>>543350431
let's break this design down
long ass hair do not meshes well with a side tail
that ahoge looks like it has been added as a last minute thought, it looks like it grows from behind her head instead from the top
that mole is a lazy ass add, it does not fit her eyes at or anything else at all
those purple tapes ? what the hell ? how about some belts only those are missing
and what the hell is that ribbon and purple star thing ? why would an artist bother to redraw this ?
and whan in the fuck are those swords ? why are they wrapped in a futon, how dos she carries them around ? conveniently its not showed, just add a random tape, not even a proper rope, that'll do