Thread 150371699

So does Octavia go to school or is she tutored or what?

she's not real anon she's a fictitious character set in a world loosely based on christian theology

Was probably taught by her dad, before he went full imp pole polisher and gave up on her

>>150371699 (OP)
Well we know there is some sort of school for higher status Hellborn because Charlie has a photo of her at her prom, so I imagine there’s private schools in Greed or Envy ring for Goetia kids.

>>150371699 (OP)
She needs a human boyfriend

>>150371699 (OP)
>So does Octavia go to school or is she tutored or what?

Depends on how close to pre 20th century Nobility you want to imagine the Goetia as. She probably has a private tutor. I have no idea about the status of female Goetia so her tutor may be teaching her magic, finance, literature, math etc, or the they might be teaching her to drink tea properly and wear a corset.

>>150371715
you gotta be some kinda retarded thinking cartoon characters aren't real. i can literally see them with my eyes.

>>150371699 (OP)
She is a chicken

>>150371831
No anon, those are just idols.

>>150371870
Shes got some mighty drumsticks on her, then

>>150371815
Yeah, and if you wanna go further in the past, she'll have slaves with the role of being teachers.

Read last thread. Considering restarting Base of The Fire as a non greentext Octavia fic with no Loona route. Sorry for any thread drama or plugfaggotry. I just like to hear criticism so I can write better and make more people happy.

Sorry for spoiler rant have a cute birb.

>>150371903
Octavia is supposed to be a sticc.

>>150372081
Don't take criticism TOO hard, and give it some more thought before you do anything radical.

>>150371815
>>150371903
>Octavia has never tried taxidemery before
>But she wanted to make one for Anon for their one month anniversary
>So she cobbled together a stuffed cadaver of her own likeness.
>A bit more risque and more filled out and no, its not because she's a bit insecure about her stick figure
>Anon opens the gift to the smell of dried rotting flesh and flies
>Has to smile through the stench and gives his girlfriend a kiss
>Fought for a split second not to throw up inside her beak

I NEED A GOETIAN WOMAN IN MY LIFE

>>150372239
Summon one then

>>150372259
And end up with some fruit booty like Stolas? No thank you.

>>150372231
>>Fought for a split second not to throw up inside her beak

>"Anon I didn't know you were into daddy stuff."

>>150372081
>Birb Fic
Yes

>Total rewrite

No. The fic only started to go downhill recently. Loona is the weakest part of the story and its best when it's a weird noir story about a guy learning black magic from a mentally unstable owl man

Why isn't Andrealphus in an arranged marriage
Where are his heirs
How come he gets out of it

>>150372351
I agree with you, it would be better to make a separate fanfic, instead of undoing what has already been done.
>>150372081
Anon, don't do that. The story is fine. Just focus on what made it good: a student's relationship with his gay teacher.

>anon is stolas' apprentice
>He joins his employ some time before the start of the show
>Slowly grows closer and closer to octavia
>Once his teacher starts seeing the imp more periodically, he has to tag along and so also ends up befriending most of them
>Except for blitzo of course, who he cannot stand
>Events happen as normal, he goes on a few missions with them as magical support, keeps learning and practicing spells with octavia etc
>Then his master gets depowered and deposed from his position
>anon knows he has to gtfo of there fast, while he has befriended stella somewhat, her brother is still going to do like a shrike and impale him on an icicle as soon as he sees him
>Prepares to leave, tells his goodbyes to octavia, but then has an idea
>He invites her to come with him
>He reasons that there isnt anything here left for her, she needs some space from both her dad and mom
>She relents and decides to join him, then she packs her bags while he goes to get the magic book
>They both step through the portal and disappear within a crowd
>Stella later comes barreling through the doors at IMP, screaming how his ex's pet monkey has stolen their daughter and run off with her and the grimoire
>He is extremely concerned, this was never part of any plan, anon was supposed to simply just leave and go into hiding in the human world until things calmed down
>Gathers the team around and starts thinking of how they could track them down
>But he realizes that he might have taught anon a bit too much, as he has expertly covered their tracks
>Season 3 is about anon and octavia's human world adventures as they travel around the US and bond as more than just friends while the imps try to find them in between contracts
>Also the owl's divorce

>>150371803
correction, she needs a human boyfriend.

>>150372489
Seconding this. Don't get squirrely because you got some negative reviews. Not to minimize any criticism you've gotten but I think part of it is its subject matter makes it somewhat niche. If you wanna do some revisions on the latest chapters, I'm not against that. But don't do anything drastic. Take a day or so to think things over and take a more measured approach.

>>150372457
No daughters above them for him to marry, and presumably their family is only interested in marrying upward.

