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>>7694093 (OP)
Can I get some feedback

new thread? this quick?

>>7694161
Do simple form exercises before you draw humans. Cylinders, cubes, spheres, a couple more complex things. For like 10-15 minutes. No scribbling over them.

You need more confidence in your lines and your volume drifts.

>>7694093 (OP)
>new /sex/ thread was made after the old one hit the limit on 8/15
>this /sex/ thread is made on 8/17
>two days later
>the first newly created thread is at the time of this writing only 23 posts in
I do not understand.

>>7694205
I can do those just fine
But I can't draw light strokes so drawings become a mess like this

>>7694093 (OP)
link that top left pic, i don't remember seeing it

feedback please

>>7694880
Uninteresting. The shoulders don't make sense, same with their shade. Linework is mostly just pointing out the outline of the area of the character and details without bringing out the form, angles, mass and distances. Hair linework is the best, the other lines are inferior. The color palette leans so heavy to pink tint and there's not enough contrast in different colors and in shade and light.

3/5. If it was character and subject I cared about, it would give better impact. Now it's personally very meh. The face is interesting but not sexual for me.

Comm of commissioner's OCs wrestling

>>7694880
lel that face haha

>>7694917
too much violence

>>7695040
Nah, it's same stuff you would see in PG wrestling show

i was thinking about saturation and perceived brightness
it helped a lot

>>7695055
What have we talked about using gray on shading

>>7695149
what is it

>>7694252
Retarded autist keeps making threads, because he feels all the pictures posted in the previous thread need to be displayed in his autistic showcase collages.

>>7694093 (OP)
>>7694095
>>7694097
Why the don't you just post these in the thread that already exists? Is it an ego thing? Do you feel you are the owner/curator of these threads?

>>7695179
Bro he probably just didn't realize there was already a thread, take a breath you sperg

>>7695209
>Bro he probably just didn't realize there was already a thread, take a breath you sperg
Common sense is that you fo a quick board search before you start a new general thread.
You might be right, but this is now the second time in a row that this happens. I'm pretty sure it wasn't just a mistake.

>>7695231
Well there was this one autist who somehow got the idea that the general's name needs to be changed from /salt/ to /sex/ so I wouldnt be surprised if either one of the current thread's OPs were the guy and got dopamine from projecting power

>>7695854
k-kino
i need to see it tummy bulging out of her

>>7695209
Not that anon, but the other thread had already been around for two days by the point this thread was made.

>>7695877
Let's just forget about OPs faggotry and hope for a prolific thread imo.

>>7694880
This is a nice drawing and your colours are nice and vibrant, it's very on model for Lucy and the gradient on her hair has been nicely executed.

For feedback what'd I'd mention are 1. contours, and 2. line weights.
With line weights you want to consider the "apex" and the "nadir", or basically peaks and troughs. Things you want to consider when editing your lines are stuff like the weight of the anatomy, its mass, motion, an object's influence on the subject (the table)), distance etc.

With contours I think the best example I could point to is the sweetheart neck on her chest. Do you notice how the contour of the left line on mine follows the form of her breasts? I can see that you're already thinking about this with the detail of her collar though so that's great.

Shadows! You've included some tit shadows on the table, good catch. The thing to remember about shadows is that the closer the shadow is to the cast object, the darker it is and the tighter/harder the line of the shadow becomes. As shadows are cast further away from the object, they give way to light and diffuse, becoming lighter and the edges begin to blur. This is kind of hard to illustrate with mine because I've opted for hatched shadows, but the principles apply with the lines becoming tighter in the middle where they're closest to the table.

Breasts, I like to think of as water balloons. The difference of course between a water balloon and a breast is that breast tissue has a wider point of connection at the pectoralis which is what helps them maintain their round shape. When the mass of a movable object meets an immovable object, the met part of the movable takes the shape of the immovable.

I tilted the head down further because I can see that you're going. You can tilt the head further bringing the chin closer to the neck to emphasis sensuality and allure, you kind of get that "come hither" look.

Sorry for the wall of text btw, I've never been good at explaining things succinctly!

>>7695900
Thanks for sharing your wisdom, it's pretty informative

>>7695908
yw. I actually didn't get to go into line weights much because I hit the character limit, but to give some examples, the top of the skull, as the lines flow into its peak, they get thinner to represent distance. Similarly, the lines at the top of the shoulder are thinner to represent where light would be catching it as the highest point of the limb anatomy. Normally the line where the jaw flows into the point of the chin would become thinner as it reaches its "apex" point, but that's hard to see with the thick cast shadow I've pencilled in on her neck. Same with where the breasts meet the table. It's hard to see in this but the lines between the table and her bust are thinner to represent the mass effectively becoming one with the table. If you're really clever you can even experiment erasing that "peaked" part of some lines altogether and it can look great.

These rules aren't set in concrete mind. I have seen people reverse these to great and unusual effect. Don't be afraid to experiment. It's definitely one of those things where the more you practice it, the more you just start to unconsciously do it.

>>7695854
Fucking lmao this is great. I don't know whether it's porn or comedy. Your perspectives and colours and lines have gotten so good.

>>7695854
>>7695962
It's a shame the anatomy is so stiff and the stylization of the faces is comedy gold.

>>7695854
peak

>>7695856
i'm prolly gonna try to do a pic like that in the future
>>7695962
thanks lol, i've been trying to experiment with all the tools CSP gives me, i feel like i learn a new thing for each of these big pics

While drawing can be great, remember to take a break,
Here, grab one, this one is on me.

rawing

>>7696300
Those light grays in shades mess it up and makes it look dirty. The shades with the base colors' tint look good but the transistion to the grays fuck it up

kind of getting stuck on the new pages. This is a 6th chapter long orgy where girls are taking turns, I kept running into page layouts or poses I felt that I have done before, so I am trying to change it up a little, but I just don't have a very solid image in my head so I am just flailing.

>>7695854
>>7694935
The line quality on this is impeccable, although personally I am not too keen on having a giant veiny dick in my face, but its also very evocative lol.

>>7695055
The gray bounce light works here, because of the gray ground.
>>7696300
They don't work here because you have a highly saturated pink background.

>>7696323
i'd have gone for something more 'normally' sized on Jax, but i was doing it as a follow up to the ragatha horse pic

>>7693335
The dicks look better, right?

>>7696398
You doomed us all by posting that

>>7696399
kek

What's the story behind this guy? I'm know next to nothing about the SCP other than the broad strokes.

