>>64156092
Pretty good this time. I still have some pointers. In terms of grammar, there are a couple of mistakes.
>So, the West backed AFU is losing ground to shovels and donkeys?
"West backed" does not fit within the structure of the sentence, and sounds out of place to a native speaker. Saying "American supplied" would achieve your objective better.
>Was all our tax money sold in the black market or what?
Most native speakers would say "on the black market", since it is an abstract concept in America and not a physical place. Also, selling money sounds silly to Americans, so don't say that. Say something about American money being wasted on Ukrainian civil servant salaries or pensions for the elderly instead.