>>150372585
and by that I mean she needs a human husband, I just had a stroke

Octavia are you by any chance Octavia

>>150372493
>This song https://youtu.be/3GcsQGVGtPU?si=s4m1jrsLiwIZk7N3 starts playing sometime while anon and octavia are hurrying to get their things
>After he opens the portal he steps halfway through, then turns around
>Octavia is not yet sure about continuing, she has second doubts
>Then anon stretches his hand to her
>They look into each other's eyes as he whispers "trust me"
>She finally lets go of her fears and grabs his hand as the song reaches the first "want to be free" and the beat drops

>>150372081
>>150372489
>>150372621
Thirding, I've been writing greens in these Threads for a good while now.
I'll keep doing them regardless if I get (You)s or not and I have improved much sense I've started doing them.
Getting criticism is all part of the process, Anon.
I've also been putting green ideas I have on the backburner for multiple reasons and I do too write greens to make people happy.

>>150372732
OH SHIT

>>150372824
Kino is back on the menu.

>>150372519
Man you can drop deeeaaad!

>>150372351
>dinner scene
>Octavia says "Pass the salt daddy"
>Stolas stands up to pass the salt
>His daughter looks at him confused
>Anon looks at her horrified

What would you do if stolas didn't actually like you and wanted you out of his daughter's life?
I imagine he'd give you a warning at first, then send in the (g)IMPs to scare you into fucking off if you didn't get the memo the first time around

>>150373021
Switch over to team Stella

>>150373021
keep going, Octavia would be worth it... That and if I get killed, it would kill the little relationship he still has with his daughter, so that would be fun to see once I become a sinner (because come one, we all know we will end like a sinner)

If we go with today Stolas, he doesn't have access to holy weapons to permanently kill me, if we go with before, Well shit, time to hide until I understand how to use sinner powers or something.

>>150373100
Stella would straight up steal you away from her daughter

>>150371699 (OP)
My theory is she's tutored. If she were to go to school, she'd need other Goetia around her age which I don't think is the case. Since Goetia are immortal, it seems the likelihood that there just so happens to be other Goetia being born around the time she is rather slim.

Which kind of goes in hand why it seems that she has no friends. She has no peers around her age to actually be friends with.

>>150373142
NOOO, YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO RESSIST THE TEMPTATION OF THE MILF!

>>150373142
NTA
I could see her trying to steal you from Octavia but in reality she's testing your loyalty to her daughter.
If you reciprocate her advances, she'd be disgusted and see you as another Stolas.
but If you don't and reject her advances she'd respect you and see you worthy of her daughter.

>>150373240
Ok I get that
But she's been visiting my bed every night and going round after round of massive bird plapping
S-Surely she's gonna stop and give me her blessing right?

>>150373240


If we assume Stella has any character depth at all I can see her coming to respect anon but not wanting him to date her daughter for class and species reasons. And would diplomatically tell him that.

>>150373409
>>I can see her coming to respect anon but not wanting him to date her daughter for class and species reasons
>Stella genuinely starts to like anon
>He is soft spoken, but firm. He is educated, a gentleman and carries an air of refinement about him. Not only that, but he is a good listener who has lended her an ear for when she felt like going on a tirade about her husband
>Still, she cannot allow him in good conscience to marry her daughter as he is not a royal
>Tells him directly that she forbids it
"I am sorry my lady, but i simply couldn't give any less of a rat's ass about what some socialite i have never met thinks of me and her. I love her, i want her and i will have her, with your permission or not"
>Stella cannot decide if she should punish this insubordination and complete disregard of her authority or reward his bravery and dedication

>>150374282
>>Stella cannot decide if she should punish this insubordination and complete disregard of her authority or reward his bravery and dedication

>she's a bit wet from it

>>150372081
Please don’t I don’t want to wait longer for everything to get redone. besides. It’s not like base of fire anon is locked onto the lions or anything. It’s still early enough that he has an out if your going to go birb route.

>>150371699 (OP)
SEXOOOOO SEXXOOOO WITH STELLA

STELLA STELLA STELLA STELLA STELLA STELLA SEXXXXXXX

>>150372493
>>150372705
This wasnt too cringe, right?

>>150372081
>Loona
Fuck that, the Loona parts were cute and we need more human x Loona shit that doesn't involve Wattpad and teenagers.

>>150374987
It was nice, Anon

>>150374282
>>150374691
>Stella is insulted by this young man but she's also impressed by his resoluteness and his determination for her daughter's hand
>Especially coming from someone of lower status. Against her best interest she backs down, for now.
>When Stolas' trial comes. Stella, Octavia and Stolas expect the young man to take the stand for the defense.
>The young man does show up but joins in with the spectators, standing right next to Octavia. Stella and Octavia are surprised.
>Stolas is confused but still believing he'll still come to his defense.
>When Stolas ask for the young man's name to the witness stand.
>He refuses, visibly insulted by this request.
"I came here to support your daughter, not you. This is your funeral, sir, but I will not be your pallbearer"
>The room erupts in murmurs, Stolas is shocked, hurt but mostly betrayed.
>Octavia is silent but cracks a smile, happy that her boyfriend stood by her despite the possible scandal it would cause.
>Stella is just as shocked as Stolas but she isn't mad. She's strangely flattered but mostly jealous of her daughter.
>This young man who, isn't royal nor wealthy. Has more respect, honor and loyalty than her own Goetian husband.
I apologize if that dialogue may seem cringe.