>>7696402
He's anomal entity whose gimmick is that whoever sees him or even picture of him or even a pixel of picture of him falls victim to his rage, as he starts REEEEing and goes through everything to kill and mutilate the guy in horrific fashion. He's dubbed Shyguy and in 4chan's multiplayer server of SCP Secret Lab he was dubbed Lanky because of his body propotions

>>7696404
kek. Cool.

Who know's. Maybe he was an awkward twink in his youth.

>>7696349
>the ragatha horse pic
link?

experimenting with an OC

How do you guys come up with ideas on what to draw? No joke, I tried watching more porn for ideas but I just end up with brainfog.

>>7696552
I just draw my kink and my fav characters partipating in it. Though 90% of my pics are comms but then again I just draw my kink

>>7696552
I think about what ways I would enjoy seeing my oc get plowed.

>>7696536
That penis better not be hers

Finally getting to the actually horny.

>>7694093 (OP)
I used the thread as a reference
I guess the construction practices are paying off

bullied boysexo

where should I post +18 art now to get followers? is newgrownds ok?

>>7697616
Deviant Art, Pixiv, NewGrounds, E-Hentai. The most important thing in all of them is tagging your stuff correctly and the thumbnail needs to make people want to open it. Also what all of them have over algorithm based sites is letting users search all artworks with sought tags which algorithm based sites don't allow. Pixiv and DA have their own censor rules so link to your more lenient galleries in the profile but don't shout: "Uncensored version here" instead just list them. Viewers know where to check for the uncensored art without you spelling it out for them.

>>7697636
>E-Hentai.
Wait, that site is for ai artists, artbooks, art collections and stuff like that. it's completely useless for posting.

Well, I see... it seems I can't post porn if I want to get followers. I should draw boring sfw pinups for years.

>>7697660
Read the post again. Different people use different sites. Cast wider net. Work around the limitations. Your own mind and false prejudice is what's holding you back. If you want people to pick you up, you need to go where people go to find new artists to follow.

>>7697660
When I posted to E-hentai and linked my other gallery sites it brought me surge of new followers on other platforms too. E-hentai's advantage is no rules and not having to make account to see naughty works. Also the search lets you see everything with the sought tags so it's all about knowing which tags people use to find art that tickles their funny bone. There are people who are content with AI slop. There are also people who can distinguish between AI and human art and have preference to see actual human art. The bigger the site, the bigger variation in users.

>>7697678
>Your own mind and false prejudice is what's holding you back.
Dude are you serious? You can get banned for your own works if you do something wrong and you can loose everything in one moment. There's no artistic freedom, no money, no followers, until you learn how to suck cocks properly, to please everybody.

>>7697691
>When I posted to E-hentai
how? one drawing a week? that site is full of trash, nobody will find it. It works only for popular artists.

>>7697700
>how? one drawing a week? that site is full of trash, nobody will find it. It works only for popular artists

Once or twice a year. Updated galleries move up in the chronological list. People with passion for certain niches and subjects and characters check all the watering holes so they don't miss any.

I dunno if you are just ragebaiting/interaction baiting or if you are genuine so this will be my last (You). My final advice is that if what you do now is not working for you, maybe you should try new approach and rethink your beliefs that prevent you from trying new approaches and sites. I doubt banging your head to the wall with no change in strategy is going to bring any new results other than reaffirming your own set of mind.

Fuck.. In order to draw porn for a big audience you have to post sfw art to get more followers, because you'll be blacklisted for porn and you can't just post it everywhere you want, it means no followers. It's just ridiculous, because people follow 18+ artists more than sfw artists. Fucking shit!

>>7697700
I'm serious i see you are listing all the fail conditions in your mind. I understand why you want to limit yourself because of your fears. I hope it works for you

>>7697713
Who is going to blacklist you? If you want to draw porn for porn sudience you should draw porn for porn audience.

>>7696438
https://x.com/lobsterkiahlart/status/1907463049080131597
here you go

>>7697711

>Updated galleries move
ok then, I thought you can't update galleries. anyway, it's a strange way to get new followers
>passion for certain niches and subjects
I see, if you draw some weird stuff nobody wants to draw, then you probably don't even bother with followers. It works works differently with small niches

>>7697720
6k followers in Deviant Art, 3k in Pixiv, 1k in Twitter. DA and Pixiv bring the most interaction and comms. Been drawing for 4 years, my comm queue hasn't been empty for 3 years.

Ask yourself what's your reason to draw, why you need followers, why you are afraid to put yourself out there.

>>7697720
>ok then, I thought you can't update galleries. anyway, it's a strange way to get new followers

I've noticed anons have strong opinions of the sites they don't even use themselves. Ignorance is bliss but it rarely helps you advance.

>>7697716
>Who is going to blacklist you?
I'm talking about shadowbans and stuff like that.

>>7697714
>all the fail conditions in your mind.
It's not in my mind it's the reality of posting.

>>7697727
I see you are asking for help but you are also shooting down all the attempts of others trying to help you based on your own presumptions that left you feeling inadequate in the first place.

>>7697727
Shadow bans happen because the algorithm deems ypu potentially a bot or someone who tries to bmgo arpund the site rules. Find out which sites welcome your content, find out whether you need to flag mature content as mature. No one is going to fibd you if you kerp posting your art into void with no regard how people find new content and creators in the first place

>>7697724
>6k followers in Deviant Art
>my comm queue hasn't been empty for 3 years.
Do you draw fat pregnant sonics in diapers?

>Ask yourself what's your reason to draw, why you need followers, why you are afraid to put yourself out there.
That's a lot of stupid questions.

>>7697730
>Shadow bans happen because the algorithm
no, a lot of popular +18 artists are banned on twitter, you can't find them, but they still post there, because it's a popular platform. You also probably don't know about the new censorship laws.

>>7697734
Twitter is a social media, not an art site. I've seen lot of anons putting all their eggs in one basket called Twitter and it tends to bite them in the ass. If Twitter is where you want to be, stay there. I doubt you will be making breakthrough anytime soon.

Thank you for this conversation. It has reaffirmed my view on /ic/ anons.

>>7697734
>Due local laws blah blah blah verify your age by getting this paid service

See how Twitter doesn't specify the region or the law? Twitter doesn't care about the UK law or EU directive. They care about the user verifying their age because a) user needs to pay money to the site to do it and b) sites are allowed to subject their users for more aggresive and personalized advertisment to confirmed adult users which advertisers pay more for. It's not about censorship or protecting children. It's about Twitter wanting to make profit.

>>7697737
>I doubt you will be making breakthrough anytime soon.
I want to draw beautiful sexy women. You want to draw ugly fetishes. I chose the hardest way. We are different.

