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You love to see it.
>the guy's the boxer
Should be a boxer, not the boxer.
>she shook her heard
Head not heard.
>‘Think ya failed
You got an errant apostrophe here.
>The next hours
Should be the next few hours.
>Still gave no clue
Should be have not gave.
I'm a bit surprised that Anon's covering his throat with a choker, I thought he had black veins that merely resembled one. Did I misread earlier chapters?
>Loona reading the fujo novel
Kek. Also got a kick out of the claw game and Octavia helping Anon cheat at it. You can really see Anon and Loona warming up in real time, I'm almost afraid to see what hurdles you're gonna toss at em.