>>150372081
2>>150375067
Second this, keep the Loona romance route even if it's secondary, the arcade scene was just too good.

>>150374282
>>150374691
>Stupid loyal commoner!
>Needs royal correction

hoot

>go on youtube
>algorithm keeps giving me "why X series is better than helluvaboss/hazbin"
>20yr old nasally voice saying swearing is bad and nobody likes the series

>>150372081
Don't be so hasty, you could treat this as a rough outline and then later write a separate version in a normal format.
I like what you've built up and I'm even enjoying the Agent One chapters now that we have a buddy cop thing going on with him and Colin.

>>150377487
I like the Loona sideplot, it addresses the fact hellhounds are even lower on the totem pole. Plus, the arcade part was cute :)

>>150372081
Write from the heart, don't change to please everyone, because you'll end up pleasing nobody especially yourself.

>>150377502
I meant once the fic is completed the author could write a version in non greentext format, regardless of the love interest.

I wish Ariral were real...

>>150377502
The show will never acknowledge the fact that, fatherly love or not, Loona's basically Blitzo's pet.

>>150377519
Unrelated but same.

>>150371699 (OP)
Loona bros, he swooped her right from our very arms!

>>150377506
This is excellent advice

>>150378805
but anon, he is in heaven, how could he possibly even meet her?

>>150379117
Isn't heaven incredibly hard to enter in Helluva's universe? Like you must be a literal saint to have access? Not to mention how terribly politically polarized the angels would be up there

>>150371699 (OP)
Ask Vizie

>>150379117
Outreach programs. Duh.

>>150379334
>he debates her
>it ends up in a tie
>Loona is so impressed at his patience and debating skills, she starts developing feelings for him

why is this thread so much more alive during US hours when compared to euro ones?
do europeans not care about vivzies slop?

>>150379387
No
In fact i believe spics are more interested in HB than Northern Americans
Pic related is a spic artist
Also slavs, specifically the cyrillic type, but they have their own sites to discuss vivzie shit

>>150379441
>i believe spics are more interested in HB than Northern Americans
yeah, but spics also go under the US hours umbrella

i wonder if we will get a closer look at the gay owls extended family in the future

anyone got some more ”alternate designs” of the characters?

>>150380714
>that loona

>>150380849
is this one better?

>>150380866
it's alright but the little star between the eyes is strange

>>150380188
>more stolas shit
I don’t think I’m strong enough…

>>150380866
>Octavia's buried racism she inherited from her mother unveils itself in full force as the mutt next to her smells like piss and wet dog

>>150381315
It's more likely than you think.
I don't think she'll be full on racist or anything. But I can see a world where she's got a bit of prejudice built into her, on the level that Stolas has. Plus, now she'll be seeing a hellhound and imp make for a happy family for her dad. When she confronts Loona about getting the luxury of stealing her dad, it's gonna be some good drama.

>>150372081
For what it's worth, I like the Loona stuff. Could even go platonic if that's what you really want, what with the two being drunk and emotional. I'd date her, though...
Regardless, the best stuff is the relationship with Stolas, genuinely fantastic stuff you have going there.

asterions sister has got it going on

>>150381315
Octavia but she would finger your butt

>>150381681
what if instead of octavia goetia, her name was octavia freakytia and instead of crying because of her daddy, she stuck a finger up anons ass

>>150381458
>>150372081
Oh right yeah, if you go with the whole study group idea planted earlier in the story, I figure that's a great way to build chemistry with both. I like Loona's already, Anon really balances her rage out.

>>150381809
The series would improve I think

how would these two interact?

>>150372081
part III

>Two:I don't think it's that serious, and if it did affect him, maybe it's for the best.
>Nick: Enters a data center that also functions as an office, closing the door behind him to then sit in a chair.
>What the hell did I just see? They are real... Oh my God, what the hell have I gotten myself into? I thought it was >an organization that remained from the satanic panic of the late 20th century, that the most it would do nowadays >would be to prevent human sacrifices to Satan and things like that. But now it turns out that One and Two were >right that supernatural things are real... and I was thinking they were just two crazy people who took the Warren's >stories too seriously. Well, I better get to work to relax my mind.
>Opens a laptop and starts looking for more information and organizing all the evidence that Agents One and Two >collected.
>Forty-five minutes pass.
>Nick: Well, I'm done now; I'm going to entertain myself. Enters the browser and opens 4chan. Looks at his watch. I >don't think spending 30 minutes here will hurt.
>Another 45 minutes pass where Nick defends Fluttershy's superiority in /mlp/ and in /co/ he defends the superiority >of furry women.
>Someone enters.
>Nick: One... Two, what's up? Are you mad at me? Sorry for saying so many stupid things and for underestimating >your work. If you want, you can stay; I'll finish this in a moment. He is staring intently at the laptop screen.
>Thinking about it, I'm disappointed with the things you brought... they are uglier than Walmart's Christmas elves. >They aren't that scary... especially the big one, he looks like a poorly made abortion.
>Loona: What did you say about my dad, damn human?
>Nick: Dad?
>Turns around.
>Nick: But what...?
>Loona puts Nick in a chokehold with her arm.
>Nick starts to struggle with Loona and tries to pull out his weapon.
>While struggling, he tries to aim the gun at Loona's head and... click, click... the gun was on safety.