>>7697742
Good luck, 4D Goy!

>>7696794
i have bad news

>>7697731
>Do you draw fat pregnant sonics in diapers?
It's the wrestling fetish drawer.
People pay for very sub par art as long as you find a niche that involves sex.

>>7697782
Artist/drawfag/illustrator. A drawer is the piece of furniture you use to store items like clothes or other personal stuff. You keep making that same ESL mistake

>>7697791
nta but I think drawer is funny

>>7697791
I used the derogatory word drawer in this case with intent.

>>7697798
This anon gets it.

>>7697782
>People pay for very sub par art as long as you find a niche that involves sex.
I remember some guy on DA wanted me to draw an extremely fat character. I don't want to draw that kind of stuff.

>>7697808
Good for you anon.

>>7696978
Added and substracted some stuff

>>7697808
For me it's more like what if they don't like the fat bitch I drew

I'm afraid of posting my nsfw project's here and on public spaces. I'm afraid that people will steal my project's away from me. Any suggestions or what i should do?

I've tested this out with certain groups of people with samples and they've naturally wanted to know more about the story and characters. But I don't want to give away too much that people won't buy or engage with my content.

This might not be a problem for some but I really don't have anything else going for me. I can't judge if I'm in the middle ground or not since many of my art rivals and mutuals have already found success doing something consistently. Does anybody else feel the same?

I won't list my rivals names for privacy reasons. But some are fetish_art/game developers/AI tech bros/ (with large patreons) that have already established themselves.

>>7698108
Post it. No one can steal your stuff. If you want comments/critique, you can only get them if you share what you working. I think you are creating problems in your head

>>7698108
Do you steal other people's projects?

>>7698108
i usual take already done ideas by others and present it as my own project so retards who think they can steal shit actually get fucked

>>7698272
nta but yes

>>7698108
"art rivals" kek this is real live not an anime

>>7698108
>>7698250

I would steal.

>>7697875
This is really nice anon. Do you have any socials?

>>7698474
Just a discord account

I liked how it turned out.

Working on Tifa vs Nina animation

>>7699255
And the WIP of it even hit the Pixiv Daily Rankings

>>7699255
>>7699257
No one cares, you are the cringiest artist in the thread, you make no improvements and are only here to brag about your "success" as a niche fetish artist.

>>7699330
Thanks! Your (You)s are my true reward

>>7699330
Don't engage. Like most autists he's lacks any self awareness whatsoever.

>>7699478
After several years of mudwrestling with the pig, the clown starts to suspect the pig might be enjoying it

>>7699478
>he's lacks

Some feedback?

>>7699498
Thin neck. I don't think we would be able to see the background from this angle between her face, neck and shoulders. The upper part of her face seems like void because the eyes dont have marking were the upper part of the eyelid is so the face comms off like stereotypical alien. The change from black outlines to colored outlines is jarring. The glass is marked with outlines but doesnt have form. The substance inside the glass doesnt make sense. The bg is depressing and doesn't convey sunny beach day. The bag shore line lacks distinct form. I apllaud your pink highlight spots but they look more liek she has laser pointers pointed at her. Tan lines look more like the actual top instead of being tan lines.

I get that it's Cammy in beachwear at beach. Good job. Work on your presentation.

>>7699498
Also consider downscaling your pics to max 1000x1000 for people to see them in one go without needing to scroll. Also because the resolution is so big in your pic, it brings the linework and all the other details so close that makes their shoddines even more evident

>>7699484
>has the self awareness of a 14 year old
>points out a typo
Checks.

damn this pose is hard.
anything that feels off?
i cant tell anymore.

>>7699743
Cute, got a blog anon?

>>7699518
Thanks for the feedback anon, i always struggled to see those mistake until somebody else point them out.
>>7699524
Never thought about it, thanks again.

Uhhh
Splatoon wip

>>7699746
i got a twitter account
https://x.com/ColorsOfDelight

although i took a break, i plan to start posting again and i'll post several at once, after i finish them

>>7699743
maybe sth like this

>>7699330
>the cringiest artist in the thread
he's probably mentally ill or something, like that guy who spammed the previous thread with his slop

>>7699743
Would make the brown catboy the middle of a sandwich/10

>>7700130
damn man that's really good. they look much more aligned now. and you even solved the face issue.
i'll use it to try and improve the drawing. thanks man.

>>7700152
looking forward to the result

>>7700173
damn those are niceee

>>7694093 (OP)
tested the waters with some nsfw, glad with how it turned out. might do more in the future

>>7696922
Damn why did everyone ignore this one? it’s so good!

>>7698558
features are hard to read. does he have 3 eyes?

critique welcome

>>7699257
>>7699330
Oh shit, it gets better. Literally.

>>7700370
Consider using either blank paper or buying a screenless tablet (Wacom One M, costs about 60-80 bucks and lasts for decades, and wear paper on top of it) and get Krita as it's free and does everything paid programs do.

The torso is straight and stiff, bring more gesture and variation to it to show her emotion. Attracvtive female figure has longer thighs than shins so feel free to exaggarate for your needs. Try to avoid having shoulders and hips in the same parallel line because it just makes the stiffness more noticeable. The lady's neck follows the straightness and stiffness of the torso and only the head is tilted a bit.

Your drawing has charm, don't be afraid to use proper tools and presentation for it. Grid paper has its charm and soul, but in the end you are better off using actual skecthing paper or digital.

>>7700342
I don't like the way he draws faces

>>7700383
Thanks a lot was wondering why it looked so stiff

>>7699844
Continuous

>>7700173
My King, I kneel.

>>7700417
Calling it quits here

Can anyone tell me whether this advice is sound or not? >>7695900 not sure how much I should trust it.

>>7700342
what kind of advice does he even need? He's just posting his progress

>>7700932
I think it's sound. If you think the result shown is good, then take it into consideration and try applying it to your drawings, if not ignore it.
Do you need to be handheld like this for everything in your life?

studies and sketches, stuff on the right is from imagination

>>7701157
No it's just in a previous thread everybody was shitting on this artist and said their anatomy was bad, so I didn't know what to think.

>>7701643
>I didn't know what to think.
Exactly my point here:
>>7701157
>Do you need to be handheld like this for everything in your life?

>>7701709
Well is what they're saying about mass etc. correct? I didn't come here expecting a physics lesson.

>>7701810
>Well is what they're saying about mass etc. correct?
It is. Also, what they posted isn't anything new. You can find similar explanations by many artists and tutorials online.

https://youtu.be/id_1yth1nZQ

studying character with complicated design

>>7696922
Its getting good.

