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Anonymous No.96339228 >>96339246 >>96341157
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Anonymous No.96339246
>>96339228 (OP)
Thank you for making a real thread
Anonymous No.96339248 >>96339252 >>96343335
Hope the janny doesn't think this is spam, as the other threads are all a mess with fucked OPs and previous threads links. Can the anon doing this fucking stop?
>>96275050
>>96338826
>>96317518
Anonymous No.96339251 >>96339252 >>96339258 >>96339371 >>96342158
Why does Tok always act out every so often? Is he maliciously autistic?
Anonymous No.96339252
>>96339248
It's Tok, and he probably won't because he brags about getting banned.
>>96339251
Yes.
Anonymous No.96339258 >>96339268
>>96339251
Anonymous No.96339268
>>96339258
Anonymous No.96339327 >>96339333 >>96339394 >>96342276
Anonymous No.96339333 >>96339336
>>96339327
Anonymous No.96339336
>>96339333
Anonymous No.96339343 >>96339348
Anonymous No.96339348 >>96339358
>>96339343
Anonymous No.96339358
>>96339348
Anonymous No.96339361 >>96339377
>this option is overpowered so I have to pick it even though I don't even like it
Anonymous No.96339371 >>96340381 >>96341096
>>96339251
back in may i said i was going to do a tier list of the waifus, here it is
Anonymous No.96339374 >>96339381
Anonymous No.96339377
>>96339361
powercuck mentality
Anonymous No.96339381 >>96339385
>>96339374
Anonymous No.96339385
>>96339381
Anonymous No.96339394 >>96339397 >>96342276
>>96339327
Someone should do a hero's journey type mega-build across the Scottishverse in chronological order.
Anonymous No.96339397 >>96339618
>>96339394
I've done a few with chronology all jumbled. What's the longest build c-c-c-combo you've managed so far?
Anonymous No.96339489
My name is. Mario and aim is rappen
You do not fuck with the king of ramen
That's right, im bad and Japan is my country
Mess with me and you'll end up on grove street
Anonymous No.96339511 >>96339524 >>96339533 >>96339538 >>96346583
Charted.
Anonymous No.96339524
>>96339511
where's 0v0
Anonymous No.96339533
>>96339511
>Ford at top
Based list
Anonymous No.96339538
>>96339511
>Ulster at top
My absolute sides.
Anonymous No.96339603 >>96341134
>>96337468
I always felt that what JRPG Traitor needed was a background/family section. After all, what JRPG villain (that isn't a metaphysical force of despair) is complete without a tragic backstory?
Anonymous No.96339618 >>96339713 >>96339934
>>96339397
Probably my incredibly ambitious conduit fanfic that has over 10+ cyoas. Including but not limited to;
>Conduit (the original and unofficial expansions)
>Wizard's Keychains
>Strange Journey
>Mysterious Shopkeeper (LCircle)
>Netherlord's Reward
>Roads Less Traveled (New Observer)
>Within A Dark Forest (New Observer)
>Lethe Grande Hotel (Imaginos)
>Majority of Scottishanon's cyoas.
Its still an unfinished mess, but I love going back to it from time to time and adding on it bit by bit.
Anonymous No.96339670 >>96339777 >>96339800
https://aldarsluckcyoa.neocities.org/cyoas/bizarre%20bargain/

I really shouldn't mess with Honkai, but the temptation..
Anonymous No.96339713 >>96339723
>>96339618
>the original and unofficial expansions
Including Lily?
Anonymous No.96339721 >>96339823
>>96338533
Yea. Occultists know *how* to purify cursesβ€”they can't just purify any and all curses at will.