previous parts:>>150354811

>>150382446
>E4 Fang is SnootVia's teacher

new snootifications just dropped

where is everyone?

>>150385094
ms. co finals

>>150372585
>>150372649
It's okay to admit you're dazzled by the owl

>>150385094
Work

>>150385395
but its sunday

>>150385503
Gotta chase that paper son

>>150385094
Exhausted. Lurking.

>>150385094
>>150385503
I just got back from work and sense I got back from work, I got a question for the thread.
What if a younger Moxxie was adopted as a pet for a young Octavia.

Imagine working on the Sabbath.

>>150385094
Was tasking myself around the house, and now I'm eating dinner while contemplating what to write. I don't want to take the easy route and revolve it around Loona, even though Loona fics are the only ones that really gain traction around here.

octavia looks like a sock puppet

>>150386132
Octavia and Moxxie would make a great duo.

>>150386319
well thats just rude
she is a dignified princess of a royal lineage

>>150386279
It's blasphemous, I know.

>>150386279
Unless God is gonna put some money in my plate then I don't wanna hear it

>>150383589
Would this make Blitzo a trigger?

>>150386763
a trigger doesnt really fit at all
he is either a human or a compy

>>150386786
Yeah imps would be red compies.

>>150386319
Why say something so mean like that to this face?

>>150386383
Desire to doodle older Via in beautiful regal attire growing

>>150386132
Moxxie interacting more with Via isn't something I've considered before. But I'm intrigued....

>>150386786
Why not a Coelophysis?

>>150385503
Sadly someone has to cover for the guy who realized it was Sunday and he wasn’t supposed to work.

>>150386859
Maybe those would fit too, point is they would be some sort of small and unassuming dino

>>150386858
>Moxxie interacting more with Via isn't something I've considered before. But I'm intrigued
Glad I gave you some inspiration.
More of a general idea I have for some greens.
I think Moxxie would get along very fine with Octavia. Even though Moxxie is her pet, Octavia treats him respectfully.
Not sure how he'd get along with Stolas or Stella, likely a mutual understanding of a master to pet relationship, better than the servants but not by much.
I do think if Moxxie either escaped or is let go after growing too old.
Years later when he finds out Blitzo is now in relationship with his former master, he'd be very pissed off but still hold some respect for Octavia.

>>150387128
>Moxxie as a pet
Is stupid, why would they treat him as a pet? Hes not a hound
Imps are, at worst, treated like slaves, but not actual pets
If anything, he gets taken in to be raised as a personal servant/butler
Loona would be the one treated as a pet/sister

Alright revised the arcade chapter for Base of The Fire because I was deeply unhappy with it. Birb chapter is coming up soon.

https://archiveofourown dot org/works/68602336/chapters/184193951

>>150387128
>>150387390
I'd agree that it would probably work better as a servant to Via rather than "pet". But it's also possible Stolas and almost certainly Stella sees very little distinction between a servant and a pet.

This would make for an interesting recontextualization of Loo Loo Land. Whether Via would remember Moxxie. Or if she does remember him, her calling him "Old Man" could be in more of a teasy, fun manner. Like she called him that back in the day. Or Moxxie actually earnestly doing his darndest to protect her during the visit. There's enough interaction between them to have some cool ideas to play with.

>>150387581
>But it's also possible Stolas and almost certainly Stella sees very little distinction between a servant and a pet
That's what I was going for. Most Goetians don't often see the difference between a servant or a pet. Because they don't have a reason to bother knowing the difference.
Sure, some might call them pets or other terms if they treat them better but most just see it as another generic term to call Imps especially ones that work under them.

>>150387397
Are you gonna make a reference to this meme in some way?
I think it would fit right in at some point, like when anon gets an explanation on how sigils actually work

>>150388497
>Are you gonna make a reference to this meme in some way?
>I think it would fit right in at some point, like when anon gets an explanation on how sigils actually work

I'll consider it. No spoilers on how sigils work or exactly how 'normal' demons utilize them.

I think Vivziepop SUCKS

>>150389116
You are preaching to the choir, anon

>>150389116
Yeah but I still wanna fuck and suck all the characters

>>150387397
Finally finished it
Honestly perfect this time around, how do you feel? Did reading HILTLHH help with writing Loona? The chemistry's pretty dang good in this chapter.