>>7701924
The hair braids dont flow naturally and it looks they have sticks going through them

>>7701952
yeah... it was kind of an after thought on my part.

>>7697281
Cutie

>>7701924
nice work, ty to work on those toes though, they are way too long. Arch doesn't don't go beyond the big toe usually.

>>7694093 (OP)
playing with colors

idk

>>7702532
Nice render but the anatomy leaves things to desire

>>7702467
Ohhh yeaaahhh

>>7702532
ayylmao

>>7702532
You'd be well served studying more breast anatomy. Breasts never hand naturally squished together like that unless they're implants.

Because they're directly attached to the pectoralis it means they naturally separate more when the arms are placed behind the back.

some random sexo.

how to get good at dick without looking at it? it's hella gay needing to ref dick.. and how to make normal sized dicks attractive for art? seems like hypercock the only thing that gets likes.

>>7702773
>how to get good at dick without looking at it? it's hella gay needing to ref dick
How old are you? 15?

>>7702777
no, I'm just straight.

>>7702714
will I ever have a gf...
how good to draw to get a gf?

>>7702773
it sounds like you would like to suck a dick and it scares you

>>7702782
Straight people with a brain aren't sexually insecure.
If you aren't 15, then you are an insecure retard or a closeted fag.

>>7702790
>>7702792
what is it with faggots projecting this type of narrative. "You hate us cause you want to fuck us." No dumbass I just don't like dick. And how will I draw it good if none of it looks good to me. it'd be like going to a landscape artist and expecting them to know what makes mech design good.

>>7702773
watch people draw futanari?
that's where i get my dick refs from

>>7702794
Insecure infantile people are low IQ dumbasses. You are proving this with every post you make.

>>7702773
>>7702782
>>7702794
>what is it with faggots projecting this type of narrative. "You hate us cause you want to fuck us." No dumbass I just don't like dick

Anon I'm a woman and this is the gayest shit I've ever read in my life. How do you expect to be able to recreate reality if you can't even look at it? If you're not capable of separating subject from emotion then you're not mature enough to be drawing nsfw in the first place.

Now draw the dick you little homo.

>>7702794
>I just don't like dick
You're afraid of dicks
>And how will I draw it good if none of it looks good to me.
That's some psychological issues. A dick is just a simple object, you can get good at drawing it, but you can't stop thinking how you suck, or touch dicks. It scares and disgusts you.

>a landscape artist and expecting them to know what makes mech design good
Some artists can, it just a matter of skills.

You want to draw porn and don't want to draw dicks. It's like a portrait artist who don't want to draw eyes

>>7702817
First of all what does it matter if you are a women or not. but second of all Yeah this is what im talking about. you created a dick out of nothing and it came out good. I just followed the ref and it came out meh.
https://files.catbox.moe/88qg31.jpg
And it's not I can't look at it or it makes me uncomfortable. I just don't want to spend my time learning the intricacies of why a dick looks aesthetic or not. Right now I'm just defaulting to hotdog styled dicks I seen homos like Rizdraws do since he's gay and a friend of mine that likes dicks said he does good dicks. But even when looking at it as ref i don't understand how to make it look good.
>>7702818
This is a lot of projection and you just sound like a grooming tranny if I'm being honest.

>>7702823
>I just followed the ref and it came out meh.
This is because you aren't good at drawing in gneral, not just at drawing dicks.
You are too dumb to understand anything, let alone learn how to draw by being self taught. You need handholding for everything. You are an idiot.

>>7702773
A moron drawing like this has the gull to mock other people.
Peak dunning kruger.

>>7694880
with women, less is more.

for a typically feminine impression, I find its better to keep your strokes/detail as low as possible, in or around the face especially.
the expression is cool , but you have lots of rigid black vertical lines, this looks horrible on women.

this takes away from her eyes, the expression.

the collar bones are floating, the hairline is weird, your light values on the breasts/clothes are too bright, you probably tried to fix problems as they appeared, the biggest thing I see is your values are all over, stop this habit early. try limiting value,
broken nose, the eyes have going off perspective alot
>>7695900


lot of loose clavicles today, kind of phoned it in on the shoulders.

the insertions are wrong, youre missing part of the breast form.


its not difficult at all to show you could have done a hard line on the bottom to help define the breast form

the eye perspective is going everywhere
the shoulder is broken, lateral delt is basically facing the viewer


quit wasting time adding these pointless contour lines of the lip and nose , the perspective and proportions already wrong anyway.

>>7702823

think of it in three shapes, base, shaft, glans.

keep bases thin, mid shaft always the thickest section,

one big vein down center

think of glans like a baseball helmet

this with reference will be enough with your erm.. sensibilities

>>7702833
with shafts why does the shape change so much and how thin of a base is too thin?

>>7702773
I would suggest blindfolding yourself then extrapolating the shape of a dick by using your mouth.

damn i honestly didn't know i was going to upset the cock sucker gang. baka

>>7702839
Why are people's faces so different?
Why are you asking pointless questions?

>>7702864
You upset rational people that can use their brains, contrary to you, absolute retard.
I seriously hope you are just ragebaiting and aren't seriously this fucking stupid.

>>7702864
Your question is retarded, its like asking how to build furniture but I hate looking at instructions.

>>7702864
It's very frustrating to have an artist arrive who seemingly has some potential to develop, only for them to make anachronistic, juvenile statements about anatomical development.

You might as well be saying "My faces are bad, but I don't want to have to look at faces!". Why are you unable to separate the organ from one of its uses? You know you also use it to piss too, right? It's just immature.

You won't appreciate this now, but people here generally do want to see each other improve. If you're gonna improve you need to be capable of viewing anatomy with a neutral eye. This mean, bitchy advice is the best type advice you're gonna get because you're never gonna get better by having people hold your hand.

Now draw the dick.

>>7702867
are you stupid? just like there is ratios that make faces attractive, common sense dictates there must be something similar for dicks. I'm asking for insight from cock lovers.
>>7702871
why are you so mad? cock sucker melty?
>>7702873
That's not at all the same. It's more like I am asking country music enjoyers what do you like about it and what makes it "good" so i can apply it to my own shit.
>>7702876
Look I simply don't want to look up irl ref of cocks to draw dicks. that's it. if it's someone elses work then ofc i can look at it and ref it no issue. but some retards here just jumped on hate for a simple preference matter. I don't get why I'm being painted like I got some sort of phobia of dicks when that's not the case.
And honestly I know crabs will crab, and a majority won't post their work but talk shit, hell there might be a great artist there punching down because they are unhappy about something and taking it out on someone "lesser" is easy. So don't worry I understand how ic "works."