https://imgchest.com/p/5xy22bqjzyl
Anonymous No.96339723 >>96339778
>>96339713
hell no
Anonymous No.96339777
>>96339670
eww, interactive sloppa
Anonymous No.96339778 >>96339934 >>96340228
>>96339723
Then you lied to me anon, you didn't play all the unofficial expansions.
Anonymous No.96339783 >>96339809 >>96339843 >>96339868
>Can't die
>Don't need sleep
>Don't need to eat, or any other kind of bodily function
>Basically limitless forms of entertainment
>Can even sit it out if you don't really feel it
Besides everyone else being a bunch of fags, what's meant to be the actual issue with being functionally immortal?
Anonymous No.96339800 >>96339830 >>96339837
>>96339670
>gachaslop
Have we fallen this low?
Anonymous No.96339809 >>96339818
>>96339783
None. The ideal form of immortality is plainly better than mortality. Why else would it cost points? The problem is the difficulty acquiring immortality (such that we today still cannot), which is why many stories about immortality either involve failing to achieve it or achieving it at too great a cost.
Anonymous No.96339818
>>96339809
Or to put it simply, it's cope. Demonizing immortality is a cope people engage in to feel better about being mortal.
Anonymous No.96339823
>>96339721
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Book_of_the_Dead_spells
The Book of the Dead is op.
Anonymous No.96339830 >>96343452
>>96339800
Mein neger, Fate/Another Pretender was a thing for years.
Anonymous No.96339837
>>96339800
You retards can't enjoy waifu kino anymore.
Anonymous No.96339843 >>96339854
>>96339783
>Basically limitless forms of entertainment
You retards can't even enjoy cyoas for more than a few minutes or hours before you get bored, what the fuck will you do after one million years.
Anonymous No.96339854 >>96339876
>>96339843
Waifus aren't static like cyoas.
Anonymous No.96339868 >>96339890
>>96339783
Immortality is only good if it comes with an off switch and you have infinite memory. Else you'll just become a drooling dementia zombie after the first millennium.
Also eating and sleeping are pleasant experiences, I would rather have them but need them than not.
Anonymous No.96339876 >>96339913
>>96339854
You manwhore keep getting new waifus with each cyoas, you're absolutely going to get bored of them
Anonymous No.96339890 >>96339928 >>96339935
>>96339868
>Also eating and sleeping are pleasant experiences
I disagree, I hate doing them.
Anonymous No.96339913
>>96339876
lmao facts, waifutards are like kids that have a new favourite toy each week after swearing that they'll love the previous ones forever.
Anonymous No.96339928 >>96339932 >>96339978
>>96339890
If you don't like a necessity of living, maybe you don't appreciate life as much as you think you do.
Anonymous No.96339932 >>96339947 >>96339976
>>96339928
>if you don't like the annoying parts you don't like it!
what kind of cope is this
Anonymous No.96339934 >>96340228
>>96339618
Neat though I had meant within the Scottish milieu. Feels easier to "balance" while porting between cyoa when they all derive from the same person imo.
>>96339778
He never said "all".
Anonymous No.96339935 >>96340815
>>96339890
sleeping I could understand, but eating? you either live somewhere with shitty food or are a self-hating fatfag.
Anonymous No.96339947
>>96339932
>eating
Sure, starvation sucks but the degree of separation from basic material nature you champion is gnostic retardation.
Anonymous No.96339976
>>96339932
>t. techjeet
someone post the basedbot meme
Anonymous No.96339978
>>96339928
>If you don't like having to take shits you must not like food
Anonymous No.96339986 >>96340007
>First thought is shit
Rajesh...
Anonymous No.96340007
>>96339986
I blame Entropist.
Anonymous No.96340228 >>96340510
>>96339778
I did play it, I just didn't include it within the cyoa bundle fanfic. It just doesn't fit with the themes I'm going for. I also didn't include stuff like Firmament for this exact same reason.
>>96339934
>Neat though I had meant within the Scottish milieu. Feels easier to "balance" while porting between cyoa when they all derive from the same person imo.
I did attempt a Scottishverse marathon. My general outline was starting from "Small Town Hero" and leaving the real crazy stuff like Guardian Vs Forces of Darkness till the end. However it was really difficult to map out the continuity of cyoas, and I didn't set in ground rules so the build ended being bloated shopping list. If I was to attempt doing another, I would limit the amount of perks and items to a single one each in every cyoa. And for the companions, only three can be chosen to come along with you. The rest can only exist within the bounds of their own cyoa.
Anonymous No.96340307 >>96341134
https://imgchest.com/p/qe4g59d8j7j
https://rentry.org/jrpg_traitor_information
Anonymous No.96340316 >>96340386 >>96340408
I fucking hate the mixed art for Gifts. It's completely jarring and doesn't help set the tone. Also the literal 1:1 Sukuna expy is uncalled for.
Anonymous No.96340381 >>96340998
>>96339371
Reasonings?
The Eataine princess has actual skills compared to Caledor's
Anonymous No.96340386
>>96340316
Post build?
Anonymous No.96340408 >>96340560
>>96340316
You should post your build, little tokling.
Anonymous No.96340510
>>96340228
True, at best I've managed "clusters" butnever the whole thing.
Anonymous No.96340560 >>96340650 >>96342227
>>96340408
I'm not Tok and I just read the CYOA. I'm not into the whole be the grim reaper and take lives shit in the CYOA to become stronger or planeswalking.
Anonymous No.96340650
>>96340560
>moralfag AND a tokling
grim fate, brother.
Anonymous No.96340651 >>96340682 >>96340701 >>96340771
What WIPs are you guys working on?
Anonymous No.96340682 >>96340701 >>96340733
>>96340651
If I told you it would give me some sort of vague time limit to fail on
So I absolutely cannot
Anonymous No.96340701 >>96340721 >>96340733 >>96340757
>>96340651
>>96340682
Reminder that witch is best girl.
Anonymous No.96340721
>>96340701
If and only if:
Anonymous No.96340733 >>96340840
>>96340701
Based thorns is a downgrade NGL.
>>96340682
At least give a hint as to what's it about...
Anonymous No.96340757 >>96340786
>>96340701
I prefer Thorn. I don't want to watch my back with my significant one, and the trust issues of Witch are too severe.
Anonymous No.96340771 >>96340781
>>96340651
A better question would be: What WIPs are you guys NOT working on?
Anonymous No.96340781
>>96340771
All your favorites.
Anonymous No.96340786 >>96340807
>>96340757
Thorn is an evolution of Witch after you cut through her trust issues.
Anonymous No.96340807 >>96340900
>>96340786
Which requires you dying, yes.
I don't want the adolescent pre-introspection version of Thorn.
Anonymous No.96340815 >>96340938 >>96340947
>>96339935
What? Sleeping is a thousand times better and more important. It serves so many different purposes, while eating is just taking in fuel and maybe enjoying the taste. If you can generate your own or use alternative means like absorbing ambient energy or funneling it from some higher dimension, why would you ever want to eat again?
Anonymous No.96340840 >>96340944
>>96340733
Hint: You get powers
Anonymous No.96340900 >>96340916
>>96340807
It's not like dying is a big deal for you in that setting.
Anonymous No.96340916 >>96340933
>>96340900
It's literally the end of the world
Anonymous No.96340933 >>96340952
>>96340916
And then you go again.
Anonymous No.96340938
>>96340815
For the taste of course, what else? A delicious meal can be comparable to sex in pleasure.
Anonymous No.96340944
>>96340840
Counter Hint: You have no OC.
Anonymous No.96340947
>>96340815
Sleeping is 8+ hours of wasted time I could spend doing something more fun.
Anonymous No.96340952 >>96340975
>>96340933
Your consciousness does. There is still a world destroyed left behind.
Anonymous No.96340975 >>96340981
>>96340952
Who cares? The world exist for your entertainement. If it doesn't feed you with experiences anymore, it might as well die. Same with cyoas settings.
Anonymous No.96340981
>>96340975
I don't think you understand what those two are talking about.
Anonymous No.96340998 >>96341071
>>96340381
you are not going to convince be that the gossiping stacy is on the same level as the hot and rich history nerd.
Anonymous No.96341071
>>96340998
Her family history only, the other one is a peak politician.

But it matters little, i chose them both lol.
Anonymous No.96341096
>>96339371
So what's this ranking based on, exactly? Usually when girls get a low rank like D it's over being bitches and/or whores, but these two are just sweet naive girls?
Anonymous No.96341134 >>96341183 >>96341496 >>96344122
>>96339603
>>96340307
Life Events are sorta your background. You can make characters be part of your family. If you use REROLL to take Blood Relation a second time, you can even play match maker and have two characters be your parents. Yes, parents, not just a mother and father combination as even the impossible can be made to happen. Become Alis Brandfold and Revysia's child! Or Prospero Malgold and Athanas'! Live your cursed family fantasy!
Anonymous No.96341157
>>96339228 (OP)
So how would a better version of this CYOA look like?

Cause right now the CYOA seems like the companions are gone a slaughter each other before the zombies do
Anonymous No.96341173 >>96341193 >>96341230
*Hugs You*
>Oh my God, is that an affectionate hug? Aaaaaah, I'm going insane. Save me, Niggerman. Aaaaaahhhhhh I'm going crazy.

