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Honestly the biggest failing was selling the audience on being a Hunter, it blows my mind he wasted as many chapters as he did on Velou not wanting to be a Hunter and thus completely fucking himself unsalvageably, imagine Luffy being introduced not giving a fuck about want to be a Pirate much less the Pirate King, imagine Naruto spending a bunch of chapters in his room having no interest in being a Ninja/the Hokage, like how are we supposed to care about any of this if Velou himself didn't