>>7702882
well if its >>It's more like I am asking country music enjoyers what do you like about it and what makes it "good" so i can apply it to my own shit.
Why not phrase it that way instead of asking it in such a stupid way, if you start out saying looking at dicks is mad gay and you don't want to do it, they're gonna focus on that as the reason you're not going to improve.

>>7702882
>Look I simply don't want to look up irl ref of cocks to draw dicks. that's it.
And I want to be an nsfw artist? Then you will never improve. Is that something you're content to accept? If so, then I'm willing to respect that. If you do want to improve then your statement is simply incongruous with your aim.

>And honestly I know crabs will crab, and a majority won't post their work
I could post my work but it would cause a category 10 shitstorm and I don't want to sink the thread. Rest assured I'm not trying to crab you though. I'm actually working in your best interests here, and your position is not in your best interest.

>>7702892
Like I said I didn't know phrasing it that way was going to upset people. if someone said "fuck I hate tits how to draw them. it feels gay af looking at them." I'd just scroll by I wouldn't take it as a insult to everything i stand for lmao.
>>7702893
how does looking at irl dick = nsfw artist?
None of the dicks drawn by nsfw artists even come close to realistic. you could go look at some pornstars dick and ref it but it won't be as thick, big. exaggerated as drawn dick.
I'm sure you are trying to help. when i say crabs i'm talking about the retards that just say,
>suck dick to feel the form
>you must wanna suck dick
>why you so repressed you want dick
And honestly why would it cause a shitstorm? I'm a nobody and everyone in thread is already dogpiling. in fact they'd call you based for shitting on the nobody.

>>7702893
>how does looking at irl dick = nsfw artist? none of the dicks drawn by nsfw artists even come close to realistic

And neither do the faces, but do you think people get better at drawing faces by not looking at faces and closing their eyes and drawing from imagination? You should try that and see how well it works out for you.

Modern nsfw art is a effectively a form of caricature. All cartoons are caricatures. They are a deliberate abstraction on real form and feature, but effective caricature can only be done once you first understand the source. Are you confident that you can abstract on a form you neither know nor understand?

> in fact they'd call you based for shitting on the nobody

I am not shitting on you. I'm actually giving you the kind of advice I wish I'd been given when I first started out and it's a shame that you can't recognise this.

>>7702898
Well, you seem to already know the answer to your question, if you don't want to look at real dicks then look at artists you like and study those or ask for examples of artists who fit your personal tastes or ask for some style guides,
People are going to respond what you type, not read your mind.

>>7702913
I didn't say you were shitting on me I said if you did, it wouldn't cause a shitstorm. Since you said posting your art would make a shitstorm.
>>7702914
THANK YOU! see this breakdown makes it clear exactly what I never noticed about dicks and simplifies it so I can use it in my stuff. thanks o/

>>7702913
>I'm actually giving you the kind of advice I wish I'd been given when I first started out and it's a shame that you can't recognise this.
Also sorry but I completely missed what the advice was? I just want to draw, I'm not looking to mature or whatever. Was the advice just draw dicks?

>>7702882
>why are you so mad?
Because you are SO stupid.

>>7702882
>Look I simply don't want to look up irl ref of cocks to draw dicks.
Tough shit for you then, snowflake.

>>7702923
>>7702925
It would cause a shitstorm because it happened the last time lol

Anyway, my advice diluted; if you want to get good at drawing an abstraction of the thing, you must first study the thing.

>>7702938
it should be obvious from my art… i haven’t learned to actually study or fundamentals or anything. i just draw from imagination or ask for requests and draw inspired by the ref they provide. but 1:1 type ref work i cant do. even studying i dont get what that means. just draw it repeatedly?

>>7702946
That's okay, but if you want to improve you don't necessarily have to break open a Hampton. You can take elements from real life and incorporate them into your stylised drawings. Do you never use references images to make sure your anatomy, perspective etc. is sound?

>>7702950
i know it’s a shit habit and i NEED to break it but i mostly just draw from imagination and go off feeling.
The only time i reference other work is if i am giving a ref or i was scrolling thorough twitter and see a nice pose i want to try and draw. i used to ref irl pictures sometimes but was advised to just ref already drawn art since it has the abstraction and simplification already done.
> use references images to make sure your anatomy, perspective etc. is sound?
no i just full send it. when its a comm or something then yeah i try and look for more ref to make sure it looks okay.

could we talk offsite some more? i do genuinely want to improve so far i just drawn randomly and without focus or structure. would you advise me? my twitter is mugichacharlie

anyway ima head to bed

>>7702964
>i used to ref irl pictures sometimes but was advised to just ref already drawn art since it has the abstraction and simplification already done.
Worst advice ever.
Artists that know what they are doing are knowingly abstracting reality by breaking it down.
If you don't know what they are doing, then you are just engaging in guesswork. You aren't learning how to draw on your own, and instead you are just learning to copy things you see.

>>7702532
Nice

>>7702532
When this >>7703172 talentlet praises you, you know you're doing something very very wrong.

>>7703175
>talentlet
Did you mean beglet?

>>7702532
Reminds me of Doxy's style, very tasteful anon.
>>7702772
This looks promising, good angle tho

>>7703192
>trannery

>>7703183
Nope, I meant talent-let, someone without any talent.

>>7703200
Thanks for keeping me up to date, I'm always ready to learn some new art slur.
Keep it up anon!

>>7703204
>crying noises veiled as dishonest autistic praise

>>7703172
Awful.

>>7703172
Complete garbage, as always

>>7703390
I need your blog thank you

>>7703548
You're the first person to ask about my blog; you have no idea how happy I am. Thank you. I just started posting my art online, so I'm not confident enough to create a blog yet, but I'll try to post daily here:
https://dad.gallery/users/26624

>>7703149
I guess but I did improve a lot more than my original art pre advice.
>>7703192
thanks o/ just horny doodles been doing recently.

>>7703575
I hope you keep it up, your stuff is very cute. Do you have a twitter or bluesky or anything? I don't have a dad account

Update on the Uma Musume drawing! Added sweat, tried turning the torso more to contrast the hips (and moved the arms to even further accentuate it), and fixed the perspective on the leg that was bothering me. Thanks for the critiques guys! It's definitely way better than how I started

Something feels off

>>7694093 (OP)
I want to draw my ex girlfriend getting fucked...