There are people that actually like the slop Italics writes and thinks this is peak worldbuilding.
Anonymous No.96341183
>>96341134
Now that you've said it, you can make some truly cursed parental pairings.
Anonymous No.96341193 >>96341201
>>96341173
>italics out of nowhere
Never change, anon.
Anonymous No.96341201 >>96341271
>>96341193
Am I not allowed to critize an author you bootlicker?
Anonymous No.96341230 >>96341243
>>96341173
Mom said its MY turn to seethe about Italics today!
Anonymous No.96341241 >>96341287 >>96341325 >>96341362 >>96341382 >>96341387
why would you choose any other destination that is not ceresokoyo?
Anonymous No.96341243 >>96341280
>>96341230
There is nothing in there to imply seething. Stop white knighting for Italics.
Anonymous No.96341271
>>96341201
Of course you're free to think of that author all day long.
Anonymous No.96341280
>>96341243
>Stop white knighting for Italics
you know he is not going to stop, right?
Anonymous No.96341287 >>96341327
>>96341241
>cultivation
No thank you.
Anonymous No.96341325 >>96341331
>>96341241
Yuan Fang, Thaina, Ceresokoyo
Anonymous No.96341327 >>96341347 >>96341363
>>96341287
>anon is a deathfag
have fun growing old and dying, anon
Anonymous No.96341331 >>96341346
>>96341325
Won't you be leaving the planet?
Anonymous No.96341346 >>96341350
>>96341331
...What? Yes. My destination is Ceresokyo.
Anonymous No.96341347 >>96341382 >>96341392
>>96341327
I just don't like cultivation. The line "You dare, Junior?" already grate me.
Surely you have other reasons to pick that world beyond that thanatophobia?
Anonymous No.96341350
>>96341346
But don't you want to leave the planet?
Anonymous No.96341362
>>96341241
Higher res.
Anonymous No.96341363 >>96341392
>>96341327
Have fun climbing the infinite layers of cultivation, just remember that there's always a higher stage and higher realm babies are born stronger than you.
Anonymous No.96341382
>>96341241
>Yuan Fang
i just realized
>>96341347
yes? from Yuan Fang description you get supernatural powers from cultivation.
Anonymous No.96341387
>>96341241
Zarathan is clearly the correct choice. The road to wealth is ALWAYS the right path. Who wants to be a god amongst savages, or a chink, or a minority?
Anonymous No.96341392 >>96341400
>>96341347
>>96341363
I don't think this is standard xianxia cultivation, else every planet would be just another version of Ceresokyo with Immortal cultivators ruling the galaxy. Its probably more akin to Wuxia super martial arts.
Anonymous No.96341400 >>96341431
>>96341392
>wuxia
So Dragon Ball?
Anonymous No.96341420
Rake please...
Anonymous No.96341431
>>96341400
Nah even the original db had some retarded power scaling. Fist of the North Star would be more accurate.
Anonymous No.96341441
Anonymous No.96341448 >>96341467
post cultivation kino
Anonymous No.96341467 >>96341546 >>96343045
>>96341448
there are not enough cultivation cyoas
Anonymous No.96341477
https://imgchest.com/p/bp45q3kg245
Anonymous No.96341496
>>96341134
Yeah but you know how barebones that is, it's not really satisfying for the purpose I'm talking about.
Anonymous No.96341501
https://imgchest.com/p/dl7p8vg36yo
Anonymous No.96341546 >>96341587 >>96341616 >>96341724 >>96341791
>>96341467
The Concept of Cultivation has so much potential beyond chinkslop, especially in the cyoa medium. Things like Heavenly Kitchen Realm, Lord of the Mysteries and Reverend Insanity perfectly demonstrates how anything can be cultivation and not just invisible mystical energy and boring meditation. It just needs a creative mind and solid grasp of genre's foundations to make something incredibly kino.
To be honest I would much rather Tankista made an original cultivation setting rather than the LoTM cyoa he's working on. He strikes all conditions for creating the greatest cultivation cyoa ever.
Anonymous No.96341553
https://imgchest.com/p/lqyemaj837d
https://rentry.org/xianxiarants
https://rentry.org/KTHstoragechamber#appendix-five-how-to-make-techniques
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Anonymous No.96341560 >>96341595
Cultivation is extremely retarded
With traditional magic, multiple phenomena culminatite in one, collective understanding, be it mana or runes or the elements or whatever
In cultivation, multiple understandings culminate in one, single phenomena. Regardless of if you meditated or tasted your own cum or rearranged furniture for 300 years the outcome is the same. Strong chi
All fighters in cultivation settings can be reduced to a number and all that matters is making the number real big
It's ass
There's no magic to it
Anonymous No.96341587 >>96341667
>>96341546
The xuanhuan genre. Love it.
>Similar to xianxia, Xuanhuan may contain immortal cultivation. However, unlike xianxia, which is more focused on becoming immortal and tighter on chinese mythology, Xuanhuan is a broader, more loose genre. Basically, if it's a cultivation-based story, yet it contain elements of western fantasy, such as sci-fi, or magic that's not inherently eastern, then it is a xuanhuan.
Anonymous No.96341595 >>96341642 >>96341645
>>96341560
>With traditional magic, multiple phenomena culminatite in one, collective understanding, be it mana or runes or the elements or whatever
So it's just science?
Anonymous No.96341616 >>96341629 >>96341644 >>96341664
>>96341546
>Tankista
>greatest cultivation cyoa ever
anon, please....
the only good cyoas Tankista made are hell rebellion. and pic related.
Anonymous No.96341629 >>96341664
>>96341616
>pic related
Anonymous No.96341642 >>96341676
>>96341595
ANON NO
Anonymous No.96341644
>>96341616
>t. jealous tok
Anonymous No.96341645
>>96341595
It's based on alchemy so, sort of
Anonymous No.96341664
>>96341616
>>96341629
That's the part where one of us pretend Option A is perfect and you're retarded if you don't want infinite jail time in Avalon.
Anonymous No.96341667 >>96341791
>>96341587
Yes exactly, the Xuanhuan cyoa by Cruxador almost makes the mark, but misses when it matters (vague cultivation stages, no techniques, random demon abilities, strangely confined world, out of place african pantheon, etc...)
Anonymous No.96341669
Got any old cyoa recommendations?
Also don't take the bait.
Anonymous No.96341676 >>96341692 >>96341723
>>96341642
Unfortunately my attempt to manifest HIM failed...
Anonymous No.96341692
>>96341676
Unfortunately?
Anonymous No.96341723
>>96341676
Rookie attempt, check this out;
FREE PALESTINE
FUCK ISRAEL
GOD IS REAL
SCIENCE IS NOT MAGIC
WOMEN ARE SMART
MEN ARE DUMB
TOTAL JEW DEATH
BLACK LIVES MATTER
ZOOMERS ARE BASED
BOOMERS ARE CRINGE
Anonymous No.96341724 >>96341748
>>96341546
so just pick a cyoa you like and add a steep progression ladder to it
Anonymous No.96341740 >>96341756 >>96341757 >>96341761 >>96341766 >>96341768 >>96341796 >>96341813 >>96342043
Here are the niggas that will give you powers.
They will also serve as the narrators and waifus.
I'll also add others who work for them.
They are supposed to be color coded.
How do they look?
Anonymous No.96341748 >>96341759
>>96341724
>Just modify others work without permission
no that's reddit behaviour
Anonymous No.96341756 >>96342074
>>96341740
Anon... these are white women
Anonymous No.96341757
>>96341740
middle and left are mine, you can keep the harlot on the right.
Anonymous No.96341759
>>96341748
anon, every cyoa already does that to images, nobody has any right to complain unless they did everything themselves (no, ai art doesn't count)
Anonymous No.96341761 >>96342074 >>96342114
>>96341740
Are these supposed to be 3 different people? because they look identical to me. Retrain your white-haired anime girl fetish anon.
Anonymous No.96341766 >>96342074
>>96341740
they look good.
who are you?
Anonymous No.96341768
>>96341740
I need to kill the one of the right.
Anonymous No.96341791 >>96341807 >>96341808 >>96341823
>>96341667
It also ranges from bad to stupid in the majority of its content, with only a small proportion of it worth anything

