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If you were smart you would have led with that instead of outing yourself as a perturbed artless retard first you dogeyed idiot. Do you have object permanence? How about conversational permanence? Do you think I will forget like a goldfish what you just said?
If you are not intelligent enough to make your point in an effective order why would you think you are intelligent enough to critique the writing of others? From whence springs this confidence? You've earned none of it, you're an idiot, a mooncalf, a dogeyed troglodyte, begone from here. Go write "surrealist fiction" if you are so inclined, show us all up.