>>7703756
do it! it's your right as a artist

>>7703757
Im not sure this a normal way to cope...

>>7703718
Impressive. The shoe details have not gone unnoticed.

>>7702532
nipples like marty feldman

>>7702221
>Arch doesn't don't go beyond the big toe usually.
thanks! although I don't really understand this part.

>>7703776

You have been posting a lot of drawings, but it seems people don't want to follow you. Maybe because your chicken-scratch style isn't appealing hmm.

>>7703884
Magi is one of the best artists on here wtf are you actually talking about.

>>7703913
>here
lmao.

I'm talking about his socials

>>7703913
The guy you replied to is here just to provoke reactions. Don't give (You)s.

>>7703923
reaction to what? he posts regularly but has a small amount of followers it's a fact.

>>7703776
yo what's your blog? I want to drop a follow

>>7702773
>>7702818
>Now draw the dick you little homo.

Man..you guys in this thread are just assholes and obviously immature.

You don't have to be gay to draw dicks you retards. The dick needs to represent myself. It needs to represent phallic masculinity that the girl enjoys.

>>7702817
People can like their own cock and not look at others... I thought this was simple knowledge you guys.

I'm glad I don't post my work here anymore.

>>7703975
yeah they dogpilled me for nothing!!
but whatever I might have worded it wrong and people felt the need to jump on me for some reason...

>>7703884
... thanks for the tip?

>>7703913
>>7703923
man, I am too tired to have much of a reaction to a lot of stuff. To be honest I only started posting on twitter because tumblr banned porn, and I mainly use it to keep up with my friends.

>>7703952
its @ac120rfw , use bluesky for less objectionable porn.

>>7703979
Consider using sites that don't rely on algorithm like Pixiv, DA and NewGrounds. They let users to see all works with their sought tags. You have to censor genitalia in Pixiv and in DA there are some no-nos like non-consensual sex and too young characters, but if you list your more lenient galleries in your profile WITHOUT saying "See the uncensored stuff here", audience will know where to look for them.

You want to cast wider net and not rely on algorithm picking you up. Until then you will be posting to the void.

is 12k suppose to be bad?!?! when they said you had low followers i was expecting sub 1k...

>>7703978
>yeah they dogpilled me for nothing!!
The anon quoted you and called you immature as well, you fucking moron.

morpho + hitomi study

>>7703988
Are we really going to nitpick that anon just to prove a point. Get a life anon. Better yet get a real job.

>>7703975
>People can like their own cock and not look at others...
This goes against common sense and logic if you are a porn artist that draws dicks. It's just fucking human anatomy ffs.
Indoctrinated homophobia is a thing, and you suffer from it. I honestly feel sorry for people like you.

>>7703990
I draw for a living.

>>7703991
Calm your tits bro.

>>7703984
I actually have all of those, but recently I have only used pixiv, which has pretty consistent interactions. I am not really looking to expend my audience at the moment but rather just to engage people who share my tastes in porn.

>>7703999
Aye, keep it up! Do your own thing and people with taste for it will follow and support.

>>7703979
>>7703986
>>7703999
Not to use you in a bad example or anything. But magi is really good. Like professional. For his work and amazing output. His picture per followers ratio is rather low. But he still has alot of followers for a hobby artist, you ain't imagining wrong.

I'm sure he has his priorities set somewhere else besides loser followers.

I on the other hand wish I could have the opposite so that I can sell my products and make some money. I've been waiting for years. Stupid ass followers.

>>7704005
What's your brand? Where do you post?

>>7704007
I'm keeping a low profile because i pay-walled my all of my artwork. Sorry.
Also people from 4chan and discords started calling me "fag, kys, and retard". I've learned my lesson.

>>7703979
>posting on twitter because tumblr banned porn
x can ban you too, because you draw minors. but you're not popular enough to be mass reported, I think

patreon would also ban you, that's why you only have ss acc. you're lucky that they allowed you to register it.

>>7704013
You need to put yourself out there if you want audience to pick you up. Especially if you want to make money off your art.
>Also people from 4chan and discords started calling me "fag, kys, and retard"

Never give value to random anons saying something like that. What were the Discord servers about? If you say "they were 4chan servers", this discussion ends here.

>>7704016
Not him, but patreon has never given me problems. I have a good relationship with my patrons too. I draw loli characters half the time. You only hear the ban stories from greedy artists.

>>7703989
fixed up the pit a lil bit

>>7704022
>You only hear the ban stories from greedy artists.
ok then. can you please post a link, so I can report it and we will see?

>>7704020
It's a mixture of private servers, 4chan servers, and public services,
I still post online to the void sometimes. Sometimes I share my work with certain groups to test the waters. It's overall very underwhelming for me. I work on hentai and coding videogames/animations. People will discover my work when I'm dead. That's fine by me because I do this to satisfy myself anyways. My crowd is all fremiums so I don't blame them.

(Freemiums) people that engage with free stuff.

>>7704024
This has some nice potential. My only issue is that the curvature of her back looks forced or fake. It's not an appealing shape like the rest.

>>7704031
How are non-algorithm based sites treating you?

>>7703986
>is 12k suppose to be bad?!?!
yes, 60-100k would be enough for his level

>>7704036
My post do well on reddit. I quit posting there recently because I felt sad for the people that couldn't draw well next to me.

>>7704042
How many followers in Pixiv and DeviantArt?

>>7704044
Around 500 give or take. Oh like below 50 on Deviantart.

seems like a common exercise

>>7704046
Brand yourself, make it clear what's your niche and subject and let fans with similar interests find and finance you. Been drawing for 4 years and DA brings me most money with subs and comms followed by Pixiv.

>>7704048
Do you have a twitter presence?

>>7704047
There's nothing /sex/ about this image. Wrong thread.

>>7704050
thought this was another thread

>>7704048
No offense, But you aren't that guy that draws the girls wrestling Tifa are you? Your work is kinda boring and low effort that doesn't inspire much confidence for me.

>>7704049
1k

>>7704056
We are talking about branding. If your viewers don't know what to expect from you, why would they follow you?

>>7704058
Oh FUCK it is the wrestlefag
The only advice you should be giving is "draw niche enough fetishes that your lack of skill doesn't matter"

Are alts generally a good idea, or does one commit to a particular line of work at the expense of the other?

>>7704062
I see a lot of artists have one for general nsfw and one for kinky stuff

>>7704001
yea, that would be the best case scenario.

>>7704005
I don't consider people who likes my drawings losers. Although I will note that I am into a lot of different stuff but most of my audience are only into some of them. There are things I can do that consistently earns me engagements but I don't do them because I kept losing interest.