>>96341546
Tankista couldn't do anything as good as kill the heavens
Anonymous No.96341796 >>96341802 >>96342074
>>96341740
Let me guess, the left one is kind, the middle one is cold, and the right one is edgy right?
If I guessed their personality right from just the images then I can tell you right now that what you're making is just another generic waifuslop that will be forgotten in a thread or two.
Anonymous No.96341802 >>96341829
>>96341796
Untrue. Last thread showed that anons are perfectly satisfied with crude waifus.
Anonymous No.96341807 >>96341827
>>96341791
are you really putting kill the heavens on the podium of cultivation cyoas?
Anonymous No.96341808 >>96341839
>>96341791
>Tankista couldn't do anything as good as kill the heavens
lol, lmao even.
Anonymous No.96341813 >>96342074
>>96341740
Let me guess Husanon... from left to right, Ignorance, Greed, and Hatred?
Anonymous No.96341823 >>96341839
>>96341791
>Tankista couldn't do anything as good as kill the heavens
I hope for my peace of mind this is bait.
Anonymous No.96341827 >>96341846 >>96341890
>>96341807
Yes? It's still the only decent CYOA there is, everything else is either retarded like xuan huan or whatever, or else it's incredibly limited and easily solved slop like cataclysmic cultivation... though i guess xuan huan also counts for that
Anonymous No.96341829 >>96341848 >>96341854
>>96341802
You are too quick to judge, anon. Last thread was a Saturday night. That filters out well-adjusted waifufags and leaves the 80% of sex slave coomers.
Anonymous No.96341836 >>96341866 >>96341933
Tankistaseethers are the new Italicseether it seems. But this time their arguments stand on even worse grounds.
Anonymous No.96341839 >>96341933
>>96341823
>>96341808
Is tankista the new italics now or something?
Anonymous No.96341846 >>96341853
>>96341827
>make-your-own-techniques the cyoa
this alone makes it bottom tier amongst cultivation cyoas.
Anonymous No.96341848
>>96341829
>well-adjusted waifufags
lol
Anonymous No.96341853 >>96341878 >>96341890
>>96341846
That's what makes it the only decent one. Name one other that has anything similar.
Anonymous No.96341854
>>96341829
>well-adjusted waifufags
You'll need to give me examples, because as of right now I simply don't believe they exist at all.
Anonymous No.96341858 >>96341866 >>96341874
A lot of people who complain about Cultivation media have never engaged with any and just know memes.
Anonymous No.96341866
>>96341858
there's a simple solution to that anon, just go read cultivation stories

>>96341836
are these tankistaseethers in the room with us right now?
Anonymous No.96341874 >>96341899 >>96342164
>>96341858
Give me a recommendation then. People talked about Cradle and Lord of the Mysteries before, but if they're RoyalRoad-tier I don't want to waste my time.
Anonymous No.96341878 >>96341893 >>96341921
>>96341853
>Likes barebones hollow cyoas so he can insert his own cringe headcanon into it.
You just exposed yourself as an /mcyoag/ LARPfag. Go back.
Anonymous No.96341890 >>96341913
>>96341827
>>96341853
>Name one other that has anything similar
there is a reason why other cyoas don't do it, but calling cataclysmic cultivation slop whole calling kill the heavens the best cultivation cyoa is hilarious
Anonymous No.96341893 >>96341918 >>96341937
>>96341878
>kill the heavens build folder: 22 different text files, most of them with rich and long writeups, they bring good memories, joy, and a few builds that definitely turned out the best among all cyoa builds
>any other xianxia cyoa build single text file (there's no reason for there to be multiple): soulless and empty, "i pick choices x, y, and z", no reason to ever remember it
The results speak for themselves.
Anonymous No.96341899 >>96342130
>>96341874
A Regressor's Tale of Cultivation. If you can stomach confusing gook names and a slow pace at the start, then you'll find a true gem amongst coal.
Anonymous No.96341913
>>96341890
Cataclysmic cultivation is slop because you just pick from a list and there's barely anything for you to even do. A build for it doesn't stand out, it has no soul and no reason for you to remember it.

A good build in kill the heavens is something unique, you can remember it months later and think that it was awesome.
Anonymous No.96341918 >>96341928 >>96341996
>>96341893
>Popular = Good
Reddit mentality, just because its popular amongst the multiplayer fags with no standards over at /mcyoag/ doesn't make it good. Those faggots have been regurgitating and consuming the same slop for years.
Anonymous No.96341921 >>96341963
>>96341878
LARP MEANS LIVE ACTION IT MEANS GOING OUTSIDE WITH OTHER PEOPLE TO PERFORM A CHARACTER INSIDE OF A GAME WITH YOUR OWN BODY
Anonymous No.96341928 >>96341952 >>96341965
>>96341918
>Popular
What the fuck are you even smoking. I'm just talking about my own builds. I also don't do multiplayer, I've never shared them with anyone.
Anonymous No.96341933 >>96341938 >>96341951
>>96341836
>>96341839
sorry to break it to you anon but Tankista and Italics are both shit. the seethers are just anons who can recognize slop when they see it.
Anonymous No.96341937 >>96341952
>>96341893
NTA but isn't Kill the Heavens from /mcyoag/? Trying to compare per build ration with something from there isn't a genuine proof of quality. That's like saying MHA is better than Worm or Hardbringer because its domination of the sister lasted longer.
Anonymous No.96341938
>>96341933
how is that "seething"
Anonymous No.96341951 >>96341969 >>96341973
>>96341933
What's your opinion of Tok though?
Anonymous No.96341952
>>96341937
>>96341928
Anonymous No.96341963
>>96341921
you know that's not what they mean when they use the word, which puts you in the wrong for acting like a clueless autist
Anonymous No.96341965 >>96341972
>>96341928
That's an even worse argument than being multiplayerfag. You think its the best because it you're slop-eater with reddit quality standards.
Anonymous No.96341969 >>96341970
>>96341951
shit
Anonymous No.96341970 >>96341982 >>96342072 >>96343297
>>96341969
Give me five good authors.
Anonymous No.96341972 >>96342030
>>96341965
>making diverse and rich builds is low quality slop
>making soulless shopping list builds is good though
I think you're just retarded.
Anonymous No.96341973
>>96341951
He is Tok dummy.
Anonymous No.96341982 >>96341988
>>96341970
okay, but you need to legalize slavery first
Anonymous No.96341988
>>96341982
Making my build for Office of Slavery as we speak. Now spill.
Anonymous No.96341996 >>96342003
>>96341918
popular = good would be your side of the argument, if you ask me

this is because cyoas that don't let you make anything on your own attract 1000 of low-commitment anons who spend 5 minutes on the cyoa each, meanwhile cyoas that give you a framework to put your own stuff in your build attract 20 anons who spend 20 hours on the cyoa each
Anonymous No.96342003 >>96342024 >>96342057 >>96342087
>>96341996
It's not always ideal. Otherwise Savestate would be the most popular author ITT.
Anonymous No.96342024 >>96342060
>>96342003
the ideal form of a cyoa that lets you make your own stuff is something like what power creator was trying to achieve, though still didn't perfect

you need a semblance of a normal cyoa, with plenty of example abilities, before you can give guidelines for how to create your own abilities

there are few exceptions to this, though i think kill the heavens has a decent case for being one, since it's firmly sticking to a genre which has a ton of examples, however it would still benefit from more of its own concrete examples, there's like one or two pastebins which has a ton of author notes in it and some of those examples really help building a kill the heavens build
Anonymous No.96342030 >>96342036 >>96342055
>>96341972
Look anon, we get it. Kill the Heavens touched your autism receptors and caused the creative juices in you to flow. We all love slop from time to time, that's fine, you are entitled to your personal preferences. But don't go claiming that's its objectively the best because you wrote Chris-Chan tier fanfic about it.
Anonymous No.96342036 >>96342065
>>96342030
stop using the word slop as its direct opposite
Anonymous No.96342043
Rolled 5 (1d10)