Okay, this is coming short at about 4000 words, but My Saving Grace chapter 2 is finally up for the Via lovers! I know I promised double that, and I apologize, but I'm really proud of it. Tell me your thoughts after either in the comments or here, I really love the feedback.

https://archiveofourownDOTorg/works/70148341/chapters/184208131

>>150389609
Sweet, more tavi is always welcomed

>>150371699 (OP)
She can toot for me

>>150389951
She does toot as she pleases

>>150389609
Okay, finished it, i gotta say it feels a bit "off" for some reason
The pacing might be too quick
Not only that, but why would octavia trust anon to not just run off as soon as she lets him out? Why would he be sticking around?
I feel like shes a bit too lenient for what the guy has done, unless you have her go the same route her dad went and is actually, secretly, hopelessly in love with the MC from the moment shes laid her eyes on him

>>150390181
Also, the "mission" she sent him on makes no sense, why would she send this random guy to check up on her dad instead of one of her servants?
Does she think her dad will know more or something?

>>150390181
>>150390217
I do agree with you that this may have been a little fast paced, but as for why Octavia is keeping him around and why he’s not run off, it has to do with her touching him with her magic. I eluded that he’s basically under contract, and as far as Stolas goes, she does expect him to know more and uses Anon because I think Stolas would catch on if it was a servant.

>>150386859
>Why not a Coelophysis?

>Coelophysis
>dinosaur famous for eating it's own young

What'd he mean by this?

>>150390288
>I think Stolas would catch on if it was a servant.
Catch on to what, that his daughter wants to know about his well being?
Is she hiding thr fact that she misses him?

>>150389609
My sole complaint is that the description fluctuates between eloquence and slop. For example:
>My heart drops to my stomach as I recall the disasterpiece from what feels like mere moments ago
>I’m scared shitless.
>This feels fucking weird. If I had to imagine what taking every psychedelic at once feels like, this would be that times five.
I'm not expecting you to write like Tolkien or Herbert, but goddamn, stuff like this makes it hard to get properly immersed.

>>150389609
I'm thinking this is a pretty solid read up to now. I'll keep my eyes out for updates on this. Octavia feels a bit more formal than I'd expect, but I can see it as her trying to play up and act more intimidating than she usually is.

I'm always on the hunt for good Octavia-focused fanfics, so keep it coming

>>150372239
This but with a Goetian man.

>>150390451
She’s hiding the fact she’s missing him, yes. As with what >>150390514 said, she’s acting more formal because she believes that’s how she had to be given the time she’s spent with Stella and Andre manipulating her.
>>150390462
I was never really too good at inner dialogue, environmental description has always been my biggest strength. I don’t know how to improve it, so if you’ve got any tips that’d be greatly appreciated.

>>150381415
C-Can she rake her claws over my cheek and eyelid while subtly threatening me?

>>150390560
Gay
although i cant blame you

>>150390569
I mean, it's a pet peeve exclusive to me, and I don't expect you to cater to one reader. I certainly wouldn't.

But since you asked for tips... you can approach this one of two ways: do what Frank Herbert does and separate the inner dialogue from the description. Or you can carry on as you've been doing, albeit in a manner that doesn't disrupt the flow. And by that, I mean, if you start with grace, end with grace. Don't throw a turd in mid-stream.

>>150390598
Get on her bad side and that can be arranged

>>150390618
Nor can I blame you for wanting to fuck thick ass Goetian women.

>>150390686
>But since you asked for tips... you can approach this one of two ways: do what Frank Herbert does and separate the inner dialogue from the description. Or you can carry on as you've been doing, albeit in a manner that doesn't disrupt the flow. And by that, I mean, if you start with grace, end with grace. Don't throw a turd in mid-stream.


But does Octavia become a giant worm at the end that acts as a mouth piece for the author's sociological theories while Anon's clone fucks her great great great niece?

>>150390686
I guess that makes sense. I’m always looking to improve, so this helps a lot. I know you said not to cater to just your opinion, but looking back and comparing the inner dialogue to the environmental description is night and day. I’ll try to improve the former to the latter’s level. Thanks mate.

>>150390687
Please I would give my soul for Queen Via to scorn and abuse my being only to turn around and say she cares and only hurts me because she loves me.

>>150371715
Christian Theology...errr about that /x/ bro here, all of the characters in this series are based of Jewish Apocryphal works, not Christian Theological work, oh and Dante's inferno is a fictional novel, not Christian Theology either

>>150390689
Female Vassago?

>>150390741
You jest, but I can totally see Octavia becoming God-Empress and going full-on Kralizec on all three planes of existence, just to finally have a taste of control.


>>150390752
No problem, bro. Always happy to help.

>>150390819
FemVassago would be hot.

>>150390819
I believe she's a fankid actually.

>>150387397
What did you change?

>>150390872
>What did you change?


>Made Loona less of a womanchild
>Toned down Blitzo
>added more about hellhound status

>>150390888
And a nice extra chunk at the end, I really liked it.

