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>AIslop voiceover
>Background gameplay footage
The bar is already subterranean.
>1:04
Mention of 10th century Chinese fire lance, picture of 14th century European hand cannon.
>1:08
Fire lances were "flamethrowers" in the same way that roman candles are. Might want to clarify that.
>1:48
You completely ignored gonnes and hand gonnes and skipped all the way to late medieval heavy cannon.
>2:09
Arquebus calibers ran all the way from ~0.4" to 2".
>2:20
Matchlocks did not "become" impractical; the downsides you mentioned always existed. You also didn't mention the serpentine; which is generally considered the first point at which you can say that a firearm is operated by a trigger.
>2:25
You ignored the snaphaunce, the miquelet, the doglock and the fucking wheellock. Flintlocks didn't magically appear out of nowhere.
>2:29
Flintlocks were around for a century before the Charleville patterns and the 1717 pattern was also a true flintlock.
>2:40
Awful terminology, lack of detail
>2:56
Rifling had been experimented with since the end of the 15th century and was common in high-end sporting arms during the 16th.
>3:04
Implication that the Kentucky rifle was the first rifled firearm. Wildly incorrect, especially since they were introduced to the colonies by German gunsmiths working in an established tradition. The calibers also varied all the way from ~.25 to ~.60.
>3:21
The Baker was adopted in 1800.
>3:23
That's a photograph from the 20th century.
You know what, I've seen enough. My final score is kill yourself/10.