>>96341740
I'll take the bad bitch on the right.
Anonymous No.96342055 >>96342077
>>96342030
Look anon, we get it. You love Tankista and want to suck the juices out of his dick. You're allowed to be gay for him, nobody's judgement will reach you through this anonymous website. But don't go claiming that he can make something better than a CYOA which is provably objectively great through its results.
Anonymous No.96342057 >>96342071 >>96342076
>>96342003
>Otherwise
Ironic you said that. Because the cyoa by the same name is the best cultivation cyoa.
Anonymous No.96342060 >>96342166 >>96342184 >>96342377 >>96342745
>>96342024
It depends on what you're expecting out of a CYOA, I think.
For example I prefer scenario-heavy OCs - needing to parse through pastebins to craft powers like in Seinaru Magcraft Girls or pic related would bore me, while finding combinaisons between existing powers would do the opposite.
At the end of the day I don't really think we can gauge how good a CYOA is overall based on our personal brand of autism, even if popularity is probably not fitting either.
Anonymous No.96342065
>>96342036
>s-stop telling the truth!
no
Anonymous No.96342071 >>96342103
>>96342057
You mean chain of isekai, where he claims divine transcendence is the cultivation power? Divine transcendence is pretty great, but most of its greatness comes from reading a long ass pastebin. It REALLY failed to convey all the necessary information in the CYOA itself.
Anonymous No.96342072 >>96343267
>>96341970
PCA
Rake
Peil
ZBG
Anduin
Anonymous No.96342074 >>96342100 >>96342272
>>96341756
And?
>>96341761
That's on purpose; they are the shattered remnants of someone's mind.
>>96341766
husanon
>>96341796
The left one deceives, the middle one corrupts, and the last one destroys.
>>96341813
Exactly! lol
Anonymous No.96342076 >>96342089 >>96342090
>>96342057
How is it a cultivation CYOA? I'm trying to associate the powers, or the predecessor, or the Hare/Tortoise/Alice/Godking to it with cultivation but I don't see it.
Anonymous No.96342077 >>96342086
>>96342055
>No argument
>Tankista out of nowhere
The seethe is real!
Anonymous No.96342086 >>96342116
>>96342077
>someone mirrored my post back at me and i easil find fault with it!
I guess it worked.
Anonymous No.96342087
>>96342003
Savestate, Aromage, BtGanon... there are a lot of transvestite authors. Why is that?
Anonymous No.96342089 >>96342102
>>96342076
You get your powers from a cultivators corpse + any infinite progression power can fall under the umbrella of cultivation.
Anonymous No.96342090
>>96342076
Focus on [REDACTED] and how his powers used to work.
Anonymous No.96342100 >>96342262
>>96342074
>husanon
pleasantly surprised they are not lolis.
and that you used good art for the characters, maybe there is still hope
Anonymous No.96342102 >>96342110
>>96342089
>any infinite progression power can fall under the umbrella of cultivation
not really, at some point it's just progression
Anonymous No.96342103 >>96342117
>>96342071
No I mean Otherwise Cyoa by tin.
But yeah I agree, Worldblood resembles cultivation much more than Divine Transcendence.
Anonymous No.96342110 >>96342123
>>96342102
>at some point it's just progression
yes, that's what cultivation means schematics-kun.
Anonymous No.96342114
>>96341761
>Retrain your white-haired anime girl fetish
Do not tell him what to do, we need more white-haired anime girls
Anonymous No.96342116 >>96342131
>>96342086
>Still no argument
I accept your concession slop-sama.
Anonymous No.96342117
>>96342103
Superficially, yeah. They're all different kinds of cultivation, though. Unbeing might resemble cultivation even more than wordblood, if you look at it right. False wizardry is very cultivator-y, it just has the appearance of western magic. And so on.
Anonymous No.96342123 >>96342144
>>96342110
no, cultivation also involves things like resources you need to find to consume to progress, different stages and tribulations, etc.
Anonymous No.96342130 >>96342155
>>96341899
Retard
Anonymous No.96342131
>>96342116
Why would I need an argument against a post that itself had no argument? Stop being silly, shitposter-kun.
Anonymous No.96342138 >>96342153
someone please post cyoas with good waifus
Anonymous No.96342144 >>96342156 >>96342162
>>96342123
Xianxia didn't invent the word "Cultivation" retard. To cultivate something is to make it grow and flourish, ergo, to make it "progress".
Anonymous No.96342145
Is the kill the heavens fag also a create your own adventure fag
Anonymous No.96342153
>>96342138
here
Anonymous No.96342155
>>96342130
>t. filtered
Anonymous No.96342156 >>96342187
>>96342144
that's not what the word means in this context
Anonymous No.96342158
>>96339251
Place of Birth: Cothique
Blessing: Lileath, The Maiden
Youth: Magic and Strength
Betrothal: Jinquella
Unexpected Concubine: Morlanna, Asrai Envoy
Army 1, Magic 2, Strength 1, Intrigue 0

>Born to the waves of the coast of Cothique, a lifetime was spent on the seas of the world as sailor, trader, mercenary, explorer and captain each.
>One voyage it was not to the surprise of the crew that their destination had been altered on the whims of their Captain but that their Captain's whims had set a course for home.
>The dreams had come to as they had in youth.
>They channeled the wanderlust borne of Cothiquian blood back to the soils of Ulthuan.
>A foot had been placed on every continent of the known world but realization struck that the home of the Elves was as unknown to him as any foreign land had been.
>Of all the realms of the Elves of Ulthuan it was Yvresse that was most reminiscent of home but with beauty wholly unique to it's mist veiled shores.