>>150390326
>What'd he mean by this?
Don't worry about it, Anon.
>>150390829
Goetian women in general are very attractive.

Anyone here play sulfur?
The game got an update as of recent and i couldnt help but imagine the priest coming up against IMP
He is essentially the priest of a church that got burned down by a witch and he followed her into this sort of limbo/hell place for revenge
No matter how many times he dies, he just respawns thanks to a magical amulet
Think of father garcia from faith, but on steroids

I think Octavia and Raven would be friends.

>>150391038
I think someone did a green like that one time. The priest in question had a werewolf daughter who he was trying to protect whilst looking for a cure.

>>150391071
Very likely
>Demon Father, who's very neglectful and not very caring.
>Introverted and a bit Isolated.
>Have the abilities in the arcane.

>>150391072
Do you happen to know where i can read this green?

>>150391094
>my dad's the fucking worst
>i hear you. did he also try to take over the world?
>wot?

>>150391159
I don't recall sadly, I do know Loona was in it and she befriended the daughter thinking she was a kidnapped hellhound.

>>150371699 (OP)
Doesn’t matter, all that matters is she’s there so people can feel bad for the gay cheating owl man

>>150391491
>people
Fujos aren't people.

>>150391593
Indeed
Here, we respect heterosexual monogamy.

I wonder, do you think octavia could end up cheating on you, just like her father did on her mother?
It does run in the family

>>150391669
She likely has such a negative impression of that behavior that I think she'd rather die than cheat.

>>150391669
No.
And if you cheated on her, she'll kill you, slowly. Because you'd remind her of Stolas, who destroyed her family and she expected you to build her a family that would love her.
And you dared to destroy that, when you knew she hated her father for doing that.

>>150391723
Yeah, I can't see Octavia being disloyal in any capacity. She's seen (and felt) what it does to a family firsthand, and wouldn't want to inflict that upon (who's likely) going to be her only friend in life: you.

>>150390888
Personally I kinda liked womanchild loona. I thought it made sense that because she spent most of her life inside the pound system. She’d miss out on normal childhood experiences. And so when she got drunk she went all out on enjoying things she never got to.

>>150391836
>>150391824
>>150391723
As a guy with serious jealousy and self doubt issues, i see this as an absolute win

Apparently this exists

>>150387397
nice story, always make me have a smile all the way.

Except the agent parts, I usually skip them, sorry about that.

>>150391187
You might be talking about the one I wrote.

Did I misremember, or were we supposed to get "Full Frontal Fanservice" September 15th? I know I'm a little early, but I wanted to ask.

I like the idea of Loona having a romantic interest in somebody has by taking her time eating when you cook rather than warfing it down.

>>150393446
>tfw you dream human bf has probably just found Jesus

>>150391072
Read the story, gives me an idea of my own:
>IMP gets hired to kill kid for woman turned lesbo who tried to tie loose ends, but got killed by husband
>husband murderfucks IMP, but he and boy end up in Hell
>humans befriend Loona. Dad and Loona become an item
>then Loona finds out Dad killed Blitzo and M&M

>>150393569
Would a christ following man be the equivalent of a goth to hellborn? You know what they're into might hurt you but you find it hot

>Oh wow! All of the services here come with a hunky human guy!
>Hey how much is it to buy him off?

Loona or Octavia spin-off where they go to high school in earth with monster boys and girls when?

I basically want MH/Skylanders with Loona or Octavia basically

>>150393446
>>150393569
Is Octavia the equivalent of a furry in Hell for taking an interest in human men?

>>150394446
You act as if hellborns aren't curious on what humans do and let their degenerate brains fill in the blanks

What kind of music do you think she must usually listen to?

>>150394575
I don't know. I think there's something cute about Via having a more unique interest in human men. But it's on the more taboo side of things in Hell...which is saying a lot.

Maybe she even has her own humansona so she's super eager to learn how to make a human disguise.

Just imagine how much of the Goetia family wealth goes toward commissioning human art.

>>150394637
>Via having a more unique interest in human men.
Does this mean that she would only be into you because of fetish reasons?

>>150394679
Could be how it starts out.
But spend time with her and she'll learn to love you for you. Not for the fact you're just a human man.

>>150391968
>Octavia gets show in a botched attempt on her fathers life
>She is dying
>Anon quickly searches through his spells looking for something, anything to save her with
>He finds not a single thing
>Seeing no other way, he turns to praying
>He prays from the soul, begging God on his knees to spare his gfs life
>But even though he has fallen so much from his old life and now dwells amongst literal demons, his faith had never wavered
>And so, God hears his pleas and decides to intervene
>A radiant brilliance overtakes octavia and lifts her up, out of her fathers arms and into the air
>Before their eyes she is transformed by holy magics, her wound healing, her feathers turning snow white, her hair turning blonde, and two pairs of wings materializing on her back
>She is then slowly lowered back down in the arms of those who love her
>Her parents are shocked, but anon simply gives thanks and praises God one more time before getting close to see how she is
>She slowly opens her eyes, none the wiser to her new nature
>Well, anon did always say that she was his angel

>>150391094
Imagine if Raven and Octavia encounter each other through astral projection or something and start talking, sharing magic notes, etc.

