. it might just be youre using ingredients i personally dont like, but i do think that something more could have happened. i get that there is this sort of malaise, this sort of carver-esque acceptance of the banality, and then the sort of glimpses at the beauty of the cirus of life, but i just think the voice wasnt hitting it for me, i didnt quite jive with the observations made by the narrator, but like i said, thats just me. the ending definitely works for what youre trying to do here.
It needed refinement for sure. I would have, but I knew that if I were to wait till the deadline/before the deadline to post it, I would have missed it. Because on that day I was unable to get home before the deadline.
>>24462345
>benign existence
Yes. Like boring, miniscule, insignificant, plain. John/Bob is names to represent the average bloke on the road. His screams was probably the car/horns.
>>24466183
>I'm 2nd Place
How the hell did I do this?
>I'm just confused on the rituals/connection between Adamu and Lod. Thematic, not just familial/tribe connection. I'm sad for Adamu, he did nothing wrong but got all the worst luck. I'm sad that Lod went out like a chump, he could have been a powerful
guard* when he grows up
derp.
>>24459718
>by this point, I'm wondering about the narrator situation. it's all very external and it feels very disembodied, like it's just words and not actually a character in a place somewhere.
One of the main points was I wanted to capture the passiveness of watching traffic, until I snap and decide to do something.
>at the end of the story, im not sure if i like this dish. it might just be youre using ingredients i personally dont like, but i do think that something more could have happened. i get that there is this sort of malaise, this sort of carver-esque acceptance of the banality, and then the sort of glimpses at the beauty of the cirus of life, but i just think the voice wasnt hitting it for me, i didnt quite jive with the observations made by the narrator, but like i said, thats just me. the ending definitely works for what youre trying to do here.
It needed refinement for sure. I would have, but I knew that if I were to wait till the deadline/before the deadline to post it, I would have missed it. Because on that day I was unable to get home before the deadline.
>>24462345
>benign existence
Yes. Like boring, miniscule, insignificant, plain. John/Bob is names to represent the average bloke on the road. His screams was probably the car/horns.
>>24466183
>I'm 2nd Place
How the hell did I do this?
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