Probably a weak build but I'm happy with it.
Anonymous No.96342162
>>96342144
Is /cyoar/ filled with fantasy cyoas?
Anonymous No.96342164
>>96341874
Royal road's best is better than the directly published best.
Anonymous No.96342166 >>96342173
>>96342060
Never use those create your own spells in Seinaru the existing spells were interesting enough. Create your own spells is the realm of power gaming autism where people create boring ass powers to be op and "win"
Anonymous No.96342173
>>96342166
>basic bitch projection
just because you'd do that doesn't mean everyone else would
Anonymous No.96342184 >>96342197 >>96342204
>>96342060
to me that sounds like you're just treating a cyoa as if it's a puzzle game you're supposed to minmax to win, but if you're doing that you may as well go play an actual puzzle game, why would you do it in a context where the fluff is getting in the way?
Anonymous No.96342187 >>96342214
>>96342156
Yes it does, you're just too retarded to understand that assigned meaning and literal definition aren't mutually exclusive.
Anonymous No.96342197
>>96342184
The brain of a solvefag is an enigma. they have autism
Anonymous No.96342204
>>96342184
Nah, they're writing prompts for me. Trying to "solve" CYOAs would just rob me of everything they have to offer.
However I dislike having to read a 100+ PDF to understand a setting.
Anonymous No.96342214 >>96342274
>>96342187
no anon, the word cultivation in this context has a meaning that's more strict than what you're assigning it, you can pull shit like that to annoy people but talking to you just becomes a waste of time

the word cultivation implies a lot more than just progression in the context of fantasy powers, which the very fact that they're two different words should already tell you
Anonymous No.96342227 >>96342256 >>96342257 >>96342297 >>96342350 >>96342877 >>96344572
>>96340560
Due to the author’s mental illness, you’re not really even a grim reaper. He couldn’t divorce his pro-life, racist, and conservative views from being a literal death godling, so he baked that shit into the lore. So now you’ve got homunculi waifus who want to breed while you mow down minorities.
Anonymous No.96342256 >>96344749
>>96342227
I don't like Entropist much either, but the pro-life thing is meant to stop players from farming souls too easily.
Anonymous No.96342257 >>96342263
>>96342227
If you kill chinese in china i don't think it would be killing a minority
Anonymous No.96342262
>>96342100
It is difficult to find lolis that fullil the criteria I needed for them besides the revenant is loli enough and I'll add more elsewhere.
Anonymous No.96342263
>>96342257
the american brain can't handle that sort of idea, it's why they say that cleopatra was african-american
Anonymous No.96342272 >>96342880
>>96342074
>Exactly! lol
I suspected so, you do have a knack for image selection. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing your work. If you don't mind my asking, are our enemies going to be detailed as well? I saw you mentioned minions and was curious about what we'll be throwing them against. I hope you don't fall victim to scope creep, they don't need a roster of detailed foes and troop trees, as long as there's plenty to latch onto.
Anonymous No.96342274 >>96342299 >>96342340
>>96342214
>the word cultivation implies a lot more than just progression in the context of fantasy powers, which the very fact that they're two different words should already tell you
Let me get this straight. By your own retarded logic, the word "magic" can only be associated with harry potter's brand of magic because its the first thing that comes to mind when you think of the "magic academy" genre, just like how Xianxia is the first thing that comes to mind when you hear "cultivation". Am I getting this right you absolute troglodyte?
Anonymous No.96342276
>>96339327
Affinity: Cavern

District: Old Town

Eyes: My Own

Enhanced Senses: Heart

Gear:
-Thermos Flask
-Firefly Jar
-Canvas Backpack

Curiosities: Fur Hat

Tattoo: Sustenance

Companions:
-Verona
-Miles

Others:
-The Pack

Strategies: Overnight Trips

Challenges:
-The Dead

>>96339394
Couldn't be me bro. I'd get to the Docklands and call it a day.
Anonymous No.96342297 >>96342317
>>96342227
pro-life is based thoughbeit, but yeah his /pol/tard seething (which is ironic because he himself is an Spanigger immigrant in japan) was quite off-putting.
Anonymous No.96342299 >>96342382
>>96342274
>can only be
wrong, do you not understand what the word context means? it exists to tell you that things are different in different circumstances, not that different circumstances don't exist, which you somehow apparently concluded here, lmao, you reall are special
Anonymous No.96342317 >>96342327 >>96342346
>>96342297
>/pol/tard seething
?
Anonymous No.96342327 >>96342368
>>96342317
Aww, is the newfag confused about what /pol/ means? lurk more little guy, you'll learn eventually.
Anonymous No.96342340 >>96342382
>>96342274
>the word "magic" can only be assiciated with harry potter's brand of magic
This is an incredibly retarded analogy that's barely comparable to the original statement.
"Magic" is a significantly broader concept than "Stories based on Chinese myths and alchemical texts in which one progresses through various realms of cultivation by developing the body using chi", and there aren't 15,000 identical stories described as "magic stories" in which British children wave about wands in forbidden forests, when "cultivation" is used synonymously with the xianxia genre to the point it's the name of the magic system they almost all use exactly. What you're doing is like saying that every cyoa is inherently a fantasy cyoa because you're imagining it.
Trying to destroy language doesn't make you look intelligent, and complaining about how usage makes language is pathetic when you're ignoring existing usage.
Anonymous No.96342346 >>96342368
>>96342317
I think it's because EA hates man-on-man buttsex, infanticide, and thinking computers.
Anonymous No.96342350 >>96342386
>>96342227
It's Twilight for neckbeards, it wants to be all dark and broody but you're still playing as a fantasy Mormon.
Anonymous No.96342368 >>96342379
>>96342346
>>96342327
>Aww, is the newfag
no, why are you so defensive already? its just that i don't see how making a character hate asians means he hates them himself, it world be like a author making a fascist character in a book and readers assuming that that that is what the author thinks.
Anonymous No.96342377 >>96342455
>>96342060
>And I hear that like 97% are cute girls!
Wait, so from the author's other weird statements the total number of sorcerors were 98% (3% from this, +95% from the other statement) originally male?
Anonymous No.96342379
>>96342368
why does it need to be what the author thinks to be a pol topic
Anonymous No.96342382 >>96342392
>>96342299
>>96342340
>Farmers can't use the use the cultivation anymore because of chinks appropriated it into their power fantasy slop.
Whites aren't beating the cucked race allegations.
Anonymous No.96342386
>>96342350
Couldn’t have said it better myself. Don’t get me wrong, still enjoyed it, but the author’s issues were like a big neon sign
Anonymous No.96342392 >>96342487
>>96342382
>he still doesn't know what context means
you aren't going to get hit by any intelligence allegations yourself i see
Anonymous No.96342400 >>96342671 >>96342778
Anonymous No.96342411 >>96342416
Anonymous No.96342416
>>96342411
Anonymous No.96342425
Anonymous No.96342435
Anonymous No.96342450
Anonymous No.96342455 >>96342568 >>96342572 >>96342745
>>96342377
Yes.
Anonymous No.96342487 >>96342491
>>96342392
>muh context schematics!
Yeah I'm not patient enough to stoop to your iq level in order to translate the empty word salads you keep spewing out from your ass.
Anonymous No.96342491
>>96342487
>i'm not too stupid to understand the word context, i just don't want to!
sure thing buddy
Anonymous No.96342568
>>96342455
>savestate’s magical realm
Anonymous No.96342572
>>96342455
Waifutards will see no problem with this.
Anonymous No.96342671 >>96342696 >>96342753
>>96342400
lazy author couldn't even give us an already existing cursed technique or let us discover it, he just said "nope, you have no CT, get fucked"
so we are locked out of the coolest and strongest parts of the power system (domains included)

