>>96156996
You absolute madman. I've been catching up with the Unterwelt and seeing this I wish I did it sooner, because I feel there's something that should be addressed.
You yourself pointed out a while ago that you've been mistaken about Errum's location when writing the story and even suggested just treating it as semi-to-non-canon. But I feel there is a very easy solution to this problem. Just replace Errum with a different Yazata city. It's not like Errum is the only one there is and it would also avoid the awkward lore conflict it creates not just by its location but also the fact that Germans just fucking gassed and destroyed the greatest Yazata city in semi-canon supplementary material lmao.
Oh, and just to clarify the story itself is great. Everything about Errum was just pure unadulterated KINEMA mercilessly assaulting the reader with a barrage of some of the rawest lines and scenes ever written. But it is all the more reason to make it completely canon, which can be easily achieved by changing the city to somewhere else.
Picrel: Kaiser writing "A Monstrous Crime"