>>150395273
>youd think they would be sharing magic notes and spells
>but no, they just share romantic fiction and female smut

>>150395408
Wanna see Octavia in the place of Abe when he falls in love, maybe with Loona as Hellboy

>Loona is raiding the fridge and takes a few cans of beer along when she hears a cheesy romantic music echo around the place.
>Goes to check it out, and finds Octavia in her room/the library.
>Music suddenly changes to violin when she opens the door.
>Octavia pretends to be reading a book.
>"OH hello Ms Loona! You are up late"
"What are you listening to?"
>"Ah! Paganini, one of my father's favorites, you see the harmony between the-"
"What's that behind the book?"
>"Ah- erh- this... well..."
>Loona comes closer and reads the disk's cover
"Popular Love Songs... Oh Via... you fell in love with the human?"

>>150392997
Who has a comfier time? Anon with Loona sleeping on top of him or One with Two sleeping on top of him (human or sinner)?

>>150395604
probably One, loona is a big bitch, she probably weighs quite a bit

>>150395661

>probably One, loona is a big bitch, she probably weighs quite a bit

>Doesn't want to be smothered in fluffy dog

I might have to give it to SinnerTwo because the purring is op. Human Two isn't fluffy so she sadly might have to come in last.

>>150395661
Still worth it.

>>150395661
I thought anon and Loona were the same size (and given the fluff Loona could be the lighter of the two)? Yes, yes, tall for a girl, but it's never stated how tall is Anon, and Stolas is taller than everyone else anyway.

>>150395785
anon, loona can rip people apart with her bare hands, all the muscle needed for such a feat has weight to it
even if she isnt that tall, she must be quite dense and, therefore, heavy

>>150395802
She went against morons using Edo weapons, I'm not seeing her curbstomping Adrian Shephard or other guys like him even if naked and with just a knife.

>>150395661
do you not understand the appeal of a weighted blanket?

>>150395802
I'm just tired of reading about Loona massacring humans with ease, rather than fighting a guy who's genuine stronger and tougher than her but slower and lacking fangs and claws.

>>150395661
>>150395802
Loona can still be a vicious bitch while also the little spoon. I mean, real life wolves aren't really bigger than humans, not even the alaskan ones; it's just the fur making them look bigger and conflagration with direwolves/werewolves.

>>150395867
>>150395829
>umm, loona isnt actually as strong as she appears on the show, she just fought against weaklings
holy cope
i saw the same things you saw and she is clearly stronger than the average human

>>150395944
The keyword being AVERAGE. It's obvious there are humans who're not average, plus cartoon logic is at play.

>>150395966
>The keyword being AVERAGE
anon, ten average guys could kill a bear, loona faced off against like two dozen armed feds and tore them to pieces
sure, she had some help, but she was surrounded and outnumbered

>Loona can very easily manhandle and pick you up if she wanted
>she tries to pretend she can't because she'd rather you carry her than the other way around

>>150395985
And again, IMPs meant to always win. Why do you think they've never put against the military?

And again, I want to read more stories where they DO get their asses kicked by a human, where Loona IS weaker than the human and has to do some quick-thinking, because there are (at least an SCP xover, one that was initially great but became shit because the human was a cambion, and a wattpad one, and I don't do Wattpad except for Beastars).

>>150396041
>And again, I want to read more stories where-
>stories, aka non-canon fiction
yeah...no
just stop coping anon, accept that hounds are stronger than humans

>>150393569
>>150393708
It'll be like an Alucard&Alexander Anderson type of relationship
They are both opposing forces but that conflict is exactly what makes it so exciting, the fighting almost as thrilling as sex.

>>150396029
>you can grab Loona's muzzle and force it shut like a croc's
>you like it when she licks your face

>>150396066
Not if said human can fight with prehistoric beasts.

>>150396071
>put hand on Loona's muzzle and lift her lip
>"Wharrr you thing youre doing?"
>"Looking at the chompers."
>CHOMP!
>a few minutes later, she's applying a bandaid to your finger while calling you a pussy

>>150396066
I for one think it makes sense that the literal monster from hell is stronger than a human.

>>150396101
yeah, at least the hounds
imps being stronger and being able to overpower fully grown humans is still complete BS though

>>150396085
>human
>posts a neanderthal whose dad is even less evolved than he is
Might as well compare Loona to a gigantopithecus for this gay ass power fantasy of yours.

>>150396120
agreed. if i can punt it over a fence, it shouldn't be capable of punting ME over a fence. I could believe that imps could or should be on par with humans. but stronger? thats just retarded.