>physical superiority
yuji's physical strength let him fight against cursed even learned to use CE, so this is a solid choice

>reverse cursed technique
even gojo had difficulty learning this one, plus being able to heal others is super rare and should make me more valuable

>immense CE x2
more than enough to strengthen my already strong body and use RCT without fear of running out too quickly

>intellEgence
>instinct
top 10 intelligence, creativity and reasoning in the entire world is pretty fucking good, combined with instinct I should learn/react very fast and use the most of my shitty abilities to the fullest

anyways, this build should be able to reach grade 1 ranks so it's enough to defend myself and maybe GTFO when finding sukuna or the suguru's special cursed spirits boy band
Anonymous No.96342696 >>96342744
>>96342671
If you're not planning on getting involved then you can just gtfo of japan immediately and live your life as a superhuman
Anonymous No.96342744
>>96342696
but it would be boring and a waste of a new life in a magical world, at most I would run to another city but remain in japan because anywhere else there are practically no curses
Anonymous No.96342745
>>96342060
>>96342455
So I don't get this CYOA, we get isekai'd to an Earth that's like ours, but the government there gathers us up and brings us along with a bunch of other people to feed us to some evil tree wizard? And the evil tree wizard sends our soul into a place made out of cardboard, but in the process we learn we're a sorcerer and also there's a system you can exploit? So our goal is to build a colony, hook up with some other people stuck here, and escape? It seems like a couple different concepts slapped together that aren't each explored in the depth they should be. Also all the other colony leaders and indeed sorcerers in general are transgirls besides yourself (unless you are one, I guess) for some reason. Not sure about that. Also a transgirl named Lilith? C'mon Savestate, what a cliche.
Anonymous No.96342753 >>96342773 >>96342812
>>96342671
do you think Takaba with comedian would be able to give us a op cursed technique? or we would need to make some kind of deal with mahito to manifest a cursed technique?
Anonymous No.96342773 >>96342812
>>96342753
Shikigami mastery equal to Tenzen's mastery of barriers might as well be a CT
Anonymous No.96342778
>>96342400
>Immense CE *8
>Intellegence
>Instinct

Mental boosts and all the CE, that should keep me alive long enough to get good at throwing hands since that's likely all I got for awhile.
Anonymous No.96342812 >>96342822
>>96342753
takaba doesn't really add or remove anything permanently, like maybe if he thought it was funny you would temporarily get a CT that makes you shoot swordfish or something but it would stop the moment he stops his technique

as for mahito he did activate that one kid's CT but that's all he did, activate the CT he already had but the kid didn't know. Meanwhile the author just straight out said that we don't have any CT, at most you could get mahito to turn your body into something superhuman but good luck trusting mahito with that shit.

if we want a CT we are going to have to become very creative and maybe doing a sukuna: turn yourself into a cursed object, get a vessel (who has a CT you want) strong enough to eat it without dying, posses that body and live out the rest of your life.

>>96342773
as for this it is hit or miss, yes having talent equivalent to Tenzen is great but then again we never actually see any shikigami that wasn't the direct product of a CT doing anything remotely productive.
Anonymous No.96342822
>>96342812
>yes having talent equivalent to Tenzen is great but then again we never actually see any shikigami that wasn't the direct product of a CT doing anything remotely productive.
I think the most impressive Shikigami that wasn't spawned from a CT was Rika, and her entire thing might be reproducible if you're evil enough.
Anonymous No.96342877 >>96342937 >>96342948
>>96342227
But chinese are the world's majority what are you talking about. Wasn't the kid stuff to force you to wipe out populations instead of farm babies?
Anonymous No.96342880 >>96343732
>>96342272
There will be two major factions of adversaries.
The heroes of the gods and their worshippers and the monsters of the beyond.
The monsters only cause chaos and destruction, and the heroes were summoned from Earth to defeat them. You are a factor unaccounted for.
Anonymous No.96342937
>>96342877
I think the kid stuff is because he doesn't like the idea of infanticide (not that anything is actually stopping it). Farms are still viable. They just need a longer time to fruit.
Anonymous No.96342948 >>96342956 >>96344424
>>96342877
i don't think you can use reasoning with him, he is going to find a problem with the cyoa no matter what
Anonymous No.96342956 >>96344424
>>96342948
Anonymous No.96343018 >>96343673
Anonymous No.96343045
>>96341467
high res
Anonymous No.96343046 >>96343142 >>96343154 >>96343239 >>96343298 >>96346635
What software do authors use to make CYOA's?
I want to make my first one and am wondering where would be best to start.

Ive only ever used MS Paint in the past so I downloaded GIMP, but it seems like alot to learn lol
Anonymous No.96343142 >>96343192
>>96343046
just use photoshop, you can download it from allsync, under the tutorial section
by the way am i the only one who has problem loading allsync? its slow
Anonymous No.96343154
>>96343046
I use gimp and yes it overwhelming at first but as long as you watch a tutorial on the basics and how layers work you are ready to go as you won't touch like 90% of its fancier features anyways
Anonymous No.96343192
>>96343142
I'm currently trying, also slow.
Anonymous No.96343239 >>96343270 >>96343298 >>96343343
>>96343046

I made a couple of CYOAs meant for this question. Essentially, even the most basic tools work. I made a whole CYOA in MSpaint, and later a second that started in MSpaint then got touched up in . . . I think it was Gimp. Point was to show you didn't need paid tools, you could work with anything.

Mind you my MSpaint drawings weren't good, but, point being, even if you don't want to hunt down images . . . it's possible. Anything is, and with oddly little. Probably moreso if you aren't teaching yourself to draw from scratch.
Anonymous No.96343267 >>96343279
>>96342072
>2 good authors out of 5
Bellow average taste
Anonymous No.96343270
>>96343239
Never had the fine mouse control to draw in mspaint without a tablet desu.
Anonymous No.96343279 >>96343300
>>96343267
who are the good ones?
also now i want your list
Anonymous No.96343297 >>96343328 >>96343358
>>96341970
Scottishanon
Rake
JRPG
The Scientist
Liminal
Anonymous No.96343298 >>96343329
>>96343046
please ignore >>96343239 and hunt down images like any normal person would
Anonymous No.96343300 >>96343309 >>96343326
>>96343279
Anduin
Sylen
theotherangelanon
Tok
Acheld
Anonymous No.96343309 >>96343326 >>96343338 >>96343373
>>96343300
Interesting, I did not know that Tok likes Sylen and Anduin. Did he make a Dawn of a Demon Lord imagebuild?
Anonymous No.96343326
>>96343300
>Tok
yea, alright
>>96343309
he always posts his image build every time the cyoa is posted, you must have seen it
Anonymous No.96343328
>>96343297
>0 out of 5
Wow
Anonymous No.96343329
>>96343298

I didn't meant to suggest that was the only way to do things. Of course, gathering images to make a CYOA is far more normal.
Anonymous No.96343335
>>96339248
It's Tok, because he's a retard who thinks he's clever.
Anonymous No.96343338 >>96343349
>>96343309
also tok liking Sylen is to be expected
Anonymous No.96343343 >>96343399
>>96343239
Yo Liminal how's ABMEI year 2 progress going?
Anonymous No.96343349
>>96343338
a match made in hell
Anonymous No.96343358
>>96343297
Based taste.
Anonymous No.96343373 >>96343394 >>96343412 >>96343430
>>96343309
How did you know it was me?
Anonymous No.96343394
>>96343373
You mentioned yourself, very few authors would do this in a list of their favourites.
Anonymous No.96343399 >>96343456
>>96343343

Thinking about what to do with certain options, and doing some rewrites. Working on the art, slow but sure. I'm concentrating on the military stuff in year two at the moment.

