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>anything in particular you enjoyed
I like how you captured the essence of what what a lot of people here seem to agree they wish the show was like while also not going full autistic headcanon, like, it's still hell, everyone's still a piece of shit, but it's not played for cheap gags and the garbage edgy "humour" that Vivzie goes for
I also like that the characters actually seem to be, you know, CHARACTERS, and not just set dressing, Loona's still violent, crude and plain mean, but you let her stew in her choices, and what's said to her, and show that she actually does have a conscience under all the wanton mass-murder
Anon's a good main character, he's not specific enough to feel like a faggot self-insert from you, but he's too specific for any faggot here to self-insert into, myself included, again, he's an actual character, he's the shitposting degenerate asshole you'd expect to come from here to hell, but he's still human, even if he is dead, and he's clearly in WAY over his head, which I appreciate, I've seen one too many stories of the focus character immediately being good at something, so it's a breath of fresh air
I also liked his back and forth with Blitzo when they fought, somehow, miraculously, you made me not hate that red faggot. "You're not my type." Genuinely made me kek
>anything you would like to see
well I know that him bumping into Moxxie and Millie is inevitable, so I'm looking forward to that, I think it'd be interesting to see what you do with whenever Anon actually sees Blitzo open a portal back to Earth
I also imagine he'd probably end up being the most competent secretary I.M.P. gets for no other reason than all their clients being sinners like him, so he'd probably be able to handle them better than the others since Loona didn't care, and Stolas had a silver spoon too far up his ass to deal with a 9 to 5
could be nice to have him bump into Octavia for whatever reason, I still want this to be a Loona fic, but I just like her
