I posted this in ASG and the /A/ draw thread and hardly got any (you)s. please tell me where I could do better. the only thing I did good was her line art and proportions. I just want to get better.

Requesting flat brats as a part of the master race.

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Hopefully this is acceptable enough, I don't draw anime a lot and I rarely lurk here. I'm predominantly a pony nigger, greetings from /mlp/ by the way, probably could tell by how I did the eyes and my awful hand. I also don't tend to make such highly rendered images either so if anything is off with that then you know why.
catbox just incase https://files.catbox.moe/iki7cv.png