>>7704016
I probably made the incorrect emphasis in that statement, its merely the inciting incident that causes majority of my peers at the time to move to twitter. I use twitter to keep in touch with them and to keep track of other artists I like.

>>7704066
I mean for SFW and NSFW, or is that just a ticking time bomb?

>>7704083
As long as you know someone WILL connect them eventually

spamming this shit everywhere because i kinda like the result

Okay

How to fix this dick/make it look better? it's a doodle so forget about the super fucked up face lmao

>>7704161
Use reference

>>7704163
i did

>>7703771
Thank you! I've been wanting to draw some nice chunkier shoes lately and tried freehanding it without refs. Glad it turned out good!
Just finished it too :>

>>7704169
Jesus you have a fat ass. like in the best way

>>7704022
That's because you fly under the radar. Do you post your loli porn on your Patreon homepage?

>>7704169
Nice! But be careful I heard they're dmcaing lewds of the horse whores

>>7704169
you'll regret drawing porn of umamusume, enjoy the last days of your life.

>>7704109
Halfassed as usual. It's a shame, cause your linework has great confidence and your shapes are appealing.
You manage to butcher your own work with those hands that look like were drawn by a 5 yo every single time.

>>7704161
The problem is not the dick, but your lack of skills in general. You should practice perspective in order to get better at foreshortening and giving the objects you draw a better feeling of depth. This whole artwork looks flat. That's the main issue.
Second thing you want to improve is the general anatomy, not just that of the dicks you draw. That hand on the left looks like something AI would have gnerated 3 years ago.

>>7704169
Great stuff as usual.

>>7704200
how do i practice/learn perspective. I didn't learn any fundamentals. I just draw. for anatomy same deal I just drew figures in timed sessions.

>>7704217
Practice with simpler objects, like furniture and still life compositions. You need to learn how to break anatomy down into simpler shapes and then build the organic shapes from that.

>>7704190
>>7704196
Oh gosh. I just found out about this. Well, if they find it I'll remove it from twitter and stuff, no skin off my back since by then it'll already be circulating. There's 9 pages of original non AI artwork of it on Rule 34 so I'm not too concerned about it. Everyone knows that you can't stop NSFW from being made. Those people who are trying to reinforce it are delusional lol

>>7704202
Thanks! I really enjoyed figuring out the sketch. I was focusing more on gesture and expression this time around instead of rendering <3

>Everyone knows that you can't stop NSFW from being made. Those people who are trying to reinforce it are delusional lol
lmao
You should do more uma musume porn to show them whos boss

>>7704281
I won't hahaha, especially since it's yakuza shit. (I'll change aspects so people don't realize it's uma musume next time)
I'd very much like to keep all my fingers if I ever to go Japan.

>>7704289
the worst they can do is dmca it to take it down. just saw a supercreek fanart get taken out.
But also supposedly some owners are okay with nsfw, like the owner of Agnes Tachyon and daughters.

>>7704196
quick run down on this?
Is the company shutting them down or the fanbase as well?

>>7704289
yeah but the yakuza are the heckin puritans
go tell them whos boss and draw epic porn of them!

>>7704295
the company and a group of japanese cucked fans. they post the TOS about no sexualization of the characters, then they report and send their group to mass report.

>>7704301
They have every right to it.
Company has a right to not get their IP tainted and fans deserve to have a fandom without pornsloppery.

People are just getting tired of it since it attracts non fans to the fandom.

>>7704310
take the corporate's dick out your mouth taint licker.
No one cares about IP rights, and it's parody, so it's allowed.

>>7704311
and there we go
lmao

How would you feel if i took your work or your intellectual property and made it my own to sell?
>le parody
it don't work like you think it does

>>7704318
Have at it boss. it's free publicity as long as you are creating original content.

If taking an IP and making porn of it is parody, so is training AI on certain styles and replicating works.
This is the logic and argument you're making.
>its free publicity
delusional cope
Publicity to whom? People that aren't going to touch the game but parasitize the fandom to spam porn as with every franchise and IP that suffered the same fate?
>inb4 what franchises/IPs
I need only mention the Sonic franchise.

>take existing character
>strip it naked
>WOW ORIGINAL CONTENT
are you fucking retarded?

>>7704311
Doing a quick google search since I was curious, but apparently parody is considered something altered in a comedic or exaggerated way. So NSFW/porn of a character or just making someone's character dirty is not protected under parody. NSFW in general is not protected under fair use and can easily be considered an infringement because it can be, as anon said before, taint the IP.
While it really sucks, it's not worth it for me. I used to have this mindset about art in the past, I was also spoonfed the wrong information by shitty people who didn't have my best interest in mind and ended up paying the price for it. If the IP was more popular and a company literally couldn't stop it because it's so big (like Pokemon for example despite Nintendo's efforts of removing it) I wouldn't care. But I've got too much to lose just for drawing some cute horse girl that I have no attachment to lol.

TLDR:
porn =/= parody.
DMCA = damaging your rep.
DMCA = (if you have it) Patreon/payment platforms removing you.
If you have no reputation or Patreon or whatever, draw whatever your heart desires anons. It'll always be risk vs reward.

>>7704330
if i said this i'd be called a schizo puritan

>>7704324
>If taking an IP and making porn of it is parody, so is training AI on certain styles and replicating works.
>This is the logic and argument you're making.
holy shit the delusional bullshit reach spewing from your mouth. pussy ass bitch can't even (you)
>>7704325
the only retard here is you. if they drew it it's original content. simple as.
both you retarded faggots should just draw and keep quiet.
>>7704330
Good on you researching it. And yeah you make your own comics and stuff no? someone like you would have something to lose doing this.
Also what do you mean if DMCA= removed from payment platforms? Do you mean if you do X thing of certain IP and that piece gets DMCA you can't sell that print anymore? or you get booted off completely for ANY DMCA claim?

>anon says thing
> :(
>tripfag with twatter clout says same thing
> :o

>>7704334
because you don't put on a face while you say it. you are just a schizo puritan piece of trash.
>>7704336
exactly, you get it

You really need to work on your ironic shitposting, Anon.

>>7704169
Did you ever figure out that brush setting in CSP compared to Sai. what does your overall clip setting look like now?

>>7704318
Not him, but i'd be grateful since people ignore my work anyways. nobody retweets my lewd characters anymore.

>>7704340
Sure but you're asking for it.
Other people don't.
So as the same as pornfags want the puritans to respecc their frudums of spinach, pornfags should respect other works from being perverted.