Essentially I'm looking at questions like: "How do I give each a more particular flavor?" Right now you can select them, but you don't really do much. So in year two I have missions for them. In my head I want it to be less linear than other attempts at this have been, but I don't think I could do too much without bloating the image.

Right now, an example of what I have is for the Naval option. Essentially you find out that the Navy keeps an island operation secret from the Cult, ruled by a royal heir. It acts as a stop off between Pahl Edin and distant lands and islands, but also acts as a place the royals believe they can escape to if they fail to maintain their position in the city and the cult ever takes full control of the city from them.

So that's one of the Naval options, is getting stationed on that island. But, if you are associated with the cult in Year 1 you can rat out the Navy for a different reward as you've seen in other options prior.
Anonymous No.96343412
>>96343373
>How did you know I was the unlikable narcissist that puts himself on his own list of the best authors ever?
Tok is such a funny nigga sometimes.
Anonymous No.96343430
>>96343373
Nobody would put you on a favorite author list aside from yourself.
Anonymous No.96343452 >>96343821
>>96339830
Fate didn't start with the Gacha, retard.
Anonymous No.96343456 >>96343473 >>96343611
>>96343399
>Thinking about what to do with certain options, and doing some rewrites. Working on the art, slow but sure.
great to hear, good luck.
>I'm concentrating on the military stuff in year two at the moment.
nice, I'm happy that the military route is getting some love.
>Essentially I'm looking at questions like: "How do I give each a more particular flavor?" Right now you can select them, but you don't really do much. So in year two I have missions for them. In my head I want it to be less linear than other attempts at this have been, but I don't think I could do too much without bloating the image.
The only thing I can think of is dedicating an entire page to each of the different routes. So 1 page for the military route, 1 page for the cult route, 1 page for the Baraqu route, etc...
This way you'll have ample room for each one without it diminishing other's spot in the cyoa.
Anonymous No.96343473 >>96343529
>>96343456
That'd take up a lot of space, wouldn't it? We have routes like Baraqu and Inanis with a lot of built up choices behind them, but then you have stuff like the elder cult that don't, would they also get a whole page? I could easily see that becoming twelve pages long or more.
Anonymous No.96343529
>>96343473
>you have stuff like the elder cult that don't, would they also get a whole page? I could easily see that becoming twelve pages long or more.
Those can be put in a single "miscellaneous" page.
Also the first year is 7 pages long, 5 more isn't that much a stretch.
Anonymous No.96343611 >>96343664
>>96343456
>dedicating an entire page to each of the different routes
I like the events being grouped by time though. This also interferes with routes intertwining.
Anonymous No.96343664
>>96343611
Good point, but sacrifices have to be made. If we want complex branching choices the simple linear layout must change. Either way, its up to Liminal.
Anonymous No.96343673
>>96343018
Diviner, Fate Master, Extraplanar

Travel the planes in search of knowledge and resources.
Anonymous No.96343720 >>96343726 >>96343727 >>96343764
post transkino
Anonymous No.96343726
>>96343720
Never forget, futa is the superior gender.

https://imgchest.com/p/9ryd6q89a7k
Anonymous No.96343727
>>96343720
We actually have a sister thread specifically for transvestites
>>96275050
Anonymous No.96343732
>>96342880
Extremely cool. I always love those situations where you're outside of the local context for things and this sounds like more of that. I hope there's multiple routes you can take Delusion, Greed, and Hatred instead of them all being largely singular. For Greed, I could easily see an artificer inventor and gambling banker set of powers coexisting. Maybe your choice of powers could subtly twist the goddess shard's perspective in a similar direction? Going all-in on berserkergang makes Hatred even angrier and more hateful, etc. Best of luck Husanon, I know that however you do it, it's going to be cash-money.
Anonymous No.96343764
>>96343720
Witch Awakening
Anonymous No.96343821
>>96343452
Doesn't matter. It very much is gacha now.
Anonymous No.96344122
>>96341134
To cursed family maxx, pick the Child Age and Prince Charming, target one of your parents with Lovely Couple, and romance your other parent via another Event.
Anonymous No.96344260
No one can stop me, I dare you to try

>>96344259
>>96344259
>>96344259
Anonymous No.96344424
>>96342948
>>96342956
This is a cool one, if the style is barebones. Don't know how I feel about an all girl school being the default, sure they probably are cute but it's not proper for an educator to pervy on his students, but I guess the author wanted to let people do it if they're into that. Anyway:
>Celestia Summit Sect
I was going for the witch option, but I guess it would be too generic. Teaching and disciplining jade beauties in a cultivation world sounds awesome.
>Type: Boarding school
>Size: small (+7)
40 students is classroom sized. You get to know each student personally. Was going for large or medium but the size of the student corpus was too much, I don't think I could personally handle 120 students, much less 1000. Would be good for other builds, but I think it fits better. Shame that extensive grounds depends on the amount of students.
>Redesign (me)
>No bull
>Worthy of the name
>Loved (+1)
>Competent teachers
>Luxury
>Reputation
>Unique resources (qi-rich ambient)
>Supernatural beauty (free)
>Beautiful school (free)
I'm a respected cultivation master of one of the best sects, focused on discipline and excelence. Students are personally overseen by the very powerful headmaster. The sect provides plenty resources for the students to grow, especially with how rich the ambient is on qi, allowing students to quickly advance through realms.
Drawbacks:
>Strange behaviour
>Budding dark lord
Strange behaviour is standard for xianxia as a western, and I think I can deal with a edgy wannabe villain, but just barely. Pray for my discipline skills.
Anonymous No.96344572
>>96342227
>redditor mad that the author didn't make the killing and harvesting of offspring normalized in the rest of the multiverse
kek
Anonymous No.96344749
>>96342256
these people just lack vision, you just need to use wither to artificially age up the the farmed to the age of 15 will only cost 1.5 souls and you can age up multiple in the area of 400 meters to optimize soul farming use flesh warping to make the breeders lay eggs instead of live births so you can avoid the long gestation period and pop out more souls for harvest faster. Harvesting artificially aged up eggs is probably more moral than harvesting actual 15+ age individuals. Sure the shitty ass children of the hound will hate you but just go fucking harvest them too.
Anonymous No.96346583
>>96339511
This is one of the funnier shitpost tierlists.
Anonymous No.96346635
>>96343046
I use photoshop