>>150396131
Still human though, just not homo sapiens

>>150396532
>still human just not human
Retard.

>>150396167
They're also skinny, unlike chimps, so there's no 'wiry strength' shit. Want to write a greentext where that's exactly what happens, should I start my own thread or do it on the hhg one?

>>150396546
Faggot.

>>150396555
But enough about you.

>>150396555
>>150396563
STFU both of you, this is about Octavia, not Loona.

I'm not a feminist by any stretch of the imagination, but some guys just can't stand the idea of a woman being stronger than them.

Me, though... throw me over your shoulder like a sack of potatoes, mommy! Carry me thither!

>>150396610
Stronger no, rivaling (you) in strength yes. Every night in bed should look like this.

>>150396610
>>150396650
lets be honest, if stella were a dommy mommy its unlikely stolas would have sought out blitzo, who treats him about the same
shes probably a very dry and non-sexual person and when she does have sex, shes lies there like a dead fish

>>150396745
I headcanon Stella being a sub, so...

And besides, even if she were a dommy mommy, she's still a female, which means Stolas isn't going to get anything out of it.

What kind of perfume do you think Verosika uses?

>>150396800
>she's still a female, which means Stolas isn't going to get anything out of it.
strapons exist, anon
but i dont think hes only in it for the imp dick, i saw some scenes of how shitzo treats the owl and its very vicious, physical, animalistic
he is probably only into being abused and used, a woman could pull it off, but you need a special kind of lady, kind of how millie does with moxxie, now that i think about it

Imagine how intense Stella's climaxes are.

>>150397310
sauce?

>>150397373
idk, i saw it on trash once i think, no clue what its from

>>150397310
>fucking white women holy shit

>>150397310
Except Loona's anthropomorphic and has childbearing hips

>>150397452
thunder thighs ashkually

>>150397547
https://e621.net/posts/3396340
Why would Bee make hellhound women compatible with human men? What was she THINKING?

>>150397566
Unlike Asmodeus, she wanted actual love to come before lust, kinda like a reverse Beauty and the Beast/Shrek and made hellhounds anthros.

would male octavia be better off or worse off than octavia?
i heard having mommy issues is pretty bad for a dude and his own dad is barely there for him

>>150397678
He'd end up on hellchan for sure

>>150397678
>male octavia
>dresses exactly the same
hmm...

>>150397723
I think it's meant to be a shirt but that choker is kinda suspect.

>>150397723
>>150397748
what about this version?

>>150397762
He looks like he begrudgingly gets hugged by Anon

>>150397748
>suspect
I'd say the eyeshadow is more so.

>>150397773
>He looks like he begrudgingly gets hugged by Anon
by inca, you mean

>>150397762
Bit better
>>150397773
>>150397801
>Inca hugs him
>he freezes up and doesn't know what to do except spill his spaghetti
>>150397777 (checked)
He's goth not gay

i wonder, would he be a zesty faggy owl or is it just a scene thing?

>Anon is extremely naive and doesnt know hes in hell
>Gives everyone around him eye drops and directions to an optometrist
>Man stolas you sure are nice and fluffy but you need a shave and to get that conjuncitivits looked at, your eyes are pure red.

>>150397951
the only way i could see this working is if anon himself has very bad vision and he just loses his glasses

>>150398014
>Jinkies I lost my glasses
>Wow Millie you sure are so kind, I do wonder why you are all so sunburned though
>And why does Loonas Smell remind me of my dog Jimmy?

>>150397891
Scene thing.
Effectively a 'pretty boy' kinda guy.

>>150398041
>anon gets ran over
>he regenerates and starts rubbing his neck
>man. that's the second time I got ran over this week! no clue how I keep surviving these.

>>150398160
he seems pretty chill, clearly going for the ”cool, mysterious sigma” vibe
imagine him getting a kiss from inca and turning red like a lightbulb

>>150398014
I cant stop staring at this gif. Please give more squishy gif.

>>150398259
>cool, mysterious sigma vibe.
You could have left it at 'cool and mysterious'.

>>150398289
i could have, but he is a later zoomer/early alpha, he would unironically use ”sigma” while describing himself
but its ok, inca thinks its cute

>>150398315
I mean if Octavia/Octavius is 17/18 and HB takes place in a relatively modern setting, then he would be a '02/'03 baby.
Then again he's probably like 28 because ages for Hellborn are weird.

>>150398315
>bruh fr fr
>Loono smacks him upside the head

>>150398540
>"Lucky for you I'm a dog lover" - Stolas Goetia.

>pulling this line on Via whenever she says something stupid
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZ7NrApups8

octavia is pretty cute as a human too

>>150396066
Tbh I go with the idea that humans are weaker and slower than hounds but have a higher magical cap than most Hellborn that aren't Goetia.
Imps are small and weak with exceptional freaks of nature like Millie but they're very agile and insanely durable.

>>150398928
>Octavia adapting to having lips and having to chew her food

i like birds