>>150927168
>forced to watch ads on your own fucking DVD
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>>7730249
These boys are fuck able. It's too bad you declare them as 12 or I would draw you some fan art.
Other then that I read the whole thing. The plots ok I guess, it's interesting that you picked Christmas and I wonder why. originally I thought it was going to turn out the man wasn't actually Santa, and was disappointed the plot wasn't actually that deep. the relationship between the boys was much more interesting and they had a good dynamic. I can't help but think you are an enjoyer of Jojo and possibly a promised Neverland. Being influenced by the things you like is great, but I think the best advice I can give is simply read more and be influenced by things you DONT like. The danger of a good book is that you will just want to go out and copy it. When you read something you don't like you start to think "this is how I would have done it" and you start to form something original.
Ultimately I give the /lit/ part a c+, the plot wasn't too interesting but it served to cause conflict in the boys relationship which is the true story. The parts where they separate so we can learn more world lore was boring for me. But I have read a lot in my time and have seen "Mario/superman but he evil" type shit 1000 times so it's just an OPINION. I want to know what happens to kids that Santa tosses out, but only because one of the boys is going to be tossed out and I have grown to like them. You will find people won't give a fuck about your setting until you have given them a character to latch onto first. Unfortunately that's where the story ends.
These boys are fuck able. It's too bad you declare them as 12 or I would draw you some fan art.
Other then that I read the whole thing. The plots ok I guess, it's interesting that you picked Christmas and I wonder why. originally I thought it was going to turn out the man wasn't actually Santa, and was disappointed the plot wasn't actually that deep. the relationship between the boys was much more interesting and they had a good dynamic. I can't help but think you are an enjoyer of Jojo and possibly a promised Neverland. Being influenced by the things you like is great, but I think the best advice I can give is simply read more and be influenced by things you DONT like. The danger of a good book is that you will just want to go out and copy it. When you read something you don't like you start to think "this is how I would have done it" and you start to form something original.
Ultimately I give the /lit/ part a c+, the plot wasn't too interesting but it served to cause conflict in the boys relationship which is the true story. The parts where they separate so we can learn more world lore was boring for me. But I have read a lot in my time and have seen "Mario/superman but he evil" type shit 1000 times so it's just an OPINION. I want to know what happens to kids that Santa tosses out, but only because one of the boys is going to be tossed out and I have grown to like them. You will find people won't give a fuck about your setting until you have given them a character to latch onto first. Unfortunately that's where the story ends.
>>150443060
that's even wierder, tintin was right
that's even wierder, tintin was right
>>150080597
Woah... Is that fucking blackface, dude?
Woah... Is that fucking blackface, dude?
>>103817412
woah is that fucking blackface dude?
woah is that fucking blackface dude?
>>713275839
>Game cuts out half it's content to sell later as DLC
Why do retards keep supporting Paradox. They do it every fucking time.
>Game cuts out half it's content to sell later as DLC
Why do retards keep supporting Paradox. They do it every fucking time.
>Woah... did you just say Nigger, dude?