>>7704339
It was this dumb setting that was all wonk.
File > Pen Pressure Settings > Adjust the graph to match my pen stroke
For some reason the default of this setting was like a maxed out so the pen went from 0 to 100 real fast. It feels exactly like SAI now.

I'm too retarded to study anatomy.
How the leg muscles connect to pelvis and move about on more complex poses confound me.

>>7704347
i think it came out great but the stomach is a little confusing. it reads like there are two belly buttons when the lower one is the belly button right? it should be darker then the top ab indentation

>>7704157
Okay

>>7704169
How long have you been drawing? If you don't mind me asking.

>>7704310
>fans deserve to have a fandom without pornsloppery
You're saying this like they're forced to watch it lol.
Crazy people that get offended over some fantasy characters being "disrespected" should only fuck off.

>>7704338
You really need to grow a pair and use quotes.

>>7704169
Nice, you render skin very well. The sweat really bring it to life

>>7704517
>forced to watch it on social media where every post under hashtags is shown to users that follow those hashtags
Not anymore thanks to the government doing what should have been done years ago and forcing pornfags to actually tag their works as adult content.

Are you done being a retarded faggot and summoning highly convenient boogeymen for your strawman projections?
You ain't coming far in business if you play the ideology game.

>>7704198
but i like that stupid hands

>>7704281
>You should do more uma musume porn to show them whos boss

she's a woman. they're born cowards.

>>7704835
women aren't real, dingus
they're a government psyop to force you to get a job and pay taxes

I can only describe this as trying my best, it's been a minute since I've actually colored anything with more effort than none at all.

Still don't want to put TOO much effort into it. Trying to find the balance between how much I should color comics or not is extremely difficult and I constantly find myself getting burnt out

Am I allowed to post a commission request/offer/whatever in this thread? I work on a visual novel for fun sometimes and I'd like to pay for actual art of the characters. If not allowed please disregard this post.

>>7704945
can be consider advertising which is against the rules since it attracts scammers and drama, better if you keep that stuff private
ask an anon for their blog (catch-all term for social medias) and privately message them there
or see which artists you like in this thread >>7648072

part 2 of instant loss 2koma
Lmk if I should change anything before locking in the sketch

>>7705012
incredible work! do you have a blog? only thing is the speed lines on the guys thrust reads as way harder then the reaction on her butt. Like I see a little indentation from the thrust but i think it needs a bit more.

Honestly I don't know what I need to focus on to improve

>>7705012
Sick work anon. The only thing that bothers me a lil bit is the index finger of the guy, I think you broke it while trying to make an appaling hand gesture. You should either fix the foreshortening or make it less foreshortened akin to the other fingers on his hand.
Another thing is his left fist. Are you planning on him holding her ponytail, or will it stay static like this? It looks kinda unnatural and forced. A better alternative would be him holding her by her neck or shoulder.

High nitpicking of what is already an amazing artwork.

>>7705052
I think you need to just draw more. Your stuff has appeal, but your lines and shapes lack a bit of confidence. While you do this, focus on improving your anatomy and perspective and you're gonna be golden.

>>7705056
Thank you, anon, I'll try!

>>7704986
Good ideas, thanks anon

>>7705037
Yes and no, I haven't updated in quite some time. Been too busy with new life stuff to draw and update regularly, also I'm still embarrassed about not getting a nibble for comms when I initially offered and then months later after I forgot, people asked/sent in forms I forgot to close again and I don't know what to do or say so I'm in avoid mode. I am a well adjusted person. :)

And good call, I'll see what I can do. I'm still lost when it comes to selling impact, so all advice is appreciated.

>>7705054
Can do, and yes! The intent was for him to be yanking her back by the ponytail. I need to redraw it to sell the tension from the force because as is, it just looks like it's being daintily lifted rather than being yanked for leverage.

>>7705147
LOL damn man i wish you luck with that situation ><
I get it tho sometimes it's hard to just talk to peeps.
But anyway great work! can't see how it progresses along. The change with the hand and buttplug looks great!

>>7697146
nellie?

>>7705147
This is perfect now. Chef's kiss.

Kero

>>7704920
This is cinema

>>7704920
looks really good, I am looking forward to seeing it finished. I have been in burned out mode for like 10 months and I kept falling down lol.

>>7704169
The figures looks good but I wonder if the composition might be better if its more of a pin-up than an actual scene.

how bad is my shading?

>>7705996
The question is do you understand what you're doing or are you just copying something you've seen.
If you take the leftmost drawing under scrutiny. The right thigh and the pussy lack some cast shadows from the belly, which suggests you aren't really aware of how those work.
Is this all drawn from memory? Is the inconistent shading a deliberate choice in order to push appeal, or are you just mimicking what other artists do?

>>7705996
She's missing a big fat futa cock.

>>7706023
I try to imagine the shapes in 3D space to get an idea. I am going into this not knowing much at all attempting to right wrongs to the best of my ability.
Wish I could say the inconsistent shading was on purpose, other than the bellies it was not on purpose at all, and thanks for pointing that error out something else just clicked.
Stylistically speaking, I am following what a bunch of the simpler art styles of artists do to make it easier for me until I git gudder.
I am very new to shading anything so any sources or recommendation that don't teach 'le bad habits' are very much welcome.

>>7706042
I'll think about it.

>>7706064
I think you have a lot of appeal going on here. I focused only on your question about shading.
You should just keep doing what you're doing and try to get out of your comfort zone as much as possible. We learn the most by failing.

>>7706064
blog?

wow got retweeted by a big japanese artist... i can die happy. i think i may have peaked. my art is pretty shit but this feels good haha.

>>7706109
The only decent thing i have is my 3d and gamedev stuff.
You don't want to see my dogshit drawings but since you asked.
https://x.com/SysNicat

wip
Seriously thinking about redrawing the breast.
Lately I feel like everything I do is horrrible, it could be true but im gonna keep going.

>>7706764
If the breasts are this squished, then the bikini straps would be completely tensed up. Unless you were going for some fake antigravity boobs.

>>7694093 (OP)
What's it gonna be mission anon? Are you going to open a new thread or are you waiting to make a duplicet as soon as somebody else does?

>>7706764
You're doing a lot of guesswork on the legs, as another anon pointed out your bikini makes no sense, and your hands lack confidence.

Doing a commission and there's so much detail, it's totally out of my wheelhouse, and I haven't even finished pencilling it all in yet lol

>>7705012
This is really nice. I think I saved something of yours yonks ago, it was like a topless dude that had really nice forms. Hardly narrows it down, I'm sure, but was that you?